#commentating

day 1; very cute, very good. reminds me of frankie cosmos (good). simple. i like the made up words for the sake of rhyming; a repeated tool used in her works. solid!

day 2; again, made up words. love it... very short and simple. could expand on this "octember", i wanna know how that affects her bad feelings or why it helps her to not sink or whatnot . good for her tho!

day 3; one of my fave selmers poems. very simple and good, no made up words, but no need for them really. shes just having a good time. i like this theme in her poems. this is a feeling that id like to experience.

day 4; she fucked w this one for sure... she knows whats up w cold pizza, i agree. i love the 'd that is used lol. i feel like you could stretch and try to find a deeper meaning to this one? or just leave it as is. and i like that.

day 1; simple. if you choose to pry, she does tell you what "crimes" she alludes to. (i think it was arson during october or SMTH like that)

poetry society; you can choose to listen in on this poem during the library scene with bea, and you stumble upon her and the other poets of town. obv this one isnt like her others, it seems she saves her deeper poems for the poet society and tells mae her silly short ones. i think that this poem alone could explain a huge plot of nitw itsself, i love how raw it is and i love how shes just. talking. shes not making up words or rhyming shes just really Real and even Mae comments on how "weird" it is. idk its good very good. not my fave but i do so wish she made more poems like this.

day 2; lol. also i love the Rhyme but Not rly. good poem. short and gets the point across. important!

day 3; this one gives me mixed feelings!! good feelings. i like the devolve from rhymes to none, i like how it also kind of fits the nitw theme of "shits so fucked. lets have fun" yk?? this poem is a bit scattered, thats never bad ofc. i like this one alot. even if stuff is hard, stuff is fun, take advantage of that or whatever.

like for Logan

And of course we have the usual sports houses with the colours of red, green, blue and yellow. Throughout the carnival we have a teacher commentating the races and telling the points. The teacher is one of this teachers that everybody loves, so she made lots of jokes. At one point during the carnival she started referring to our sports houses according to Hogwarts houses from harry potter.

So when ever a race was finished she would yell out into the microphone how many points were gained "20 points to ravenclaw" etc. So at some point we just started referring to our self's as Hogwarts houses. For example when we were chanting for our house we would yell out gryffindor instead of lawson, Slytherin instead of kendal, Hufflepuff instead of patterson, and raven claw instead of evans.

So by the end the results were between gryffindor and Hufflepuff. And I swear there hasn't been such an intense competition in the history of our school.