i haven't written a fic in a while, but i've completed one for PHM and i'd love if someone could look over it for internal consistency and phrasing. it's about grace and neurodivergency and how he's dealt with it in various ways through his life - if anyone's interested please let me know because I'd love to get this fic out soon ;w;
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would anyone want to be a beta reader for my Twisted Wonderland fic? i need more moots to yap to fr (though be aware there are some serious violence TWs)
Would one of you want to be my Beta reader? My friend used to check my stuff for continuity errors, plot holes and world building or character fluctuations. But due to severe familial problems I don't want to saddle her with those anymore for now.
And since I really don't want to use the things that shall not be named for it, I thought I'd ask my followers if someone wants to help me?
Perks:
You get to see my writings ahead of time.
I plan a surprise once my SenGen fairytale collection is done. You'd get it ahead of time.
If you're also a writer and also want a beta, we can make this an even trade.
@gogo2712 @putcreativenamehere since you're the ones I write with most...
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Honestly, trying to push a book into advertising before beta readers have properly gone through it can be risky 😭
A lot of authors end up promoting the wrong aspects of the story or missing issues readers notice immediately. Good feedback helps you figure out what people are actually connecting to emotionally before you spend time and money marketing it.That also makes things like ARC campaigns, Booksprout-style promotion, email collection, newsletters, teaser content, and reader retention way more effective because you already know what hooks people.
If anyone needs helpful feedback on their story or wants advice on early book promotion/reader-building stuff, my DMs are open
Looking for a Heated Rivalry beta reader/someone to bounce fic off of as I write. New fandom nerves, etc.
Currently writing:
Shane Hollander's Slutty, Slutty Olympics - Ilya caves and goes to find Shane only to meet him on his way back from a hookup with Figure Skater Joe, it turns them both on to an insane degree and results in a lot of Feelings)
A figure skating AU!
snippet of both below! nsfw for the Olympics one
Olympics
“He came like this,” Rozanov said, breathless. “Down your throat. Maybe I will too.”
Shane sucked firmly, barely holding back a moan, but just seconds later Rozanov pulled Shane off his cock. Shane made a face, leaning in instinctively, missing the feeling of Rozanov in his mouth so much.
“How did he make you come?” Rozanov asked.
It took Shane a minute to process the question. He took a breath. “His hand.”
Rozanov’s eyes sharpened. “He touched you?”
Shane nodded.
“Did he want to fuck you?” Rozanov asked. His tone was even, but dangerous.
“I - I don’t know,” Shane said. His head was spinning, Rozanov was still so close, his hand still holding Shane’s head still, his cock right there.
“He didn’t - I don’t know.”
“Did you want him to fuck you?”
Shane should find the way Rozanov was looking at him infuriating. The challenge in Rozanov’s voice, the implication that if Shane had wanted it from another man, Rozanov would be what… pissed? Jealous? That should be absolutely galling, but instead it made Shane squirm, arousal fizzing through him.
“No,” he admitted.
And Rozanov’s slow smirk shouldn’t turn him on even more, but of course it did. Rozanov’s eyes were gleaming, triumphant. “Do you want me to fuck you?” he asked, eyes boring into Shane’s.
Shane closed his eyes, nodded, leaning his head into Rozanov’s palm. The mix of embarrassment and arousal was so intense, he couldn’t look at him.
Rozanov’s thumb traced over his cheekbone. “What was that?”
Shane didn’t open his eyes, he just took a breath. “Yes.”
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Figure Skating
(their first meeting, they are thirteen and in their first year at Junior internationals)
"Uh. Hi," Shane said. "I'm - I'm Shane. Hollander." He held out his hand, which felt … really stupid.
Rozanov nodded. "Yes." He leaned forward to shake his hand.
Shane waited a second, but nothing else followed. He shouldn’t have interrupted his practice, probably.
"Uh. I'm - I just wanted to say,” he started, and he could see Rozanov’s shoulders draw upward, tensing. “I like the exit. On the combo spin,” Shane blurted.
Rozanov seemed to relax a fraction. “Yes?”
“Yeah,” Shane said, feeling a little relieved. “You’re a great skater.”
There was a long, very awkward pause.
"Sorry," Shane said reflexively.
Rozanov's lips curved into a slight smirk. "No, is true. I am great skater." Rozanov's accent was thick, the words a little stilted, and wow. He was really arrogant.
"What?" Rozanov asked, and now he seemed amused.
"Nothing," Shane said, irritation rising along with disappointment. He'd really thought Rozanov might get it. But he wasn't like Shane at all.
"Good luck, I guess," he said, as he pushed away from the boards.
"You will need the luck, I think," Rozanov replied, as he took off to the other end of the rink.
hi guys I'm in urgent need of a beta reader for my screenplay if anyone would be able to review it by like tomorrow morning please let me know its for a film class and I really want his script to be great before my teacher reviews it. thanks so much and let me know.