How to avoid informed traits
You know those characters that are constantly referred to so smart or so capable or so sensitive (etc. etc.) by other characters or in the narration? And every time it comes up you find yourself shaking your head or rolling your eyes because the character in question Ā either is as bland as boiled potatoes or constantly acts in ways that contradict those claims without explanation?Ā
Thatās what is commonly called anĀ āinformed traitā. Youāre told the character is a certain way (or has a certain ability), but there is more or lessĀ nothing in the text to back that up.Ā
It goes the other way around, too, with informed flaws that are supposed to make a character more relatable or interesting - think almost every romantic comedy leading lady who is supposedlyĀ āshyā andĀ āclumsyā, but in a cute, endearing way that only ever comes up when the plot asks for it.Ā
Itās frustrating, distracting, incredibly dull and at times downright insulting to the reader to encounter a story where one or more characters have a bad case of this, but unfortunately, itās a pretty common weakness even in otherwise strong, well-written stories with interesting and complex character concepts.Ā
Since characters and how the reader feels about them (whether they are supposed to relate to them, look up to them or feel repulsed by them) can really make or break a story, informed traits are an easy trap to fall into and many a writerās Achilles heel.Ā
This is where the trusty old āShow, donāt tellā comes in. You have most likely been told before that itās usually better to go for subtlety and leave something to the readerās imagination than to spell it out, and that is true.Ā
Itās challenging to imply something without outright saying it. You have to get creative with the details you want to put into your story to get a point across by relying on your audienceās ability to read between the lines, and while itās absolutely worth it to go the extra mile, you also run the risk of making your narrative too stilted and contrived instead.Ā
However, there is a fairly simple trick to make your characterization feel more natural and insert it into the story smoothly:
Stop thinking of your characters as possessing certain traits and start thinking of their personalities as a collection of habits, preferences and specific abilities.Ā
It might not sound like that big of a difference, but it will make translating your character traits into text much, much easier and save you a lot of trouble while editing.Ā
Ā AĀ āsmartā character
This can mean a lot of things. You could have a character who is booksmart, learns quickly, reads a lot, can retain information easily and access it when needed, but has trouble applying theoretical knowledge in real life, someone who entertains their friends by telling them about weird facts and trivia, someone who can still recite poems they had to learn by heart when they were ten, someone with a tendency to talk in such complex run-on sentences they frequently forget what they were talking about half-way through.Ā
Or you could have a character who is good at problem-solving instead, who likes puzzles and riddles, who gleefully obsesses over odd problems to find even odder solutions, but thinks so far out of the box in order to remain engaged in their current task they often miss the forest for the trees. Ā
AĀ ābraveā character
Try to instead make a character who can never resist a challenge, who is a thrill-seeker and went bungee jumping about a dozen times already, who enjoys dragging their friends on the most dangerous looking rides in an amusement park and endlessly teases them about how pale they went afterwards. Make someone who simply cannot stand by when they see someone else get bullied, someone with a collection of scars they wear proudly and a story to tell about each one.
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A āshyā character
Forget about characters who blush prettily when spoken to and thatās it. Instead, write about a character who canāt make eye contact without forcing themselves to, who stumbles over their own words when talking to strangers, who is afraid of wearing bright colours because it might draw attention to them, someone who is humble and polite, but distant and comes across as cold or uncaring because they have tendency to hide their insecurity by retreating into themselves, even though seeming rude is the last thing on their mind.
Insert these habits into the story wherever they fit best. Be consistent in the portrayal of your characterās behaviour, even as character development kicks in. Adjust deliberately, but reasonably. After all, old habits die hard, so having your character break with one, however minor, can be a powerful moment with just as much emotional resonance as a flashy, dramatic scene meant to convey the same sentiment, and any ābigā scenes will likely feel more organic if the reader has already seen traces of the necessary character changes before.Ā
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