expanding a bit on the Prunella idea, because it wonât leave me alone:
I think reworking Prunella as an urban fantasy would be super interesting. I know I could probably do a straight retelling and do just fine, since thereâs barely any adaptations of the story period (much less retellings), but I think placing it into a modern setting would be super interesting.Â
Iâm also thinking about the pros and cons of worldbuilding a âcity witchâ concept; trying to decide whether I want an underground society with appointed witches as city protectors, witches as the modern equivalent of the village wisewoman, or just going all in with âthis is an urban magical society and Prunella just gets REALLY unlucky and runs afoul of a mean witch.â
Iâd have to change the tasks that the Witch makes Prunella complete, since âbaking bread from scratchâ doesnât really imply the same level of difficulty in a modern setting that it does in the original tale, but thatâs easy enough to work around (all things considered). The Witchâs sister could live in the next city over, and some of the tasks there could be translated into modern-day equivalents.Â
I also think Iâd change the timeline a bit, because I donât really like the witch kidnapping Prunella as a child, justâŚtaking care of her for years and years, and only THEN abruptly deciding to kill her years later. Maybe this all happens when Prunella is an older teenager (maybe 17/18) and takes place over a couple of years (instead of a decade or so). And it would be a fun brain exercise to build the romance between Prunella and Ben as a âthey bond over Ben showing her how to control and use her magic when his mother isnât watchingâ thing.
And thereâs definitely some serious elements to be found (Prunella and Ben as abuse survivors, the whole kidnapping/indentured servitude thing, and child abandonment/neglect, for example), but the main point would be that âpush and pullâ relationship between this super stubborn and independent girl and the nice boy who just wants to help her but isnât afraid to give as good as he gets and jokes about taking a kiss as payment every time