So far, I have only read the first book of PJO, but I have a critique to make about the way Camp HalfBlood works and how it treats the unclaimed kids.
Because we’re told to us that they go to Hermes’ cabin because he “defends hospitality” or some shyt like that.
Trans. by Google cause I’m lazy:
“You’re still being determined,” Luke explained patiently. “They don’t know which cabin to assign you to, so for now, this one is yours.” Cabin 11 welcomes all newcomers, all visitors. It’s only natural that we welcome you, because Hermes is the god of travelers.
That’s why you’re here, you, enjoying the hospitality of Cabin 11.
Hermes IS a god of hospitality, but we’re also told that Hermes’ cabin is one of the most populated cabins (and I don’t know if Rick meant to include the unclaimed children in this or not, but very probably not).
The teams were announced. Athena had allied herself with Apollo and Hermes, the two most numerous huts.
And my point is… if without the unclaimed children, the Hermes cabin is already big enough, how full is it WITH the unclaimed children? Percy himself complains about it.
Inside, it was full of girls and boys, which were more than the beds available. On the floor there were sleeping bags, spread around everywhere. It looked like a gym where the Red Cross had decided to use as an evacuation center.
“Why do I have to install in Cabin 11? Why do we have to be so crowded? There are many beds.”
Yes, the book itself says it bad, but there was a very easy solution for this in CHB, that would’ve probably saved many kids from being nearly asphixiated and it’s using ZEUS’ cabin.
Hermes IS a god of hospitality, but the main god of that is Zeus. And I feel like this is unecessary villanization of Zeus. He is also the god of oaths, and he would NOT have slept with anyone, so the kids would’ve probably been able to sleep in beds.
Perhaps they could’ve also used the Artemis cabin for little girls. Artemis PROTECTS little girls, and since her cabin is empty, what problem would there’ve been? Artemis is a virgin goddess, but not anti-motherhood. Hera’s cabin too, but for a bit older ones.
All these cabins are empty. They could’ve been used in order to give the unclaimed children space and comfort, and in a way that didn’t contradict mythology and makes sense.
But no, Rick just wanted to villanize Hera and Zeus and make Artemis some “feminist queen, no motherhood shyt”, completly ignoring that those gods have very important domains tied to children and/or hospitality.
If Riordancerse books are books to learn about mythology, then Rick should’ve shown the actual domains and personalities of the gods. But no, he just satisfied himself by making them have these cartoonish, stereotypical attitudes.