I have created a Deltarune OC (got bored at 1 AM)
Sheās another mysterious shopkeeper bc why not, she looks like a human lightener (mostly) so hereās what I got below if u want (I also wrote shop items too!)
Also I will likely separate the texts up often, as it makes it easier for my brain to process. If itās meant to be processed together with another point itās only have one space inbetween, I donāt think many people will see this so itās all mainly for me.
Temp (chosen as the root word for temporal, temporary as she does not join you to stay in castle town) looks like a human, with medium length brown hair and beige skin (? I think that how youād describe it? But if you want a better idea I generally imagine my Ocs with similar skin color to me and I am Mexican, but a little on the paler side) freckles, and brown eyes that look goldish
Anyways i took some ideas as to how Ralsei and Noelle look for her outfit as my idea for her is basically time mage/prince vibes, so sheās got a dark grey longsleeve with occasional white stripes in sets of 2 on the elbow area, at the end of the shirt and a short one diagonally across the shirt.
And a blue cloak with yellow (gold ig?) detailings: it connects at the front of her neck and is mostly on her back like a cape. This also means that alongside all other chapters I make with a cape, it can be easily fetched when she needs to and can be adjusted to be flesh against her back.(Edna mode taught me well) Her pants are a simple black color and same goes with the shoes but they also have white for the sole. Also, she has many, many, MANY clocks scattered about. A wristwatch ofc but sheās also got pocket watches, clocks all over her shop- hell she wears a clock mask! (I almost forgot that factā¦)
And yes, my indulgent OC does have a shadow crystal as an earring. It wasnāt what I originally wanted but I got the idea and I couldnāt NOT use it. She is still mentally stable but by GOD sheās as mentally ill as me so close enough.
Now itās time for her shop dialogue! This is reformatted from my notes and based of the Deltarune Fandom pages shop section for the shopkeepers. Thereās no ācanonā chapter for her shop but everything is stated and dialogue-ed based off Ch4-5 items but stronger so a theoretical chapter 6-7 would prolly be where sheād be if she did exist. There is theoretical weird route dialogue (she hates you)
The shopkeeper greets you.
*Buy
āWhatever you need, for a price.ā
āI refuse on principle.ā (Weird Route)
-Metronome
ARMOR, +6DF +2Magic, TPS UP
A functional brooch swishing back a forward, allows you to gain TP faster after being hit. 1800D$
-Clock Sword
WEAPON, +12AT +1 DF, TimelyUP
A clock hand reshaped into a blade, minute hand in the light world. 600D$
-Hourglass Potion
A refreshing glowing golden potion in an hourglass bottle.
+220HP, 1224D$
-Sundial Cake
A thin half cake with a knife poking out. Itās sweet with a coarse textured icing
+120HP to all, 888D$
āAnd now itās yours.ā (Purchased)
āItās in your STORAGE now.ā (Full inventory)
āYouāve got a lot on you already.ā (Full inventory and chest)
āAnd thatās fine too.ā (Refuse buy)
*Sell
āā¦Fineā(Weird Route)
āā¦ā (All other dialogue below, Weird Route)
āWhatever you donāt need.ā
āSo whatās your ITEM/ARMOR/WEAPON?ā
āYour pockets too seem empty for this.ā (No ITEM/ARMOR/WEAPON to sell)
āAnd now itās mine.ā (Sold something)
āI canāt accept that.ā (Unsellable)
āWrong slot.ā (Empty slot)
āGuess itās not time.ā (Refuse sell)
* Talk
āGet it over with.ā(Weird Route)
āI suppose.ā
[Lightener?]
āHah, you know there are no other humans in Hometown Kris.ā
āI do look quite human, donāt I?ā (Sometimes when asking again)
āNo other humans in your town, Kris.ā (Weird Route)
āā¦ā (Asking again, Weird Route)
[Name and Face]
āNames are usually important⦠just call me āTempā okay?ā āAnd my face? Well itās not that important so thereās no point showing it.ā
āWhy arenāt I blue like Kris? I am actually, Iāve got a 5% blue tint on my sprite.ā (When asking again) (she does)
āCall me Temp.ā(Weird Route)
āā¦ā (Asking again, Weird Route)
[Castle Town]
āIām afraid I canāt join you, but maybe Iāll pop in once or twice.ā āHow? Well everyone has their Secrets.ā
āPlease, save your breath [for someone who needs saving] or [for someone worth that time] (When asking again, equal chance for each option)
āNo.ā(Weird Route)
āā¦ā (Asking again, Weird Route)
[Prophecy]
āYour clearest path to follow.ā āā¦do you need to though?
āWorlds can be very malleable if you know where to look.ā āEither way Iām sure youāll do whatās right when the time comes.ā(When asking again)
āYou have other problems.ā (Weird Route)
āā¦ā (Asking again, Weird Route)
[Fight] (After fighting)
āIt was very entertaining! Thank you for your timeā āThat crystal I gave you? Just a parting gift from me, think nothing of it.ā āGiving it up is no Numbers off my clock, maybe that cat friend of yours can find some other use for it.ā (Extra shadow crystal if you missed one, last line only said if you have all of them)
[Fight] (asking to fight, weird route)
āI will not feed your violence. You will get nothing from me.ā
* Leave
āThank you for your time.ā
āI rember you are Snowgravesā (/j)
āYouāve taken up enough time.ā (Weird Route)
I love the weird route so that part of why I wrote that dialogue but itās not the only reason. Every room has some kind of clock, including in laptops. Of course sheād know if one of her clocks froze, and of course she would hate that. Time does not give you what you want when you try to bend or freeze it, its meant to go and go and go, so why would she stop to fight You when you try so hard to impede that?
I do also have to fight dialogue. Itās a spar basically, she sets a timer (idk how long would be good tbh, get back to me on that) and you are meant to either last to the end of the hourglass or you can use your ACTs to remove time off of the clock. Once it strikes 0, where sheāll do her final attack and then become SPARE-able. The clock only drops when youāre donāt choosing your actions so you canāt stall it with that.
* When fighting (canāt in Weird Route)
āā¦Ready?ā
āYou reacted so fast there, like youād done that part before.ā āI wonder how many timesā¦ā (my idea is that she used parts of Sansā first attack pattern cause I think thatās be funny)(you are filled with now incorrect muscle memory for this fight)
[MISS] āJust a fun little spar, no need to try to hurt me like that!ā (When trying to attack)
*Fight ends in [xx:xx]! (Only passes when in active combat)
āTime marches forward.ā
āTick, tick, tick.ā
āA blast to the past!ā
āAnd back to the presentā
>Check
A PRINCE of TIME spars against you⦠when did she come from?
š AT, Irrelevant DF. Doesnāt really matter since itās only a spar anyways, maybe shaking things up can help move this faster.
>Shake
Kris shakes the hourglass, only X seconds are shaken off the clock!
>Shake All
Everyone shakes the hourglass, X seconds are shaken off the clock!
>Toss
Susie throws Kris/Ralsei at the glass, X seconds are thrown off the time!
[S-ACT]
Susie eats some sand from the glass! (How?? Itās a sealed glass??) X seconds removed!
Susie does an impressive trick! Temp removes some time in her honor! X seconds removed!
[Wind-Up]
Susie taunts Temp! Her attacks are longer and stronger!
[R-ACT]
Ralsei politely asks Temp to remove some time! X seconds removed!
Ralsei looks particularly fluffy! Temp takes a few seconds to let the cuteness aggression pass, X seconds removed!
[Wind-Down]
Ralsei soothes Temp! Her attacks are weaker and shorter!
>(Fun gang member) eats a (Sundial cake/Hourglass potion) Temp attacks are slower this turn! āThank you for your business :)ā
[On defeat]
āTime flies huh? You guys are strong, heroes indeed!ā āIām sure whatever Fate throws at you, youāll find a way.ā
āWow, you ran my glass empty! And time marched accordingly!ā āYouāve impressed me, how bout a free item? A little discount? Whatever you prefer! āā¦Youāre clearly skilled, but remember you donāt always have to follow the march beat for beat.ā
*Clock Trophy and shop discount unlocked!
(After beating Tempās fight without artificially removing time from the glass)
Iām not sure about what item you get other than the crystal yet but Iāll figure it out eventually. Itāll have to be an ARMOR since you have to act to fight but idk what I want it to do. Since the attack is timed I figured that being able to make the attacks last longer can be a double edged sword here.






















