Fan Changyu: I've only liked you in this life
Xie Zheng: you had a fiance though
Fan Changyu: I didn't like him
Xie Zheng: YOU GAVE HIM A PRESENT
Fan Changyu: I was like eight when I gave him that present, didn't you ever give girls presents at that age?
Xie Zheng: no, because I am faithful, UNLIKE OTHERS
Fan Changyu: we didn't even know each other back then!
Xie Zheng: IRRELEVANT
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Talking to @academyofbrokenhearts about Novel!Xie Zheng from Chasing Jade too much and it seems like there are two reasons that he has misunderstandings with Fan Changyu
He does something subtle/upper class court drama and it flies right over her head. Example: he's unhappy with her so he stops wearing the hair tie she bought him. He seems to think she should know she's fallen out of favour, I'm sure a woman from the capital would know this, but our girl is like, "Do you want a different hair tie? If you don't wear it, you must not like it" because she doesn't do subtle
He projects his Extreme Romantic Feelings onto her and is disappointed when she doesn't act the way he expects. (I think he got bored and read some very dramatic romance novels at some point) Example: When he's going to leave Lin'an town, it's a huge deal for him and he's all in love, but she is way too calm and offers him the agreed upon divorce letters, as she does in her practical way. I think he fully expected her to like, sob and beg him to stay and then he would have been all happy, but that is not Fan Changyu and it never will be
I think his return after the break-up is both of these, because he expects her to understand that if he said he wouldn't appear before her again, and then he appears, she should know that he's back to be with her, but she just assumes they are in the same place as military colleagues. And she also doesn't deliver on the Dramatic Romantic side... he's so offended and he has zero right to be, but it makes sense with his unique way of thinking and the fact that he's super young and actually has no experience "dating" (his fake wife)
The sharp sword tip pierced the eunuch’s leg, causing him to cry out in agony. Qi Sheng felt the malice screaming in his heart find an outlet in that scream of pain, and every pore in his body suddenly felt relieved.
In an excellent mood, he stabbed the old eunuch again, watching as the blood stained his imperial yellow dragon robe red. He laughed with satisfaction. “What a beautiful color. No wonder Xie Zheng’s eight hundred personal guards are called the Blood Robe Cavalry.”
The old eunuch was already convulsing in pain, trying to crawl away on all fours. However, Qi Sheng, as if discovering a new toy, began wielding the dragon sword like a cleaver. Gripping the hilt with both hands, he hacked at the old eunuch as if chopping vegetables, venting all his rage.
The old eunuch’s pleas for mercy soon turned into incoherent screams, and eventually, he could no longer even cry out.
The floor tiles of the great hall were splattered with blood and bits of flesh.
Qi Sheng only stopped when his arms grew too tired to swing the sword. He looked at the corpse he had hacked into a pile of mangled flesh, threw aside the sword, and called for young eunuchs to come in and clean up. Then he returned to his dragon throne to catch his breath.
The drama writers read this and said "no, you know what? let's just turn him into an utter inoffensive moron instead".
One minor thing that we were robbed of in Pursuit of Jade is that Fan Changyu took one of Xie Zheng's best soldiers and permanently assigned him to protect her sister, which is very rational because her sister had been previously kidnapped, but this man got to spend months like, herding ducks with Changing and being fed by Aunt Zhao and it would have been adorable to see
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I'm in love with how she constantly treats him like a gentle damsel, promising to take care of him (and kill as many pigs as needed, obviously XD). I imagine no one has EVER treated a tough general like that in his entire existence XD If I were him, I'd be gone for her in like a few minutes of such treatment :3
I always wonder what he was thinking when she told him this? He is a general and a seasoned warrior (but she doesn’t know that). He fell hard for a female butcher!!!!!!
“Afraid that he might misunderstand her intentions, Changyu gritted her teeth and lied against her conscience: “Don’t worry, I have no designs on you. I… I haven’t gotten over my former fiancé yet! After all, we were childhood sweethearts. He was so handsome and so smart, the only one in the entire county to pass the provincial examination. How could I say I’ve gotten over him when I haven’t?”
Girl…. No wonder Xie Zheng was so fixated on scholars
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I think one of my least favourite arguments from the PoJ drama enjoyers has to be "they changed Fan Changyu's motivations in the show" spoken as if it's this huge reveal that it's supposed to make me like the show more. Yeah, I know they did, it's no secret, it's actually one of my main issues with the writing in that goddamn show.
@allmyawesomeness gonna reply here in order not to write an entire essay in the comments.
The issue, in my opinion, is twofold.
For whatever reason (the streets are saying that the production company was much to blame here), the writers got weirdly attached to certain settings (Lin'an town) and certain characters, that ended up either overstaying their welcome in the show (the pig butcher gang and Sui Yuanqing - and yes, you can quote me on this) or having such repetitive and/or nonsensical scenes that the overall plot suffered thanks to them (Qi Min and Li Huaian, the latter being a composite of two characters that were in opposite political camps in the book, just in case you were wondering how much thought the show writers put into the political part of the show; not much).
Now, if you're a good writer, this should not pose a problem. If the character motivations, or the characters themselves change in your adaptation, you can still end up with a good, solid story, assuming that you factor in the aforementioned changes in your plot. And here the second issue pops up. The writers wanted to both expand on and change things according to whatever subplots and characters they favoured, but they also wanted to keep as many scenes from the novel as possible, and so they ended up with a complete mess, because you can't introduce random changes to the show plot and then expect the book scenes to still fit in smoothly.
If Fan Changyu is solely driven by her desire to return to Lin'an and rebuild it, then she doesn't need to stay in the army at all; she doesn't even need to enroll in the army in the first place. Her army career in the show comes across as just a temporary thing she does before she returns to Lin'an, and (presumably) resumes pig butchering, up until the very end, when the viewer is surprised to see that she is in fact still in the army, alongside Xie Zheng. Similarly, there is no need for Xie Zheng to ever mention revenge in the show, since it's not what it drives him forward; we don't spend much time on how his father's death affected him, and Fan Changyu's identity reveal barely has an impact on him.
Moreover, the writers seemed to have a huge issue in distinguishing what was important and what was not. We ended up with many crucial book scenes that were not included, or were shortened, with other book scenes that were included, but had their impact and meaning severely diminished by the changed circumstances of the overall plot (the whipping scene is probably one of the best examples), and with a lot of irrelevant scenes that could have been omitted with no issue (Fan Changyu's wannabe comedic tutor montage).
Changyu rejection towards Xie Zheng's marriage proposal the first time after she knew his real identity is actually interesting because while it's understandable why she rejected him, Xie Zheng is also not lying when he said that no one would dare to laugh at their marriage despite their difference in status.
Xie Zheng is powerful and influential, some of the most important officials in the kingdom and even the emperor are scared of him. If he truly wanted to marry someone, no one would actually dare to tell him no. Sure, people would talk about it behind their backs, but no one is brave enough to try to offend Changyu despite the difference in status between them. Being his marchioness would mean that people would try to placate her to try to gain Xie Zheng's favor through her (or maybe she would end up as a target if they knew how much Xie Zheng loves her).
This is also the reason why Xie Zheng told the royal princess not to reveal his relationship with Changyu in the capital before he went back to the capital, because he isn't there yet to protect Changyu if someone decided to mess with her, but reveal it by himself in front of the entire citizen once he goes back.
Changyu being Xie Zheng's only love one is interesting to the whole world because after all this time the Marquis of Wu'an finally have a weakness and people would surely take advantage of it.
Because it was confusing in the novel and somehow more confusing in the drama, this is what happened in Pursuit of Jade (spoilers, obviously):
Wei Yan was in love with a childhood friend and was supposed to marry her. She suddenly married into the palace as a consort (Novel: this was because her cousin, the empress, was losing power to another consort so they sent her a cousin to help). He never had an affair with her, but this is the only woman he ever loved.
Wei Yan and his brother-in-law, Xie Zheng's father, were friends with the crown prince. The crown prince already had a son, Qi Min, and because of this the line of succession goes Crown Prince - Qi Min - go back up the tree for other sons of the emperor. However, the emperor has been favouring another prince recently and he can always switch crown princes. So Wei Yan, when drunk, says, "Why not just replace the emperor?" This is treason, so bad idea.
Because of this threat, the former emperor frames Wei Yan. He drugs Wei Yan with an aphrodisiac first. It seems like Wei Yan slept with a maid instead of his One True Love, but the emperor still pretends the consort is pregnant. The emperor starts interrogating the consort.
Wei Yan and Xie Zheng's father are supposed to defend a city from another attacking nation. General Xie is already there with the crown prince, Wei Yan is bringing food/reinforcements. Wei Yan hears about what is happening with the consort and turns back, but he gives Fan Changyu's father, Wei Qilin, the tiger tally so that the troops and food will still arrive.
The Sui family claims the tally is fake. The city falls, General Xie dies along with the crown prince, all the blame is pinned on Wei Qilin. Back at the capital, Wei Yan realizes this is all a plot to kill/impeach him. The consort lets herself die in a fire in an attempt to save Wei Yan. Wei Yan goes scorched earth and kills everyone, deposes the emperor, and installs a puppet baby emperor, Qi Sheng.
In the chaos, the crown princess, afraid that Wei Yan will kill her son too, sets the palace on fire and burns Qi Min's face and then hides him in the Sui family. The real Sui kid is dead.
At this point, Wei Yan's #1 priority, besides having All the Power, is keeping the consort free from blame. So he lets all the blame fall on Wei Qilin, who fakes his death and takes the identity of the dead Fan son. Wei Yan's sister, Xie Zheng's mom, realizes that she knows too much, so to save Xie Zheng, she commits suicide. Now she's not a threat and she hopes Wei Yan will keep her son alive (he does).
Wei Yan marries his already-pregnant wife and claims Wei Xuan as his own, but he's not his child and he prefers his nephew, Xie Zheng (though this preference doesn't mean he's nice at all. In the novel he lets Wei Xuan torment Xie Zheng pretty severely, probably to "toughen him up" or whatever, we see this in a flashback in the drama.)
Everything is basically chill for 17 years.
Xie Zheng takes back the city his father lost and kills all the citizens of the other country within it. This is 1:1 revenge, it's what the other country did to them, but that is why his reputation is so bad and why he's surprised that Fan Changyu praises him at his fake funeral.
The Sui family wants to rebel, and Qi Min, hidden within them, wants to use their rebellion to claim the throne for himself. The Li family also wants this so they can finally get rid of Wei Yan. The Sui family leak information to Xie Zheng in an attempt to drive a wedge between the two of them.
Xie Zheng starts to investigate the truth. Now this is where the drama was so strange and blamed Wei Xuan for the assassination attempt. It was Wei Yan in the novel. Let's just pretend he did it in the drama too because that makes more sense. Wei Yan is so desperate to keep his secret that he tries to kill his own nephew to bury the truth.
Wei Yan, fearing the truth will finally get out, tries to kill the entire Wei/Fan family, as they are the last real witnesses. This is why assassins come for Fan Changyu. General He, who has been in very sneaky contact with the Wei/Fan family, receives the Letter of Evidence and they commit suicide in front of him to save their two daughters.
And I think that explains everything. So the Biggest Bad was the former emperor, who tried to frame Wei Yan. Wei Yan still sucks because he killed many, many people to keep his secret. Wei Qilin, Fan Changyu's father, was innocent. The Li & Sui families are guilty of attempted rebellion. Qi Min was the true heir to the throne.
In the little extra scene at the end: Wei Yan gets to try again, he marries his one true love and everything turns out better. In this version, Fan Changyu and Xie Zheng are jokingly betrothed from birth and end up together as before. I think the point of this extra was actually for the author to assure us that even if Xie Zheng had a happy childhood, he'd still be weird and intense.
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