This used to be a part of a post, but I decided to make it into a separate one, because it speaks of crusual things for understanding SVSSS, it's plot and it's characters.
As I found out recently, there's a huge misunderstanding going on in the English-speaking segment, probably dew to an English translation of SVSSS (only a speculation, I myself never had this problem, although I read in several other languages as well, so I can compare) concerning the fact whether or not PIDW was originally planned by Airplane as a yaoi with bingqiu as an OTP. (Spoiler: yes, it was). Some readers are mislead by two quotes, that they take as a contradictory, which in truth, they are NOT.
The first one is from a Chapter "The story begins". It is the last chapter of the novel, after this the extras start. And this particular chapter is a culmination: this is where the truth is reveled. Like in a detective story, where we finally find out, who the killer is. This meant to become a real "bomb", that makes a reader go WOOOW!!! And this is THE KEY for understanding the whole story: the plot and the characters, especially Luo Bing-mei (and Luo Bing-ge). And it speaks about the original INTENTIONS of the Airplane, that he betrayed in order to please the crowd and that came true in the universe of the System. (original scrapped outline(c))
The second quote, from the extras, on the other hand speaks of an EXISTING PIDW, (original outline(c)), that he actually wrote, but never finished, because he died and woke up in the Universe of the System. And it gives us a glimpse into the way he planned to finish it.
The first quote, from the final chapter:
Shen Qingqiu looked him up and down. āYou donāt look crushed at all after all this foolish messing around ended up completely changing your own novel.ā
Shang Qinghua said, āYou canāt say it like that ah. Maybe you think itās just all foolish messing around that isnāt worth a damn, but for Bing-ge, your foolish messing around is probably the meaning of this entire world.ā
... holy s***, Great God Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky was able to say something like that?!
Shen Qingqiu was terrified. āF***. You didnāt turn back into the original character, did you?ā
Shang Qinghua said seriously, āDonāt be like that. Iām also a young person with literary ideals. Of course, I have my own reflections and emotions.ā
Shen Qingqiu laughed coldly. āWhat literary ideals? How come all I saw in the original work was shameless fanservice?ā Not to mention his hand speed that could produce ten thousand words a day, and the courage to even occasionally explode with twenty thousand. If he didnāt have such equipment, there was no way ćProud Immortal Demon Wayć would have been able to hold out before it was serialized!
Shang Qinghua spread his hands. āYou think that I always wrote shameless content that lacked any integrity from the very start? Iāve also written belles-lettres4 before, but they were all unpopular, so I had no choice but to go down a path that catered to the masses. It must be said that writing novels is a very lonely undertaking. Rather than writing a stallion male protagonist whoāll be stereotypical in the end, itās more in line with my philosophy for writing to create the current Bing-geāthis kind of weirdo male protagonist whose character is a bit more complicated, has contradictions and conflicts, and has a rough destiny.ā
Shen Qingqiu concluded, āSo, your philosophy for writing is to write about gay guys?ā
Shang Qinghua: āDo you look down upon gay male protagonists? Works of art and artists all like to create gay guys. Belles-lettres favors gays, do you know that?ā
He waved his arms wildly and passionately. āCucumber Bro, if the System hadnāt chosen you, this faithful die-hard reader, perhaps the plot wouldnāt have deviated so thoroughly, thoroughly to the point that it deviated all the way back to my original scrapped outline. Even though the me back in realityāwho couldnāt endure the loneliness and was under financial pressureāchose to finish writing ćProud Immortal Demon Wayć according to other peopleās preferences and what they found cool... now, all thanks to you, essentially everything that I wanted to write has already unfolded in front of my eyes. Cucumber Bro!ā
He patted Shen Qingqiuās shoulders with deep sentiment and solemnity. āYou... are the chosen one; as for my career, I have no more regrets!ā
... why did it sound like the System and this world were both products of Shang Qinghuaās resentment over scrapping that outline and going with what was mainstream?
Shen Qingqiu, who shamefully became this kind of āchosen oneā: āWhoās your faithful die-hard reader?ā
Shang Qinghua waved his hand and one-sidedly declared his victory. āIām not going to talk to you; youāre an anti-fan.ā
Shen Qingqiu was about to say, āIām only an anti, not a fan!ā when he suddenly heard Shang Qinghua starting crooning something like, āEmotions are warm, kindness hard to bear, lips moving together, desires turning the evening to the next morning, never resting from dawn to dusk.ā The crucial point was that melody, which sounded extremely familiar to the point that it made Shen Qingqiuās hands and teeth itch. He pointed at him and said, āShang Qinghua, what are you singing?ā
Shang Qinghua continued to croon. āThe warmth of emotions makes gratitude hard to bear. Lips to lips, locked in a kiss. Let this night linger ātil tomorrowās dawn. Day after day, night after night; never to end. Will tomorrow be another today? When ātil Zheng Yang reaches its zenith? As Zheng Yang ascends, the voice of Autumn stirs. A sheathless Xiu Ya, a spurt of cold nectar. Tragic pleas amidst choked sobs, thus in vain; for he rises again5...ā
Shen Qingqiu was in disbelief. āF*** youāwhy donāt you just try and sing another line?ā
Shang Qinghua said, āGreat Lord Shen, why arenāt you listening to what Iām saying? You must never go around casually f***ing people. Bing-ge will go crazy. Iām telling you, this Resentment of Chunshan is equivalent to Shi Ba Mo6. You two are the legendary national homos, do you understand? I have no problems with you shutting me up, but ultimately itās useless. You canāt possibly make all the countless people in the world shut up...ā (NB, Ch 81)
The second quote, from the extras:
ć Basic completion of Proud Immortal Demon Wayās original outline achieved (slight deviation in romance plotline); objective complete. Retrieving function to return to original world; download complete. Activate Return Home sequence? ć Basic completion of the original outline? That he agreed with. All the holes that needed to be filled had been filled. But this āslight deviation of romance plotā wasnāt quite right. Bing-ge was now fully gay; how could you say that was a āslight deviationā? Ah, fine, fine, in fact, in his original outline, Bing-ge hadnāt even had a romance plotline; he had been doomed to fade away, alone and unaging forever. If you insisted on adding a romance plotline, all right, that was whatever, so putting aside all the Systemās ramblingā¦this meant he could return to his original world?! (Seven Seas, Ch. 26)
Basic completion of the original outline and filling it's plotholes - THIS is what's talked about in this quote! Not the scrapped original outline!
The English translation, which I only read recently, in my opinion is not very clear, in comparison to, for example, Russian translations, and not just the most popular version by ŠŃой Šø Š”ŃŃŠ¾Š¹, for ex: there are more than one, and they all pretty much nailed it. ęę
ēŗæ used in original (that's what, apparently, caused the doubts for some reason, in spite that the quote itself absolutely clearly speaks of ćProud Immortal Demon Wayćās original outline, the one big "error of a novel", that needed to be redressed, and not the scrapped original outline that never saw the daylight) itself refers to a "romantic plotline". So the author himself tells you, that his original Bing-ge had none. But how come? Why is that? Bing-ge, as we know, has got a huge harem, he for sure cannot be the case of dying alone without love!.. Or can he? Apparently, this is exactly his fate - no love. And the Airplane, the way he planned the original scrapped outline, knows better than anyone else - there's, well, none. The Protagonist's harem is nothing to do with romance whatsoever (see the quote below from the forum as an example, what the readers of PIDW themselves think of the relationship between Bing-ge and his harem). It all has to do with protagonists coolness and power and getting everything, including all the women, because he is super powerful and he is the center of that universe. It's about power, it's about lust, it's about influence and control, and showing, who the real boss is. But not love or romance. PIDW is not a romantic novel in a slightest: its a third rate pornography and a ode to toxic masculinity, so distasteful and disgusting, that the resentment of it's author with his own creation was powerful enough to create the whole new universe (The System) just to correct it! And this particular quote speaks of Bing-ge not having ANY SIGNIFICANT RELATIONSHIP, LOVE. ŠŃой Šø Š”ŃŃŠ¾Š¹ for translating ęę
ēŗæ in this particular case use much more explicit and profound "Š·Š°ŃŠ»ŃживаŃŃŠøŠµ ŃŠæŠ¾Š¼ŠøŠ½Š°Š½ŠøŃ ŃŠ¼Š¾ŃŠøŠ¾Š½Š°Š»ŃŠ½Ńе ŠæŃивŃзанноŃŃŠø" ("the emotional connections worth mentioning"), rather than abstract "romantic plotline". Because the only significant person in his life pushed Bing-ge away. (And we know, who that person is, thanks to the System Universe - his shizhun.) Romance has nothing to do with the amount of partners he fucks - they are not of any romantic or emotional significance for Bing-ge. This is how his relationship with the harem is described by the PIDW reader's forum in the novel:
"Airplane really doesnāt know how to write romance plotlines, best if he just doesnāt. I feel like Luo Binghe doesnāt have feelings for any of his wives, he just wants to use them. And I canāt see any of those women with real moving emotion for him. "(NB, Ch. 73)
So - no romance for Bing-ge in PIDW, the Airplane didn't grant him this privilege and happiness. And yes - the ending for the tyrant he's become in PIDW is not happy in a slightest.
So, binqui did not appear out of nowhere, and yes - it has always been there from a beginning, in the core of everything. Implied. This is not only canon: it is the exact essence of it, the base, the foundation, which explaines everything that happens in the novel and even beyond - in PIDW, where the mighty protagonist that has everything, except the only one thing he really needs - the love of his shizun - is doomed to an eternal unhappiness and loneliness.