this is gonna be my own little whump rant from personal experience but i see dislocated shoulders in whump all the time and then theyâre just popped back in and glossed over but as someone who has dislocated their shoulder(s) multiple times it is so fucking painful and takes a while to heal and then feel right again (and it never really does)
it also becomes easier for it to pop out and is weaker and aches and sometimes if you carry something wrong or sleep on it wrong it hurts to do stuff â doing random stretches or things can also suddenly cause immense pain like i was spinning around holding hands with a friend dancing and then she crossed my arms and suddenly it felt like my shoulder popped out so use that in your hurt/comfort recover yall
i also find i roll my shoulder as a reflex when iâm gearing up to do something which is a little detail to add to a whumpee maybe
and the funniest whump potential is when you workout and do like pushups or planks sometimes it gives out and then you fall on your face lmao
anyway i have many other injury experiences that i could describe the long term affects of more bc its a lowkey pet peeve of mine when whumpees are strung up by their arms and then their shoulders are perfectly fineâhowever i get the suspension (pun unintended) of belief
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for your boys, just a thought: a moment where archie has to patch simon up. role reversal. like if simon tried to protect his boy and got himself hurt, and now he has to talk archie through patching him up.....
your boys are so lovely. i can't wait to see them get whumped to bits in the event!!!
- @whump-kia
kia this was genuinely such a blast to write that it ended up a tad longer than i originally planned for, thank you SO much for the prompt (ËáșË) i hope u like it as much as i loved writing it because these boys are SILLY.
to anyone else: see this post for character info!
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There was a rumor circulating that there was an âinconspicuous medical studentâ spotted âaiding the activities of a notorious vigilanteâ in the city, and it was safe to say the crime lords and such were not happy about it.
The rumors were true, of course, but it didnât make them any easier to deal with.
And Simon was currently dealing with them.
He should have known his extremely selfless and abundantly kind nature towards Archie would come back to bite him in the ass.
Heâd be sure to rub it in Archieâs face when he saw him again.
âYouâre the kid thatâs been helping that little punk, arenât you?â The man spat in Simonâs face as he shoved him up against the wall.
Judging by the way he was dressed and the way he smelled, Simon had half a mind to assume he was a goon from the drug ring Archie had been after for some time now.
Fortunately, the guy clearly wasnât the brightest. No experienced lackey would start heckling a target in the middle of an open alley way without checking if anyone was around first.
Unfortunately, the guy was quite a bit stronger than Simon and there really wasnât anyone around after all.
Just my luck.
âI donât know what youâre talking about,â Simon spewed back, struggling against the manâs grasp.
The manâs hand tightened around Simonâs neck and the gravity of the situation began to sink in.
He was alone in this alley. Sure, he had used the emergency button on his watch that sent signal to Archie as soon as he recognized he was in danger, but it had been a good amount of time and Archie was.. nowhere to be found.
âDonât play dumb with me!â The man shouted, sending a knee slamming into Simonâs gut. âYouâre going to tell me everything you know!â Another knee to his middle sent him stumbling back and doubling over.
âI donât.. donât know anything..â Simon sputtered, coughing harshly and tasting metal.
Simon knew he was in hot water. He had no combat training, so self defense skills, and despite being decently fit, he was no where near the league of a guy who beat people up for a living. He needed to get out of there as fast as possible.
Alright Simon, c'mon. Focus. You can handle this. Just think.
Before Simon could form another coherent thought, a fist connected with his face that sent him reeling. Blood began leaking from his nose all down his mouth, and he choked on the taste. Before he could recover, his whole body was rammed against the brick wall and his arm was pulled awkwardly behind him.Â
The punch had left him dazed, so dazed that he didnât recognize the sound of two other guys approaching the scene.
âFor godâs sake, donât kill the kid! Rough him up, get some information, but donât kill him. We'll have more use for him later,â A deeper voice chided.
Simon heard vague mutters of obedience before he felt his arm being strained again.
âAlright kid, since Iâm feeling so nice, Iâll give you a chance to redeem yourself. Answer the question and youâll be on your way,â The man sneered. Simon could hear muffled snickers behind him, but couldnât quite get the angle to look. âWhat is the little punkâs real name.â
He knew he should be sizing up the scene and determining the best course of action, but goddamn his arm hurt. He could feel every tendon being strained at the orientation the man had it at.
Still, no matter what, he wasnât going to sell out Archie. Archie would come. He always did.
âN-No idea,â Simon spat, stomping on the manâs toe in an attempt to buck out of the hold.
Unfortunately, the man was still significantly stronger than Simon, so his attempt at retaliation only served in angering him further.
âYou littleââ The man growled, before twisting Simon's arm and yanking it fully out of its socket.
Simon let out a stuttering wail as the pain temporarily blinded him. Suddenly, his head was being slammed against the wall again and he couldnât figure out what was hurting more now: his head, his arm, or his stomach.
He was almost sure he was done for, until he heard a familiar shout and the sound of a fist connecting with a face.
Took him long enough.
Simon let himself slide down the wall once the man was pulled off of him, cradling his aching shoulder as he watched. Through hazy vision, he saw Archie made quick work of the lackeys. It was a flurry of hollers and yelps and limbs flying, but eventually, Archie emerged unscathed and rushed right over to Simon.
âIâm so sorry I was late! I was working, and I didnât see the alert andâ oh god, your arm!â He blurted, hands awkwardly hovering over Simon, a complete contrast to the ruthless machine he had been not a few seconds earlier.
Simon wanted to be mad, he really did. The emergency alert was there for a reason, after all. But how could he stay angry when Archie was looking at him with such sincere concern and regret. Simon sighed.
âItâs not as bad as it looks.. itâs dislocated, but Iâm pretty sure itâs not broken so we wonât need to go to the hospital,â Simon explained.
Archie gave a small huff of relief.
âYou do, however, need to help me pop it back into place.â
Archie blanched.
âPop it back into place?! Isnât that dangerous?! I donât know what Iâm doing!â He babbled.
âRelax, Iâll walk you through it. Itâs not that hard. You just have to kinda.. push it until it feels right. Iâll let you know,â Simon replied, absurdly calm for the situation at hand.
â..Ok..âÂ
Simon carefully instructed Archie on where to place his hands and where to push in, and after a bit more coaxing, they were ready.
âAlright. Donât give me a countdown. You have to just do it, or else I might tense up involuntarily and that couldâ URGH!â
A sickening snap reverberated from Simonâs offending limb.
âSorry! Iâm sorry! You said not to give you a countdown!â Archie mewled, pulling his hands away as if heâd just been burned.
âItâs fine.. itâs.. Iâm good.. you did good,â Simon placated, squeezing his eyes shut at the lingering pain.
âOkay.. okay, thatâs done. We should get you back to your apartment and patched up.. that black eye looks.. pretty rough..â
âDonât I know it..â
Archie tenderly helped Simon to his feet, and supported the tallerâs man weight with ease.
âThanks for not, uh, selling me out by the way..â Archie murmured, as they began their arduous journey back to Simonâs home.
âWell, what type of âinconspicuous medical studentâ would I be if I just went around telling everyone how I âaid the activities of a notorious vigilanteâ?âÂ
Content Warnings: falling from a height, injuries, broken bones, bruises, chased, hunted down, demon whump, referenced past captivity, recapture arc, passing out
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"GET HIM!"
No...no...
Daero bursts through the tree line, running as fast as his burning lungs will allow. It took weeks in hiding to finally heal and if they catch him now it will be so much worse -
NO. I won't go back there!
The ledge comes up too quickly.
Daero can't possibly stop in time but he still tries, staggering on the rocky surface, tearing up the soles of his feet. He squeezes his eyes shut as he topples heavily over the edge.
The human voices fade away, all sound is gone but the rush of wind.
He braces for a long fall and a swift impact. It is a horrible surprise when, only seconds after falling, he crashes against a lower ledge. His shoulder erupts with pain and Daero tumbles in the air, his cry stolen from his lungs.
Daero collides with several more juts and ridges of the uneven cliffside on his way down. Then he reaches the trees, plummeting through thick pine branches that tear up his skin and just barely slow his fall. Birds squawk and scatter around him.
He lands with a thwump on the forest floor.
Daero wheezes and writhes on the surface of needles and gnarled roots. His body is mess of twists and breaks, scrapes and bruises. He tips his head to one side, sick and dizzy, and dry heaves until he blacks out.
I started writing a completely different story for this one but then I had a better idea. Nathan needed a break from being the center of my whumping tendencies. Also I have 3 more slots that I'm currently working on so be on the lookout for those too.
Tagging @whatwasmyprevioususername, @tears-and-lilies, and @abitefullofeverything to follow the Jock Boys adventure!
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CW: unsportsmanlike conduct, shoulder dislocation, serious injury, hockey appropriate hurt
"This is for your own Good"
The other team's captain was a harsh and violent person. He only cared that his team won and not whether it was achieved fairly. The referees had been paid off to look the other way for many of the physical penalties which gave the rival team near free reign to play as rough as they wanted.Â
Brody had been illegally hooked by a stick, slammed into the boards, and cross checked multiple times that game and the referees had said nothing. He knew the game was rigged at this point but a lot of those penalties were causing him some serious harm.Â
He had stubbornly been placing himself in front of other players so that the other team would either go after him or mess up their attempts to carry out the illegal actions on the ice.Â
The rival team's captain was getting fed up with Brody for messing with their attempts at cheating. He decided that in order to win they would need to really scare or hurt the Snow Dogs's forward player. The captain was sent onto the ice to play and take care of the problem player.Â
Brody caught a glimpse of the captain getting on the ice and knew only bad things would follow. He turned his attention back to the puck as it whizzed toward him on the ice. He passed it to another player as the captain came up on him.Â
"You're getting on my nerves Snow Dog. You should quit while you're ahead" the captain threatened in a harsh tone.
"I appreciate that you're thinking of me, but I think I'll stick to fucking with you instead" Brody retorted as the puck was passed to him.Â
He passed the rubber disk to a fellow player just as he was slammed into the wall again but this time it hurt though his protective layer of gear. Suddenly his jersey was being grabbed and he was being yanked to the ground.Â
A few words filled his ears as he felt his arm being yanked harshly. "This is for your own good, Snow Dog" was what the captain said as he threw a punch at the fallen player.Â
The two threw punches as the other team's captain managed to straddle Brody's waist to keep him down. Brody's arm was pulled harshly in a direction it wasn't meant to go. The captain continued to put pressure as Brody let out an anguished scream when the arena echoed with a deafening pop.Â
Brody's world was filled with pain and agony as his shoulder was pulled out of its socket. He felt tears spring to his eyes immediately as his body screamed in pain. The other team's captain was ripped off of him officials as Dan appeared in his view along with the paramedics.Â
He was immediately dizzy and sobbed as the paramedics carefully lifted him on a gurney. He put his good arm to his head and gripped his helmet hard. He had been injured on the ice countless times but this was the worst yet. The captain's words still rang sickeningly in his ears.
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Luke is kept chained up, arms pinned behind him. Every movement, every breath pulls them further out of place.
He'd cried at first, deep, heaving sobs, and they'd just laughed at him, watching the chains tighten. His wings trail on the floor behind him, and he can feel the feel the clamps digging into the skin along them. At least, he could. Everything is numb and burning. He drops his head, holding in the whine as it pulls at his shoulders
âAre you ready to apologise yet?â
Luke stays silent, refusing to look up. There's another minute of silence, and he can feel the tension growing.
âI asked you a question, feathers.â He doesn't expect the hand grabbing his curls and turning his head to face him.
âI didn't- didn't do anything-â
The slap echoes around the basement, and it takes a moment for Luke to catch up.
âHow dare you? You'll pay for that.â He laughs, gesturing to the mirror, before crouching down in front of him. He cups Luke's face, gently running his thumb across his cheek. âMaybe next time you'll listen.â
She presses down between his wings, just enough pressure to not dislocate his shoulders.
âI've been wanting to do this since he brought you in. Of course, he wanted to try break you first.â Luke just whines in response, desperately trying to pull away.
Her hand wraps around his throat, hard enough to make him struggle, bucking against it.
âYou're so pretty when you're desperate, but I wouldn't do that if I were you.â
He keeps fighting until everything starts to blur, until all he can think about is her hand around his throat.
His knees give way first, and the quick press on his shoulders dislocates them both. He thinks he screams, but he doesn't have enough strength.
She just laughs, trailing her fingers through his feathers before leaving.
When he finally comes to, the first man is back, sitting cross-legged in front of him. He seems bored, waiting for Luke to wake up.
Luke stays still, daren't move, his small, panicked huffs blowing up small clouds of dust.
âAre you ready to apologise?â It mustn't be the first time the man has asked, as he sits, waiting for Luke to look at him.
Luke tries to speak, but only manages a small groan, trailing off into a whimper. His shoulders were definitely still dislocated, he could feel that. They had been kind enough to let him down, let him lie on his side, undressed and unchained.
His eyes, desperate and wild, search for an escape he knows isn't there.
âI was talking to you.â
The man. He'd forgot about him.
âAre you going to apologise?â Luke nods into the ground, wincing at the movement. âWill you be good? For me?â
Luke must have nodded again as the man seems satisfied, but it's getting harder to focus with the pain. He can feel himself drifting, being anywhere but here.
The fingers pressed into his shoulder drag him back.
âNoâ It's more of a gasp than a fully formed word, but it's enough to draw a frown from the man. Â
âYou don't want me to fix this? I can leave you like this.â
âsorryâ He continues to repeat it to the ground, unfocused and barely holding onto consciousness.
âYou want me to hurt you?â Luke nods, ignoring the tears falling down his cheek.
He grabs Luke's arm and twists. He keeps pulling until he hears the pop and feels the grinding of the bone as it slips back into place.
Luke is barely conscious, only letting out a small keen of relief. He knows he should be grateful, should thank him, but he can't form the words. Instead, he looks towards the man, the shifting shape in the darkness and thinks it, hoping he'll notice.
âIf I do this one,â his fingers twist in the joint, sending spikes of pain throughout his left side. âthen you've got to promise to be good.â Luke doesn't answer; he can't hear past the rushing in his ears. He briefly wonders if he's drowning. Again.
The man decides to be kind. After all, Luke looks so pretty when he's broken.
There's no delay this time, no watching the pain etched on his face. He just pulls, letting the shoulder move back into place, and letting Luke give in.
He does look pretty when he's broken and begging, but there's something else about watching him slip away, watching his face relax as he's finally allowed to pass out.
From his position, he can see the bruises spreading across Luke's neck, small, perfect marks.