May 14
Can you guys give me some feedback on the stuff i wrote here
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Can you guys give me some feedback on the stuff i wrote here
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I'm writing an episode of my show and I wanted to do an opening sketch where my character gives the worst possible movie pitch because her who deal is trying to take over the media landscape of earth but after writing this I felt like I should get some constructive criticism because I'm not sure if it's as funny as I think it is
Pitch meeting with bob iger
So like malcolm mcdowel is a chain smoking detective in miami and he has to team up with a femboy bouncer who was raised by feral dogs played by Doug Walker “you know Malcom McDowell is dead right?” Don’t worry we’ll fix it in post. So Malcolm McDowell has to go back in time to stop 9/11, and while he’s in the past he accidentally introduces Jeffery Epstein to Pol Pot “that’s not really brand safe” Anyway you know that part in Caligula where he puts a flower in a guy’s ass? I thought we could do that again with Ted Nugent “get the fuck out of my office”
Oooof.
An author I've subscribed to on AO3, I really like their work, and apparently they've blocked me.
Back when that feature got enabled, I accidentally blocked someone by being a fumble fingered fool juggling my phone, and then I went back and undid the block.
I can't kudos their most recent update and I'm mildly upset about it. No idea what I could have done that was block-worthy.
Is there an etiquette about this?
I can still leave a comment, apparently. Would it be socially acceptable to like, apologize proactively in a comment on the new fic? Or to ask if the block was intended?
I'm so confused 😕.
Feedback please 🥺🙏 ?
Song I made.
Please listen. Tell me what you think.
What do you prefer? (from creators who's work you're following)
Frequent/regular updates with abundant sneak peeks
Random updates maybe with a few sneak peeks
Frequent/regular updates without spoilers, just progress
Random updates without spoilers, just progress
One large update posted every once in a while with smaller updates in between
No updates, surprise me
No preference or your opinion varies per creator
Combination/something else I didn't think of/put it in the tags or comments/bald
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Hey guys, I have a huge favor to ask.
You know those kid's books I've been writing? Well, I have two in the bag, but my beta readers are really busy and haven't been able to do much. And I figured, hey, I got a bunch of people who already follow me for my writing, so why not ask them for help?
So, I'm going to link to a pair of google docs. If anyone could read through them and give me any feedback that you can, I'd really appreciate it. They're set to allow comments but not outside edits, so just use that.
And note I'm asking for any feedback, so long as it's constructive. Positive feedback is of course appreciated, as I need to know what works as well as what doesn't. By the same token, if something isn't working for you, please let me know as well. Thanks guys!
Chapter 1 The Ocean of the Night Every night, after she had gone to sleep and got up to dream, Lucy would check to see if the staircase was
Chapter 1 Her Only Friend Then… “Uh, Lucy? There’s something I need to tell you…” “Huh?” Lucy wasn’t even looking at Kitty, instead stealing
Now taking suggestions for Tommy's favorite novel/manga/comic book. What do you think a nerdy highschool kid from like the late 90s/early 00s would be obsessed with?
(and if it helps to know how this factors into the story, Tommy will be gifting Z several books that end up reading a bunch)