There Was Someone Named

A Real Yakuza cares for their Pokémon

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REIGN'S RANDOM WRITING TIPS:

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─ .✦ Avoid writing paragraphs that are too long. Most people read on the app, and because of the narrower boundaries, paragraphs are elongated. Try capping paragraphs to 4 or 5 sentences, or 7 lines. It's easier on the eyes and doesn't subconsciously make reading your works feel like a chore.

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─ .✦ Here are alternatives to 'X put it in' for variation, building character, and to prevent being instructional or unfeeling: 'rammed it in' / 'slid inside' / 'worked it in inch by inch' / 'entered in one smooth thrust'

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─ .✦ This website has an organised catalogue of alternatives to 'say'/'said', differentiating by emotion (anger, love, fear etc.) and by intentions (answering, persuasion, debate etc.) with definitions and examples of use

Other things? Job, Food, Car, Home, Health, Money. Plus a request form.