Writer, artist, crafter. Not spoiler free. USA, Millenial Stories/head canons can be found under #my writing Thoughts, musings, and responses are under #hounds speaks
This is just a quick list of the finished fics Iāve posted here and on AO3. Check under the #hounds speaks and #my writing tags for essays, criticisms, meta analysis, and general thoughts. Analyses and criticisms for movies and shows are under the cut.
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The Mandalorian
⢠Geroya: Worldbuilding with the Mandalorian and the children of the Nevarro covert, set pre-show and leading into Season 1.
⢠Fate Sometimes Steps In: Fennec Shandās perspective in the void between life and death.
⢠Gaaātayl: Set pre-show, Paz Vizsla leads the search for three children in danger on Nevarro.
⢠Stranded In the Desert: A missing/added scene to the beginning of āThe Passengerā with Mando and the kid.
⢠Nightfall: An alternate take on the childās escape with Kelleran Beq during Order 66.
⢠The Exodus: The third act of āThe Sinā from the covertās perspective, retconning the later idea that only Paz Vizsla and the Armorer escaped Nevarro.
⢠The Oldest Profession: Pre-show character study of Mando on a hunt, needing to find a room for the night.
⢠Temporal Chalice AU: Potential time travel/history rewritten smorgasbord.
⢠The Concept of Names: Character study. Mandoās relationships with others as shown by what he calls them.
⢠Mando takes a job with a stranger
⢠Toro Calican Lives AU: Toro Calican makes a different choice and sets his life on a different path.
⢠Flashpoint AU: What if the Mandalorian never gave the child to the Client?
The Clone Wars
Aayāhan
Original clone trooper story: Captain Manukura
Chapter 1: Remains to Be Seen
Chapter 2: TBA
Rogue One
Soldier, Princess, Farm Boy, Spy
Comparing and contrasting four heroes of the Rebellion in an AU where the Rogue One squad survives Scarif.
Chapter 1: Disparity
Chapter 2: TBA
⢠Sins of the Father (TBA)
The Bad Batch
⢠Untitled: Riyo Chuchi and Echo one-shot set in the years between TBB and ANH.
⢠My Brotherās Keeper: Clone Force 99 stumbles onto a nexus of the Force and wakes up to find theyāve swapped bodies with one another.
⢠Deserters: What if Mayday survived the outpost?
Original Trilogy
⢠Bar Talk: Lando and Luke talk shop a short time after Return of the Jedi.
Prequel Trilogy
⢠Amidala the Resilient: An AU of Amidala confronting Anakin at the end of Revenge of the Sith.
⢠Spooky/angsty Padme Lives AU
⢠Redrafting The Phantom Menace
Sequel Trilogy
⢠An alternate universe with the same characters in a completely different story (action figure blog, adventure movie pitch)
⢠The Last Jedi AU: Paige lives, Poe abides by the letter of the law, Rose and Finn pull a jailbreak, and somebody finds a mysterious crystal
Crossovers, Fusions, and Retellings
The Princess Bride
The Sabersmithās Son
The Colossus of Kashyyyk
The Man In Black
⢠A Prospect/Mandalorian crossover scene
Analyses, Criticisms, and Elevator Pitches
The Mandalorian
⢠Theory about Mandoās parents
⢠Mando lets Karga live, āThe Sinā
⢠Peli Mottoās intuition
⢠Character analysis: Toro Calican
⢠Theory about Boba Fettās original connection to Fennec Shand
⢠World-building: The covert on Nevarro
⢠Script analysis: Gor Koresh, and Mandoās justified violence
⢠Loose story threads: Minor changes to āThe Passengerā
⢠Further details on potential themes āThe Passengerā episode could have had (In a reblog for Stranded In the Desert)
⢠Character analysis of Mando: Protective vs Worrisome
⢠Strengthening characters: Cara Dune and Carson Teva, criticism of āThe Siegeā
⢠Analyzing Mandoās motivations: Criticism of āThe Heiressā
Reblog with Character Analysis on Bo-Katan
⢠Analyzing Mandoās fighting style and motivations, Mandoās lack of agency as a character and being sidelined as a protagonist ā Criticism of āThe Heiressā and āThe Rescueā
⢠Inconsistencies and weak world-building regarding where Mandalorians should live, Season 3
⢠Criticism of Bo-Katan being praised/focused on instead of Mando, Season 3
⢠Criticism of the writersā usage of Bo-Katanās character, end of Season 3
⢠Criticism of Mando settling down, end of Season 3
⢠Comparing and contrasting Din Djarin to Aragorn and Ćomer of LotR
⢠Proposal for a different Season 2 and show outline to fix pacing, character development, and plot
⢠Directorās commentary for the writing process for Nightfall
⢠Character analysis concerning the topic of Mandoās āside questsā
⢠Character analysis: Mando and Ranzar Malkās crew
⢠Character analysis: Mandoās choices regarding his relationships with others
⢠Revising Carson Tevaās character
⢠Criticism of Ahsoka Tanoās Character and āThe Jediā episode of Season 2
⢠Mandalorian culture regarding the Armorer and the forge
⢠Mandāalor the Reluctant (brief analysis of how Din as Mandāalor could have been set up)
⢠Minor change to āThe Tragedyā to make Mandoās choices stronger (plus bonus wings AU thought)
Reblog with further criticism to pacing and Cara Duneās scene
⢠āJedi healerā snake-oil salesman
⢠āStrong Female Characterā: Criticism of the showās writing regarding Bo-Katanās character and longterm TV show story planning
⢠Vizslaās animosity towards Mando
⢠What word describes a parent who loses a child? (AU)
⢠General headcanon list for Din Djarin
⢠Mandāalor the Reluctant: A challenger for the sword
⢠Mandāalor the Reluctant: Getting rid of the sword (at least temporarily)
The Book of Boba Fett
⢠De-aged Boba Fett scenario
⢠The Marketability of Star Wars Merchandise: Production design and its ties to storytelling
⢠Kill Your Darlings: āThe Gathering Stormā
⢠Groguās regard of Luke
⢠āFountain of Agingā scenario spitballing a de-aged AU post-TBoBF.
⢠Criticism of Boba Fett parading Fennec Shand around out in public
⢠Criticism of TBoBFās writing: Lack of character objectives and focus, too many side characters, and āsurpriseā antagonists with no prior buildup or introduction
⢠Criticism of Boba and Dinās fight scene: Bad character choices
⢠Mando and Boba Fett body swap idea
⢠What If⦠Jaina Solo and Boba Fett met sooner? (Legends mashup)
Original Trilogy
⢠Spitballing a Bail Organa lives AU
⢠Making Princess Leiaās character arc stronger
Prequel Trilogy
⢠Character Revision for Anakin Skywalker
⢠Further criticism and character revision for Anakin Skywalker
⢠Duel of Fates fight choreography criticism
⢠AU where Kenobi runs into Count Dooku on Kamino in AotC
Sequel Trilogy
⢠Criticism and revision of Han, Leia, Luke, and Ben Soloās characters and Kylo Renās origin
⢠Criticism of plot twists and characters and how they could have been used better (The Force Awakens/sequel trilogy AU pitch)
Andor
⢠Racial disparity in who gets to live: Criticism of Andor with suggested changes
⢠Short character analysis: Davo Sculdun
⢠Luthenās ruthlessness and Cassianās potential response
The Acolyte
⢠Criticisms and Suggested Changes Part 1
⢠Oshaās vision of Mae
The Bad Batch
⢠S1E : Rampage criticism/idea pitch
⢠Whoād be the funniest person for the rest of the crew to find out has an ex-wife theyāve never mentioned? (Crack)
⢠Rebellion era Echo/Riyo Chuchi pitch
⢠Character analysis: Crosshair
⢠Character analysis: Crosshair pt 2
⢠Wreckerās defense of Echo against Cidās antagonism
Original Character Ideas
⢠Someone from Fennecās past shows up on Tatooine
⢠Peli Mottoās ex-husband
⢠Koziol and Bobo: an informant and his enforcer
Silliness
⢠Kung Fu Panda parallels
Multi
⢠Five headcanons (Inc. Mando, Luke, Leia, Solo)
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Narrative Tension: Character Motivations, Emotional Stakes, and Physical Stakes
Part 1
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Thereās a running joke in the fan community about how the Mandalorian makes friends easily; a lot of supporting characters become Mandoās allies through the enemies-to-friends-to-babysitters pipeline, and while I do think itās kind of funny and it is an accurate assessment of those episodes, I think Mando sometimes makes friends too easily, and in doing so we lose a lot of narrative tension in episodes where the stakes should have felt higher. It leads to certain episodes and conflicts with characters feeling more like āside-questsā instead of genuine obstacles Mando has to overcome in order to get what he wants and in doing so comes out changed by the end of it in some way or another.
Those episodes donāt feel like thereās as much danger or meaningful weight to the secondary goals because whatās at stake only feels like the physical problem he faces, and we the audience know that he and the kid are going to make it out alive by the end of the day, especially when the seasons donāt have that many episodesā there needs to be more emotional weight put on their secondary goals since we know thatās where character development and worldbuilding come in.
When the episodes donāt have that sense of narrative suspense, relationships with other characters end up less complicated and it keeps those side characters from having more depth, conflict, and reason to return later. It feels like the job Mando does is too easy. Stories should generally continue making things difficult for the main character because narratives revolve around conflictā When you take that interpersonal conflict out too early it feels like the main character has already āwon,ā in a sense, and audiences feel less compelled to continue watching if everything already feels like itās going to turn out fine.
While I like most of the individual adventures in the episodic installments of The Mandalorian, there are times the emotional stakes are either resolved too early or arenāt tied to the physical stakes of that individual story. The audience doesnāt have to automatically like every character who will eventually become Mandoās allyā Itās more interesting for them to also have arcs and changes over the course of a story/episode because to them, Mando is the side character in their own lives. We should be seeing how all of these characters operate differently within the given circumstances and the conflict should include, affect, and be affected by all of them in tangible, significant ways. Change shows us the impact the conflict has! It makes those characters crucial to the story, crucial to Mandoās own narrative, and it makes the story less generic, meaning the themes and plot points covered are clearer, more specific, and dramatic.
The episodes I have these criticisms of arenāt necessarily even episodes I dislike, theyāre just ones I think could have been better, and oftentimes it doesnāt take a lot of editing to make them stronger. The ones that immediately come to mind are āSanctuary,ā āThe Marshal,ā āThe Passenger,ā āThe Heiress,ā and āThe Jedi.ā Changing these would have made for a stronger Season 2 finale in my opinion, but thatās a separate post.
(Some of this will be spoilers for how I plan to rewrite several of the episodes in the future.)
Almost every good, effective story is going to have two climaxes, one physical and one emotional. The physical climax is the culmination of the action and biggest sequence of events in the finale of Act III, resolving the main plot. The emotional climax usually involves character relationships and development, as well as the end result of charactersā personal arcs and unspoken objectives. Ideally any main or supporting character connects to that main plot in some way.
In the case of āSanctuary,ā Mando wants to find somewhere safe for himself and the child to lay low. He finds a sparsely populated location in the middle of nowhere and plans to settle into a simple life for a few months, avoiding attention and keeping the child safe. The physical obstacle is that the place offering them food and lodging would be literally perfect, if he can resolve the villageās bandit problem. Once completed, heāll be able to establish his temporary (?) home.
Sorgan represents everything Mando wants: in a perfect world, Din would be able to live somewhere comfortable away from prying eyes, a place not just safe for himself and the child heās taken under his wing but for the people around them. He wants to be happily settled down and connected to a community that cares for everybody involved. He wants a simple life where he is free from the worry, strife, and danger that comes with being a persecuted ethnic minority and refugee of war, living life on the move doing a dangerous job that not only puts the kid at risk by association, but makes them dependent on an unsteady income and unpredictable life devoid of the comfort and routine small children generally need.
(Ideally he wants that life with other Mandalorians, but he knows his people are especially targeted when there are several of them concentrated in one area; the genocide enacted by the Empire wiped out thousands of their people. Most of them already live nomadic lives because of that, and itās easier to hide when there arenāt as many of you drawing attention. Their secrecy is their survival and itās why theyāve been able to continue their way of life.)
Everything Din wants from Sorgan is safety and stability, which means safety and stability for the village, but itās not the storyās job to give the main character what they want, especially in an episodic media format.
In order to raise the stakes to the most dire it could be for all of the characters involved and tie the final fight to Dinās emotional desires, I think the fight had to have been brought into the village proper. Have the bandits break through the defensive line and have the main characters (Mando, Cara, and Omera) see them heading into the village with torches in handā
ā Where we cut to all of the children hiding together in one of the huts, defenseless.
Now Mando has to choose between breaking ranks with Cara, which would allow him to save his own child and possibly others, but would consequently allow the Walker to come through and lay waste to the rest of the village, or he has to stand his ground knowing he can defeat the Walker and save the greatest amount of people, but with his own childās life possibly forfeit in the end.
A village can be rebuilt. Farms can be reseeded. The adults all chose to fight and knew what they were getting into and have a much better chance of withstanding or recovering from the present danger, but the kids have no choice in being there and because they are vulnerable and irreplaceable, they are the best representation of the emotional stakes at the center of the story. There needed to be more focus put on the bandits who break through with the intent of attacking what the adults actually hold the most dear, making the raiders an emotional threat, not just a physical one.
This ending parallels the cold open where Omera rushes through laserfire and explosions to save her own daughter and it would have provided a stronger conclusion for her story. Omera represents the locals and sheās the one we follow through Mandoās story as a liaison for the village. Itās her we see in the opening, itās her showing hospitality to the people she hopes will help save them, and itās her stepping up as a leader when they refuse to uproot and insist on staying to fight.
This episode should have been as much about her as it was about Mando and Cara, but as it stands in canon, we get no final focus or significant closure with Omera concerning the physical plot. Sheās part of the emotional arc we see Mando take over the course of the episode, but without giving her a larger role than any of the other villagers in the final fight with the bandits, the raiders feel like theyāre only a faceless physical threat without personal significance to the people. We donāt get to hear what Omera thinks as somebody whoās implied to be familiar with fighting and who is not originally from that village, or possibly even Sorgan at all.
The raiders and the Walker feel like theyāre only obstacles in the way of Mandoās physical and emotional objectives. It makes Omera feel like sheās the reward the hero gets at the end of the story, which does her character a disservice (especially as a woman of color) when she was given a history and characteristics independent of him before he even arrived to face the conflict. The antagonists are her antagonists. The biggest physical threats are personal to her and her village. Mando and Cara can pick up and leave at any time, but she makes it clear they donāt have that option.
Omera knows this town like the back of her hand. Sheās a capable marksman and itās implied that sheās an experienced fighter. She takes initiative and sheās courageous and capable in the face of danger as she runs towards the bandits instead of away when her daughter is at risk. Sheās smart, consistently observant, keeps a level head, and demonstrates a willing ability to lead, shouting for Caben and Stoke to hold their positions in the final fight.
The final sequence should have shown Cara, Mando, and Omera all seeing the bandits break through an opening in the defenses and head for the undefended homes in the village, and the three of them having to react in real time to the unforeseen complication and rely on each other as a response. What follows happens concurrently, the camera cutting between the two fights as it builds:
Mando and Omera, both parents/guardians of children now at risk, are both going to hone in on the threat to the kids in the village center. Omera makes the run back towards the bandits herself, rifle in hand. Mando watches her, needing to trust that she knows what sheās doing and can not only handle herself, but is capable of saving the kids too. Heās going to resist his natural impulse to go save the kids not just because he knows she can fight, but because sheās going to do it better than he could in the dark on terrain that is familiar and specific to her
Omera has to trust that Mando and Cara are going to have her and the villageās backs by not breaking ranks (even though Mandoās own kid is at risk) and will instead take down the Walker as promised since that is where their abilities lie.
Caraās a soldier and her focus is going to remain on the AT-ST. Sheās going to make the same run for the Walker with the rifle to keep it distracted and has to trust that Mando will stand his ground and have her back when the time comes for him to land the final blow with the thermal charge
Back in the village, we see Omera using her knowledge of the terrain and resources to her advantage, shooting and improvising weapons as she fights multiple raiders at once and succeeds. She narrowly stops the last one closest to the hut with the kids, and we see Omera and the others from Wintaās vantage point as Omera kills the raiders carrying torches and sends them into the ponds. Omera looks up to the window with Winta to affirm that the kids are safe, and then she rejoins the fight.
The focus of the episode is on community and relying on others, and it wouldnāt have added all that much more runtime to the episode if it had given those few short moments to Omeraās character, making the narrative stronger by strengthening her part in the story. Making the raiders more of a threat to the kids keeps the tension high all the way to the end.
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Narrative Tension: Character Motivations, Emotional Stakes, and Physical Stakes
Part 2
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āThe Marshal,ā in addition to having one of the best cold opens of any episode, serves as the cold open for the season and gives us Mando and the child in the dark, seedy recesses of the Outer Rim, meeting with a gangster who allegedly has information Mando needs that will put him in touch with Mandalorians who may be able to connect him to a Jedi (or to other Mandalorians who can connect him to a Jedi).
Heās led through false pretenses into a trap laid by the don who intends to either strip him of his culturally and religiously important armor (which is also his primary means of protection), or kill him and desecrate him in death by taking it anyway. The don boasts of having done it to numerous Mandalorians beforeā people Din considers family, friends, countrymenā going so far as to say heās made it a point to hunt down Mandalorians hidden away from prying eyes in their homes in order to slaughter them. Koresh isnāt even fighting them out in the open or dueling them as an honorable opponent: heās a coward, murderer, thief, and grave robber, one of the most vile enemies of Mandalorians short of being a war criminal.
Mando honestly showed remarkable restraint in not doing much worse to Gor Koresh before leaving him to the dogs.
This sets up the emotional significance of the armor not just for the episode but for the season. The armor isnāt just physical protection but a representation of who the wearer is. The tenet of keeping the helmet on is one Din follows religiously, and hearing someone either admit to stripping Mandalorians of it for their personal gain or seeing someone wearing it in a way that defies a customary understanding of its cultural and/or religious importance is a grave insult to Din on a personal level. Itās not just culturally important as a ritual, but it provides protection and anonymity too, so somebody taking that from a Mandalorian who chooses to wear it every day is also disrespectful and harmful on a practical level. The armor of others being given to its ancestral owners is a show of respect and honor towards the deceased warriors who wore it in life, setting up for the audience again that Mandalorian culture is just as important to Din as caring for the child is.
Sidebar: Canon itself isnāt clear this season on what Din himself considers the long term consequences of removing the helmet to be: Does removing it or having it removed mean he believes he has lost his soulās place in the religious afterlife the Mandalorians believe in (which is what supplemental Star Wars materials says it is), or is it synonymous to rejecting Mandalorians as a culture, meaning he has lost his identity and place within the community and family that raised him? Is it both? Because if the Armorerās decree in TBoBF means he has no place in the tribe anymore because he removed his helmet, she logically shouldnāt have allowed Din to keep either the armor or the Darksaber. If outsiders arenāt permitted to have beskar or armor in the style of the Mandalorians, one of the consequences of removing oneās helmet should have been relinquishing all of it to the Mandalorians.
We never get enough discussion from Din or the Armorer as to what the actual physical consequences are, and I think the writers not putting enough thought into the meaning behind custom and ritual leaves too much ambiguity for them to meaningfully explore Dinās personal journey regarding his faith with any specificity to his character. (This is besides the fact these two characters never have a discussion regarding the circumstances under which Din was forced to remove his helmet but I digress.)
My interpretation (and what I think makes the most sense based on what we see of Din in Season 1 and parts of 2) is that the Mandalorians of Dinās branch of faith believe the armor is seen as equivalent to their body, so to forcibly remove a Mandalorianās helmet/armor is equivalent to killing them (since the offenderās intention is usually to harm or kill them anyway), cutting off their connection to the Mandalorian afterlife and symbolically, forcibly removing them from their culture/people. The helmet provides anonymity so forcibly removing it puts them at risk now that outsiders have a more specific identity they can put a name to, endangering the Mandalorian/s and anybody close to them by association.
Furthermore, if a Mandalorian removes their own helmet outside of the shared privacy of their family or tribe, that is seen as both a purposeful action that puts their tribe at risk and it symbolizes a conscious choice to reject or renounce the Mandoade as a culture and religion, which would be what defines them as an apostate/outsider who should not possess the benefits and customs (armor) belonging to Mandalorians, same as if they were anyone else.
Those three points give more solid parameters for inner and external conflict when it comes to specific cases where a Mandalorian is forced to expose themselves against their will like Din does in āThe Believerā; in an ideal world Din would have never been forced into that situation because in an ideal world, his child wouldnāt have been kidnapped and experimented on by enemies in the first place. That provides a framework for Din to operate in and make conscious decisions about himself and his opinions of others, regarding the helmetās removal.
Itās obvious to us that Din associates faithful Mandalorians (those who respect the culture and individuals he belongs to) with those who keep their helmets on. To that end, we should have seen a much angrier and more volatile Mando responding to the marshal removing his helmet on Tatooine and openly admitting he wasnāt a Mandalorian: Din is fresh off of his run-in with Gor Koresh and has come face to face (so to speak) with somebody who may very well be the exact kind of person Koresh was. The only exception is that the marshal is wearing the armor of a dead Mandalorian himself; weāre given a pretty clear understanding that no Mandalorian would part with their armor unless they were dead and/or unable to stop it from happening. Mandoās logical train of thought should have been āWho did this man kill and desecrate in death, or who/where did he steal the armor from?ā Itās not just the stolen reputation that accompanies the armor, itās the idea that one of his countrymen is dead and somebody else is essentially wearing their skin.
Additionally, the marshal stating that heās not a Mandalorian confirms that Mando has hit a dead end that he wouldnāt have had to waste time tracking down and coming to if there werenāt rumors of a Mandalorian in Mos Pelgo to begin with (despite Boba Fett likely being the part of if not the source of those rumors; he allegedly died years ago though and Koresh specifically said the Mando he knew of was in Mos Pelgo). Cobb Vanth was Mandoās last lead on finding somebody who could help him.
Mando may have a long fuse, but the two things most important to him are his culture and the kid, and at that moment in time the marshal was disrespecting one and (however unaware) obstructing Mandoās means of caring for the other. That isnāt to dismiss the fact the marshal has a legitimate reason to use the armor, but that point should have just made their conflict more complicated moving forward if the armor had stayed as a point of contention between them for longer.
So considering all of that as the context for Mandoās arrival in Mos Pelgo, Vanth and Mando are on good terms far too quickly in canon. The writers had Vanth voluntarily offer to give Mando the armor on completion of a job in their second scene together at the beginning after not delivering on the setup of the earlier conflict between them, which closes off any tension to their partnership moving forward. If theyāre already on good terms, thereās no tension to the stakes surrounding the armor itself. The animosity/uneasy alliance between them should have lasted all the way up until the end of the episode after the Krayt dragon was defeated since that job was what Mandoās retrieval of the armor was contingent on.
In order to legitimize that conflict between them there had to be more of a physical obstacle on a personal level standing between Mando and the marshal. Mandoās perfectly within his cultureās rights to kill Vanth and forcibly reclaim the armor if heās able. The Krayt dragon obstacle isnāt compelling on its own without Vanth being more of an antagonist and letās be real, even if the marshal is as good a gunslinger as Mando, Cobb Vanth wouldnāt hold up against Mando in a close-quarters physical fight. Mando shouldnāt HAVE to do a job to reclaim what rightfully belongs to his people. If Vanth did stand as more of a physical threat, that conflict keeps Mando from the established emotional desire of the episode.
So thereās a few things that need to be established for the plot to largely stay the same: we need to see Vanth as a believable obstacle between Mando and the armor, Vanth still deserves to be his own character with reasonable resistance to Mandoās claim, but whoās still able to be reasoned with, and Mando needs to be the one to offer his aid in exchange.
The way to establish the tension and balance the physical conflict between Mando and Vanth, while still appealing to Mandoās emotional side to stay and help the people of Mos Pelgo, is really easy: have Mando closer to the table when the marshal removes his helmet in the saloon, Mando and Vanth square off and Mando gives him one chance (same way he gives everybody at least one chance) to hand the armor over of his own volition or heāll peel it off the marshalās corpse, and when Cobb refuses, Mando decks him.
Like I said, Mando should have been livid in this encounter, and we as the audience get to see a full saloon brawl instead of just the initiated standoff (keeping in line with the western motifs of the episode), and when the fight spills out into the street itās clear that Din has the upper hand.
Until the ground starts to shake.
Cobb Vanth shoves Mando off, having the advantage of knowing whatās going on while Din is caught off guard, but instead of continuing the fight or focusing on the Mandalorian at all, we see Cobb Vanth run down the street as the Krayt dragon gains on him and the civilian caught in its path. Mando recovers and scrambles up onto the ledge himself, seeing the dragon pass beneath the sand, and itās then he sees the marshal grab the civilian and use the jetpack to get both of them to safety in the nick of time. The dragon eats a bantha, showing Mando the scope of the danger he, the marshal, and the townsfolk only narrowly escaped, and Mando sees that in a moment of initiative, selflessness, duty, and quick thinking, the marshal used the armor to protect and save the people under his care.
Itās a moment that stays Dinās hand and settles some of that previous anger and allows him to see the kind of person the marshal isā somebody who protects his community and who is able to protect his community because he uses Mandalorian armor (one of the core tenets Mandalorians follow themselves)ā and it gives the narrative the right opening for Mando to offer to help the town and the marshal, in exchange for the armor. Din and the marshal come to an uneasy truce, and Mando pursuing the transaction keeps Vanthās character realistic by not having to be the first to concede to a deal right after a fight where Mando was the instigator, and it means he can still function as an antagonist who has the upper hand in that respect until their resolution at the end.
Itās important that Mando be the one to extend his hand and for he and the marshal to have an uneasy alliance that is contingent on each of them working together without the guarantee the other person will fulfill their end of the bargain. They both have reasons to regard each other with suspicion, but they also both have reasons to see how the other can be a potential ally they end up respecting in the end. That interpersonal conflict keeps the stakes up because it can only be resolved after the bigger physical plot with the dragon is taken care of. It keeps suspense and suspicion around the marshal (keeping the audience watching and trying to figure out the sincerity of his next move), and his character is given more dimension and agency as somebody who operates independent of Mandoās story in the greater world surrounding them. Characters whose relationships are forged through conflict and hardship are more dynamic and interesting to watch than ones who can have a civil conversation and end up on already good terms from the beginning.
What compels Mando to stay (and what has him drive the action of the story because heās making interesting, proactive character choices based on the circumstances he finds himself in) is the town being at risk, and him seeing the depth to Vanthās character and now thinking he may be able to be reasoned with. Dinās sense of honor as a person and as a Mandalorian, combined with a bit of that bleeding heart we know lies beneath the surface, will compel him to help the town, with the promise of cultural relics in return that satisfy the emotional goal. He could at any time still bail on what is a near-suicide mission and choose to save himself and the kid and wash his hands of the matter, so we as the audience are watching to see if that self-imposed spiritual goal of retrieving the armor will be important enough for him to gamble his life on (see: Krayt dragon) and gamble on Vanthās unknown character. Though the actual plot of the town and the Krayt dragon doesnāt have anything to do with the plot of finding a teacher for the kid, itās there to develop and showcase Mandoās character for the audience. Giving the episode more nuance better reinforces the main theme of the season and lays the groundwork for the choices we see Din make in āThe Believerā onward.
In order to get some of Mandoās inner thoughts (and some of the above exposition/worldbuilding regarding the armor) out for the benefit of the audience, he could have broached the topic of his and the marshalās agreement in the cantina while addressing the town. Vanth has the townsfolk on his side; the townsfolk need to know what personal stake Mando has in the dragon conflict and need to know that heās not going to leave them high and dry when and if the fight seems impossible, especially since it was his idea to volunteer them for the fight and to do so under a truce with their local enemies.
Mando needs to make it clear exactly how much that armor is important to him and why, and he needs to make it clear that despite his initial hostility towards the marshal, heās a man of his word and will only receive the armor as payment for the job. It goes unspoken that if Mando double-crosses Vanth at any point, killing him or catching him unawares and taking the armor by force, he will have tarnished his reputation and made himself an enemy of Mos Pelgo. Mando only has the speederbike to get away if heās going to have both the kid and the armor with him (because he canāt carry all of it and the kid while piloting the jetpack), and the townsfolk have the power of numbers and familiarity with the location on their side. They could easily hunt him down and exact retribution. Thereād be little he could do to stop them.
This particular episode reinforces the themes of duty, honor, caring for community, and keeping oneās word as part of what makes a Mandalorian who they are, but it also sets up for the audience how people with those characteristics exist outside of Mandalorians in contrast to those who claim to be Mandalorians but clearly show no respect for those qualities (like Bo-Katan in āThe Heiressā). The idea of āWhat makes a Mandalorian?ā will be a running throughline for the season when we see it brought up again in āThe Heiressā with Bo-Katan, āThe Tragedyā with Boba Fett, and itāll be the focus of both āThe Believerā and the finale when it comes to Mando himself.
Narrative Tension: Character Motivations, Emotional Stakes, and Physical Stakes
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āThe Passengerā is an episode that feels a little out of sync with the rest of the season because it only briefly digs into anything significant on a character level, making it feel almost entirely like a āside-questā; something Mando has to do in order to gain information pertaining to the greater plot, but not really affecting him as a person or connecting to the themes of the show. The episode doesnāt feel like it has any significant emotional stakes. The most new information we get about the world, characters, or plot in the episode is that he (we assume) will complete his side of the deal, his ship is significantly damaged and they establish a connection to Carson Teva, who will become a recurring character.
We almost got something when the Frog Lady challenges his honor and the wider opinion people in-universe appear to have of knowing Mandalorians to be people who keep their word, but we never get a resolution between them regarding that setup. Sure, the Frog Lady shoots the spider that was going to get the kid, but the spiders were after all of them, Mando was busy so she would have had to shoot some at some point, and Mando fixing the ship was inevitable too, whether he did it on her timeline or his. The episode missed the chance for the characters to resolve the theme of parents setting an example for their child (Will Mando keep his word to get the Frog Lady and the eggs to safety, or will his son see him as somebody who doesnāt keep his word when whatās at stake is not personal to him? What will Grogu learn as a result of his actions?), and it didnāt have any character acknowledgment of what should have been the second primary theme (āWhat lengths are parents willing to go to for their children, and by extension the continuation of their people, culture, and legacy?ā)
The latter is easier to address because itās been the running theme of the show, and the Frog Ladyās objective hinges on her and the eggs making it out of the misadventure alive. Mando spends the entire episode from the very beginning facing hardship after hardship in an effort to 1. Keep his kid safe and 2. Get closer to completing his goal of giving the kid to a Jedi who will be able to teach the kid how to keep himself safe.
The episode starts off with a close call with the bandits and a grueling trek across the desert. I would have liked to see a moment between Mando and the kid as heās packing up the necessities that reinforces why it was so important for him to get the armor back from the marshal. We know Mando is willing to go through whatever it takes to get the kid safely back to Mos Eisley, but the kid could have seen how difficult the trek was with everything the Mandalorian was carrying, and he could have touched the extra armor as if to suggest Mando leave it behind in order to make the trip easier.
Mando, inferring the question or simply choosing to talk to the kid, tells him something along the lines of āThis armor belonged to somebody who⦠No longer walks with us. If we canāt return it to their family, we bring it to the tribe so others like us can be fitted for protection. It deserves respect, no matter where it came from; they wonāt be forgotten if theyāre carried with us.ā
That moment conveys how Mandalorians care for the armor as if itās one of their own fallen people, that itās important to treat it with respect either by finding the proper owner or by reclaiming the metal to be used as armor to protect others like them down the road. Mandalorian armor can come from a number of sourcesā The style makes it Mandalorian, not the material (paralleling the idea that Mandalorians as people can come from any origin or species, they donāt have to be from the homeworld of Mandalore). The emphasis is put on legacy and culture, peopleās choice to be a Mandalorian being what defines them (not their origin), protecting/providing for those who come after us and passing on whatās culturally important to the next generation so the previous one is honored in remembrance and the future generation can continue with knowledge of the past.
Any of that more technical explanation of the themes can be relayed in āThe Marshalā during the scene suggested in the previous post, exposition given in the form of teaching others to inform them of Mandoās reason for helping. Here, Mandoās just summarizing and reinforcing those ideas for the kid to give enough character acknowledgment of the subject in this episode before it segues into helping the Frog Lady travel to Trask in order to continue her family line.
The eggs set up the stakes of the episode, the promise of contact with Mandalorians on Trask contingent on their survival. The whole reason Mando is doing any of this is in order to find somebody who will be able to help keep his own child safe, therefore I think there needed to be more emphasis on him keeping the kid from eating the eggs.
Have the kid go after the eggs, but have it so Mando is able to intervene or stop him and force him to spit them out. He doesnāt say much beyond telling the kid to knock it off and not do it again. We still establish that the kid is a threat to the eggs, maintaining/upping the risks in the story, and we also have the humorous reality of Mando handling what every caretaker of toddlers has had to deal with: them putting things in their mouths theyāre not supposed to and forcing them spit it out.
After the crash they take stock of their situation like in canon, and Mando gradually gets more and more sullen, their prospects looking grim before he finally tells the Frog Lady that he canāt do anything about the hull until the sun comes back up, prompting the Frog Lady to access Zeroās vocabulator after Mando and the kid bed down for the night. She, in using Zero, emphasizes that their situation cannot wait until morning and tells him āMy husband has risked his life to carve out an existence for us on the only planet that is habitable for our species. We have worked too hard and suffered too much to resign ourselves to the extinction of our family line.ā
Itās a hard hitting line and it forces Mando to get up and move, his child watching him the entire time. Mando has the Frog Lady helping inside with the finer mechanical and electrical work while he works on patching the fuel leak, fixing the engines, and reinforcing the cockpit outside. The kid is outside with him holding a flashlight for him while he works before Din goes up to work on reinforcing the cockpit. We can see the Frog Lady working inside beneath the canopy, and when Din goes back to get his tools and get the kid, the kid is gone.
Seeing the kidās tracks going back into the Crest, Mando realizes what he must be going for and dashes back inside, calling for him. He sees him at the other end of the hold and runs down to stop him before the kid puts an egg in his mouth and tries to run away.
Mando chases after the kid, grabs him, and holds his hand in front of the kidās mouth saying āSpit it out. Spit it out.ā When the kid doesnāt, itās with an aggravated huff that Mando yanks off his glove and sticks his finger in the kidās mouth and fishes around for the egg until it pops back out, but not before the kid bites him. Thereās a lot more force behind the kid's jaws than there appears, and Din grunts at the pain. He catches the egg with the other hand and is luckily able to put it back in the case, but his finger begins to bleed the second he pulls it out.
The kid is distressed and tries to grab his hand, but Mandoās already pulling on his glove and reprimanding him, and in the process of trying to get his point across to the kid he slips and says āLook. These are important to her the same way you are important to me. We need her to help us, and sheās not going to do that if you continue to bother them. Do not touch them again.ā
The boy looks genuinely ashamed and caught off guard by his tone. Mando closes the tank, and his silence makes the kidās ears droop, the audience feeling the guilt alongside him as Mando says āNap time,ā and puts him back in the bunk by himself.
The audience sees at the same time Grogu does the severity of Mandoās concern and the surprise accidental confession of his care for the kid. We know Din hasnāt wanted to admit his depth of care for the kid (because admitting so would mean facing the inevitable heartbreak if and when they are separated), but having it actually spoken in dialogue would have been good to further their relationship, especially given the end goal for this season, and it would have given the episode itself more grounding and emotional significance. Itās important for us to get Mandoās inner thoughts, and those only come out when heās pushed by outside events or characters.
Later during a quiet moment where Mando is working on the ship and the kid is hovering nearby watching him, Mando irritably makes that remark that the kid make himself useful if heās going to be out there; what happens instead is that the kid comes over and puts his hand on Dinās glove and closes his eyes.
Instantly, Mando feels his finger heal. He sighs at the apology, thanks the kid, and either takes him back inside to warm up or gives him his cloak out there, or he has him hold a flashlight and gently explains what heās doing for the kidās benefit. Scene finishes with Mando trailing off into maintenance and mechanic knowledge. Itās a moment that also helps Mando get back into problem-solving mode, the one-sided conversation a way to help him talk out his thoughts and admit to himself that even though the situation looks bleak, he is obligated to do everything in his power to get the ship back up and running (if not for the information he needs, then for the fact all of their lives are on the line)
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Interestingly enough, incorporating Zero how they did could have been a great opportunity to further/parallel another theme in the show that we didnāt get to continue exploring with Mando, which is the idea of him not trusting droids. I bring it up because it can dovetail into what they talk about during the Frog Ladyās conversation when she holds Mando accountable.
Mandoās opinion at the end of Season 1 was changed because Kuiil, with IG-11, shows him that droids are not inherently untrustworthy, but he says in this episode that the droid the Frog Lady is utilizing is a killer, despite the fact Zero is broken down to his component parts and isnāt actually sentient at the time. Though Mando shows in the first episode with Peliās pit droids this season that he is starting to warm up to them, change is not a linear path and itās clear he still holds some animosity towards one that was a problem before.
I point it out because Kuiil tells him in āReckoningā in Season 1 that he recovered IG-11ās parts and rebuilt him, programming and training him to be a nurse droid. Some of Kuiilās exact words are:
ā⦠Reconstruction was quite difficult, but not impossible. It had to learn everything from scratch. This is something that cannot be taught with a twist of a spanner. It requires patience and repetition. I spent day after day, reinforcing its development with patience and affirmation. It developed a personality as its experiences grew. [ā¦] Droids are not good or bad. They are neutral reflections of those who imprint them.ā
All of which can be applied to the idea of raising children.
Children have to be taught how to walk, how to navigate their surroundings, how to develop fine motor skills, how to learn from their mistakes, and how to be compassionate and caring and attentive and connect with those around them (all things we see IG go through in the above sequence Kuiil speaks over). It cannot be forced or programmed into themā Teaching skills and correcting behaviors takes patience, repetition, practice, reinforcement, and encouragement, and itās done through connecting with them as individuals. Children are reflections of their upbringings, and their environment and influences are what will shape and mold them as they grow into independent people who we hope will make the right decisions.
All of those qualities could have been seen in an allegory for the droids. Droids themselves are neutral, and even those that were created for a certain purpose can be reprogrammed to do something that, according to Mando in āReckoning,ā āgoes against its nature.ā The idea of nature vs. nurture blends into a larger theme we see in a lot of Star Wars media that is especially relevant in this show: āAre we defined by our origin, or is it our choices that make us who we are? Is there anybody who isnāt capable of change?ā
The simplest way to include this without having to spell it all out for the audience is by giving the Frog Lady just a little more dialogue. When Mando says itās a killer, she looks at it briefly before looking back at him. āThe droid is in pieces; it does what Iāve programmed it [taught] to do.ā
In summary, āThe Passengerā had a lot of potential, and while I know episodes can only go so long, I still think there were ways to address or at least set up these themes to be explored later.
Give us a brief scene in the beginning of quiet reflection on legacy between Mando and the kid. Give us some of Mandoās own thoughts on the importance of armor and what it means to Mandalorians after theyāve died, and give the desert trek a moment that focuses on the kid being the reason he goes through the lengths he does.
Give the Frog Ladyās eggs the weight and importance they deserve, considering their survival is what the stakes of Dinās objective are hinged upon, and show Din stopping the kid from eating them (still giving us an obstacle and bonding moments between Mando and his kid) but include the dialogue where he verbally admits his inner thoughts
When the Frog Lady accesses Zeroās vocabulator, her objective is to hold Mando accountable to the terms of their deal and to get him to do everything in his power to get them to safety. Her pointed remark that she thought Mandalorians were people known for keeping their word, ābut I guess those are just stories meant for children,ā puts added accountability on him not just as a Mandalorian but as a father of a child watching everything he does. When Mando tells the Frog Lady not to mess with the droid because itās a killer, the conversation briefly diverts to her echoing what Kuiil says in Season 1, which in turn parallels the concept of raising kids
The rest of the episode can take place as it does, but it would have been good to get one more moment between him and the Frog Lady, resolving their interpersonal tensions and coming to an understanding based on gratitude for each otherās help, and maybe it ends with Mando taking his glove off for the kid to play with his hand as they settle in for the long ride ahead (showing how the kid is already able to get under that protective outer shell because Mando is opening up to him too).
The resolution focuses on Din showing again that not only is he an honorable man, but that honorable Mandalorians are people who keep their word. Itāll set him up in contrast to Bo-Katan and her crew in the following episode of āThe Heiressā specifically because she and her crew deceive him (while also mocking the way he personally adheres to what he knows the rules of being a Mandalorian to be). All of that is just there to better thread these story elements together.
Most of these small scenes donāt have to be dialogue heavy. Mando carries a lot of weight in his gaze and movements, and itās easy for us to see what heās thinking when the camera lingers on what he focuses on and considers most important. It would have been a good episode to get more of the parenting, father-and-son bonding aspects of their stories since the following three episodes have them separated for the majority of the physical plots, and after that the focus becomes giving the child away, or the child being forcibly taken from him.
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Companion pieces: Analyzing the Mandalorianās Motivations (The Heiress), Analyzing the Mandalorianās Fighting Style (The Prisoner)
Iāve outlined a lot of my gripes with the driving force behind āThe Heiressā in the link above. In short, Mando should be at his most desperate for information regarding a Jedi once itās clear the Mandalorians heās dealing with have a direct link to a Jedi and heās so close to fulfilling his mission; those are the primary emotional stakes. However, once Bo-Katanās deception becomes clear and her disrespect has crossed the last line, Mando should have broken ties with her and cut his losses, resolving to continue his journey without her help.
To address the first part, I think both Season 2 and the show as a whole neglects to address exactly why the child needs to be given to a Jedi: itās not enough that Grogu may already have his own family and people heās been separated from (feelings Din knows personally and doesnāt want for the child or that family to endure for longer than they already have). The child needs to be given to somebody who has the same powers he does because 1. They will be capable of keeping him safe and teaching him how to control those powers because 2. The child needs to be able to protect himself when he is alone.
Considering the childās species ages so differently from everybody around him, it is more likely than not that he will be alone many, many times in his life. Heās sought after by powerful people who do not have his best interests in mind, and no matter how good of a Mandalorian Din is, he will never be enough on his own. Any self-defense measures Din could feasibly teach are meant for bigger, more physically mature species than the near-toddler aged child heās been caring for.
Which means the emotional stakes of āThe Heiressā should be much higher than the episodes before it because Mando is so close to being able to provide the kid that safety, and heās willing to do whatever it takes to get him there.
However, Mando is more dimensional than just his love for the kid. His devotion to his culture is also important, and the reason we watch the show is because the primary emotional conflict is the internal struggle of wondering which he will prioritize in the end, keeping the tension up regarding his decisions. Having that secondary story hook means there will be times he makes decisions that complicate things for himself or create obstacles of his own doing on the journey towards the end. TV shows have time to tell a story where a character messes up, or is forced to take the lesser of two bad decisions, or has to reckon with the fallout of their character flaws and internal struggles. Conflict is not always character vs character, and giving characters more than one goal opens the story up to those personal moral dilemmas where they have to weigh the cost vs the benefits of each option.
The emotional complication here is that Mandoās culture shock with the Nite Owls puts him at odds with wanting to work with them since heās suspicious of them being Mandalorians at all (see: how he (should have) viewed Vanth as a grave robber parading around in cultural relics that have personal weight, significance, and reputation attributed to them), and Bo-Katanās assertion that he was raised in a cult only complicates things further.
In order to set the episode and characters up for stronger, more complex and layered conflict that will let the characters make decisions in ways that coincide with whatās already been established and foreshadow problems to come, I think thereās a few changes that need to be made.
Canon doesnāt actually have Mando do much once heās on the cargo freighter. He follows behind the Nite Owls and barely gets a shot in before the shootout in the hall and his run with the thermals; thatās bad writing on the writersā part for not writing their main characterās involvement into the scenes. Donāt nerf your main character to make other characters look better by comparison, especially if the circumstances are normally ones your main character would excel in or has faced before. Make the overall scenario more challenging, and/or write all of the characters better.
I think the episode should have had Mando either leading the charge himself in an effort to accomplish their mission as quickly as possible, or had Bo-Katan forcing him to fight in front of her and the Nite Owls, keeping her own people back because they mean more to her and she expects him to prove his merit. Show us the truly lethal Mandalorian hunter weāve seen taking down multiple combatants at a time the way a lone hunter would (like the Stormtrooper safehouse in āThe Sinā and the criminal crew in āThe Prisonerā, the up close and personal fighting style like with Gor Koreshās crew reserved for when there are no other options), contrasted with a militant group of guerilla fighters who act as an ambush unit. Donāt make him inept next to themā Highlight the difference in his skill sets, fighting from afar and conserving his energy for when he has no choice but to fight in close quarters, as opposed to them dropping in and relying on their numbers to split the enemiesā attention and overwhelm them. The Nite Owlsā strategy of hitting hard and fast can work for a time, but stealth will better conserve their energy and the element of surprise when they know theyāre going to end up against multiple targets by the end. An ambush works better when you have more people, and thereās still only three of them.
The contrast here should have shown the difference between a single fighter vs a group. In canon, the writers/directors didnāt create opportunities for Dinās character to do anything which is part of why the story feels like itās moving him around instead of him driving the action (hence my suggestion to put him in the front). Itās not just that he seems inept next to themā He would seem inept next to anybody. Give him fights with troopers in close quarters like the rest of them, but showcase his aim and firepower from a distance.
Show him using his surroundings and intuiting how the freighter operates, blocking off hallways and rerouting Stormtroopers like he did with the crew in āThe Prisoner.ā Have him working around Axe and Koska, telling them to duck or move, or blocking shots directed at them with his armor. Towards the end during the hallway shootout, instead of his ridiculous run through a barrage of laser fire, he instead stops Koska from advancing at the mouth of the hall, narrowly saving her from being shot, and holding all of them back without a word; as they start to protest at his actions, we see him arm a thermal detonator, quickly and expertly whip it down the hallway at head height, and raise his blaster to fire one shot, hitting the grenade midair to explode in the troopersā covey before thereās even a chance for them to realize what happened, killing all of them at once.
Axe murmurs āNice shot,ā and Koska nods curtly in thanks, and the three of them move on with the camera lingering on Bo-Katan, watching him. Itās still Mando who gets them to the cargo hold, but all of their skillsets are better balanced, heās not doing a stupid suicide run down the hall, and heās still portrayed as being the capable character we know him to be, even if his methods are different than the Nite Owlsā. He fulfills his side of the bargain.
After that comes the interpersonal conflict when Bo-Katan gets ahold of the comm and informs the bridge that theyāre taking over the entire ship, which is not the job Mando agreed to. Bo-Katanās deception in the name of Mandalorian cultureā in an episode where sheās already derided the way he follows the Creedā should have been the catalyst for Mando to finally break off his alliance with her for three reasons.
One, she isnāt keeping her word and is taking advantage of his presence after he did a majority of the heavy lifting, holding the information he needs as ransom unless he continues to do what she says. Sheās put him at an exponential risk for selfish gain, either unaware or uncaring that he is the sole caretaker, provider, and protector of a child.
Two, she justifies her deceit by elevating the tenet of Mandalorians banding together above anything else, implying that following her lead (through some sense of misplaced authority over him because of her background) is what would prove heās a real Mandalorian, and she does this all while saying āThis is the Way,ā disrespectfully comparing her actions to how he follows the Creed. Sheās a dishonorable person and the antithesis of what Mando knows honorable Mandalorians to be. His culture and the safety of the child are the two most important things to him, and she has compromised or insulted both of them.
Three, since sheās deceived him, thereās no reason for him to think she was ever telling the truth about having information about a Jedi to begin with.
Thatās the point at which he should have ended things between them, refusing to continue helping her and forfeiting the alleged information, his actions a result of who he is as a Mandalorian: an honorable person who keeps their word (unlike Bo-Katan), and somebody who prioritizes a child ahead of reclaiming weapons for Mandalore. Even if they share a common enemy and taking down the Imperials is objectively a good thing, it canāt come at the cost of his life because his sonās life is reliant on Mando being alive at the end of the day to protect him, and it canāt come as a compromise to what he stands for because that would be rewarding them for their underhanded actions (something his character shouldnāt have just rolled over for).
Add to that that he just got done shaking a bunch of Imperials off his trail not that long ago and wouldnāt want to make himself a target yet again by being known for the loss of this shipment. Though Bo-Katan isnāt just after material gain since her own emotional needs are to defend her pride and send the message that sheās going to take back her home planet and throne, Mando has no reason to care about them after what sheās just done, as opposed to how he cared about the town in āThe Marshalā despite being at odds with Vanth. Mando shouldāve said he was out, he was forfeiting the information he now didnāt have reason to believe she even had or would have given him in the first place, and that he didnāt want to be associated with somebody like her before he literally jumps ship and flies off, leaving them to the consequences of their deception.
Despite the fact he needs information about the Jedi, this changed episode shows that there are still other aspects to his character and that being/representing what he thinks a Mandalorian SHOULD be is still high on his list of priorities. While going along with Bo-Katan after itās revealed that sheās lied to him in canon was supposed to convey that yeah, heās keeping his word as opposed to the Nite Owls and heās willing to do anything for the kid, the way the writers/directors had him do it with a suicide run down the hall with the detonators makes him look foolishly reckless, and what it tells me is that heās willing to sacrifice himself for these deceptive Mandalorians AND allow them to reap the benefit of their actions instead of holding them accountable and leaving them to their consequences. The immediate consequence is that they lose his participation (as well as any future alliance), and they lose the shipment.
Mando doesnāt have to get along with everybody he comes in contact with, and the audience doesnāt have to like every character as a person. The characters are there to serve the story. This changed episode maintains tension, builds and furthers conflict between Mando and other characters heāll need to come back to down the road, and it keeps him from being a pushover who āmakes friendsā with everyone he meets. Give these characters interpersonal conflict outside of plot points (the Darksaber, in the case of BKK later) so problems can develop organically from an established personal history, and let your main character complicate his own story by taking an active role in the direction itās going. Itāll keep it from feeling like the plot is moving him around as needed and itāll make him a more dynamic character to watch because his decisions will have different consequences and affect outcomes down the road. Having him say āYesā to everyone in canon makes the episodes predictable.
(Personally, I think this particular show would have been a lot stronger if the writers had stuck to their guns and made Bo-Katan more of a primary antagonist post-Season 2, especially if they were going to imprison Moff Gideon at the end of this season anyway. Mandoās refusal to follow her in āThe Heiressā results in her blaming him for the lost shipment. Mando will have more to overcome when it comes to convincing her to help him in the finale, and it establishes interpersonal animosity compounded by plot conflict as the divide between the two characters grows after the outcome of the finale (combining the emotional and physical stakes). Bo-Katanās own character would be more interesting and complex if there was more give and take between them, and it gives her more foundation to be the main antagonist for Mando after Gideon is out of the picture (especially if Gideon just spills the beans in the finale about how he evidently got the Darksaber from her in the first place). If you wanted to give her a redemption arc later down the road, that would have a more satisfying pull if sheās already been shown to do some pretty despicable things first.
Bonus change: To bring the episode full circle back to the kid at the end and tie up how Mandoās relationship with him is more important than the one he could have had making an alliance with the Nite Owls, the scene at the beginning of āThe Siegeā where he and Grogu are eating together could have happened somewhere at the beginning of this episode, and then we see a similar scene bookending it where the two of them are on the ship and Mandoās prepared another meal.
Mando plates up some food for himself and the kid again, the two of them sitting in the hold, but this time we see Mando look at the kid for a moment as the kid eats before the camera focuses on Grogu at his level, and we hear Din remove his helmet and set it aside to eat with him, the child able to see Din above the view of the camera. We had that glimpse in the beginning, and giving the kid this moment here shows us how Dinās refusal to eat with the Nite Owls was likely as much a pointed choice as making the connection with the kid is now. It shows again how the kid is getting under Dinās protective outer shell, no matter how much Din tries not to form a close relationship with the kid so their inevitable separation doesnāt hurt as badly as he knows it will.
I know the showrunners were saving the face reveal for the kid for the finale, but I donāt think that was handled well anyway, and in any rewritten finale following these changed episodes, you can still have an emotional moment between Din and Grogu where the audience sees Dinās face. I think treating Grogu the same as the audience does these characters a disservice in the grand scheme of things, and you end up reducing your show down to a gimmick instead of telling a more compelling story.
Theyāre in the lower levels of the palace when it happens.
Fennec and Mando had followed Boba to his workroom, reconvening after a job. Mando set the child he carried down, letting him stretch his legs as they spoke. Everything was fine until Boba removed his helmet and set it aside.
Fettās words cut off and he goes very still. Fennec and Mando stop behind him.
ā⦠Boba?ā
Boba buckles to his knees, clutching his throat without a sound.
Din rushes to the child, frantically waving his hands as Boba chokes behind him, the slow strangulation cutting off his air. Din blocks the childās view, swiftly picking him up. āNo, no, stop, what are you doingā?!ā
The child shakes his head and Din hears a raw, gasping sound behind him as Boba chokes in a lungful of air. Fennec is uncharacteristically shaken, and Boba shoves himself upright, shaking her off and drawing his blaster on the Mandalorian and the child.
When Grogu starts to raise his hand again, a plaintive cry leaving his mouth, Din catches it and turns his back to Boba, shielding the child, desperately trying to figure out why the boy has suddenly turned against Fett.
āBobaāā
āLeave,ā Boba snarls. His aim doesnāt waver. āNow.ā
Stricken with confusion and rattled nerves Din complies immediately, taking the foundling with him. Bobaās pistol follows them to the doorway and remains there as Fennec tries and fails to get his attention.
Boba spits, his voice harsh and unyielding. āGet them out of the palace.ā
Bobaās orders were unnecessary. When Fennec left to find the Mandalorian the guards reported that heād left immediately and in a hurry. Fennec mulled over the bizarre interaction on her own as she traversed the palace corridor, deep in thought.
The Mandalorian later sent his deepest apologies. He returned in person to entreat Boba but Boba wonāt hear of it. A gorget might protect you from a weapon but it does nothing against an unseen hand. Fett remembered Vader.
Fennec had to do some careful recon and planning to get the two of them on neutral ground in person again but she eventually landed Mando back at the palace on a day Fett wasnāt set to go anywhere.
āI have a theory.ā
Both Mandalorians stopped at the sound of a voice from the shadows. Boba scowled, seeing Fennec.
āYouāre supposed to be Mos Eisley.ā
Fennec approaches as if she didnāt hear him. āItās not you he reacted to.ā
Boba snarled and whirled on his lieutenant. āYes he bloody well didāā
Fennec cut him off. āI donāt think itās you,ā she repeated. āThe kid knows you. But he knows you as the armor.ā
Boba didnāt respond.
āYou are your armor, to him,ā she said. āSame way Mando is to him, Iām guessing, if you really do keep the helmet on all the time. The kidās Jedi, right?ā
Din hesitated but slowly nodded.
āHow old is he?ā
āFifty. Give or take.ā
Fennec nodded as if that confirmed something for her. āDid he come from Coruscant?ā
āI have no idea. What does that have to do with anything?ā
āThe clones worked with the Jedi during the Clone Wars. At its end, the clone army was ordered to execute every Jedi on grounds of treason. They killed their own generals, marched on the temple. If the kid was on Coruscant when the Jedi were attackedā¦ā
Both men were silent before Din spoke first, to Boba. āYouāre a clone?ā
Boba didnāt answer. Din turned back to Fennec. āHow do you know any of this?ā
āIām older than both of you,ā she said flatly, then to Boba, āAnd youāre not the first clone Iāve met.ā
Bobaās stony expression remained guarded. His narrowed gaze found the other Mandalorian, suspicious.
āI was a kid,ā he said. āIām not what they were.ā
He went to the stone archway, speaking over his shoulder as he left.
ā⦠Keep him away from me.ā
ā
Some time later, weeks or months after Din left his former homebase on Tatooine for what he assumed would be the last time, he receives a holo from Fett.
āListen to me very carefully, Mando,ā the green Mandalorian says stiffly in the hologram. āYouāre more of an ally than most others Iāve met in my life. Youāre a good man and I wouldnāt have retained my position without your aid in Mos Espa.
āIf you can keep that kid of yours in line, youāre permitted to use the citadel as headquarters like you have been. Send a ping before you arrive. Howeverāā
Fett shifted on the call. He almost appeared to be looking directly at Din.
āYour kid ever does something like that again,ā Fett says gravely, āIāll kill both of you. Itās your choice whether to come here or not. You choose what collateral damage youāre willing to risk.ā
In hyperspace, the Mandalorian sits on the floor of a new ship across from his ward.
Din finished outlining the henge, setting the wax stylus beside his helmet on the crate. He flipped the flimsi page around to show the child across from him on the floor of the ship, making sure he was paying attention.
āThis is Tython,ā Din said. He pointed to the second picture, a smooth rock with iridescent lines being drawn skyward. There was a small, simplified drawing of the child seated upon it. āDo you remember the Seeing Stone?ā
The child might have nodded, but Din took his coo and him tapping the page and looking up at him as confirmation. He shuffled to the next page, an outcropping and scrub brush with three figures congregated on it.
āFennec and Fett were there that day,ā Din says, signing with his hands as well. He didnāt feel the need to tell the child in what ways the account was abridged. He laid the third page down, two drawings splitting it in half; one was as simplified a version of the black droids as he could make to keep from scaring the child. The other was Gideonās ship.
āFennec and Fett helped defeat the stormtroopers Moff Gideon sent to keep us occupiedā Uhā¦ā Din thought, trying to come up with the words and signs to break it down better. āBusy,ā he said, āAnd distracted. Itās why I was far away.ā
The childās ears drooped as Din spoke. He folded his hands into his sleeves, looking back down at the drawing of the droids. Din sighed, laying the next page down.
āFennec and Fett helped me find you,ā he said, placing his finger on each of the figures next to firespray gunship. He might have spent too long trying to get that right, but the boy knew what ship Boba flew. He lingered on the drawing of Fett.
āBoba Fett and Fennec helped me find you,ā Din said again, emphasizing each word with the signs. āThey are good people, and they helped me rescue you. They are friends and are good to us. They know you are important to me. They do not mean either of us any harm. We have spent time with them. Youāve seen this.ā
Din laid down another page, this time of Fett from the waist up. He was holding his helmet.
āBoba Fett is a friend,ā Din repeated. āHe is a good person to us and we can trust him.ā
The child contemplated the last picture sullenly, ever so slightly leaning away. Din waited for the boy to acknowledge him, but it was a long moment before the boy drew his hands from his sleeves, pointing to the portrait of Boba and watching his own hands carefully as he signed back to Din.
Lying.
Din was caught off guard. He had no idea how to respond to that.
The boy pushed the papers away, refolding his hands into his sleeves.
ā⦠Boba is not lying about who he is, and he is not hiding anything we need to know about,ā Din said carefully. āI am sure of it, and I trust him. Do you trust me?ā
The boy looked so immensely sad. He flipped the page over.
Tired, he signed. Bed please.
ā⦠I would like for you to trust Fett,ā Din said, picking the boy up and carrying him to their bunk. āItās good to have people who will have our backs.ā
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When Owen Lars found out what happened at the Jedi Temple the night the Empire came to power, he knew exactly who Darth Vader had to be.
ā⦠I thought you said Anakin was dead," Owen said.
Kenobi looked at him carefully from the side. "He is."
Empire Day meant Chalmunās was especially busy. Kenobi didnāt get the impression Owen had been happy to see him, but heād come to accept that was par for the course when it came to the moisture farmerās regard of him. The only seat that opened up when Kenobi arrived was next to the farmerās though, and Wuher had just topped off Owenās drink. Nobody wasted any kind of hydration on Tatooine.
Owen gestured with his glass to the imagecaster back behind the bar where Darth Vader stood next to the Emperor. āSeems up and at it to me.ā The anti-Imperial newscast was detailing the Empire's rise to power the night the Jedi allegedly betrayed the Republic. āEmperorās thug killed a bunch of Jedi kids in the Temple?ā Owen said. āSure sounds like someone else I know.ā
Kenobiās blood ran cold.
ā⦠Owen, what are you saying?ā
Owen barely spared him a glance, taking another drink. āLetās get one thing clear: Iām grateful you brought Luke here. Heās the best thing thatās ever happened to us. But I donāt want him around anyone who raised somebody willing to kill a bunch of kids, or a bunch of anyone for that matter."
Obi-Wan blanched. "H-How could you possibly think that was him?ā he asked, his voice broken.
The farmer looked at him strangely. "Heās the reason we still have trouble with the Tuskens,ā he said. āDidn't he ever tell you what happened when his mother died?ā
Obi-Wan felt like he was going to throw up. Thatās not an answer to the question he asked. His head reeled, trying to piece together what Owen was saying with things he shouldnāt have known about. āWhat?ā
Owen sighed, pushing his glass away. āYouāre a thick one, Kenobi. I donāt know what the two of you were like during the war, but forgiving that before it even started doesnāt make me think the Jedi were all that good of people. āLeast not you two. Doesnāt surprise me that he ended up alongside the Emperor.ā
He stood, taking up his pack. āAnd living in a cave doesnāt give you an excuse not to be aware of your surroundings out here. Canāt stick your head in the ground when the raiders are in our backyard for a reason.ā
Owen tossed Wuher another credit and shouldered his satchel. āIām headed out,ā he told Obi-Wan. āLukeās birthday is tomorrow.ā
When Owen Lars found out what happened at the Jedi Temple the night the Empire came to power, he knew exactly who Darth Vader had to be.
ā⦠I thought you said Anakin was dead," Owen said.
Kenobi looked at him carefully from the side. "He is."
Empire Day meant Chalmunās was especially busy. Kenobi didnāt get the impression Owen had been happy to see him, but heād come to accept that was par for the course when it came to the moisture farmerās regard of him. The only seat that opened up when Kenobi arrived was next to the farmerās though, and Wuher had just topped off Owenās drink. Nobody wasted any kind of hydration on Tatooine.
Owen gestured with his glass to the imagecaster back behind the bar where Darth Vader stood next to the Emperor. āSeems up and at it to me.ā The anti-Imperial newscast was detailing the Empire's rise to power the night the Jedi allegedly betrayed the Republic. āEmperorās thug killed a bunch of Jedi kids in the Temple?ā Owen said. āSure sounds like someone else I know.ā
Kenobiās blood ran cold.
ā⦠Owen, what are you saying?ā
Owen barely spared him a glance, taking another drink. āLetās get one thing clear: Iām grateful you brought Luke here. Heās the best thing thatās ever happened to us. But I donāt want him around anyone who raised somebody willing to kill a bunch of kids, or a bunch of anyone for that matter."
Obi-Wan blanched. "H-How could you possibly think that was him?ā he asked, his voice broken.
The farmer looked at him strangely. "Heās the reason we still have trouble with the Tuskens,ā he said. āDidn't he ever tell you what happened when his mother died?ā
Obi-Wan felt like he was going to throw up. Thatās not an answer to the question he asked. His head reeled, trying to piece together what Owen was saying with things he shouldnāt have known about. āWhat?ā
Owen sighed, pushing his glass away. āYouāre a thick one, Kenobi. I donāt know what the two of you were like during the war, but forgiving that before it even started doesnāt make me think the Jedi were all that good of people. āLeast not you two. Doesnāt surprise me that he ended up alongside the Emperor.ā
He stood, taking up his pack. āAnd living in a cave doesnāt give you an excuse not to be aware of your surroundings out here. Canāt stick your head in the ground when the raiders are in our backyard for a reason.ā
Owen tossed Wuher another credit and shouldered his satchel. āIām headed out,ā he told Obi-Wan. āLukeās birthday is tomorrow.ā
Summary: A look at Groguās developing skills and personality over the years.
Though it took several years of trial and error, Din and Grogu slowly built up systems of communication between them. It started with sign language, and then after a time spent with another Force-user who taught Grogu the basics of connecting with anotherās mind through meditation and proximity, Grogu began to develop the ability to speak to Din through his thoughts. It was a skill, Din was told, that Jedi were trained in at the temple where Grogu was being raised as a young child, but that Grogu was probably too young to have been taught much of it before the night of the attack on the temple where he was saved by one of the masters escorting people to safety. Dredging up those memories became another obstacle for the two of them, but with Groguās skills developing and Din learning to open up to him it was one they could start overcoming together.
Grogu continued to develop his skills in healing as well as the years went on. Din frequently told him he wasnāt obligated to help people at his age, especially at a detriment to himself, but Grogu made it quite clear that it was something he wanted to do because he felt peopleās pain so deeply that he was compelled to help out of compassion and care for others. At his age and stature there were very few things he could do for other people, heād said, but this was one area where he had the talent and means to do some material good that others couldnāt provide. How could he justify not helping those in need?
As time progressed, Grogu studied physical means of healing too in order to better understand the bodies and systems of each of the beings whose paths they crossed, and as their cadre of connections and friends and allies grew, the types of needs he saw expanded and required other forms of healing that Grogu was unable to attend to with the Force: on a mission to Nar Shadaa, Fennec Shand was injured and out of commission longer than she might have been, had they had the access to someone with a more complex understanding of cybernetics.
Though she recovered well with Fettās aid once they were back on Tatooine, it troubled Grogu to know that there was an area of healing and physical care that was a complete blind spot to him. Din may have been able to teach him the basics of repairing mechanical and electrical systems, but cybernetics were much, much different, and how they were incorporated into an organic body puzzled and troubled Grogu. There was something in cybernetic systems that just didnāt translate when he tried to study them, some disconnect between what he saw and sensed and understood, and it was frustrating not knowing what he didnāt know. He didnāt even know where to start or what questions to ask, and it was only after several months of frustration and discussions between them that a lightbulb went off and Grogu told Din he knew exactly who they should go to.
It took a considerable amount of time (not to say the least of a few favors) for the three of them to arrange a meeting, their lives as busy and fraught with peril as they were, but Grogu and Din were finally able to meet with the Jedi theyād briefly crossed paths with all those years ago; Luke Skywalker, a busy man and largely self-trained Jedi himself, had the kind of teacherās patience, understanding of the Force, and experience caring for his own cybernetic prosthesis that made him ideal for Grogu to finally get a starting point. Luke may not have been a healer the way Grogu was, but being able to marry the understanding of the Force with the incorporation of inorganic medical components gave Grogu the opportunity to begin filling in the blanks for what he was missing. The Mandalorian remained nearby, watchful and curious as his ward followed the Jediās teachings.
Understanding that Grogu could use a mentor who understood him in ways very few others could, even if Grogu didnāt feel called to be a Jedi the way Luke was, Luke gave the Mandalorian and child the means to contact him so if there were ever any questions, they could reach out for help and further advice. Grogu still cared about people and wanted to help in what ways he could, and his aptitude for connecting with the Force had not faded with age. They made new contacts, did more research, and Grogu was able to continue refining his skills, bridging the two sides of learning together as he did.
The Mandalorian was getting on in years, but still felt relatively comfortable continuing to work. He had begun to suspect that the boy may have had something to do with that; heād discovered early on after the start of their journeys together that the child had a habit of tending to Dinās injuries when he was asleep and couldnāt stop the boy from taking care of him. Heād made it clear to Grogu that he didnāt have to heal him (especially when it came at the expense of overexertion), but whether the child hadnāt understood at the time or he simply wasnāt going to do what Din told him to, Din didnāt know. It was a mild point of contention between them once they were finally able to communicate properly, but Grogu had made it clear that even if he were to try, Din wouldnāt be able to stop him anyway, and that he should accept help when it was offered because people like being able to help others. That wasnāt a characteristic only humans felt.
Even so, Din still felt considerably more spry for his age than he knew he should have been, all things considered. His memory and skills were still sharp. He was almost as active as he had been in his thirties and forties, and his stamina hadnāt waned how it should have with his advancing age and choice of profession. His eyesight hadnāt faded, he didnāt have any considerable ailments, and his joints were in remarkablyā unrealisticallyā good shape.
Understanding and accepting change and loss are not lessons exclusive to the Jediās way of life.
When Din tried to broach the topic of the childās care for his wellbeing, Grogu would change the subject or handwave the discussion away, evading Dinās efforts to address the inevitable. It was unfortunate that it took a sharp word and subsequent heated argument for the two of them to finally address the topic of whatever small amount of time they had left together, but Din insisted that they address it now before it was addressed for them and Grogu didnāt have a choice but to contend with the grief that loss brings with it, and contend with it alone.
I know what grief is, heād told his father. You are not the first one I will have lost, and I will have the rest of my life to deal with it. Please donāt muddy the time we do have together.
They compromised after that, Din agreeing not to bring it up as often as long as Grogu didnāt heal him when it was unnecessary and he could recover fine with regular means. Grogu didnāt like it, but Din was happy to see him studying more as a result, honing his technique and repertoire of skills.
That being said, Din did not like Grogu suggesting technical reinforcements.
The Mandalorian and his ward were in hyperspace. The extraction job they had taken at the behest of a friend had nearly cost Din an arm; it was only by luck (or the will of the Force) that Grogu was nearby to halt Dinās adversary and keep it from being completely severed.
Grogu sat on the table in front of his father, carefully tending to the layers of injury Din had sustained. Din insisted he practice more of the traditional methods since he had the time and opportunity; Grogu had given what Din had come to understand was his equivalent of a sharp look, but dutifully went about tending the wounds, briefly using the Force again to ensure heād stopped the worst of the bleeding.
The Mandalorian saw his boy turn to notate something in the small datapad beside him; Din largely couldnāt read most of it, but heād started to see patterns in what notes were pulled up when Grogu took them down with him. There was one column that deepened the wrinkles beginning to line his face: heād seen enough to know what theoretical solutions Grogu was looking at, given Dinās most-often encountered injuries, and the droidlike diagrams of different body systems and prosthetics soured his stomach.
āI donāt need them,ā he murmured. āI have lasted this long without them, and I donāt want them.ā
Groguās look of concentration deepened to disapproval. He finished cutting away Dinās sleeve and methodically cleaned his arm, clearing the way for him to work.
I may not always be able to heal you. What happens if we are apart?
āIāll cross that bridge when I get to it, come what may.ā
They are a tool, Grogu said.
āMaybe, but theyāre not for me,ā Din said. āIāll manage.ā
You donāt have to, Grogu replied. There may come a time you have no choice.
āI wonāt accept them.ā
The boy looked up at him, disapproving. He stood on the table to tap three times on Dinās helmet. You may not be awake when someone comes to help. Hit your head often, you do.
Din grumbled something indistinct, flexing his hand. The boy sat back down, hand hovering over the now-clean open wound as he focused his energy on reversing the damage. Stubborn.
āI know.ā
Take better care.
āIāll try.ā
Do. I do not like when you are hurt.
ā⦠Iām sorry. You shouldnāt have to worry about me.ā
I will, always.
āYou donātāā
Grogu smacked his arm twice. I will. Always.
Din smiled crookedly, gently resting his hand on the boy as he worked. āStubborn.ā
I follow your example.
Grogu sat back, finishing with the closure. He looked up at the Mandalorian, wide brown eyes solemn and thoughtful. He thought of how many years heād had with his father, but he knew no matter how many there were, it would never be enough.
Grogu reached up to rest his hand on the edge of Dinās helmet, and Din removed it to set it aside. The boy stood up on the tips of his toes to reach Dinās face and bring it down to his, pressing his forehead to Dinās as Din rested his hand on Groguās back.
And I would like to follow that example a while longer.
But I have to say: I love the approach to Groguās communication. Frankly, I love the entire perspective and care shown in fleshing out his character and his skills and abilities (healing both with the Force and practical medicine is top tier). But I just adore the concept of Din and Grogu getting to communicate, and I like the idea of it being through Groguās use of the Force. It puts them on such a comfortable, equal footing: Din can talk, so he talks, and Grogu can project his thoughts in a way as natural to him as talking. Beautiful!
Aah thank you so much, Iām glad you like it!! š„°š„°š„° I really enjoy finding Groguās characterization and voice when heāll be one of the main perspectives we get in a fic. Iāll be forever bitter that we didnāt really get to see him as a main character in canon, or get any more interiority with him. It wouldāve helped lengthen their story for sure š
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Summary: A look at Groguās developing skills and personality over the years.
Though it took several years of trial and error, Din and Grogu slowly built up systems of communication between them. It started with sign language, and then after a time spent with another Force-user who taught Grogu the basics of connecting with anotherās mind through meditation and proximity, Grogu began to develop the ability to speak to Din through his thoughts. It was a skill, Din was told, that Jedi were trained in at the temple where Grogu was being raised as a young child, but that Grogu was probably too young to have been taught much of it before the night of the attack on the temple where he was saved by one of the masters escorting people to safety. Dredging up those memories became another obstacle for the two of them, but with Groguās skills developing and Din learning to open up to him it was one they could start overcoming together.
Grogu continued to develop his skills in healing as well as the years went on. Din frequently told him he wasnāt obligated to help people at his age, especially at a detriment to himself, but Grogu made it quite clear that it was something he wanted to do because he felt peopleās pain so deeply that he was compelled to help out of compassion and care for others. At his age and stature there were very few things he could do for other people, heād said, but this was one area where he had the talent and means to do some material good that others couldnāt provide. How could he justify not helping those in need?
As time progressed, Grogu studied physical means of healing too in order to better understand the bodies and systems of each of the beings whose paths they crossed, and as their cadre of connections and friends and allies grew, the types of needs he saw expanded and required other forms of healing that Grogu was unable to attend to with the Force: on a mission to Nar Shadaa, Fennec Shand was injured and out of commission longer than she might have been, had they had the access to someone with a more complex understanding of cybernetics.
Though she recovered well with Fettās aid once they were back on Tatooine, it troubled Grogu to know that there was an area of healing and physical care that was a complete blind spot to him. Din may have been able to teach him the basics of repairing mechanical and electrical systems, but cybernetics were much, much different, and how they were incorporated into an organic body puzzled and troubled Grogu. There was something in cybernetic systems that just didnāt translate when he tried to study them, some disconnect between what he saw and sensed and understood, and it was frustrating not knowing what he didnāt know. He didnāt even know where to start or what questions to ask, and it was only after several months of frustration and discussions between them that a lightbulb went off and Grogu told Din he knew exactly who they should go to.
It took a considerable amount of time (not to say the least of a few favors) for the three of them to arrange a meeting, their lives as busy and fraught with peril as they were, but Grogu and Din were finally able to meet with the Jedi theyād briefly crossed paths with all those years ago; Luke Skywalker, a busy man and largely self-trained Jedi himself, had the kind of teacherās patience, understanding of the Force, and experience caring for his own cybernetic prosthesis that made him ideal for Grogu to finally get a starting point. Luke may not have been a healer the way Grogu was, but being able to marry the understanding of the Force with the incorporation of inorganic medical components gave Grogu the opportunity to begin filling in the blanks for what he was missing. The Mandalorian remained nearby, watchful and curious as his ward followed the Jediās teachings.
Understanding that Grogu could use a mentor who understood him in ways very few others could, even if Grogu didnāt feel called to be a Jedi the way Luke was, Luke gave the Mandalorian and child the means to contact him so if there were ever any questions, they could reach out for help and further advice. Grogu still cared about people and wanted to help in what ways he could, and his aptitude for connecting with the Force had not faded with age. They made new contacts, did more research, and Grogu was able to continue refining his skills, bridging the two sides of learning together as he did.
The Mandalorian was getting on in years, but still felt relatively comfortable continuing to work. He had begun to suspect that the boy may have had something to do with that; heād discovered early on after the start of their journeys together that the child had a habit of tending to Dinās injuries when he was asleep and couldnāt stop the boy from taking care of him. Heād made it clear to Grogu that he didnāt have to heal him (especially when it came at the expense of overexertion), but whether the child hadnāt understood at the time or he simply wasnāt going to do what Din told him to, Din didnāt know. It was a mild point of contention between them once they were finally able to communicate properly, but Grogu had made it clear that even if he were to try, Din wouldnāt be able to stop him anyway, and that he should accept help when it was offered because people like being able to help others. That wasnāt a characteristic only humans felt.
Even so, Din still felt considerably more spry for his age than he knew he should have been, all things considered. His memory and skills were still sharp. He was almost as active as he had been in his thirties and forties, and his stamina hadnāt waned how it should have with his advancing age and choice of profession. His eyesight hadnāt faded, he didnāt have any considerable ailments, and his joints were in remarkablyā unrealisticallyā good shape.
Understanding and accepting change and loss are not lessons exclusive to the Jediās way of life.
When Din tried to broach the topic of the childās care for his wellbeing, Grogu would change the subject or handwave the discussion away, evading Dinās efforts to address the inevitable. It was unfortunate that it took a sharp word and subsequent heated argument for the two of them to finally address the topic of whatever small amount of time they had left together, but Din insisted that they address it now before it was addressed for them and Grogu didnāt have a choice but to contend with the grief that loss brings with it, and contend with it alone.
I know what grief is, heād told his father. You are not the first one I will have lost, and I will have the rest of my life to deal with it. Please donāt muddy the time we do have together.
They compromised after that, Din agreeing not to bring it up as often as long as Grogu didnāt heal him when it was unnecessary and he could recover fine with regular means. Grogu didnāt like it, but Din was happy to see him studying more as a result, honing his technique and repertoire of skills.
That being said, Din did not like Grogu suggesting technical reinforcements.
The Mandalorian and his ward were in hyperspace. The extraction job they had taken at the behest of a friend had nearly cost Din an arm; it was only by luck (or the will of the Force) that Grogu was nearby to halt Dinās adversary and keep it from being completely severed.
Grogu sat on the table in front of his father, carefully tending to the layers of injury Din had sustained. Din insisted he practice more of the traditional methods since he had the time and opportunity; Grogu had given what Din had come to understand was his equivalent of a sharp look, but dutifully went about tending the wounds, briefly using the Force again to ensure heād stopped the worst of the bleeding.
The Mandalorian saw his boy turn to notate something in the small datapad beside him; Din largely couldnāt read most of it, but heād started to see patterns in what notes were pulled up when Grogu took them down with him. There was one column that deepened the wrinkles beginning to line his face: heād seen enough to know what theoretical solutions Grogu was looking at, given Dinās most-often encountered injuries, and the droidlike diagrams of different body systems and prosthetics soured his stomach.
āI donāt need them,ā he murmured. āI have lasted this long without them, and I donāt want them.ā
Groguās look of concentration deepened to disapproval. He finished cutting away Dinās sleeve and methodically cleaned his arm, clearing the way for him to work.
I may not always be able to heal you. What happens if we are apart?
āIāll cross that bridge when I get to it, come what may.ā
They are a tool, Grogu said.
āMaybe, but theyāre not for me,ā Din said. āIāll manage.ā
You donāt have to, Grogu replied. There may come a time you have no choice.
āI wonāt accept them.ā
The boy looked up at him, disapproving. He stood on the table to tap three times on Dinās helmet. You may not be awake when someone comes to help. Hit your head often, you do.
Din grumbled something indistinct, flexing his hand. The boy sat back down, hand hovering over the now-clean open wound as he focused his energy on reversing the damage. Stubborn.
āI know.ā
Take better care.
āIāll try.ā
Do. I do not like when you are hurt.
ā⦠Iām sorry. You shouldnāt have to worry about me.ā
I will, always.
āYou donātāā
Grogu smacked his arm twice. I will. Always.
Din smiled crookedly, gently resting his hand on the boy as he worked. āStubborn.ā
I follow your example.
Grogu sat back, finishing with the closure. He looked up at the Mandalorian, wide brown eyes solemn and thoughtful. He thought of how many years heād had with his father, but he knew no matter how many there were, it would never be enough.
Grogu reached up to rest his hand on the edge of Dinās helmet, and Din removed it to set it aside. The boy stood up on the tips of his toes to reach Dinās face and bring it down to his, pressing his forehead to Dinās as Din rested his hand on Groguās back.
And I would like to follow that example a while longer.
Summary: A look at Groguās developing skills and personality over the years.
Though it took several years of trial and error, Din and Grogu slowly built up systems of communication between them. It started with sign language, and then after a time spent with another Force-user who taught Grogu the basics of connecting with anotherās mind through meditation and proximity, Grogu began to develop the ability to speak to Din through his thoughts. It was a skill, Din was told, that Jedi were trained in at the temple where Grogu was being raised as a young child, but that Grogu was probably too young to have been taught much of it before the night of the attack on the temple where he was saved by one of the masters escorting people to safety. Dredging up those memories became another obstacle for the two of them, but with Groguās skills developing and Din learning to open up to him it was one they could start overcoming together.
Grogu continued to develop his skills in healing as well as the years went on. Din frequently told him he wasnāt obligated to help people at his age, especially at a detriment to himself, but Grogu made it quite clear that it was something he wanted to do because he felt peopleās pain so deeply that he was compelled to help out of compassion and care for others. At his age and stature there were very few things he could do for other people, heād said, but this was one area where he had the talent and means to do some material good that others couldnāt provide. How could he justify not helping those in need?
As time progressed, Grogu studied physical means of healing too in order to better understand the bodies and systems of each of the beings whose paths they crossed, and as their cadre of connections and friends and allies grew, the types of needs he saw expanded and required other forms of healing that Grogu was unable to attend to with the Force: on a mission to Nar Shadaa, Fennec Shand was injured and out of commission longer than she might have been, had they had the access to someone with a more complex understanding of cybernetics.
Though she recovered well with Fettās aid once they were back on Tatooine, it troubled Grogu to know that there was an area of healing and physical care that was a complete blind spot to him. Din may have been able to teach him the basics of repairing mechanical and electrical systems, but cybernetics were much, much different, and how they were incorporated into an organic body puzzled and troubled Grogu. There was something in cybernetic systems that just didnāt translate when he tried to study them, some disconnect between what he saw and sensed and understood, and it was frustrating not knowing what he didnāt know. He didnāt even know where to start or what questions to ask, and it was only after several months of frustration and discussions between them that a lightbulb went off and Grogu told Din he knew exactly who they should go to.
It took a considerable amount of time (not to say the least of a few favors) for the three of them to arrange a meeting, their lives as busy and fraught with peril as they were, but Grogu and Din were finally able to meet with the Jedi theyād briefly crossed paths with all those years ago; Luke Skywalker, a busy man and largely self-trained Jedi himself, had the kind of teacherās patience, understanding of the Force, and experience caring for his own cybernetic prosthesis that made him ideal for Grogu to finally get a starting point. Luke may not have been a healer the way Grogu was, but being able to marry the understanding of the Force with the incorporation of inorganic medical components gave Grogu the opportunity to begin filling in the blanks for what he was missing. The Mandalorian remained nearby, watchful and curious as his ward followed the Jediās teachings.
Understanding that Grogu could use a mentor who understood him in ways very few others could, even if Grogu didnāt feel called to be a Jedi the way Luke was, Luke gave the Mandalorian and child the means to contact him so if there were ever any questions, they could reach out for help and further advice. Grogu still cared about people and wanted to help in what ways he could, and his aptitude for connecting with the Force had not faded with age. They made new contacts, did more research, and Grogu was able to continue refining his skills, bridging the two sides of learning together as he did.
The Mandalorian was getting on in years, but still felt relatively comfortable continuing to work. He had begun to suspect that the boy may have had something to do with that; heād discovered early on after the start of their journeys together that the child had a habit of tending to Dinās injuries when he was asleep and couldnāt stop the boy from taking care of him. Heād made it clear to Grogu that he didnāt have to heal him (especially when it came at the expense of overexertion), but whether the child hadnāt understood at the time or he simply wasnāt going to do what Din told him to, Din didnāt know. It was a mild point of contention between them once they were finally able to communicate properly, but Grogu had made it clear that even if he were to try, Din wouldnāt be able to stop him anyway, and that he should accept help when it was offered because people like being able to help others. That wasnāt a characteristic only humans felt.
Even so, Din still felt considerably more spry for his age than he knew he should have been, all things considered. His memory and skills were still sharp. He was almost as active as he had been in his thirties and forties, and his stamina hadnāt waned how it should have with his advancing age and choice of profession. His eyesight hadnāt faded, he didnāt have any considerable ailments, and his joints were in remarkablyā unrealisticallyā good shape.
Understanding and accepting change and loss are not lessons exclusive to the Jediās way of life.
When Din tried to broach the topic of the childās care for his wellbeing, Grogu would change the subject or handwave the discussion away, evading Dinās efforts to address the inevitable. It was unfortunate that it took a sharp word and subsequent heated argument for the two of them to finally address the topic of whatever small amount of time they had left together, but Din insisted that they address it now before it was addressed for them and Grogu didnāt have a choice but to contend with the grief that loss brings with it, and contend with it alone.
I know what grief is, heād told his father. You are not the first one I will have lost, and I will have the rest of my life to deal with it. Please donāt muddy the time we do have together.
They compromised after that, Din agreeing not to bring it up as often as long as Grogu didnāt heal him when it was unnecessary and he could recover fine with regular means. Grogu didnāt like it, but Din was happy to see him studying more as a result, honing his technique and repertoire of skills.
That being said, Din did not like Grogu suggesting technical reinforcements.
The Mandalorian and his ward were in hyperspace. The extraction job they had taken at the behest of a friend had nearly cost Din an arm; it was only by luck (or the will of the Force) that Grogu was nearby to halt Dinās adversary and keep it from being completely severed.
Grogu sat on the table in front of his father, carefully tending to the layers of injury Din had sustained. Din insisted he practice more of the traditional methods since he had the time and opportunity; Grogu had given what Din had come to understand was his equivalent of a sharp look, but dutifully went about tending the wounds, briefly using the Force again to ensure heād stopped the worst of the bleeding.
The Mandalorian saw his boy turn to notate something in the small datapad beside him; Din largely couldnāt read most of it, but heād started to see patterns in what notes were pulled up when Grogu took them down with him. There was one column that deepened the wrinkles beginning to line his face: heād seen enough to know what theoretical solutions Grogu was looking at, given Dinās most-often encountered injuries, and the droidlike diagrams of different body systems and prosthetics soured his stomach.
āI donāt need them,ā he murmured. āI have lasted this long without them, and I donāt want them.ā
Groguās look of concentration deepened to disapproval. He finished cutting away Dinās sleeve and methodically cleaned his arm, clearing the way for him to work.
I may not always be able to heal you. What happens if we are apart?
āIāll cross that bridge when I get to it, come what may.ā
They are a tool, Grogu said.
āMaybe, but theyāre not for me,ā Din said. āIāll manage.ā
You donāt have to, Grogu replied. There may come a time you have no choice.
āI wonāt accept them.ā
The boy looked up at him, disapproving. He stood on the table to tap three times on Dinās helmet. You may not be awake when someone comes to help. Hit your head often, you do.
Din grumbled something indistinct, flexing his hand. The boy sat back down, hand hovering over the now-clean open wound as he focused his energy on reversing the damage. Stubborn.
āI know.ā
Take better care.
āIāll try.ā
Do. I do not like when you are hurt.
ā⦠Iām sorry. You shouldnāt have to worry about me.ā
I will, always.
āYou donātāā
Grogu smacked his arm twice. I will. Always.
Din smiled crookedly, gently resting his hand on the boy as he worked. āStubborn.ā
I follow your example.
Grogu sat back, finishing with the closure. He looked up at the Mandalorian, wide brown eyes solemn and thoughtful. He thought of how many years heād had with his father, but he knew no matter how many there were, it would never be enough.
Grogu reached up to rest his hand on the edge of Dinās helmet, and Din removed it to set it aside. The boy stood up on the tips of his toes to reach Dinās face and bring it down to his, pressing his forehead to Dinās as Din rested his hand on Groguās back.
And I would like to follow that example a while longer.