#sparta!

As Danny did time travel as he fought against Vlad most of the time, he was one of the few historical figures. He had been in ancient Sparta, thanks to his grandfather Ares. Ares had been Jack's father: He was taken in and somehow turned into Leonidas of the History Lesson with his 300!

Well, he came back buff and huge. At least Amity Park is weird and just accepted that he came back massively Huge. Amity Park:" He had the Jack Puberty while away." (Shuumatsu Leonidas)

Vlad was Xerxes, as both did that whole war and battle. + Back in modern times, the 300 found their king easily. And he had a tiny heir! It's time to guard her!

The Spartan Ghosts always, and I mean always, follow Dani around! Dani:"No, I don't need protection! I am strong!" Sparta:" Of course you are strong! You are a Princess of Sparta!!" Dani:" Stop screaming that always!!" Spartan Ghost:" As the child of Leonidas! We make sure you are strong! But as your uncles, we make sure you are okay!"

What am I even supposed to be doing Quest wise?

I’m on about 500 pages of A4, size  12, single spacing, at halfway. Which means I’m well on my way to equalling the first draft wordcount which amount to around 1050 pages.

I would really like this to be shorter, simply because I don’t think there’s enough plot there to justify that amount of words.

So I’ve been thinking of beginning a retrace, and start the third draft whilst I continue on with Chapter 15, but I’m also starting to get shaky with the synopsis on from Chapter 15. I just need a moment to sit down and work it all out again probably....

Aaargh, god, it’s definitely better than before but I’ve just had a mess of ideas for scenes that would be really good and I don’t know what to do with it all.