#dispatch beta reader

The story is already at 58k words and Shroud hasn't even escaped yet, so it's...it's gonna be big, yeah. Also I plan to do a sex scene at the end, so pls no minors. The fic contains a lot of swearing (thanks Flambae) but I don't think there's anything else super concerning about it? Please feel free to ask me for more information if you want to check for specific subjects, though!

At this point I mostly need help with flow (are parts of the story dragging on too long and getting kind of boring?) and characterization (is this a He Would Not Fucking Say That moment or does this sound kind of believable?). I just want to make sure I haven't poured all this time and energy into something that kinda sucks, you know? 🥲