Positive representation of white-presenting Native Hawaiian
Iâm using my college roommate as a loose reference for a minor character in a satirical fantasy Iâm writing. My roommate was Âź Native Hawaiian, so I planned to write the character as part Native Hawaiian too.
If Iâm writing a part Native Hawaiian character, though, I want them to be positive representation. My roommate was white-passing, financially privileged and not super engaged in Native Hawaiian culture.
Iâve considered giving this character a few extra cultural markers so the character wonât read as a diversity cop-out, but my roommate got so much flak for being a âbasic white girlâ Iâm not sure I feel good about doing that. (Some of the POC in the dorm used to âjokeâ that she was whiter than me, and it really upset her. There was also a rumor she lied about her race- which was awful.)
Do you have any advice for how I can avoid white-washing while respecting the experiences of the person Iâm using as a character reference? If it helps, this character is not the only POC in the story. There are several other POC characters, who donât pass as white, in more prominent roles.Â
Hawaiians are Hawaiians are Hawaiians. There is no ârightâ way to be Hawaiian.Â
Definitely do more research on the history of Hawaiian people and demographics, and consult with your roommate more to better write this character.Â
If your character is based on your roommate, I would advise sticking to your source material. Your roommateâs experience as a Âź Hawaiian who does not physically present as Hawaiian and does not connect to the culture is not an uncommon experience for Hawaiian diaspora. Like any identity, thereâs a diverse range of how people connect to their culture. As a result of colonialism, most Kanaka are mixed and many are mixed with white.Â
If you would like to explore more aspects of a Hawaiian identity, you could consider writing your character as wanting to or in the process of reconnecting with their identity. It may also be important to have this character address their proximity to whiteness and the associated privileges if being Hawaiian becomes a large part of their character and development. For this, is is crucial that you consult with many white-presenting KÄnaka in the process of reconnection to understand their varied experiences.Â
This post about writing an assimilated character reconnecting to their cultural roots may help you also.Â
Lastly, while you may have other POC characters, they are not Hawaiian and are not interchangeable representation for Hawaiians.Â
KÄnaka folks who are in the process of reconnection, we welcome your thoughts! This post is CLOSED to Non-KÄnaka commentary.Â