The Crownwardens: Chapter 7
Part III: “The Names We Choose” (Chapters 7-9)
Some things must end for others to begin. Old paths close, new ones open, and the choices made along the way leave marks that cannot be undone.
The Crownwardens is an original fantasy passion project, posted chapter by chapter as it is written. It's just something fun for me to do while I query my first novel for publication. If you prefer reading on AO3, you can find this story posted there as well.
Content warnings: graphic fantasy violence and gore; major character death; suicide; body horror, corpses, and undead possession; war, massacre, and authoritarian violence (not all warnings apply to every chapter).
THIS STORY WAS NOT WRITTEN OR EDITED BY GENERATIVE-AI.
“Chapter 7: The Price of Success”
Unceasing’s Oath
Ocrovos was ready to put his new knowledge to use and he already had the perfect test subject: Mordane. He needed to raise the corpse at least enough for Lior and Zeke to bring it back to Duke Veylan. Nothing more of Mordane needed to return. So he sifted through the foreign memories implanted in his mind by Plague for what to do.
First, he needed to check which parts of Mordane’s Essence still lingered.
He had learned from the Stellan Lyceum that all magic required the presence of three things: the intent, the willpower, and a component. The first two were easy. He had a sufficiently clear idea of what he wanted the magic to do and what he expected it to do—show me which parts of Mordane’s Essence remain; tug at those parts of my own Essence to tell me which ones. The willpower was just mental fortitude, something he had practiced for many years during his time as a scholar. It was not unlike standing strong and holding one’s ground in the sand against a waist-high wave cresting onto the beach. The only thing he didn’t fully understand was the required component.
Ocrovos searched Plague’s knowledge and what appeared was a confusing jumble of tenses, histories, genders, and past lives. He had been a woman 97 years ago, searching for what remained of her son’s Essence, and died only ever learning that the magic responded to the physical shape of sound waves. He had been an elderly man 80 years ago, and died only ever learning that the arrangement of the sound waves was in the shape of words. And he had been the youngest of King Wendell’s secret coterie of Necromantic scholars 44 years ago, eventually discovering that the words were a whispered conglomeration of untranslated words from the Age of Myth.
So Ocrovos held the intent clear in his mind, stood fast against the coming psychic resistance, and whispered the words to the corpse. They made no sense to him. He didn’t even know how to spell them. His memory provided images of symbols that made up the words, but they were ones no one recognized or understood—even in his vast storage of memories. To Ocrovos, they were merely sounds.
But to Necromancy, it was a command.
Ocrovos felt a phantom touch against his own Essence. His memory twitched. A shiver ran through the core of who he was, through his soul. But there was no sensation around the concept of Aurene—his anchor. Mordane’s memory and soul remained in the Veil, but not his anchor. It made sense; Mordane had no reason to remain clinging to life so his anchor had decayed into the unreachable Beyond.
Ocrovos realized the terms Veil and Beyond felt as if they should have been foreign to him, but the knowledge of what they were was in his memories regardless.
And then he knew there were six types of undead he could raise, but the lack of an anchor limited Mordane’s raising to just three: a Phantom, an Echo, and a Vestige.
“This is so complex,” Ocrovos whispered aloud, the words directed at the secondary presence in his mind.
“The others will notice if we hesitate,” Plague said in response. “An Echo would best suit your needs.”
An Echo. It was an undead raised using only the Memory of the deceased’s Essence. This would bring Mordane back as an undead made of pure memory. He would have no reason to exist, and no soul with which to be who he was before. It would only be a walking corpse that could answer questions about its previous life. That would be sufficient to get the corpse back to Duke Veylan.
But calling back Mordane’s memory to place in the empty body would cost a touch of Ocrovos’s own memory in return.
“Could I lose something valuable you’ve given me?” Ocrovos asked Plague.
“No,” she said. “You’re the one raising him, not me. You will only lose a memory you’ve made before you invited me in.”
It felt like a small price to pay. But still . . . he had to make sure. “Will it be of Aurene?”
“You cannot choose,” Plague said. “But it will be just one memory. Not one person or one year. You won’t even miss it.”
“How could you possibly know that?” Ocrovos asked.
“Because you won’t remember losing it.”
Ocrovos smiled. Of course. It made sense. And for all this knowledge he had received in return? It would be worth it.
So he got to work.
#
Merchant’s Rest
Zeke’s gut told him something was off, but he couldn’t pinpoint what it was. The beautiful vistas and sense of adventure on their journey back to Merchant’s Rest had been washed away by a tide of doubt and suspicion. And at first, none of it was directed at Monty. At first, it was just something about Mordane.
The Black Vulture hadn’t been particularly alive to begin with, but now he was even less of a person. Monty had stopped talking to him, and then Mordane had almost completely stopped talking. When asked questions about anything other than his past, he just stared back with blank eyes like there was absolutely nothing behind them. He could answer questions about who he was and what he had done, but he acted deaf when asked about the last few days or how he had survived in the Umbral Tunnels for so long.
Monty claimed to feed him and watch him at night, but Zeke couldn’t ever remember seeing it firsthand. He never saw Mordane sleep, eat, drink, ask for bathroom breaks, or even respond to being poked or pushed or handled in any way.
By the time they reached Merchant’s Rest, Zeke was adamant that Mordane was dead. Or, rather, undead. He at least looked dead enough that they had to hide his identity with a hood and cloak, and conceal his wings in a hollowed-out travel pack slung over his back. That was when a part of Zeke suspected Monty of doing something. But the idea felt foolish.
Monty knew the law: if Lior and Zeke could prove he had used Necromancy they could make a month’s wages off of his head. And the bounty would be in coins—not scrip that could only be spent in Ironcliff Keep.
And there were the words of the Duke to go by. Duke Veylan had claimed that something brought Mordane back, so perhaps a necromancer had gotten to the Black Vulture before their little party had ever reached the Umbral Tunnels. Or perhaps there was something more sinister happening. Zeke nearly gagged at the memory of the slug inside the bear’s head trying to climb into his mouth. Was something like that wriggling around inside Mordane’s head?
While Zeke watched Mordane in their room at the Twin Lanterns, he had decided to test the theory. He had drawn his sword, casually beheaded Mordane, and when nothing came crawling out, he had slit his own throat. The moment Zeke died, time rewound and Mordane was no longer headless. Knowing the answer only disturbed him more.
And there was the guilt that came from using his gift in this way. They had spent days travelling, and the journey had settled a fog over his memories of the first moments following their transformation into Crownwardens, but hadn’t he promised Lior he wouldn’t use his gift like that again? And here he was, breaking that oath so soon after making it. Shame and regret snaked their way into his heart. He tried his best to push it down and bury it under a new vow: That was the last time; now I won’t do it again.
Someone knocked at the door to their room. Zeke opened the door and Lior brushed him aside to enter the room. Monty was right behind him.
“Monty’s leaving,” Lior said.
Zeke had known this was coming—Monty had even said as much—but he was still disappointed to hear it. “When might we meet again?”
Monty gave Zeke a sad smile. “I don’t believe we will.”
“Why not?”
“I’m going to search for the Arcane Drift,” Monty said. “Their most recent relocation is rumored to be near here, and I’d like to talk to the scholars there.” Lior huffed and crossed his arms. “So you leave to join the outlaws?”
Monty’s sad smile stayed. He seemed fondly amused that Lior’s demeanor was already so predictable. “They do not all illegally practice magic. Some are there only to observe. I go to do the same.”
“Then why not return to the Stellan Lyceum?” Lior asked.
“There are many things I kept from you,” Monty said. “None of them seemed relevant to our task. But among those details is my expulsion.”
Lior shook his head. “I should have known. We’ve been travelling with a criminal.”
“Not true,” Monty said. “I was expelled after the passing of my wife, Aurene. My studies suffered, as did my work. So I was . . . excused from my duties.”
“But why tell us now?” Zeke asked. “You’re about to leave; just take your secrets with you.”
“You asked,” Monty said as he met Zeke’s gaze. “You wanted to know why you wouldn’t see me again, and you’ve been kind to me since we met. I owed you an explanation, at the very least.”
“Seeing as some of the very first things you said to us were apparently lies,” Lior said, “I doubt you would have given me the same courtesy.”
“Because you’re an ass,” Monty said with a genuine, full smile. “Try to remind yourself once in a while that you’re not that far above the rest of us. You weren’t a Captain when we met; you were just an Ironguard. And receiving the gift of a Crownwarden likewise doesn’t make you a Duke. You’re still just an Ironguard. Albeit, a particularly strong and talented one.”
Lior returned Monty’s smile without malice or bitterness. “Those may be the first honest words I’ve heard from you since we met.”
“Consider them my parting gift to you,” Monty said as he turned to leave the room. “Zeke has a good heart. I’d hate to see you lose so much sight of yourself that you end up losing him, too. For now, I think Ezekian Sim is the best part of Lior Drevan.”
Then Zeke and Lior watched Ocrovos Gravemont leave. He shut the door and they heard his footsteps fade as he descended the stairs. Mordane sat on the floor, face blank and mind seemingly empty. Lior nervously shifted his weight from one foot to the other while Zeke tried to figure out if Monty’s last words were an insult to Lior or a compliment to himself.
“I’m sorry,” Lior finally said.
“For what?” Zeke asked. “Did his words strike a chord with you?”
“Perhaps. I think it’s worth talking about.”
Zeke’s heart sped up. He wasn’t prepared for this talk yet. “Right now?”
“No, no,” Lior said, waving at Zeke. “I’m sorry, my friend, I meant later. We can discuss it after we’ve returned with Mordane and figured out what to tell the Duke about . . . well, about what happened to us in the Umbral Tunnels.”
“And for today?”
Lior shrugged. “Rest, I suppose. Switch the horses out for camels again. Make it to Titan’s Tusks in a timely manner tomorrow. Maybe Captain Mighell will have some words of wisdom for us.”
“Do you think it’s a good idea to tell anyone besides the Duke?” Zeke asked. “About Mordane or the King’s Well?”
“We have to tell someone something,” Lior said. “I don’t know who or when or what, but we’re blessed. We retrieved a war criminal thought dead. And we found the King’s Well. None of these are secrets that I believe belong only to the Duke of Ironcliff.” Zeke suddenly felt exhausted, and Lior must have seen it overcome him. “Don’t worry about it for now, Zeke. Tonight, let’s just get some rest. Perhaps tomorrow we’ll think of something.”
“I hope so,” Zeke said.
But he couldn’t shake the sense that everything was getting ready to fall apart.
#
Titan’s Tusks
The last time Lior was here, he felt like he was visiting an old friend’s house after leaving home. Now the feeling was of attending a tribunal before being marched to garrison cells. They hadn’t done anything wrong, not really, but he still bore the weight of a man walking into judgment. It made him fear that the trek to Ironcliff Keep would feel like walking into danger.
Captain Mighell met them at the gate again as he had last week. Had it really been that long? It didn’t matter. What mattered now was finishing what they started.
“Lior! Zeke! And . . .”
Lior slid from his camel so he could get close enough to Mighell for a whisper. “Mordane, the Black Vulture.”
Mighell’s eyes went wide. “This is what the Duke sent you after? I thought he was long dead.”
“He may be,” Lior said. “He’s been acting strange. I have my suspicions. But for now, I think it’s best we keep his identity a secret.”
“I agree,” Mighell said. “Come in, rest. I have a cell I can place him in, then we can talk.”
As Mighell took Mordane away, Zeke slipped off of the camel and stepped closer to Lior to ask, “Are we going to tell him?”
“No,” Lior said. “Not about the Well. That information belongs only to the other Crownwardens.”
Within the hour, Mighell had discreetly locked Mordane away and invited Lior and Zeke to his own personal chambers to talk. He had food waiting there, but it was nothing like the last time Lior had passed through. This time they had bowls of a simple soup made from boiling wild onions with salt-and-peppered legumes—mostly chickpeas and lentils—with a hearty stack of dense flatbread to soak up the broth.
They had eaten in silence for a time before Mighell finally said, “I suspect Necromancy.”
“As do I,” Lior said.
“Is there a way to check?” Zeke asked.
Lior shook his head. “Besides, why bother? We were ordered to bring Mordane to the Duke. If I recall, he even told us to expect some kind of foul play.”
“‘Bring him to me,’” Zeke said, repeating the Duke’s words, “‘or whatever now wears his body.’”
“Veylan will not tolerate this,” Mighell said. “I know he has given you orders, but if you bring an undead into Ironcliff Keep . . . Lior, he could have you executed.”
“For fulfilling my duty?” Lior asked.
“To avoid having to Bestow us,” Zeke said.
Lior felt a flash of anger cross his heart, but it was less intense this time. He wondered if it was because he suspected Zeke was right. Still, it was his duty to defend the honor of his Duke, so he softened his tone and said, “We can’t talk about the Duke like that.”
“The boy has a point,” Mighell said. Lior looked at him in surprise, but even the captain was visibly displeased with his own admission. “The Duke hasn’t bestowed anyone since the Trade War, and after what happened with Mordane, I don’t think he ever will again.”
“Not you as well,” Lior groaned. “Veylan is a Crownwarden, you think he would squander such a gift?”
Zeke answered, but his voice was low and quiet as he tested the waters for Lior’s reaction. “I think he fears it, now.”
“It would make sense,” Mighell agreed. “They were given the power to anoint more Crownwardens and never did. Perhaps the reasons why are the same for Veylan refusing to Bestow anyone with a lesser gift.”
“Alright, then what?” Lior asked, pushing his half-finished soup away and leaning back in his chair. “We run? Do you advise us to flee Ironcliff?”
“You’ll both have to make your own decisions,” Mighell said. “I won’t advise you one way or the other. I’m merely telling you things you can expect to happen.”
Lior stood from the table. “We need to rest up if we’re to be presentable to the Duke tomorrow.”
Mighell sighed and nodded. “I understand. But send word when you reach Ironcliff. Don’t leave me to wonder about your fate.” Then, to Zeke: “What are you going to do?”
“Stay with Lior,” Zeke said. “He’s closer to me than a brother. I won’t abandon him. Not for anything.”
Despite the growing apprehension, the tense worry, and the nagging feeling that everything Lior’s life had amounted to was going to end soon, Lior felt a spring of hope open inside him. No matter what happened, at least he wouldn’t be alone.
Lior reached out and placed a hand on Zeke’s shoulder. “Thank you for being so patient with me. I admit I haven’t been the best friend I could be. Not for a few months now. But there is no one else I’d rather do this with.”
Zeke smiled. Lior wanted to tell him that Monty was right, that Zeke was the best part of him, but something inside his chest refused to loosen. He didn’t know if it was pride or shame or something else, but if he would hesitate to say the words then now wasn’t the right time.
He hoped there would be a chance for a better time after their return.
#
Ironcliff Keep
Zeke had seen Ironcliff Keep one hundred times over, the memories stretching as far back as he could remember, but it never felt quite as imposing as it did now. The maroon masonry against the tan, dusty mountainside made the keep look like an angry rash. It seemed to grow outward from the mountainside, its harsh angles jutting from the uneven surfaces of cliffsides and rises. Duke Veylan’s throne room was in the highest tower, the one that rose above even the mountain’s own peak and overlooked the sandy dunes beyond.
Only now, when Zeke was approaching with an uncertain fate, did he realize how deliberately Ironcliff Keep had been designed to intimidate. It loomed over them, angry and impatient. Even the sky was dark with brooding clouds spewed from Widow’s Peak. The only way their approach would have been more menacing was if the dormant volcano were making an ashen snowfall—something it had done only twice as far as Zeke could remember.
“Last chance to turn back,” Lior said.
Zeke only shook his head.
The entrance was flanked by two Ironguard sentries, their shining, copper half-plate bearing the sigil of the Iron Hawk—a black desert raptor with its wings spread across a red shield. The guard on the left pointed, and the one on the right shielded his eyes against the setting sun to see.
“Lior Drevan and Ezekian Sim return!” one of them shouted as they moved to open the gates.
One of the sentries, a man Zeke didn’t recognize, ran out to greet them. “It’s good to see you again,” he said before he noticed their passenger. His smile fell. “Who’s the cloaked one?”
“The prisoner Duke Veylan sent us to fetch,” Lior said.
The sentry nodded and moved to grab Mordane.
“No,” Zeke said, dismounting the camel and reaching Mordane first. “We’ll take him.”
“The Duke swore you to secrecy?” the sentry asked.
“He did not,” Lior said. “But neither did his target seem like someone he would want to announce to everyone in the keep.”
The sentry only saluted and moved out of the way.
Lior dismounted and grabbed Mordane’s right arm while Zeke grabbed his left. They marched the Black Vulture through the large gate and began the long climb to the throne room.
“I don’t like this,” Zeke said.
Lior looked anxious, too, but only said, “Well, at least it’s almost over.”
When they reached the top, the throne room guards were already opening the wooden doors. They were inlaid with copper filigree in elegant patterns reminiscent of wings and feathers, shining as if recently polished, and even the hinges made no noise as they moved. The silence of such large, ornate doors felt like a bad omen. Zeke’s heartbeat quickened even more.
They stepped into the throne room, tugging Mordane along in his shuffling, limping gait. The azure carpet trailing from the entrance to the marmoreal throne seemed longer than before—the whole room did. The stained glass was darker than the last time Zeke had seen it, even if only because of the setting sun. Duke Veylan Drex sat on the throne underneath it. The marble was carved into three distinct, rising points, and the Duke’s extended wings were resting in the shallow grooves of the throne’s trident-like outer prongs.
“And so you have returned,” the Duke said. “Show me the Black Vulture.”
Lior stepped forward and unceremoniously yanked the cloak free from Mordane. The Duke stood, tucked his wings in, and sauntered down to his greatest mistake. He grabbed Mordane by the jaw, tilted the prisoner’s head left and right, and looked over the Black Vulture’s shoulder at the disgraced Bestowed’s miserable excuses for wings.
“What’s your name?” Veylan asked.
“Mordane,” the prisoner rasped.
“How did you die?” Veylan asked.
Mordane did not answer.
In one smooth motion, Veylan withdrew a dagger from a sheath on his hip and plunged it into Mordane’s throat. Mordane didn’t react.
“Undead,” Veylan said. “I expected as much.” He took a half-step backwards, and leaned into the gift that made him a Crownwarden. A layer of shining, mirror-polished iron bloomed underneath his tunic, crawling across his arms, up his neck, and down his wings. In the blink of an eye, his whole body was covered in it. He looked like a living statue. Then, with an elegant twirl, the Duke spun and decapitated Mordane with the razor-sharp feathers of his iron wings. The body fell into a limp, bloodless pile on the floor, the head rolling across the carpet.
“What I did not expect,” the Duke said, turning his attention to Lior and Zeke, “was for the two of you to raise him.” He took a step toward them, his wings flexing. “Where did you learn such vile arts?”
“We did no such thing, my Duke,” Lior said, kneeling before Veylan to show his submission.
Lior made a small gesture at Zeke to do the same, but Zeke was frozen in place with fear. One simple little spin, like a dancer, was all it took to behead Mordane. Lior looked behind himself at Zeke, pleading through his eyes. If Duke Veylan wanted them dead, they would die here.
Except . . . what about his new gift?
Zeke felt an alien wash of calm flow through his body. He couldn’t die. He set his jaw and kneeled with grace, steady and prepared.
“I felt his connection to me sever, then reignite. I sent you to fetch him. Not six days later, it was severed again; this time it never returned. Yet you arrive with him, walking and knowing his name but nothing else? The only explanation was that you had to kill him, then you raised him to bring him back seemingly alive.” The Duke took another step forward. “I have given you everything. I don’t understand why you decided to betray me.”
“We did no such thing, my Duke,” Lior said. “We met a traveler, Ocrovos Gravemont, who was to show us the way through the Umbral Tunnels. He must have raised Mordane without our knowledge.”
The Duke took one final step forward and stopped within range to strike Lior the same way he had Mordane. “You had no idea that a thing who didn’t eat or sleep or shite was an undead?”
Zeke kept his mouth shut about his earlier experiment in Merchant’s Rest. The way things were going, it would make things worse if the Duke discovered they were Crownwardens.
“N-no,” Lior said. “I figured it out after Ocrovos departed, but we knew we couldn’t return empty-handed.”
“And you didn’t think to rid him of the foul magic first?” the Duke asked, still calm as ever as he knelt to be face-to-face with Lior.
“We did as you commanded,” Zeke said. Veylan’s head snapped up, his silvery, solid eyes staring into Zeke’s own. “You said to bring him back, or whatever wore his body. And so we did.”
The Duke stood and motioned for Lior to do the same. Zeke could see the shaking in his friend’s limbs as Lior obeyed.
The Duke reached a shining arm forward and rested his iron hand against Lior’s shoulder. “Prove your loyalty,” the Duke said as his fingers tightened on Lior’s shoulder. Zeke could hear his friend bite back a whimper. Veylan yanked, spinning Lior in a half-circle to face Zeke. “That one speaks out of turn, again. Cut out his tongue and all will be forgiven. Then I will Bestow you as promised.”
Zeke looked to Lior. His best friend’s face was resolute, his gaze hardened with determination. Zeke remembered all the times Lior had spouted his duty to the Duke like it was the only thing that mattered. He remembered the pathetic motto Callum had taught him about loyalty being stronger than love. He remembered how Lior had told him to shackle his tongue whenever he spoke in defense of the Lior who had saved his life years ago.
And yet, there was no hesitation in Lior’s voice, no hint of its earlier unsteady edge, as he said, “I will not silence the best part of myself.”
Zeke felt something in his heart break in the way a mishealed bone needs to be rebroken. His face grew warm, his eyes burned, and he blinked away the tears welling in them. Lior smiled at Zeke with one of his old smiles, the casual ones that he always gave when things were at their worst.
The Duke sighed.
“It was a mistake to think the one person Callum believed was worthy of Bestowal would not also betray me. Never again will I give away such power. And never again will I trust mongrels I pulled in from the streets—ones I clothed, fed, and even named—not to bite the hand that fed them.”
Lior closed his eyes and stood firm, waiting for the killing blow to come.
“But I’ve come to learn that people like you don’t fear death,” the Duke said to Lior. “Mordane didn’t, and neither have you. You would be proud to die here, having done the thing you thought was ‘right.’ The only thing men like you have ever feared was disgrace. Humiliation.” The Duke stepped back. “Guards,” he called. The two Ironguard outside the door rushed in, spears at the ready. “Toss these two into the dunes. They are to be stripped of everything I have ever given them: their ranks, their possessions, and even their names. Then send out a new decree to all my Ironguard: by the sun's first light tomorrow these two are to be killed on sight, along with anyone seen giving them aid.”
“Yes, my Duke,” the two Ironguard said in unison. Without hesitation, they marched up to Zeke and Lior to grab them.
“They will leave here with nothing I gave them,” the Duke said, “not even the clothes they wear. Strip them of everything.” He locked eyes with Lior as the Ironguard began to strip them of the only protection they would have against the elements: their cloaks, their leathers, their lining garments, and even their boots. “Scurry away, mice,” Veylan said. “Die in the dunes or flee until your feet bleed; I care not.” The Duke’s ironskin faded away, retreating underneath his tunic once more as he walked back toward his throne. “And burn the corpse,” he said over his shoulder, gesturing at Mordane. “But wait until those two are long gone. I wouldn’t want them finding shelter in the flames.”
And with that, the lives of Lior Drevan and Ezekian Sim ended. In the cruel cold of the desert night, two nameless men were tossed outside the gates of Ironcliff Keep. The younger one wrapped his arms around his exposed body, trying to hold in any warmth he could, as they stumbled into the sandy horizon.
The last thing he remembered his best friend saying before exhaustion lulled them into darkness was, “Don’t look back, brother. Look ahead—ahead with pride. We depart with more honor than Veylan Drex has ever known in his miserable, cowardly keep.”














