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"queer-owned business" means nothing anymore. OpenAI and Palantir are both queer-owned businesses.
if this is how you find out that both sam altman and peter thiel are gay im sorry
I'm going to address a specific set of notes in this post (without indicating who wrote them) because it's a valuable insight into criticisms of this post. Also keep in mind broadly that this post is a JOKE it's supposed to be FUNNY. But also I'm not stupid enough to think jokes aren't a very effective way to communicate and persuade.
"This is like saying female-owned businesses mean nothing because J.K Rowling is a businesswoman". Incredibly, that's exactly what I'm saying. I applaud this critique for correctly identifying how my stance might be applied elsewhere.
But what I would ask is this: do you not remember how JKR (being a successful female author and businesswoman) was lauded as a feminist hero during the peak of the books' success which allowed her to make a large part of modern feminism incredibly TERF-y because of her influence? Because I think we should all do well to remember that.
Interestingly, this critique then goes on to make my entire point for me, albeit maybe slightly more charitably than I. It goes on to say "queer people are not a monolith" and that we should inform ourselves as to who owns these businesses. Yes! Yes! This is my point! Relying purely on identity politics to judge whether businesses (and people) are good or not is bad!
It closes out by saying big corps "don't count" when talking about queer-owned businesses. Honestly? Yeah, I agree. Most of the time, people are talking about small queer-owned businesses. That is because this post is a joke. I have applied the label of "queer-owned business" to some businesses the label is not usually applied to to point out the limits of identity politics in business.
Corporations are not your friends. Small businesses can be your friends, and they are closer to your level than Big Corporations - but that doesn't mean they always will be.
This post keeps getting better so I keep reblogging it
Sayers and the nonsense of the "proper job" (with some defense of Annie)
Okay, so I've already written a bit about this here but was just rereading and had an additional thought or two, so now I kind of want to put it all in one place.
Gaudy Night is a fascinating book, but one of the biggest pieces of garbage in it is its running thesis about someone's "proper job." I don't think 'll get to one of the particularly bizarre parts of it (Miss De Vine's assertions that a) one shouldn't commit to marriage unless one can make one's spouse one's job and yet b) that someone whose spouse is their job is dangerous in their devotion, which presumably is an argument for global celibacy and living in hermetically sealed tubes), as the book itself doesn't necessarily endorse Miss De Vine's views per se (though it doesn't necessarily really debunk them either). But the parts said by Harriet seem to be part of the book's thesis from beginning to end, and that deserves some examination.
The "proper job" concept is summed up in this line from Harriet:
IÂ know what you're thinking--that anybody with proper sensitive feeling would rather scrub floors for a living. But I should scrub floors very badly, and I write detective stories rather well. I don't see why proper feeling should prevent me from doing my proper job.
It's backed up by this exchange that Harriet has with Catherine Bendick nee Freemantle, who was a brilliant scholar who married a farmer:
'But Miss Freemantle--I mean, Mrs.--Mrs. Bendick--it's absurd that you should have to do this kind of thing. I mean, pick your own fruit and get up at all hours to feed poultry and slave like a navvy. Surely to goodness it would have paid far better for you to take on some kind of writing or intellectual job and get someone else to do the manual work.' 'Yes, it would. But at the beginning I didn't see it like that. I came down with a lot of ideas about the dignity of labour. And besides, at that time, my husband wouldn't have liked it much if I'd separated myself from his interests. Of course, we didn't think it would turn out like this.' What damned waste! was all Harriet could say to herself. All that brilliance, all that trained intelligence, harnessed to a load that any uneducated country girl could have drawn, far better. The thing had its compensations, she supposed. She asked the question bluntly. Worth it? said Mrs. Bendick. Oh, yes, it was certainly worth it. The job was worth doing. One was serving the land. And that, she managed to convey, was a service harsh and austere indeed, but a finer thing than spinning words on paper. 'I'm quite prepared to admit that,' said Harriet. 'A plough share is a nobler object than a razor. But if your natural talent is for barbering, wouldn't it be better to be a barber, and a good barber--and use the profits (if you like) to speed the plough? However grand the job may be, is it your job?'
There's more to the passage, and it goes into some of Mrs Bendick's own ambivalent feelings especially as relate to her relationship with her husband, but this is the key bit where Harriet is articulating a corollary of her "proper job" theory above.
The obvious question from Harriet's "proper job" theory as initially stated was "well whose proper job IS it to scrub floors?" Is there someone whose natural talents and inclinations go toward floor-scrubbing? There are far more floor-scrubbers than mystery-writers in the world; is that because of an inherent trait?
The second passage sort of, whether intentionally or not, answers the question by saying that an "uneducated country girl" should be doing all the menial labor. The implication is that that is HER proper job, while Mrs Bendick should be doing some sort of intellectual work because she was trained for it.
There is... a tremendous amount of classism there. I've written about classism in Sayers in other posts on here that I do not currently have the energy to find, but let's just say that it might be one of the most major blind spots she has when writing the Wimsey books. She just does not get it, because what she is arguing, in this idealized feminist book, is that there are some women who are not just fit for but SUITED for drudgery and some women who are above it.
Who is above this drudgery? The first passage would imply that it's an innate thing- Harriet's talented at mystery writing but not at floor scrubbing. (Incidentally, how does she know she's not talented at floor scrubbing? Has she tried?) The second implies that it's a matter of training- that it's a waste of the former Miss Freemantle's education to have her do hard labor, and that unskilled labor is best suited for uneducated people- or even that uneducated people are particularly suited to unskilled labor! When you combine the idea of the innateness of someone's proclivities with the question of who had access to high quality education/training of the kind discussed in this book, you end up with practically froth-mouthed classism.
Setting aside the obvious point that nobody is above honest productive work, the implication seems to be that there is a kind of person who is suited for education, and a kind of person who isn't and is more suited for the grunt work required to keep the educated mystery writer going (not to pick on Harriet personally). I could point to MANY more examples of this from Sayers, from her arguments in (I think) Are Women Human? about an imagined past when people were shoemakers and loved being shoemakers to the bit in Murder Must Advertise about public schools and class clashes at Pym's. But I think that it's especially germane here, in Gaudy Night, because of the arc of the book being so tied into this idea.
Because the real answer to the question "if it's not Harriet's proper job to scrub floors, whose job is it" is "it's Annie's job."
Annie knows that it's her job. She knows that there are floors that need to be scrubbed, and she knows that in the order of her society, she's the one who needs to do it. But she has an intrinsic motivator- she is a mother of children. She is a provider, though she doesn't think that she should need to be. By all rights, her husband should be alive and supporting them, and she should be above service work, a respectable housewife a rung or two above her current place in the social ladder. She will do the job because she is earning the money it takes to keep her children.
Annie also knows that the women of the college think it's her job too, and not their job- not just because they pay her to do it (or the college does), but because they have something that she doesn't- whether it's their education or their class itself. She of course is depicted as having been below her own husband socially when she married him, with it being highly implied that his marrying her was one of, either, the signs of his weakness of character or perhaps the motivator for him thinking so far below the ideals of academia and prioritizing banal things like, Idunno, feeding your family. Someone with such weakness and lack of class clearly didn't have academia as his "proper job."
(To be clear, I do not support academic fraud and do not believe he made the right choice- but let's be real, the way it's discussed in this book by people who not only have no incentive to say anything different [Peter and Harriet, who have alternate sources of income] but people whose income/lifestyle depends on academic integrity because they've already "made it" and who have no financial responsibility to anyone else [the dons] is a trifle rich.)
Somehow, while Gaudy Night both has Annie raving about the loss of her husband and the uselessness of the women in the college, the connection is never made explicitly to the loss of her own raised social status- from daughter of landlady to wife of academic, as previously stated- except for that of having been a "married woman." She's seen as perfectly fit for her social role of bringer of tea and mopper of floors otherwise. It doesn't occur to any of them to think about what else besides just her husband Annie may have lost- because to them, she never deserved it in the first place.
It's hard to escape the conclusion that Annie Wilson is the bottom line of the whole discussion about "proper job" in this book- NOT because she made her husband her proper job and that's scary, per Miss de Vine, but because she refused to make scrubbing the dons' floors her proper job, as she should have. In a choice between husband and scrubbing, to her mind, who WOULDN'T pick husband (and being treated like a human) vs scrubbing (and being treated like an inferior and an automaton)?
The dons, of course, chose the academic life over family life, or at least so far have (Miss Chilperic is engaged so will eventually leave), Period sexism has forced this choice on them in a way it didn't on male academics, something which gets no comment in this book from Sayers, who needs this juxtaposition between choosing work over spouse vs choosing spouse over work in order for Harriet's emotional journey to make sense. It's ironic, though- for all that people use this book when describing the phenomenon of "surplus women" and use the dons as an example, I'd wager it's at least as likely, if not more so, that it's the scouts who are surplus women- so surplus as to have been forgotten about. Is it meant to be assumed that, like the dons, they too have chosen to eschew personal relationships for the glory of their "proper jobs" of serving academics tea?
I've seen even those who identify a lot with Sayers's intended themes in this book say that Annie's final speech is searing- and I think it's because a lot of truth that Sayers may or may not have intended to say really comes through. She's so good at rounding out her characters that sometimes they say things that it's unclear she actually meant, or maybe she just wanted to give them some airtime even as they are then subjugated under other, more important themes for her. To me, Annie's speech is an indictment of how the book has chosen to regard her- there is an acknowledgement that marriage has given her the most status she has ever had, the only thing she has that these other women don't have- the only thing she can hold onto that gives her dignity in a world of women who give her no dignity at all.
There is often a tendency among people who comment on Sayers to treat her like the same kind of feminist the commenter is; but she very much isn't. Her Are Women Human? is very tied in with these ideas about class and roles- it just assumes that men and women are equivalent on ALL levels of the class hierarchy that she envisions as ideal. She envisions a lower class which may or may not enjoy drudge work but does at least understand that it IS their "proper job" and doesn't aspire to more. Annie Wilson is the fly in that ointment. It's not so much that she aspires to more as that she is clear that she does the job that society is deeming to be proper for her on sufferance and transactionally, because there is something/someone else that she cares about more and that gives her more dignity. And, as I discussed in the above linked post, that is why she is the villain.
One of the better essays I've seen on Sayers' notions of classicism & the feminine role.
I hate the âThoreauâs mom did his laundryâ criticism so much, it drives me crazy.
Henry Thoreau did not go to Walden Pond because he thought it would be a fun adventure. He went into the woods because he was deeply depressed and burnt out. He was running from the horror of his brother and best friend recently dying in his arms, and the haunting memory of causing the Fairhaven Bay fire. His friend Ellery Channing literally gave him the ultimatum of either taking some time off to write and think, or else be institutionalized.
I think Thoreauâs mother saw her depressed son choosing to retreat into a small cabin in the woods, and was worried about him. Of course she did his laundry - just as Ralph Waldo Emerson probably brought him firewood and bread. These were not chores of obligation to support a âgreatâ man, but services of love to help their deeply depressed 28yo son and friend.
And if you ask me, thereâs a lesson in that - to âsuck out the marrow of lifeâ and âlive deliberately,â one must also accept help offered from the people in your life who love you. There is no true transcendentalism or individualism without love and friendship behind it.
I tried to let this go past without comment, but it's stayed with me throughout the day. And the more I thought about it, the more it bothered me.
Not for the positive sentiment that serving others can be a positive thing - precisely because no one was ever saying it couldn't be - but for how badly it mangles what it purports to be responding to.
No one ever said that the men who were only able to produce art because of other people labouring for them had had no pain or done nothing good. And no one ever said that those who supported them were always resentful and unwilling.
The point is that when people who weren't men had great tragedies and great powers of creativity, they were not supported to go off into the wilderness and explore their creative impulses and philosophies to their greatest depths.
And then we are compared to those works. And those works often PRESENT philosophies in which great works can be achieved on their own. This post is so... dishonest about what is being argued for.
Some of y'all haven't read A Room of One's Own, and it shows.
Shakespeare had great tragedies in his life, such as the death of his son Hamnet, and those obviously inform his work. But what, Virginia Woolf asks us, of Shakespeare's sister?
What would have become of the middle class woman with Shakespeare's upbringing and talent? She certainly would have been laughed out of the theatre.
We know that. Not just because of the remarks made by men of the time that a woman acting would be like a dog standing on its hind legs. But also because we can see the few, very few examples of women DID manage to write at the time, and how hard it was for them
Margaret Cavendish, Duchess of Newcastle, with all the privileges that brings, was a philosopher and writer. She wrote the first science fiction novel. And she wrote plays. And she was ridiculed for it, and men tried to bury her existence. Despite a very supportive husband, she was widely regarded with derision as the Mad Duchess. While I wouldn't say her plays are remotely as good as Shakespeare, it's not as though she had the advantage of friendship with Kit Marlow. To be a playwright in Shakespeare's time was a collaborative effort, bouncing ideas and lines off your actors and other writers. We can see in the folios how much the plays changed from performance to performance. They weren' static. That was a novel concept just starting to be introduced by the printing press. But who collaborated with Margaret? Who batted frenzied ideas around with the Duchess?
Not Shakespeare's peers. And likely not many of her own class either.
Or try Aemelia Lanyer on for size. First woman poet to be published in the English language and her poems BLAZE with talent and pain and power.
But it was only possible because she had a female patron who supported her work, and they were both cut adrift in an inheritance dispute. You can hear it when you read The Description of Cookeham - the country house in which she and her patron briefly lived and for a while, she was free to write as men were. But it's a poem of loss.
Because they lost Cookeham. Because there is never the same financial security, and thus peace and room to work unburdened, as there is for men.
And no it's not the case that all men have it perfect and easy, but a fuck of a lot more of them have mothers or wives or sisters who will support them as they pour out their pain into the pages than there are fathers or husbands, or brothers who will do the same for a woman or non-binary person.
Woolf notes that you can see it in the cracks of the work women write. A moment in Jane Eyre where Jane thinks longingly of all she might do if she were free like a man that Woolf sees as flawed because it is not the character speaking, but the author, pouring out her pain.
Because women were always forced to write AROUND their duties, often in fear of getting caught. They could never polish freely to the same extent as men. Even Jane Austen had no study to retreat to, but would cover her pages with embroidery to hide them when she was interrupted by visitors.
It's not merely ignorant but insulting to be told that in critiquing the circumstances in which men wrote, partly supported by the labour of women, we are in some sense dismissing THOSE WOMEN. That in acknowledging that labour we are disparaging it.
This is some trad wife bullshit.*
NO.
Noting that the labour of women that supported the great works of men has gone unrecognised is NOT to dismiss that labour. Nor is it invalid to critique a man who wrote ruggedly individualistic works while quietly supported by a woman, just because he had also supported others and suffered grief. That argument DOES NOT scan.
A person - anyone - needs a room of their own and a place of safety in which to write to fully explore their creative ideas.
As I lay in bed too sick to either work or write I feel this more strongly than ever.
Privilege is multifaceted, and it has never denied that those with one privilege may suffer in other ways, nor that they can do good works and support others. The critique of privilege is DOUBLY important when this is so, because those people STILL benefit from the STRUCTURES that support them over and above those who suffer the same tragedies without that support.
When Shakespeare is thrown into depression by the loss of his son he is still held up in all the myriad ways that a comfortably well-off, educated, middle-class white man in Elizabethan England can be. When Aemelia and her patron are set adrift because she and her patron are of the wrong gender, they have no one to turn to. No salvation. And we have far fewer poems by Lanyer than we do by Shakespeare, for all that many speculate she is the dark lady of his sonnets (I know, there are other speculations, but she is one).
With all the wealth and prestige of a Duchess, Cavendish's plays were only performed at home. It's not that she wasn't known in the theatrical world - it's said that when Cavendish went to the theatre to watch a play, everyone else in the audience was there to watch Cavendish, because of her eccentric reputation, but she could never be one of the Lord's Men. She could never see her works performed at the Globe. Never drink Kit Marlow under the bench.
Massive structural machines were (and still are) in play to see that it is far easier for men to have what they need in order to think and create handed to them.
THAT is the critique. THAT is the point.
Not that no one should ever support their loved ones while they write. For the most part, that's the only way for creatives to get started in having a career as opposed to a hobby.
The point is that it is MASSIVELY more common for women to quietly support men without recognition while they go off and write books that ignore the existence of women than it is for women or non-binary people to be supported by their loved ones to go off and do something creative.
It's always worth checking, when you're hot and angry that someone is beating down on your fave, that YOU are in fact beating up a real opponent, and not a straw person.
*I have no reason to believe OP is a trad wife, I just mean that this is the pattern of argument they use to get you on board with their lifestyle while arguing that the left is devaluing the work of caring for others.
as I enjoy linguistic fuckery in my sci-fi, Iâm a big fan of how Diane Duane said, while writing her Romulan books, âyouâre gonna either learn Rihannsu and youâre gonna like it, or youâre just gonna have to hope I have someone translate for you in their inner monologueâ
(grin) Here's the book that got me started on that kind of thing.
(This is the 1977 US paperback. Here's a link to the book's Wikipedia page.)
Hunter showcases CJ's mastery of the art of sliding alien mindsets into prose via their languages. Everything I know about doing this, I learned from her. You want to see someone really get into it? Hunter's the book for you. Seriously, I was restrained by comparison. :) (But then I wound up having a whole series of books to play around with Rihannsuâand a lot of non-OC characters to serveâso that makes sense.)
In this book CJ also does one of her favorite things: she shamelessly dumps two out of three of her poor viewpoint characters into the middle of nearly incomprehensible action and makes them (and us...) figure out what's going on moment by moment. Language is part of this figuring-out process... but all the rest comes via relationships. Here too, she and I have common ground, I think.
Though the book's officially part of her big Alliance arc, it stands very effectively alone. Very much recommended.

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It wrinkles my brain that Jupiterâs moon Europa has oceans that are sixty miles deep, while Earthâs oceans only reach seven miles deep at most. Iâm willing to bet good money that thereâs life in Europaâs oceans. Like five bucks. You hear me, NASA? I bet you five bucks that thereâs life on Europa⌠Now that thereâs money and reputation on the line, I bet they send a mission there real quick.
I have no idea when this was originally posted, but NASA is working on their Europa mission RIGHT NOW to look for alien life! But get this, they theorize that because of the depth, gravity, and composition of the oceans, any organisms that lived there would be waaay bigger than aquatic life on Earth. So far everythingâs going well with regards to their Europa mission so they should have a spacecraft on its way to look for giant sea monsters in space in only a few years. (The planned date is in the early 2020s.)
Looks like my negotiations worked. Youâre welcome, humanity.
Iâve never been gripped with such cold terror and pure delight in my LIFE
explaining to an 18th century sailor that weâre looking for sea monsters in space.Â
The launch date for the Europa Clipper is October 2024.
Please let there be sea monsters in space Please let there be sea monsters in space Please let there be sea monsters in space Please let there be sea monsters in space Please let there be sea monsters in space Please let there be sea monsters in spaceÂ
Pullquote: "But get this, they theorize that because of the depth, gravity, and composition of the oceans, any organisms that lived there would be waaay bigger than aquatic life on Earth."
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Apparently the Sherlock Holmes adaptation with Jeremy Brett is fully available on YouTube, but NOT IM MY COUNTRY
Are you perhaps able to get at this playlist? Might be worth a shotâ
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I reread the IA's contemporaneous post justifying their "National Emergency Library", and one of the things that struck me is just how selfish it was.
(It was also full of falsehoods, ranging from exaggeration to outright lies, but that's another matter.)
While 2020 feels like it was several decades in the past, it was actually only a few years ago. And I remember March of 2020! I was there! And oh my god, is this post right in line with every other selfish, demanding asshole determined to make a global pandemic all about themselves!
First of all, there is the language of the post - it is a "tremendous and historic outage" that books are unavailable to patrons because libraries are closed for the pandemic. "Right now, today, there are 650 million books that tax-paying citizens have paid to access that are sitting on shelves in closed libraries, inaccessible to them."
Missing from this outrage is a recognition that, like. Librarians are people. They get sick, and die.
They did get sick, and died.
Libraries were closed not only to protect patrons and the public, but librarians too. Libraries were closed to protect people, human beings. Because generally speaking, even the most enthusiastic supporters of access to books and knowledge, prioritize lives over books.
The AI's post, however, reeks of an entitlement to things that *my* tax dollars paid for. Libraries and library collections aren't a public good. They're something *I* should be able to access anytime I want, damn the context or the consequences.
(Was it also a historic outrage when I had to wait several months to check out Nona the Ninth, because so many other people were checking it out?)
Second, as I said, I remember early 2020. And in spring and summer of 2020, there was more free content on the internet than before or since. So many people and so many institutions were bending over backwards to provide people with books and tv shows and music and podcasts and virtual tours and collections and just about anything that someone could figure out how to digitize. So many people were giving away books for free, or writing/recording new content to give away for free. I can't even remember how many times I heard or read someone telling their readers or listeners just to pay what they could, if they could. So many people and institutions were giving away so much, do so much, to provide access to knowledge and books and entertainment and information.
And in that moment, the IA decided to steal from people. When so many people, so many authors, were acting so selflessly, they decided that it wasn't good enough. And instead of giving away themselves, they decided to steal from authors and pat themselves on the back for "meet[ing] this unprecedented need," when they didn't even actually do anything themselves. Or maybe more accurately, the only thing they did was something irrelevant to the actual needs of the community, something they wanted to do anyway, something to try to use a pandemic as an excuse to advance their agenda.
Because third, there is zero concern for the population of patrons actually most impacted by the closure. The IA cares, to a fault, only about information being digitized.* But many people who use physical libraries, many of the people most impacted by their closure, are people who do not have access to the AI's so-called "open library." And people who could access digital books generally continued to have access to their library's e-book services, and to tons of other free content. The patrons who were actually in the most need are ignored as irrelevant.
*And I want to be clear - they care that information is digitized, not about digital access. "Access" means more than information being digitized and theoretically being able to be read.
It's so clear that IA didn't really care about the patrons of physical libraries. Instead, they saw a real problem, and instead of working toward any solutions, decided to use it as a prop to push their own agenda. (Again, while people were dying.)
It's just all so deeply selfish.
Good & I think accurate take on the situation--right up there with the AI companies' scraping of anything & everything then justifying it vy saying we couldn't build our product if we didn't steal everyone else's work. (Thx for the write-up.)
90% of the time when i see reviews and posts saying "this book needed editing" i don't think the reader have any idea what editing actually entails. usually this is actually code for one of several "problems" with the book:
it's too long, or it's slower paced than this reader's preference. they believe "editing" would mean making it shorter
it has a heavily descriptive style, which the reader doesn't like. they believe "editing" means paring every sentence down to hemingway-style prose with no adverbs
it doesn't follow the very rigid "save the cat" style 3-act story structure, disrupting the reader's sense of narrative tension. an editor, they believe, would've made sure it did
there were a few typos or formatting errors, and they believe it's the editor's job to catch these (it's not, it's typically the proofreader and the typesetter who have responsibility for that kind of thing)
and finally, most often:
the author had different narrative priorities than the reader, who thinks an editor would have made the author change their priorities.
the thing is, there are actually issues with editors in trad publishing being overworked to the point where things aren't getting the thorough, thoughtful editing that they need to be the best version of themselves. there are plenty of badly-structured, poorly-researched, and clumsily written books out there. moreover copyediting is typically freelance and perhaps because of that, this is the area where i see the largest number of issues: continuity issues, grammar issues, factual errors etc that someone should've spotted and didn't.
but this is not typically what people's "this needed an editor" reviews are focusing on. most often it just means they didn't like the book and they've decided editing is an all-powerful force that would have transformed it into a book they liked. but that's not how it works. and disproportionately what this comment means is that the book doesn't match what current fashions have decided is The Correct Style to write in
"this book needed an editor" if it's traditionally published, it had one. like. by definition. it was an editor who bought the book. that doesn't mean the editor did a great job but they definitely existed. there were probably at least two (acquiring editor who does the dev edits; copyeditor who does copyedits), and the proofreader, and a bunch of other people besides.
also i think people think editors are the ones who like. implement the changes. but they don't. they give comments and recommendations and ask questions and the author is the one to act on them. the editor will not rewrite the book. they will not fix the problems themselves, they will highlight the problem and the author will figure out a fix for it, or they will decide they don't agree that it's a problem and leave it as it. and a lot of the sentence-level style stuff is entirely on the author so if they don't have an ear for the rhythm then nobody's going to fix that for them. editors do a lot less than people seem to imagine they do, tbh
anyway
for referenceâ
structural/developmental edits: is this chapter in the right place and does the plot make sense and is the characterisation consistent and effective
line edits: is this sentence in the right place and is it as stylish as it could be
copy edits: is this sentence grammatically correct and consistent/factually correct within the story/its world and do the spellings follow the publisher's stylesheet
proofreading: are there any typos in this sentence and was the formatting preserved correctly when it was typeset
sometimes I bitch about the bad editing in a novel and what i usually mean is the copyediting was shitty and slapdash (i.e. there are a bunch of continuity errors, the grammar is poor, etc). sometimes i will bitch that a book is badly structured, or too long, but i know it's at least as likely that was the author refusing to listen to the editor as that the editor didn't suggest changing things. sometimes i feel bad for the author because it's clear they NEEDED some help that they didn't get and/or were rushed to meet a publishing schedule that prevented them doing what i know they can do based on their other books. (and god. publishing schedules and deadlines are a whole other issue.) the point is, you gotta be precise in your bitching. what's ACTUALLY wrong here?
incorrect use of the term "parchment" would largely fall under copyediting, unless the story revolves around hasty notes scrawled on entire sheets of parchment, in which case you'd probably want to deal with it earlier â line edits, perhaps, so you could rejig that plotline to use more realistic writing surfaces
if not caught before then, the copyeditor should def catch it, though

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And a reminder that higher education cannot be considered truly democratised if students can still be doomed to poverty with multiple or advanced arts and Humanities degrees...
hey there LGBTQ kids who are also Christian/Jewish! If you feel like youâre disobeying God, questioning your faith, or feel wrong and dirty for loving who you love, thereâs this fantastic site I found today called hoperemains that accurately and thoroughly combs through scripture and its (many) mistranslations, validates your orientation, and basically letâs you know that youâre not pissing off God. Itâs insanely thorough and after reading through every page on the entire site itâs super helpful. Go check it out!
No no no! Jewish LGBTQ kinderlach! Go to Keshet!Â
hoperemains is completely from a Christian perspective, and not pluralistic or interfaith at all.
If you reblogged the first post from me please reblog this amendment so the Jewish peeps can access this resource too!Â
Trans Jewish kids, you can go to TransTorah as well!
Muslim LGBTQ kids, you can go to iamnotharaam! Itâs run by a mod squad of different genders and orientations, and they take submissions from everybody!
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"my phone doesn't have a headphone jack, so I have no choice but to listen to tiktoks at full volume in public spaces" (':
there even exist split ones that let you charge and listen at the same time like in right top picture (':
they're like $3-10 (':
You gotta read and watch some old books and films that arenât 100% modern politically correct. Iâm not saying you should agree with everything in them but you need to learn where genres came from to understand what those genres are doing today and where media deconstructing old tropes is coming from.
Also, more often than you might think, theyâre not actually promoting bigotry so much as âdidnât consider all the implications of somethingâ or just used words that were polite then but considered offensive now.
Kill the censor in your head.
In particularâas part of learning about the craft of writing involves learning about the different ways people think (and thought)âit becomes vital to read and view things made outside your own period. Thus is because every time period has its own blind spots. To read or watch only one periodâs works is to confine yourself inside a bubble where you will be forever unconscious of where your own timeâs blindnesses lie, and will be condemning yourself to keep condoning/committing them.
Look outside. Learn other timesâ habits, other timesâ errors of thought (and style). Itâs a good way to keep from accidentally reinventing and committing them yourself. (Because some ideas and behaviors are, under the surface, depressingly cyclic. They just change their clothes.)
And something else to think about: A time will come when the writers / artmakers of the not-too-distant future will look back at our âmodernâ day and shake their heads and say, âwow, look at the way they were, could they even see/hear themselves? WTF.â Donât assume that just because youâre working in a time when youâre trying to get things more right than in the theoretically less-moral past, that your time has it right either. Human beings, and the art they make, are by definition works in process. Keep your eyes open for the ways in which your work may need not only to eschew and surpass the errors of the past, but avoid and correct those of the popular present.

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You gotta read and watch some old books and films that arenât 100% modern politically correct. Iâm not saying you should agree with everything in them but you need to learn where genres came from to understand what those genres are doing today and where media deconstructing old tropes is coming from.
Also, more often than you might think, theyâre not actually promoting bigotry so much as âdidnât consider all the implications of somethingâ or just used words that were polite then but considered offensive now.
Kill the censor in your head.
In particularâas part of learning about the craft of writing involves learning about the different ways people think (and thought)âit becomes vital to read and view things made outside your own period. Thus is because every time period has its own blind spots. To read or watch only one periodâs works is to confine yourself inside a bubble where you will be forever unconscious of where your own timeâs blindnesses lie, and will be condemning yourself to keep condoning/committing them.
Look outside. Learn other timesâ habits, other timesâ errors of thought (and style). Itâs a good way to keep from accidentally reinventing and committing them yourself. (Because some ideas and behaviors are, under the surface, depressingly cyclic. They just change their clothes.)
And something else to think about: A time will come when the writers / artmakers of the not-too-distant future will look back at our âmodernâ day and shake their heads and say, âwow, look at the way they were, could they even see/hear themselves? WTF.â Donât assume that just because youâre working in a time when youâre trying to get things more right than in the theoretically less-moral past, that your time has it right either. Human beings, and the art they make, are by definition works in process. Keep your eyes open for the ways in which your work may need not only to eschew and surpass the errors of the past, but avoid and correct those of the popular present.
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