A Birdbrainâs Unasked-For Opinion On Writing Winged Characters
If you write a character with wings, any character with wings, then please know that I love and appreciate everything you do, because winged characters are amazing and you simply cannot go wrong with them. Please donât feel like Iâm dissing anyone for âdoing it wrong,â because at the end of the day this is all fiction and weâre all just here to have fun!
That being said, I am a massive bird nerd, and thereâs a lot of truly fascinating aspects of being a bird/bird-adjacent that I would love to see explored more thoroughly in fiction! Â Iâve done some extra research to make sure Iâve got my facts straight, and now Iâve written it all up into a handy little guide for some things you can slip into your stories to add that delicious level of realism that can be tricky to achieve when weâre talking about something as fantastic as people with wings.
DISCLAIMER that I am not an expert! The only birds Iâve ever owned are chickens and ducks several years ago. Iâve done a fair amount of research and fact-checking, but please do not take everything I say at face value in regard to real birds. This post was written with purely fictional applications in mind. If you have a problem with your bird IRL, talk to a professional.
PREENING
While there is some removal of loose feathers and picking out debris, itâs not nearly as large a part of preening as most stories would have you believe. Preening involves fluffing and shaking feathers, which helps feathers lay comfortably and âzip upâ the barbules. Each feather is oiled, which helps keep them strong and flexible, as well as adding some important waterproofing to the plumage. And, feathers are manually arranged to lay in the best position for flight. Minor adjustments are usually made throughout the day when a feather becomes displaced, so preening never really ends.
Preening can also be done to form social bonds with other birds, in which case itâs called allopreening. Allopreening usually focuses on the head and neck, but since most winged characters donât usually have feathers other than their wings, some artistic liberty may be necessary in this case.
Real birds have their preen oil gland located at the base of their tail, but this may not be a convenient location for humanoid characters. Consider having glands in the wrists or neck instead. If you enjoy having scent/pheromone elements in play with your hybrid characters, then perhaps the oil gland also doubles as a scent gland! (This opens the door for some really fun implications with allopreening.)
If you arenât too keen on the oil, then youâll want to go with powder down. Powder down can be scattered across the body or grow in specific areas. Powder down are specialized down feathers that disintegrate into a fine powder, which is brushed through the feathers and does the same thing as preen oil.
Artificial/substitute preen oil is something that I have seen in a scant handful of stories. I would advise staying away from it, simply because itâs hard to believe a creature with feathers is unable to properly care for them without manmade products. I donât know about anyone else, but it immediately breaks that suspension of disbelief for me. That being said, itâs still a very fun concept to keep in mind, especially if a character becomes somehow unable to produce their own oil.
TL;DR: Preening is a Process that needs to be done every day, and if it is not done properly then those wings will not be healthy, warm, or flight-worthy.
MOLTING
Molting is the process of losing old feathers and growing new ones. Some birds have just one complete molt once a year, some birds have a partial molt and a complete molt, and a handful of birds have two complete molts a year. Fun fact, larger birds have molts that take longer because- surprise surprise! Larger feathers take longer to grow. You can probably guess what this means for your character with a 30 foot wingspan and primaries longer than their arm!
Molting can also be caused outside of the usual cycle by stress. What exactly stresses out a winged humanoid is probably different from what stresses out, say, a chicken, but some common denominators could be malnutrition, predation, or an unhealthy environment.
Before molting, feathers may look worn down and scraggly due to how old and used they are. During the molt, plumage WILL look a mess! After the molt is finished, plumage will look glossy, clean, and fresh, with especially vibrant colors. Right after a molt is when your characterâs wings are looking their best!
Molting is usually done in such a way that flight is still possible, but some birds do molt enough feathers at once that flight is not an option. Which route you take is up to you, but personally, Iâm pretty partial to the emotional and physical vulnerability caused by becoming completely flightless once or twice a year!
PINFEATHERS/BLOOD FEATHERS
Pinfeathers and blood feathers are actually a part of the molting process, but I felt like they deserved their own section.
When a feather first grows, itâs wrapped up like a burrito in a waxy sheath. This sheath will be removed during preening once the feather is fully or nearly matured. Pinfeathers can be irritating, especially when theyâre in hard-to-reach places. Your character might ask help from their friends in getting the hard-to-reach, itchy pinfeathers!
A blood feather is almost the same thing as a pinfeather. When the feather is still growing, the shaft is filled with blood in order to supply nutrients. If a blood feather is broken, then that can be a real problem as it will start bleeding and it wonât stop very easily. In the real world there are clotting agents available for bird owners to use in case of a broken blood feather. Itâs important to stop the bleeding as quickly as possible with pressure or a clotting agent. Once the bleeding is stopped, the feather will hopefully heal.
Plucking a broken blood feather is a last resort! It can cause tissue damage and is extremely painful, possibly even traumatic. Depending on the situation and setting of your story though, plucking a broken feather may well be the only option available.
(A plucked feather will regrow before the next molt as long as no permanent damage was caused to the follicle when it was removed.)
STRESS BARS
Stress bars are visible bars across the feathers. Theyâre caused by, you guessed it, stress! They can only be formed while the feather is growing, and theyâre a sign of very unhealthy conditions for the bird. Stress bars are a point of weakness along the feather, and are much more likely to break. Theyâre usually paler than the rest of the feather, and often have uneven edges. Furthermore, if you character has stress bars, then itâs likely that all of their feathers are âoffâ in color. Plumage will be less vibrant and glossy due to poor health.
Thereâs a lot of potential use for stress bars in fictional scenarios. Iâve only ever seen them used in one story, which is really a shame! Theyâre visible proof of longterm stress, injury, or illness, almost impossible to hide from someone who knows what their friendâs feathers usually look like. Itâs like asking your friend why theyâve got bags under their eyes, except stress bars are a lot worse.
IMPING
Stress bars can mean broken feathers, which seems like a great segue to talk about imping. Imping is the process of grafting a healthy feather onto whatâs left of a broken feather. There are some informative videos on YouTube if you want to see what it looks like, but the basic process involves cutting the new feather to fit and inserting a thin rod inside the shaft of both feathers to connect them.
Imping is not only a really cool real-life thing that deserves more spotlight, it also offers some amazing potential for stunning mismatched wings. Perhaps your character has crow wings, but theyâve been imped with parrot feathers and now their wings are a stunning mix of rainbow and jet black. A very rich and/or vain character might even break feathers on purpose just to get them imped with something far prettier than their natural plumage.
(To be clear, I do not know if you can mismatch feathers IRL. I imagine that it would be very difficult to find the right size and shape feather from a species that is not the one youâre trying to imp. Luckily, we can do whatever we want in fiction :D )
Anyway, thatâs all Iâve got for now! Incorporating one or more of these details into your work can really help to make it feel like your characterâs wings are a part of them, not just a pretty, occasionally useful ornament attached to their back.
I may write up something on body language with wings and feathers next, so if youâd like to see it, then please let me know!Â
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