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Set in 1,200 BCE. The Jackal of An-Nadr follows the capture of Nadeem, a date-farmer turned thief who was abandoned in the wastes of the desert when he tried to steal from the wrong ship.
Stranded and alone, he is found and enslaved by a crew of ifrit—towering demons that roam An-Nadr in ships that can sail the sand. Will he become a plaything of the creatures from his nightmares? Or is there something more for him waiting in the hands of his would-be captors?
This series follows Wesley Page, a daring vigilante best known by his alias, Deimos. When he steals and exposes a massive library of blackmail owned by one of the city's worst villains, their entire criminal world goes on a manhunt to track him down. Captured and alone, Deimos is subjected to the revenge and torture of not just the man he stole from, but every villain whose crimes he exposed.
Does he have it in him to withstand their torture long enough to escape? And if so, will he still have the strength afterward to heal?
Content | sci-fi, cyberpunk setting, superpower whump, kidnapping, very brutal torture, gore, repeated noncon // PTSD, an old friend (who just happens to be the city's most powerful villain and a renowned psych professor) turned caretaker. LGBTQ+ fiction. Frequent NSFW content, almost exclusively noncon.
Luca and Garcia
An offshoot of Liliholm and Page. A dynamic duo of bastards that you absolutely hate to love.
Content | EXTREME GORE, VIOLENCE, whumper POV, all hurt no comfort, character death, incredibly brutal whump, painful healing, immortal whumper-turned-whumpee, agender protagonist, villains that are so human you want to strangle them yourself. Aro/Ace friendly!
Cast | Wesley Page, Henry Liliholm, Yalom, Luca, Garcia
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Writing Prompts
All my writing prompts are free to use and can be found under the tag #words of a heathen.
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The Hare Trap Chronicles - [X]
This story is not one of mine, but one submitted to me in series by my beloved 🐇 Anon. Follow the story of Ignacy, a hedonistic young aristocrat-turned-vampire, and his many lifetimes of misadventure as he lives out his centuries as the 'black sheep' of his family's estate.
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Hi there! Here's my submission for the melanin beam challenge, from the Transformers community! I drew Jazz and Megatron. Also I heard it was your birthday recently! I hope you have a good day.
drew some of my fav silmarillion siblings! aredhel tying fingons ribbons into his hair for @creatingblackcharacters melanin beam challenge! i hope im not too late lol
Thereupon little Giry—the girl with eyes black as sloes, hair black as ink, a swarthy complexion and a poor little skin stretched over her poor bones—little Giry added:
"If that's the ghost, he's very ugly!"
a little Giry to power @creatingblackcharacters' big melanin beam
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like I mean this very seriously as writing advice. the character should experience events and make decisions that make them different at the end of the story. they should be changed. they do not have to be improved.
they can get worse. they can make decisions of an increasingly terrible nature. they can stop taking risks on kindness. they can discover how much they can get away with. they can find religion, or abandon it, with negative effects on their moral creed. the character has to develop. the character does not have to grow.
CW: Seizure symptoms, convulsions, hallucinations, cognitive decline, physical deterioration. Too many to list here. Readers beware.
🧠💥 Seizures
Seizures are SUCH A FUN mechanic to write. A well-written seizure event lends itself beautifully to whump, angst, hurt/comfort and sickfics. SO MANY lovely causes and symptoms to make your poor whumpee suffer.
Some fascinating things I've learnt:
Seizure threshold
Things like sleep deprivation, stimulant overuse, dehydration, stress, fever, low blood sugar can push the brain over the seizure threshold. Stack the effects of these stressors, make them compound, and your whumpee can go from "I'm ok! I'm just tired!" to having a head full of pop rocks.
Imagine an overworked whumpee, having to extend their physical and mental resources, either because they are under duress by Whumper, or because the situation demands it. The effects of their exhaustion, physical stress and maybe even performance-enhancing drugs push them ever closer to the seizure threshold, until they finally cross it.
Maybe it happens after the high intensity event. So everybody has survived, or Whumper has finally let up, and they're fine, just a bit out of it, and then BOOM. They're down for the count.
Or worse, does it happen in the middle of a crisis? They're in a shootout, or a high stakes heist, or a situation where stealth is required...
BONUS, if the thing they're doing is what causes them to tip over the seizure threshold, like a mage trying to heal someone with their over-extended mage resources, and their brain starts to stutter and blink out.
Aftereffects
The seizure is not always the worst part. Even after a short seizure, the nervous system can remain wrecked for a long time: muscle soreness, emotional instability, slowed cognition, headaches, sensory sensitivity, exhaustion, sleeping a whole lot afterward..
They can even temporarily lose memory, language, memory, motor coordination, and awareness. Sometimes they come back terrified and confused, because they wake up but a lot of their mental faculties is still offline and everything is overwhelming and doesn't make sense. Caretaker: "Look I can deal with Whumpee bleeding and their bones bent out of shape, but when he woke up and he looked at me so scared and confused... that was the worst."
Or whumpee waking up with memory gaps. Or with aphasia; struggling to find the right words, speaking in fragmented sentences, or mixing up words. "The hyperdrive is funch-- fshunc--"
If your whumpee goes through a tonic-clonic seizure (the kind where they convulse), they can bite their tongue (usually the side, not the tip) when their teeth clench.
If it's particularly violent, they can fracture bones, tear muscle or dislocate joints.
A whumpee can start feeling the onset of warning sensations, and think, "oh I think I'm in trouble--" and then wake up on the floor. Maybe in the middle of a room that has been pushed clear of furniture, with team members trying to hold them down.
Oooh, opportunities for caretakers or team members to feel guilt for not catching the symptoms earlier. Or for having outrightly dismissed them. Which brings me nicely into--
Seizures don't always look dramatic
The dramatic kind are the ones we usually see on tv/movies. With good reason. They are deliciously cinematic and immediately signal breakdown.
These usually involve: collapse, full body convulsions, rigid muscles, loss of consciousness, choking sounds, tongue biting and cyanosis (lips, tongue and fingertips visibly turn blue from lack of oxygen). Observers immediate KNOW something is wrong.
But there are also the kind of seizures that are devastatingly quiet and easy to overlook: staring into space, brief confusion, repetitive movements, emotional surges, speech anomalies, “zoning out”, losing a few seconds of time.
Whumpee may not remember part of the conversation. They might try to piece together what was just said, or quietly ask what happened, trying not to draw attention to their "lapse".
They could start slurring. Or maybe they suddenly can’t perform a familiar task. Even become uncharacteristically emotional.
These signs can be easily mistaken as distraction, panic attacks, intoxication, exhaustion, dissociation, PMS(!), sulking, crankiness, or just "being weird". (Perfect opportunity for team or caretaker angst!)
Feeling a rising sense of dread, like something terrible is going to happen, is also a possible effect.
Hallucinations
Visual hallucinations can include: flashes of light, geometric patterns, shadows, colour distortions, tunnel vision, warped faces, movement in peripheral vision
Auditory hallucinations: buzzing, ringing, distorted voices, music, muffled speech, sounds becoming strangely loud or distant. "Can someone PLEASE turn down the comm link? What do you mean it's not on. I hear it and Chloe is singing."
Olfactory hallucinations (hahah I love this): burning, metal, chemicals, rotting smells
Time distortions: feeling like time slowed down, events are looping, losing chunks of time entirely, feeling trapped in a moment, feeling like several minutes passed when only seconds did, sudden certainty that something has already happened. "Will you stop saying that, I heard you the first time."
Spatial hallucinations (Alice in Wonderland syndrome): Rooms feeling tilted, objects seeming too large or too small, too close or too far away. "Whoa, are we in the right ship? The cockpit is... so much bigger." Movements may seem delayed or jerky. They might feel disconnected from their own body position.
Something to note: hallucinations caused by seizures are brief. So you're not going to have your whumpee hallucinating their dead mother for hours on end. It usually lasts seconds or minutes. "Wha-- sorry. I just... I thought I saw my mom walk by the door. Hahaha, she's been dead 10 years... I'm just... I'm just being stupid."
Worse, they might KNOW what they're hallucinating isn't real, but it FEELS real. "I know it's not burning, I'm looking right at it, but it SMELLS like it's on fire. Can you PLEASE just check again?"
Another FASCINATING hallucination is one that involves the feeling of familiarity. Intense feelings of familiarity for they have never experienced before (déjà vu) or feelings of UNfamiliarity of something they supposed to know (jamais vu)
Imagine a whumpee staring at someone they've never met and trying deperately to remember their name. Or holding a tool that they have always wielded like an extension of their body and they suddenly have no idea what to do with it or what it's for. AAAGGH.
OK, this is way longer than I intended it to be ahhahahha, but it usually ends up this way. Oops!
Seizures are unlike many other medical whump mechanics because the effects can be disorienting and impactful before, during AND after.
I included a whole lot of these symptoms in this fic: Purgatory.
Please note, I am NOT medically trained at all, these are entirely for fictional writing purposes.
Epileptic here ☝️ This is all spot on! I’m always elated to see accurate medical stuff in whump spaces, and op has compiled a fantastic list >:)
To add my two cents: Having a seizure is trippy. “Grand Mal” seizures especially, where one loses consciousness and convulses. When you regain consciousness, it’s incredibly disorienting to suddenly wake up in a completely different spot than where you last remember being. For example, I had a seizure in the shower one time, and I woke up on the couch after being moved there for my safety. My last memory was getting in the shower, so a whole chunk of time is just gone, but not just because I passed out.
Following Grand Mal seizures, most people will be in a semi-conscious state. They’re responsive, but not really aware of what’s going on, nor can they remember any of it. I was responsive about a minute after my last seizure, to the point where I was able to get up and walk with assistance, but my speech was slurred and stunted. I didn’t actually “come to” or remember anything until fifteen minutes after the seizure. Even after coming to, it felt like my brain was still rebooting. It took a great deal of effort to voice how I was feeling, and I felt confused, tired, and sore.
Uhh hope this helps someone out there looking to write medically accurate seizures ✌️
I really love medically accurate whump. It just slaps extra hard.
Yes, I write whump and fictional suffering for entertainment, but there are real people who suffer these very real afflictions. It feels partway respectful to at least get some details right.
And it’s so educational! I learn so much not only from doing research for my own whump writing but also reading other medically accurate whump fics!
As weird as it sounds, I’m really happy that this has the stamp of approval from someone who has had personal experience. And thank you @ouchie-central for sharing additional details from your experience!
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facts about myalgic encephalomyelitis (ME/CFS) to combat the disinformation campaigns going on:
what does the name mean? my = muscle. algic = pain. encephalo = brain. myel = spinal cord. itis = inflammation.
ME is classed by the WHO as a neurological disease. the Decode ME study found immune and neurological genetic markers in its analysis of 15,000 subjects.
ME is more complex than just fatigue. many experts and patients dislike the old name ‘chronic fatigue syndrome’ because fatigue is only one part of the condition, and it’s the least unique trait.
the most unique trait is post exertional malaise, where, 24-72 hours after any exertion outside the patient’s limits, there’s a peak of worsening and new symptoms affecting multiple bodily systems. PEM often involves immune activation, such as sore throat and a low fever, and a loss of muscle recovery after exertion, measurable through CPET testing. (normal muscle recovery takes 200 mins, but muscle recovery in ME takes days, with some patients taking longer than a year to recover from a single exertion.)
ME can range from mild to profoundly severe. these severity levels are only within the context of ME, not general illness; ‘mild’ ME is still a severe illness as it includes a 50% loss of functioning. ‘mild’ ME can feature debilitating pain and complex symptoms and can turn basic activities of daily living into a marathon.
severe ME is (naturally) even more physically limiting than mild ME. people with severe ME are largely bedbound and only rarely able to leave their room in a wheelchair, and usually can’t perform their own care tasks, needing help dressing, washing, and eating.
in very severe ME, the person may be unable to leave bed at all and may not be able to speak, swallow, roll over, sit up, read, or be exposed to light or noise, for years or decades.
ME has a measurably lower quality of life than any other illness studied, including cancer and stroke.
finally, many of us can attest that exertion can cause years of deterioration and loss of functioning in ME patients. ive been 95% bedbound for the last decade bc of ONE WEEKEND where i walked too much when i was 15. im 26 now. and ive known so many people who went through something similar. do with this info what you will.
today, 8th august, is severe & very severe ME awareness day. it was chosen to honour sophia mirza who died of severe ME. please consider and remember us today 💗
facts about myalgic encephalomyelitis (ME/CFS) to combat the disinformation campaigns going on:
what does the name mean? my = muscle. algic = pain. encephalo = brain. myel = spinal cord. itis = inflammation.
ME is classed by the WHO as a neurological disease. the Decode ME study found immune and neurological genetic markers in its analysis of 15,000 subjects.
ME is more complex than just fatigue. many experts and patients dislike the old name ‘chronic fatigue syndrome’ because fatigue is only one part of the condition, and it’s the least unique trait.
the most unique trait is post exertional malaise, where, 24-72 hours after any exertion outside the patient’s limits, there’s a peak of worsening and new symptoms affecting multiple bodily systems. PEM often involves immune activation, such as sore throat and a low fever, and a loss of muscle recovery after exertion, measurable through CPET testing. (normal muscle recovery takes 200 mins, but muscle recovery in ME takes days, with some patients taking longer than a year to recover from a single exertion.)
ME can range from mild to profoundly severe. these severity levels are only within the context of ME, not general illness; ‘mild’ ME is still a severe illness as it includes a 50% loss of functioning. ‘mild’ ME can feature debilitating pain and complex symptoms and can turn basic activities of daily living into a marathon.
severe ME is (naturally) even more physically limiting than mild ME. people with severe ME are largely bedbound and only rarely able to leave their room in a wheelchair, and usually can’t perform their own care tasks, needing help dressing, washing, and eating.
in very severe ME, the person may be unable to leave bed at all and may not be able to speak, swallow, roll over, sit up, read, or be exposed to light or noise, for years or decades.
ME has a measurably lower quality of life than any other illness studied, including cancer and stroke.
finally, many of us can attest that exertion can cause years of deterioration and loss of functioning in ME patients. ive been 95% bedbound for the last decade bc of ONE WEEKEND where i walked too much when i was 15. im 26 now. and ive known so many people who went through something similar. do with this info what you will.
today, 8th august, is severe & very severe ME awareness day. it was chosen to honour sophia mirza who died of severe ME. please consider and remember us today 💗
A reminder to my self and all of you: you can, and should make customer complaints on behalf of staff.
Like last week, I had to mail a package and my local USPS was absolutely SWEALTERING. And the staff only had a few fans, some of which they were using faced towards customers, to try and keep us cool.
While doing my transaction, I was chatting with the worker about how crazy this was and how I hoped she had her own fan too, because I could only see the customer-benefit ones. She said yes, but I also asked if there was anyone I could complain to on her behalf and she immediately said yes again and to please do it! She wrote a more direct customer service number on my receipt which I was able to call Friday.
To be clear, I was kind and polite; I stressed how good the workers at this office were and how efficient always: "It's my local post office," but also how unbearable the heat was and how I couldn't imagine MY poor local staff having to suffer in that heat all day. I don't know yet if it will have an immediate effect for the workers, I hope it will though.
It's a move I haven't pulled much recently, but it was a good reminder for me that I can. I can put on my best assertive-Karen-for-good voice and bitch at companies and corporations to take care of their staff because why would I keep going to them if they don't? I know Post office is a little different, but all the more reason for me to take a vested interest as I pay for them with my taxes! Use my money to get those hard-working folks some goddamn aircon!
As someone who works in a warehouse without air conditioning or any kind of air filtration... DO THIS SHIT!! Higher ups will regularly ignore the concerns voiced by employees but will care a lot more about the complaints of customers. Also, a lot of things that employees complain amongst themselves about never make it all the way up the food chain because people don't have the balls to raise the issues to the people in charge. If its 103 outside and a feels like of 113 and you are thinking "how can they work in this heat?" Say something to the people who make decisions about these things! Complain to the higher ups that you are concerned someone is going to get a heat injury (don't blame the workers, and don't say they are moving too slowly or anything like that, make it about the specific safety hazard putting the employees at risk). I recently had to raise a concern about the terrible air quality from the Canada fires because no one else was saying it to the highest levels of the company but we were all trying to survive. When conditions are problematic saying something as a consumer goes way further than saying something as an employee or manager.
See a hazard, speak up for the employees having to deal with the hazard who have no control. Your words as a customer can be used to help or hurt employees, speak up for your friends.
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Riko and Vetch meet cute... Where the meet cute includes obsession, whump and murder.
Features: A whole lot of very bloody whump, an obsessed/creepy whumper, multiple whumpers, competent whumpee, prolonged torture, withheld medical aid, manipulation, inadvertent whumpers
The main arc at the moment. Start here! (Red links for whump-only chapters)
Tourniquet ▸ Goodnight ▸ Knife ▸ Duck and Weave ▸ Battle After Battle ▸ Maintenance Corridor ▸ Now I Can See You ▸ Choreographed
Whump-only path: Maintenance Corridor ▸ Now I Can See You ▸ Tourniquet ▸ Goodnight
🎨 Art for this arc: Riko (and a little bit of Vetch) by @deerslayer14
🔸 Standalone stories:
Grit (ft. whumperless whump, competent protagonist, lung injuries)
Riko as a rookie medic, being brave and self-sacrificial and insubordinate all in the same breath. This story happens before the events of Selah.
🔸 Hollowroot Arc:
Some years after Selah, in the medical facility where he meets Mish. Sweet recovery moments that build toward future whump.
Surface Tension (ft. QPR, coming out as aroace)
Plant (ft. QPR, whump recovery)
🎨 Art for this fic: Mish and the plant by @deerslayer14
Tyre Swing (ft. QPR)
🔸 Afterburn:
Riko is sent outfield with a team leader known to make near impossible demands of the people who work with him.
Purgatory ▸ F is for Functional ▸ Something Stupid ▸ Cold Spray ▸ Unlaced ▸ Charmed ▸ Ballet (An ongoing series! Comment to ask to be added to the taglist!)
🎧 Accompanying music for Purgatory
🔸 Alternate-Universe:
These stories are non-canon. They can get... extreme.
Override (ft. whumperless whump, QPR, competent protagonist)
Erasure: Part 1 ▸ Part 2 ▸ Part 3 (ft. QPR yearning, captive whumpee, living weapon whumpee, violence, memory erasure)
🔸 Lore and Asks:
Riko's vibe /// Is Riko dead? /// What is Signal War? /// PLEASEEEE can we get a riko update chapterrr /// What are Riko and Mish to each other? /// Unsolicited Lore /// Riko & Mish's enneagram /// Any ideas on what riko's voice sounds like? // Did anybody notice the plant in Purgatory? // Description of Mish
AAAAH I love the additive sign language detail! It's a cultural/language thing that Jombians use to add inflection and detail to what's being verbalised.
Not me doing that action repeated to myself while I was writing. "Beyond belief!" "Beyond belief!"
Riko knows some Jombian sign because as a kid in a street gang, one of his friends taught him. Jombians consider it bad form to use sign instead of the spoken word, but guess what.
Gangster: Wait, what did that sign mean?
Riko: We were just saying how you're really smart, and it's lucky you were on our crew today.
Jombian friend, signing: stupid asshole whose head so small, mother have no problem birthing him
Riko, signing (fighting for his life): please please please no make me laugh, he kill me
Jombian friend, signing: you lie so good and your mouth so smooth, can make driest grandmother cum
Riko, signing: stop please, soon you have tragic dead friend
From Ballet
<< Signal War (Afterburn arc)
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