Hi! I need some Beta help for my story, which is a SPN and Charmed crossover. The Charmed character (mainly Chris Halliwell) comes in at the 4K-5K mark-- so not too far into the story.
Mostly I need checking for SPaG and feedback on the story flow/pacing.
The story is at 13K currently. I understand it's a lot, but if some of the story is looked over, that would be awesome.
Either respond here or message me if you're willing to help. I will send you the GDoc link. Thanks!
Here's the link to the promo post:
💬 0 🔁 5 ❤️ 9 · The Case Of The Dead Man Promo · Posting Date: June 20, 2026 Author: @avalonsilver Artist: @qwertyuiip-art Rating: Teen
Title: "The Case of the Dead Man"
Story Summary:
A few months after losing his brother in the barn, Sam reunites with Castiel. Trouble arises when Sam is abducted and cursed to have an insatiable desire for Castiel's angel blood.
Sam fears attacking Castiel to drink his blood. Cas is desperate to help him no matter the cost.
Rowena's idea for a cure is getting good magic from another world. She gives them an easy target– a dying good witch named Chris Halliwell. Not wanting anyone else to die, Sam stops Cas from stealing Chris’s magic and demands Cas save him.
With Jack's god power at his disposal, Cas heals an otherwise fatal injury. While in Chris's childhood home, Halliwell manor, they have three hours to remove Sam's curse. But death stalks the witch and forces delays in finishing the countercurse spell.
Their time in this other world takes them to the manor's attic where an eerily empty playpen remains after a recent kidnapping down to the basement where an evil shadowy creature resides and lastly, a demon's underground lair where death lingers.
It doesn't help that Sam and Cas also must sort out their feelings for each other following Castiel's love confession to Dean.
Can Sam be freed from the curse before time runs out?
