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Welcome Back to the Collection of the Odd Cryptid's Writings
Hi! I'm Athens/Andy (they/them). I am a somewhat old yet somewhat new face on writeblr. I'm currently a second year student at a university in the deep south, studying history and anthropology in order to become a museum curator. Most of my free time is spent writing, which is the driving force behind this blog. Writing has become the love of my life over the past ten years.
AthensWrites has had two prior iterations. All I posted here in the previous iteration was privated, including Not Your Typical Fairytale. Don't fear, NYTF will make a glorious return ;)
With all that said, welcome back to the odd writings of Athens, and I hope you enjoy your stay. Below the cut, I've detailed some of my current projects, which range from Sci-Fi (my favorite) to thrillers to fantasy to realistic fiction. I've highlighted key content warnings and tags for each, just to keep you aware. If you'd like to hop on a tag list for any of these stories, please let me know! Some of them I post more frequently than others. I am also very tag list and tag game friendly so PLEASE tag me in stuff. If you need other people to tag in a writeblr tag game, look no further than this post!
The collection is constantly updating and evolving, so stay tuned!
Welcome to AthensWrites!
Who is Athens?
My name is Athens or Oleander, and you can call me any nickname derived from those two! I use they/them pronouns and Iâm a rising college freshman (as of spring 2022). I come from Oklahoma but now reside in a different state in the Deep South. I love to write, obviously, and restarted this blog from the remains of @atbwritesarchives to share my writing! Outside of working on my WIPs, I knit, play the saxophone, and occasionally read tarot (if you ask me politely).
My Writing
I started writing in third grade, from what I can remember, and my love for storytelling only expanded from there. I write primarily sci-fi that hits too close to home and realistic fiction, with a healthy dose of modern fantasy and time travel as well. I oscillate violently between my projects and can never guarantee which one Iâll be hyper fixated on at the moment. But feel free to ask about any of them! Check them out below the cut! Iâll continue to update them with links and more summaries as I go.
HEY YOU!
Yes you!!!!
Itâs been a while since Iâve been on writeblr and I need new active writeblrs. If you are a writer and fall into any of these categories you should totally follow me then reblog this, so I can follow you
You write often
You rarely write
You post oc prompts
You post writing advice
Youâre lgbtq or write lgbtq content
Youâre ADHD or autistic
You like or write scifi
You like or write dystopias
You like or write morally grey characters
You reblog content from other writers
Welcome to AthensWrites!
Who is Athens?
My name is Athens or Oleander, and you can call me any nickname derived from those two!I use they/them pronouns and Iâm a rising college freshman (as of spring 2022). I come from Oklahoma but now reside in a different state in the Deep South. I love to write, obviously, and restarted this blog from the remains of @atbwritesarchives to share my writing! Outside of working on my WIPs, I knit, play the saxophone, and occasionally read tarot (if you ask me politely).
My Writing
I started writing in third grade, from what I can remember, and my love for storytelling only expanded from there. I write primarily sci-fi that hits too close to home and realistic fiction, with a healthy dose of modern fantasy and time travel as well. I oscillate violently between my projects and can never guarantee which one Iâll be hyper fixated on at the moment. But feel free to ask about any of them! Check them out below the cut! Iâll continue to update them with links and more summaries as I go.

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Hi!
My name is Athens, and Iâm the former owner of @atbwrites, now @atbwritesarchives archives! Itâs been a while since Iâve been on Tumblr but I want to share my novel and story ideas again! If you are a writer, like reading, or a former follower, Iâd love to see yâall around!
Iâll be doing a formal intro soon!!!
So, I really like doing Picrews but Iâm also Black, SO! I decided to compile a list of picrews and dolls that had a wide range of skin tones, option for Black facial features and Black hair options THAT MAKE SENSE. If you find anymore please add on! These are my favs to go back to đ
Djarn Charater maker
Smile Maker
Icon Maker-Star Wars
Icon Maker by Magenta Girl
Adorable Character
Vintage Western Girl
BAYDEWS AVATER MAKER
Specs Maker
Hummm Girl
Girl Maker
Poicon Maker
Aloha! Sushicore Icon
Space Princess
I got some more Black and Brown friendly picrews yall đđ˝ââď¸đđžââď¸đđżââď¸
Plastic Girl
Lichtenstyler (pop art)
Head Creator
Wow U R So Cool ( male or NB maker)
BumBean
Makowka OC
Pbelt Witchsona
Pbelt Witchsona
Add mine!!
Hot Girl Summer
This one is so cute sis!!
Connerâs Doodle Creator
Yee Haw Character
Wink ID
Editing Checklist
Editing Software:
StyleWriter 4 is fantastic. Itâs an add-on for Microsoft word and has a 14-day trial period. It goes through your text, picks out âglue wordsâ, misspellings, long sentences, homonyms, passive tense, shows your reading grade level, and more.
Editminion *FREE* checks for adverbs, weak words, passive voice, cliches, and homonyms among other things.
Pro Writing Aid is another online editor. It is mostly free, but offers more features if you pay.
AutoCrit offers free analysis for under 500 words, otherwise you have to pay for more text and more editing features.
Paper Rater offers a free service for editing, but it is designed for essays.
Formatting Checklist: This follows the general guide of formatting a manuscript in Microsoft word. However, some literary agents and editors have their own requirements.
Under the paragraph option, change the special indentation to first line at .5â. Change to document to double spaced.
There should be no spaces between paragraphs.
When showing a scene break, center # on a blank line.
Font should be easy to read. Courier New and Times New Roman are preferred at size 12.
All margins should be 1â.
Start chapters on a new page and put the chapter title 1/3 down the page. Write the chapter like so: CHAPTER ONE - CHAPTER TITLE. Press return 4 - 6 times before starting the text of the chapter.
For the header, put YOUR NAME/BOOK TITLE/PAGE NUMBER in the upper right-hand corner. Start this header on the first page of the first chapter.
The cover page of your manuscript should have your name, word count, and contact information in the upper left-hand corner.
The title on the cover page should be in all caps. Your name should be underneath in all caps. If you use a pen name, write YOUR REAL NAME (WRITING AS PEN NAME).
At the end of the manuscript, start a new page and write END.
Self-Editing Checklist:
Spelling:
If you are using Microsoft word for your word processor, use the spell check. After that, go through the manuscript line by line to make sure everything is spelled right. You may have used âformâ instead of âfromâ and skipped it because Microsoft word did not see it as misspelled.
Printing out your work or viewing it in another way (such as a pdf on an ereader) helps find these mistakes.
Beta readers can find what you missed as well.
Use editing software to check homonyms or look up a list of homonyms and find them in your document using ctrl + f. Check these words to make sure you used the right spelling.
Grammar and Style:
First use Microsoft wordâs grammar checker, but be aware that it is not always right. Check grammar girl if you are unsure.
For dialogue, you can always pick up a professionally published book and look at how the dialogue tags are used, where commas are placed, and when other punctuation is used.
If youâre in school and your English teacher isnât too busy, have them take a look at it.
Look out for prepositions. Most of the time, you can omit these words and the sentence will still make sense. Beginner writers use a lot of these in their writing and it slows the flow.
Check for adverbs. Youâd be surprised at how many you use in your writing, sometimes up to five a page. Using a few in narration is okay, but only a few. Delete adverbs you find, especially those that end in â-lyâ, and rewrite the sentences in necessary.
Delete gerunds and forms of âto beâ if writing in past tense. Instead of âwere runningâ, write âranâ.
Check subject-verb agreement.
Use correct dialogue tags. People donât bark their words. They shout.
Two digit numbers should be written as words (twenty-seven) while numbers with more than two digits should be written with numbers (123).
Avoid passive verbs.
Vary sentence length.
Show with the five senses rather than telling.
Most of the time, you can delete the word âthatâ.
Avoid using âuniqueâ or âsignificantâ words too often.
Consistency:
Make sure all your font is the same size and type.
Make sure you have no plot holes. Use the comment feature in Microsoft Word to track these plots.
Make sure your time line is consistent.
The tone should fit the scene.
There should be one POV per scene. Unless youâre a brilliant writer and can pull off third person omniscient.
Verb tense should be consistent.
Keep track of the details you release of people, places, and things. The reader will remember if in one chapter you say your protagonist has blue eyes and in another you say green.
Pacing:
The whole book should flow in and out of fast paced scenes to keep your reader interested and slow scenes to give them a break.
The middle should not âsagâ.
Sentences should flow smoothly.
Plot:
Keep track of all your plots and sub-plots. Readers will remember them.
There should be a beginning, middle, and end.
Is the initial problem at the beginning of the manuscript?
There should be at least one antagonist. This does no have to be a person.
Is there enough conflict?
There should be a resolution.
All scenes should have something to do with plot.
The climax should be the most exciting part.
Character:
The protagonist should change by the end of the book.
Make sure all characters who come in contact with one another have some kind of relationship, whether good or bad.
Characters must have motivation for everything.
The protagonist must want something right from the start of the conflict.
The protagonist needs to be captivating. The readers wants to root for the protagonist. This does not mean the protagonist needs to be likable all the time.
The readers likes to relate to characters. Make sure your characters are diverse enough that readers can identify with one.
Know who your protagonist is. The main character is not always the same. For example, Nick in The Great Gatsby is the main character, but Jay Gatsby is the protagonist. This is important to know while writing your query letter.
If you can delete a minor character from a scene and nothing changes, then delete that character.
Sometimes you can make two minor characters one without losing any essential parts of the story. If you can, do this.
All characters react and act.
Each character has his or her own life.
Dialogue:
Dialogue should be believable. Read it out loud.
Donât go overboard with phonetic spelling if a character has an accent.
Dialogue should be informal and natural. It does not have to be grammatically correct.
Prose:
Avoid purple prose. Iâve never met anyone with âemerald eyesâ or âhair of fireâ (except for the Flame Princess).
Donât use too many adjectives.
Avoid cliches.
Other:
Donât info dump. Pace information through dialogue and narration.
The first sentence should spark interest, or at least the first three. If it does, the first paragraph should be the same. And the first 250 words. The goal is to get the reader past the first page.
Let your story rest. When youâre ready to edit, start at the end. Writers tend to get lazy at the end of their story whether they are writing it for the first time or revising it after revising the rest of the story.
Make sure your manuscript is within range for your genreâs word count.
@awhellstothejoe deserves credit for perfectly articulating the fantasy writer version of âThanks! I hate it!â
FINNPETRA FLUFF FEBRUARY â DAY 5: FINNEASâ BIRTHDAY
iâm writing a little fluffy prompt piece set around my wip muddy roads & foxgloves every day for the month of february. see all FinnPetra Fluff February posts here!
POV: Finneas.
setting: a few months (3 months to be exact) before the road trip. not yet dating.
synopsis:Â Finneas gets a little visit at work from Petra on his birthday.
words: 736
Finneas was used to the plant store being quiet, but winter was something else.
After the rush of people buying poinsettias and ivy for the winter solstice came weeks of nearly nothing. He would have thought people would be looking for some greenery to liven up the cold, grey months, but apparently he was mistaken.
Sure, he liked his alone time, but this was next level boredom. He could only make the rounds through the two aisles to water and spray the plants so many times before he ended up overwatering them. The floors had been swept unnaturally clean. The pots had been stacked and restacked. Now, the only thing he could do was sit behind the counter and stare at the large, overpriced croton by the door, waiting for something, anything, to relieve him of his ennui.
The little bell chimed above the door as it swung open.
Welcoming the break in the monotony, Finneas quickly straightened and pasted his work smile on. âGood afternâOh, itâs you.â
He relaxed his posture somewhat as Petra stepped into the store and stomped her boots on the welcome mat to rid them of the snowâwhen had it started snowing? Finneas had barely noticedâbefore offering him a little wave with her mittened hand. Brushing snowflakes out of her curls, she gave him a breathless, âHey.â
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Tender Tuesday Open Ask
Is there a special place your OTP has fond memories of? Somewhere they think of/pass/go back to and always think of each other?
This is an open question for anyone who wants to answer.
@tendertuesdayasks
Nytf time!
Piers and Grady donât really have a place where anything big happened, but they do share a shared common room that they retreat to most often when either is stressed/wants to be alone and the other always notices when things are out of place/have been moved around in there. Itâs stupid ik lol.
bbc merlin : season 3 ... sentence starters
âHe looked so pitiful!â
âThere is evil in your heart.â
âYou might want to take a bath.â
âYou followed me. How dare you!â
âAre you saying I look like a toad?â
âDestinies are troublesome things.â
âI couldnât watch everyoneâs griefâŚâ
âI believe in the world you will build.â
âThe only rule is⌠there are no rules.â
âYou look very handsome⌠the perfect bait.â
âYouâre learning. Slowly, but youâre learning.â
âI trust in your destiny⌠just trust in yourself.â
âI was wrong. Coming here was a great idea.â
âI know what you did. You tried to poison me!â
âOh, maybe something you said gave it away.â
âYou need to be more in touch with the people.â
âYou know, youâve got a lot of nerve for a wimp.â
âI am so sorry for everything youâve been through.â
âNo harm will come to you, I can promise you that.â
âBut believe me, I have seen the evils in this world.â
âSome choices are easy. Some stay with you forever.â
âI hope, in time, we will both find the love we deserve.â
âYou should get out of here while you have the chance.â
âI know where weâre going. I just canât tell you, thatâs all.â
âI can see deep into your heart. It is cold, cold as stone.â
âShe is the darkness to your light, the hatred to your love.â
âTrust me, when I am threatening you, youâll know about it.â
âIf you really want to know what I think? I think youâre mad.â
âLetâs be honest, you couldnât kill me even if you wanted to.â
âI know. But youâre playing with things that are beyond you.â
âWell, I may be a wimp, but at least Iâm not a⌠dollop-head.â
âI think weâve no chance, but I wouldnât miss it for the world.â
âThis is what happens when you spend all day in the tavern.â
âI swore that one day I would repay you. Now is the moment.â
âYou play it so well, youâve fooled him⌠but you donât fool me.â
âWell, I wouldnât expect you to understand. Youâre not a knight.â
âHe believes Iâve changed. Soon he will see exactly how much.â
âOne day youâll be strong enough to take my crown, but not yet.â
âYou shouldnât have come back for me. What were you thinking?â
âYou know, you couldnât keep a secret if your life depended on it!â
âThe problem is that you wish to talk, but you donât wish to listen.â
âI donât know, you were the only person who knew where we were.â
âWell, if it means I donât get clobbered âround the head, Iâm glad of it.â
âYouâd do well, (name), to stay out of things that do not concern you.â
âIâve never killed a man before. I just wanted to feel⌠what it was like.â
âBecause I donât understand how anyone would want to hurt their friends.â
âYou are an arrogant prat, with the brain of a donkey and a face of a toad!â
âStanding here, seeing so many happy faces⌠it almost seems like a dream.â
âWhat are you planning? And donât even think about lying, I know you too well.â
âI promise you that, in the future, I will give you the love and respect you deserve.â
âThereâs no better place to measure the mood of your people than the local tavern.â
âFrom everyone elseâs perspective, apart from yours and mine, itâs completely insane.â
âI understand. You were just trying to protect your friends. I would have done the same.â
âItâs lonely⌠to be more powerful than any man you know and have to live like a shadow.â
âIÂ have fought alongside you many times. There is no other person I would rather die for.â
âEven though I was a commoner and a nobody, you were willing to lay down your life for me.â
âIt was the middle of the night. I was worried. I thought you might be in some sort of trouble.â
âNo, no. Thatâs all that Iâve done for the past year, sit. And pray that you hadnât given up on me.â
âThis is madness. She has been missing for more than a year now. When are you going to stop?â
âTo see one of your own kin die is never an easy thing, but all great struggles demand sacrifice.â
âYou donât know how much I regret everything that Iâve done! I just⌠I hope that you can forgive me.â
âNobility is defined by what you do, and not by who you are, and these men⌠are anything but.â
âThis is one of those moments where I tell you something isnât a good idea and you ignore me, isnât it?â
âOh, but they do concern me, because theyâre my friends too, and Iâll do whatever it takes⌠to protect them.â
âYou donât know what itâs like to be an outsider⌠to be ashamed of how you were born, to have to hide who you are.â
âIf I donât know where weâre going, how do I know what to pack? Will it be hot, will it be cold, will it be wet, will it be dry?â
âYouâre hopeless at a lot of things. Well, most thing, in fact. But, very occasionally, quite by accident, you say something useful.â
âThere are times where you display a sort of, I donât know what it is. I donât want to say⌠itâs not wisdom, but, yes. Thatâs what it is.â
âYesterday, amongst all your gibberish, you said something that, if I didnât know you, Iâd be completely fooled into thinking you were⌠wise.â
âIn the wrong hands, this sword can do great evil. You must promise me that, once itâs task is done, you will place is where none can wield it.â
âYou feel trapped? Like your whole life has been planned out for you, and youâve got no control over anything, and sometimes you donât even know if what destiny has decided is really the best thing at all?â
me tagging someone in a wip post: oh god friend forgive me for disturbing your peace with this offering
me being tagged by someone in a wip post: YES FOOD FINALLY THANK YOU FOR THIS POST
Would a jewish or muslim person pray if they were in a dire, hopeless situation and thinking they were going to die? If so, what would they say?
Jewish and Muslim characters - what would they pray in a dire situation?
Jewish answer
âHear, Oh Israel, the Lord is our God, the Lord is One / Blessed is Godâs Glorious Name For Ever and Everâ (Shma Yisrael, Adonai Eloheinu, Adonai Echad / Baruch Shem, Kâvod Malchuto, LâOlam Vaâed)Â â this is the shema, there are plenty of times to say it and this is just one of them. My flippant way of describing it in my head is that if weâre mobile phones this is the way we ping the tower.
âShira
Definitely agree it would be the Shema.Â
The only exception I can think of is if itâs the time of day for ritualistic prayer (either shacharit, mincha or ma'ariv), they might prioritise that over reacting to the situation as an affirmation of their faith in face of death. There is no obligation to risk your/othersâ lives in order to pray at the correct time, in fact this would be against Torah, but if the situations seems hopeless anyway then I can think of some stories of people saying âitâs time for *insert daily prayer*â and proceeding to go through the relevant service with no obvious signs of fear.Â
Similarly, you might want to research how to make sure your characterâs attitude towards the situation is in line with their unique Jewish identity.
If theyâre very religious, for example, they may have an easier time accepting this fate than the average person. Jewish theology involves a belief that everything ultimately comes from G-d and is therefore good. We do have a strong emphasis on protecting life as one of our main obligations in this world, but there is also an acceptance towards death as something that G-d created and so is ultimately for the good - the first thing we say on hearing that someone has passed away is 'Baruch Dayurn Ha'Emetâ, 'Blessed is the True Judge.â
 Unlike Christianity, we donât have a concept of the Devil as a being independent of G-d who is capable of introducing fundamentally bad things into the universe. This may or may not play out in your characterâs thought process and decisions in the situation youâre describing, it depends on their relationship to Judaism and Jewish theology, so thatâs something I recommend including in your research.
âShoshi
As you can see, Shoshi and I have varying levels of knowledge about how much prayer belongs when, and thatâs something to keep in mind â if your character is Reform they might sound more like my answer and if theyâre Orthodox go with Shoshiâs â but that difference is only relevant at specific times of the day.
âShira
Muslim answer - open to followers
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Southeast Asian Muslim here
Like all the replies before me have stated, the most likely thing to happen is your character recite the syahadat (âthere is no other God than Allah, I testify that Muhammad SAW is his messengerâ [rough translation from what my language translates it as]) over and over. Weâre gonna need specifics for what sort of dire situation youâre in because, well, we have doas/prayers for just about everything under the sun.
Now, if you were about to die? Lots of teaching will tell you what to recite, but the one thing most people will urge their family members on their death beds is to recite the line: âlaa ilaha illallahâ which is the first half of the syahadat. If your body has gone stiff and you can do literally nothing else, this line is not only the most âpracticalâ (according to my teacher, I went to a school for this stuff) because it requires no other movement than the tongue and air for all the 'hâs, but itâs memorable and easily repeatable.
Again, the above is death bed level 'you are about to meet the angel of death oh look theyâre right thereâ stuff. If youâre on a sinking ship? About to crash into an asteroid? The other replies have mentioned repeating the syahadat; 'sujudâ which is bowing with your forehead, hands, and knees and tips of your toes flat on the ground 'kisingâ it; ayat kursi, which is also good against malevolent spirits/entities and general protection against anything that might crawl into your dreams as you sleep; and dzikir, which are, like, three verses that all mention God in some way that most muslims recite after every one of our daily prayers/sholat. Those would be go-tos for most people, the Al-Fatihah verse as well because itâs one of the most used surahs in the Quran and is the first verse anyone teaches their children and is used in, well, basically everything.
Sorry if this isnât as coherent (kinda hard to explain a few things because Iâve been taught them in my language and for some reason English tends to make harmless words in Indonesian sound evil or some shit, I donât know, I hate it) or detailed as the others. I live in a fairly moderate household despite going to a Muslim boarding school, so my day to day has kinda diluted the more detailed things Iâve been taught(?) and so Iâm kinda lax on a few things. Kinda sad that I tend to forget important bits when Iâm at home, but I hope this helps.
This! Adding that the general dua for any misfortune is âina lillahi wa inna ilayhi rajiâunâ â which roughly translates as âwe belong to God and to him we returnâ, here it is in the Quran if it helps. Note that this dua is applicable for everything, from, say, you failed a test or didnât get the job you want, to your parent just died or your country was invaded.
From the context, it sounds like there might be an offending party about to kill them? If thatâs the case, there are also many duas for tyranny and injustice.
Iâm not familiar with the tyranny and injustice ones (either that or they slipped past me in school) but yeah innalilahi wa innailaihi raji'un is a pretty common one to use in harrowing situations or if you hear a person has recently passed. Another is 'anuzubillah min dzalikâ which is used mostly like a 'dear God noâ or 'please let that not happen to meâ sort of thing.
More Muslim Commentary
@cinnnamonrollstan said: A Muslim would probably recite the shahada/ testimony of faith. Which basically translates to: I testify that there is no God but God and Muhammad is his messenger.
@polarissdiary said: A Muslim would say the shahada (testimony of faith) and if they can, they would pray what we call two rak'at. Since we are closer to Allah with our foreheads on the floor, they would say any dua'a (supplication) in that position, from asking for forgivenes to asking for mercy. This in case there is no escape for them. If there is a chance to break free or save themselves, as Muslims they have the obligation to put theyâre trust in Allah and at least try. Hope it helps đ¤
@bloomiii said: Hello! I am a practicing Muslim.
A Muslim character might definitely pray in a dire situation. It doesnât have to be any specific prayer. This could be in any language and even just in your own thoughts.
If you want a character to recite something specific, they might recite a certain part of the Qurâan (one thing I often recite to myself when I am anxious is aayat al-kursi, which is a very holy part of the Qurâan, that you recite for protection) or a specific dua (thats the arabic word for prayer). There are duas for specific things, such as one dua to recite when traveling that Muslims might recite when driving.
Jewish Commentary
@beautifullights1Â said: Some Jews, esp those who are less familiar with the traditional liturgy, less fluent in Hebrew, and/or from a progressive denomination, might pray in a more freeform way. For example, they might have a conversation with Gd or plead for Gdâs help in their own language.
@addiehourâ said: just wanted 2 say iâm orthodox & agree w shira!
Thanks for all the great answers, everyone!
When you check your word count, and itâs only at 20 words:

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FORGOTTEN SUNÂ a wip (re)introduction by @mahalii
genre : diesel-punk with hints of magic class : novel series outlined for three to five books current status : first draft ( 35k / 100k ) narration : third-person limited, multiple povs themes and tropes : the chosen one, found family, platonic and romantic love, enemies to friends to lovers, mutual pining + unrequited love, adventure, dead magic systems, warfare and imperialism, recovering from trauma, political intrigue, unlocking secrets of the past, and the fight for freedom content warnings : a lot of death, gun fights, the horrors of war, and light descriptions of gore and blood
ââ  SUMMARY.
Alas, a millennium has passed since the warring twin cities have collapsed to ruin. Mankind is thriving. Deep in the glistening heart of the cities, airships of steel are found drifting along the clouds instead of the sea, rotormobiles roar on streets filled with pedestrians and their bot counterparts, and biplanes soar even higher than the spires of high-rises streaming with gold. Itâs an age full of wonder. And an age full of a horrific and long-waged world war.Â
Yet this all remains unbeknownst to Jenya Nasangkai, whose tedious life in seclusion bids her to wish for something phenomenal. But phenomenal has its price. In an instant, her entire world is flipped upside down when the merciless Kingsmen of the Imperial Realm raid her homeland, and all that sheâs ever known is gone. Now left with nothing but a vengeful heart and mind, Jenya sets off on a fiery journey of dethroning the Emperor and ending this madness once and for all. But she isnât alone.
A pilot arrested for something he did not do. A wanderer who canât remember her own past. A robot who isnât quite the same as those in the cities. A princess with high ambitions for her kingdom. A captain sworn to defend the throne. A soldier with his heart set on answers. An assassin sent to retrieve a special ring.
And itâs that same ring the Emperor killed thousands for just to have it in his hands. In a desperate pursuit of solving clues and unearthing secrets of the past before itâs too late, the team must put their differences aside if it means putting an end to this war for good. And they might. If they can find a long-prophesied Savior destined to bring peace to the entire world.
ââ MAIN CAST.
JENYA NASANGKAI. the reason. raven-black hair that falls past her waist; a tanned frame dappled with light freckles; bitter, seething anger and grief pulsating through her blood and veins. or could that be something else?
BENJAMIN KIRSCHT. the question. ash brown waves that flow with the wind; prominent veins trailing slender hands; deep scars and bruises from past adventures.Â
RORIE DEROUX. the sign. golden hair that never meets her shoulders; chapped lips known to curl into a grin; dirt-smeared hands familiar with shooting a rifle.
PLEX. the answer. a silver gloss now hidden with tarnished rust; pliant limbs as tall as two men; small plants growing in-between cracks and long crevices. Â
ZUZANNA KAESOR. the voice. golden-brown skin with an unblemished glow; marigolds and blue cornflowers hiding within handsome brunette curls; a silver septum ring to demonstrate rule.Â
JIAN ZOĂ. the guide. jet-black wisps framing a sharp face; a blade from the finest metals sworn to never shed anotherâs blood. red-tinted lips sharing wisdom greater than even the wisest of men.
DARCI RISHKA. the revelation. features that can pass off as a corpse; a crooked nose that steers out of othersâ business; mounds of grief and guilt buried even deeper than the bullet wounds of his fallen comrades.
THE RED SOLDIER. the mystery. hands stained with the blood of a thousand men; an unknown face hidden beneath the comforts of a golden helmet; voices in their head telling them to trust no one, even if that includes the emperor their heart pledged to serve.
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