Commadore, if your gonna a little petty bitch, about your seeing red comic shit show, as someone whos planning to EVENTUALLY criticise tbatf's shitty comic-
Tbatf's shit is better than yours. Their art is shit but at least it's easier on the eyes. Their story is awful and cliche, it wasn't even the first "edgy red leader" story, I've been in the fandom forever has. I was HERE when Tord was still here, when Edd was alive, and there were TONS of red leader edgelord content. I was one of the ones with better genetic "Tord's an asshole".
Do you realize how bad you'd have to be for me to consider tbatf to be a better option? which, the plot is basically that it has no plot. Just a lot of running around in circles, considering the plot it sets up itself to supposedly have or interesting lore (none of which is about main characters all about ocs) before dropping it to go chasing its own tail again?
The fact that some of the official crew likes this shows deeply, as it's clear that tbatfs writing ability is rubbing off on them, the beach episode was basically that issue but it's an animated show. I don't have high hopes and will garunteed Jon Lopez will find a way to sneek in a reference in the up coming confirmed wtfuture 2, which I don't have high hopes for anyways.
Side track: wtfuture 2 won't focus on red leader, and will mostly like focus on wtf Matt did at the end of wtfuture 1 and then generally reversing it, maybe past Edd/Tom and feature Edd/Tom/Matt teaming up. Or a sequel with future edd trying to kill past him again. Maybe they'll address monster tom, maybe. Chances are they won't full on tackle the issue. But don't expect red to get a lot of attention beyond a vague Easter egg. I don't trust them to do anything actually interesting, I don't hold the writing that high in regards.
But honestly, CCP, I much rather read tbatf or any other generic shitty Wattpad fanfiction than your comic. Your comic just feels like like it belongs on watt with other 10 year olds ideas and that's an insult to 10 years and preteens considering Edd started eddsworld when he was 15. To say children can't make decent content would be hypocritical. But it feels like trying to hard, and it comes across as cringe.
I guess that's what happens when you buy too hard on on how the end makes Tord out to be the devil and most evil character when Matt's done worse on mutiple occasions and the fandom (tbatf included) boils him down to incompetent idiot man child, despite the literal threat he's outted himself to be, and why you realllllyy shouldn't insult him. He's forgetful, not stupid. Let's be real.
Any story line that hinges on making Tord hella sympathetic because he's just UwU misunderstood is doomed to fail and turn out horribly, because by the shows he's logic's he's not misunderstood and Matt's somehow not evil and an idiot.
If you really want me to go page by page in-depth, allow me, but the results aren't charming, and do not favor you in the slightlest, my dear. I'm more than willing to give your game a roll of the dice though.
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Just leaving this here cause itâs a lot
Do it, page by page. Do it, I challenge you.
