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Some recent evidence, in bullet form:

Pope Leo XIV, yes that guy, released his first encyclical—a formal letter to all Catholic bishops around the world, and therefore all 1.5 billion Catholics—and it was about AI. The last papal encyclical, by Pope Francis, was on "the human and divine love of the heart of Jesus Christ." Not AI. Pope Leo's encyclical, "Magnifica humanitas," is specifically about "safeguarding the human person in the age of artificial intelligence." One Anthropic's co-founders spoke alongside the Pope when the encyclical was released.

Late May rung to the sounds of graduating undergraduates booing commencement speeches extolling the virtues of AI, including a speech by ex-Google CEO Eric Schmidt.

Related: this angry post by Marisa Kabas, "Hating AI is good, actually"

Then, just before the end of the month, Matteo Wong (whose work I like very much) wrote a story for The Atlantic about how AI detection tools like Pangram could lead to mistakes and accusations that "could very quickly spiral into a witch hunt."

Related: this cranky LinkedIn post from the editor of City AM, decrying AI slop. "We will never be a dumping ground for your AI slop," quoth Christian May.

Then today, as the sort of cherry on top, UPenn's Ethan Mollick, a supreme AI Knower and Booster if there ever was one, published his take on Claude 5 Fable, the "Mythos-class" model that Anthropic just released. The model is so good that it "suggests our relationship with AI is changing in drastic ways," writes Mollick. To wit: "I can still steer Fable, and it follows instructions remarkably well: the more ambitious the instruction, the better the result. But steering is no longer the same as doing. I brief the model, it spins up its own agents to research and write and check one another’s work, and what comes back is finished. A patron commissions a single artist. Fable is closer to a whole studio, where I am the client who signs off on the final work without ever setting foot on the floor."

All in all, weird stuff. The singularity approaches? If it does, how will the people react?

Now, here's some Dylan. "And you better start swimming, or you'll sink like a stone / for the times, they are a-changin'"

*Title adapted from David Shields's Reality Hunger; the original line is "If my forgeries are hung long enough in the museum, they become real."

I recently wrapped up my most recent Hugo House class, and we looked at Shield's The Thing About Life is That One Day You'll Be Dead, which led me to reread RH. A book that "argues that our culture is obsessed with “reality,” precisely because we experience hardly any" felt like the right book for the moment.

One review I read of F'sP is that it's a "thinking man's DaVinci Code" (I'm paraphrasing) and that's an apt description. It is deliberately overwritten, there's a cast of postmodernist-y intellectual characters (including several who work in a publishing house), and there's a mysterious maybe-real, maybe-not-real conspiracy (theory) that runs through the book.

As I said, I'm not exactly enjoying F'sP, even if I am the ideal audience for it: overeducated, over-literated, and with a tendency to read knotty prose by the likes of William Gaddis and James Agee. For god's sake, Let Us Now Praise Famous Men is one of my favorite books. Then again, I haven't read it in full since graduate school.

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Another piece of, ah, art (?) that I recently 100% enjoyed is Mission Impossible: The Final Reckoning. The final (Tom means it, guys!) Mission Impossible film, MI: TFR is almost three hours long but it doesn't feel like that.

In the movie, Tom Cruise, who has thickened but barely wrinkled with age, fights a bad AI—it's timely!—and the movie comes to a crashing, satisfying ending after a sequence in which Simon Pegg simultaneously performs surgery on himself, in a Ronin reference, while Tom Cruise and Esai Morales battle in mid-air, with fists, in a red-biplane-on-yellow-biplane chase, all while Angela Bassett, who plays POTUS, decides not to nuke the world to prevent the bad AI from taking over after Nick fucking Offerman, the Chairman of the Joint Chiefs (LOL) takes a bullet for her. It's the shit.

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So where does this leave me? Am I actually into mass market Tom Cruise fluff even if I like to project, falsely, that I am bookish person who prefers dense tomes to anything even vaguely approachable? Do I prefer Die Hard or Finnegan's Wake? Etc.

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But why not both, asks Bill Orcutt's Music for Four Guitars.

Orcutt, for the uninitiated, began his career making VERY difficult music as part of the noise rock outfit Harry Pussy—yes, that was their name—and then graduated to making slightly less difficult but still fairly atonal improvised guitar rock. Here's "Brace Up," from his 2018 record of the same name with the drummer Chris Corsano.

Not exactly easy listening, even if it does rip in a grit-your-teeth sort of way.

Then in 2022, Orcutt released Music for Four Guitars. Less than thirty minutes of lightly distorted, mesmerizing, picked guitar music that reminds me of both minimalism (Phililp Glass) and folk guitar (John Fahey), MfFG is a revelation. The music, if not entirely rhythmic, is compelling and continuously listenable in a way that few of his earlier records were. The key is the second part of that description—continuously listenable. To cite another example, Orcutt's 2009 record A New Way to Pay Old Debts is compelling but is definitely not cocktail-hour music.

So the morale of this particular story is, I suppose, balance. Quoth Thanos, in the uber-entertaining Avengers: Infinity War, "Perfectly balanced. As all things should be."

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*By "reading" I mean that I read it intermittently for a few weeks, then got distracted by things I'm teaching in my HH class + an incredibly dense history of the Vikings that showed up in the little free library outside my house, Children of Ember and Ash. For a book with lots of references to grave goods, it's pretty compelling.

Sure, maybe Geese didn't exactly conquer the masses, but they did eventually play two songs from Getting Killed on SNL. And if an SNL appearance isn't an adjunct for "this is popular rn," then I don't know what is. Sadly, Geese did not play the best, wildest song from their new album, the 6.5-minute "Long Island City Here I Come" which features the lines "I knew a man / he sat at a desk that a million feet wide / but he lay down his hammer and he died / I knew a man / big and fat / born without arms or legs / born to jump in the air and clap."

Getting Killed is a fine album. It's pretty good. But what it was being lauded for—e.g., Geese singer Cameron Winter "sounds off-balance, groggy, and barely sane, like someone who’s stumbled onto the street after three days of doomscrolling"—is hardly new. When The Atlantic* published an article (which the previous quote is taken from) about it under the headline "Finally, a New Idea in Rock and Roll," I could almost hear Captain Beefheart rolling angrily in his weird grave.

Art that is wild and unhinged is hardly new. Nor are artists—or in this case, frontmen—acting wildly and unhingedly (sp?) as a form of entertainment and self-expression. See Osbourne, Ozzy.

What I appreciated about the Geese-discourse, nonetheless, is how it tiptoed close to the truth of the time we're living through. Or back to the truth, because it seems we're right back where we were in 2014 with "Everybody Knows Sh*t's F*cked" and 1976 with Peter Finch's rant from Network (to name just two examples).

Unhingement, then, in the face of pretty much everything, is a defining feature of our age. We all know and feel this, and occasionally our art and the public discourse reflects it. Which brings to mind Harry Frankfurt's essay "On Bullshit," from 1986.

Just look at its opening graf:

One of the most salient features of our culture is that there is so much bullshit. Everyone knows this. Each of us contributes his share. But we tend to take the situation for granted. Most people are rather confident of their ability to recognize bullshit and to avoid being taken in by it. So the phenomenon has aroused much deliberate concern, nor attracted much sustained inquiry.

But just as much as unhingement is a sign of the times, its intermittency is as well. We can only take so much truth so often (perhaps this is why it can come out so crazily?). To wit: the week after Geese performed on SNL, Cardi B appeared and played "Bodega Baddie." Basically, we ping-pong between "I'm mad as hell, and I'm not gonna take this anymore! " and "let's have fun!" No wonder people/I feel crazy.

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Now, for some truly wild music, here's Shearling's one-song, hour-plus "Motherfucker, I am Both: "Amen" and "Hallelujah"." Come for the four minutes of atonal, feedbacky rock that opens the song, stay for Alex Kent's bonkers vocals.

I just spent another week in San Francisco; I've been coming to SF so often over the past year that it's beginning to feel familiar, like a home away from home, even though I don't really know the city all that well and find it geographically confusing. But I love running along the The Embarcadero.

San Francisco, especially in the AI age, is a strange town, and is the sort of place that leads to big thinking about the big forces shaping the world (and navel-gazing blog posts thereabout). SF's income inequality—and the dueling narratives about what life can and should be—shown by the city are probably starker here (I wrote this while sitting in SFO) than anywhere else in the country.

One the one hand, San Francisco is eye-poppingly beautiful, exudes a wild-eyed, tech-driven optimism about the future, and is a place where power is wielded by people who say things like "I talk to ChatGPT all of the time while I walk my dog" with a straight face. On the other hand, there's glaring poverty and grime; the city has a seemingly entrenched, often very publicly mentally ill homeless population; and there's the inequal reality of tech millionaires living alongside the working poor. As Inger Christensen put it in Alphabet, it is a place of "head-spinning / horizontal knowledge."

And that's part of the reason why, I guess, I keep coming back to work like an album recorded in the early 2000s, long before the debut of ChatGPT, before even the debut of The Apprentice and the public resurrection of Donald Trump's career. Because art is longer, if frequently less immediate (and more ephemeral), than the present.

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King Arthur: Old woman! Man pulling cart: Man! King Arthur: Man, sorry. What knight lives in that castle over there? Man pulling cart: I'm 37. King Arthur: What? Man pulling cart: I'm 37, I'm not old. King Arthur: Well, I can't just call you man. Man pulling cart: Well, you could say "Dennis". King Arthur: I didn't know you were called Dennis! Dennis: Well, you didn't bother to find out, did you? King Arthur: I did say sorry about the old woman, but from you behind you looked... Dennis: What I object to is you automatically treating me like an inferior! King Arthur: Well, I am king. Dennis: Oh king, eh, very nice. And how'd you get that, eh? By exploiting the workers, by hanging on to an outdated imperialist dogma which perpetuates the economic and social differences in our society. If there's ever going to be any progress... Woman: Dennis! There's some lovely filth down here—oooh. How do you do? King Arthur: How do you do good lady, I am Arthur, king of the Britons. Whose castle is that? Woman: King of the who? King Arthur: The Britons. Woman: Who are the Britons? King Arthur: Well, we all are, we are all Britons, and I am your king. Woman: Didn't know we had a king, I thought we were an autonomous collective. Dennis: You're fooling yourself—we're living in a dictatorship, a self-perpetuating autocracy in which the working classes... Woman: Oh there go you, bringing class into it again! Dennis: Well that's what it's all about, if only people would... King Arthur: Please, please, good people, I am in haste. Who lives in that castle? Woman: No one lives there. King Arthur: Then who is your lord? Woman: We don't have a lord. King Arthur: What?! Dennis: I told you, we're an anarcho-syndicalist commune. We take it in turns to act as a sort of executive officer for the week... King Arthur: Yes. Dennis: ...but all the decisions of that officer have to be ratified at a special biweekly meeting... King Arthur: Yes I see. Dennis: ...by a simply majority, in the case of purely internal affairs... King Arthur: Be quiet! Dennis: ...but in a two-thirds majority in the case of... King Arthur: Be quiet! I order you to be quiet! Woman: Order, eh. Who does he think he is? King Arthur: I am your king! Woman: Well I didn't vote for you. King Arthur: You don't vote for kings! Woman: Well how'd you become king then? King Arthur: The lady of the lake—her arm clad in the purest shimmering samite—held aloft Excalibur from the bosom of the water, signifying by divine providence that I, Arthur, was to carry Excalibur. THAT is why I am your king! Dennis: Listen. Strange women lying in ponds, distributing swords, is no basis for a system of government. Supreme executive power derives from a mandate from the masses, not from some farcical aquatic ceremony. King Arthur: BE quiet! Dennis: But you can't expect to wield supreme executive power just cause some watery tart threw a sword at you! King Arthur: Shut UP! Dennis: If I went round, saying I was an emperor just because some moistened bink had lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away! King Arthur: Shut up, will you shut up! Dennis: Ah, now we see the violence inherent in the system! King Arthur: Shut up! Dennis: Come and see the violence inherent in the system! Help, help, I'm being repressed! King Arthur: Bloody peasant! Dennis: Oh what a giveaway! Did you hear that, did you hear that, eh? That's what I'm on about!

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Header image via Wikimedia Commons.

Gemini's definition of "anarcho-syndicalism" is as follows:

Anarcho-syndicalism is a form of anarchism that uses trade unions as the primary tool for social revolution and worker liberation. It combines anarchist principles with syndicalist strategies, aiming to abolish both capitalism and the state through worker-led direct action. 

Here's another the-Pythons-really-could-write scene, the (in)famous Spanish Inquisition sketch:

But that's not the world we live in, is it? Corporations and federal grantees may be dropping DEI programs at gunpoint, the language of politics may have become shockingly blunt (3), but the world is still an infinitely complicated gray web of overlapping interdependencies, comprised of people of all colors, races, and creeds. Tariffs or no tariffs. Which brings me to the Southern writer Shelby Foote.

My wife and I are currently re-watching Ken Burns's The Civil War, and it's as gripping as when we initially watched it 10+ years ago. Sure, it's got the same drawbacks as all of Burns's work—his over-reliance on certain talking heads colors his projects (think Wynton Marsalis's devotion to classical jazz and how that impacted the story & focus of Jazz)—but The Civil War is nonetheless simultaneously entertaining & somber & thought-provoking. It's a masterpiece.

In episode 7, about 1864 (when the war seemed endless), there's a section on the Confederate general Nathan Bedford Forrest, whom the The Civil War talking head & historian Ed Bearss calls "the most colorful man of the war," and whom Foote—probably the series's main & certainly most engaging talking head—calls "a natural genius" while smirking.

Let the record show that Forrest was not a good guy; he was a slave owner and slave trader, during the war his men massacred hundreds of largely Black soldiers at Fort Pillow, and he was the first Grand Wizard of the KKK. Nonetheless, Nathan Bedford Forrest WAS a highly interesting and successful general, and it's fair for Foote to praise him. After all, Foote was a fiction writer, and as such was interested in characters.

Indeed, in a Paris Review interview, Foote called Forrest "one of the most attractive men who ever walked through the pages of history," and goes on to point out that "in hand-to-hand combat he killed thirty-one men, mostly in saber duels or pistol shootings, and he had thirty horses shot from under him." Forrest was also

a man, who, at the age of sixteen, had to raise six younger brothers and sisters after the death of his blacksmith father. He became a slave trader because that was a way of making enough money to support all those people and get wealthy. Forrest was worth about a million dollars when the war started, an alderman for the city of Memphis. He was by no means some cracker who came out of nowhere.

Foote caught hell for this; nothing, even needing to raise six younger siblings, excuses becoming a slave trader. No less than Ta-Nehisi Coates attributed this to Foote's "white romanticism," which with I don't disagree. But what I do disagree with is the seeming lack of appreciation for the quieter, less incendiary context Foote provides, and the pointed focus on the "blasting trumpets" aspect of what he said about Forrest.

Of course Foote was interested in Forrest: Foote was a Southerner and a writer, and Forrest was the Confederacy's most successful general, and a man who seemed to create stories his whole life! Moreover, Foote was an extremely detailed writer (4), whose work trucks in nuance.

Which is harder and less easy to digest than "so and so was bad, the end," but that's life, isn't it? And now, in April 2025, we're finding out in real time how slippery a slope—and how corrosive—resisting the reality of nuance can be.

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Here's Protomartyr's Joe Casey talking to Saved by Old Times: "But every album is political, and this one is also political, because things are kind of shit right now. I didn't want to write three records that said "hey, there's some bad stuff going on in the world" and then put out a record this year where it's like "no, everything's great, don't worry about it." Well, I kind of wanted to. I don't want to keep writing the same record over again, where it's like "life is miserable but we have to soldier on," but it seemed like there's so much stuff going on this year that we're going through it again - we just have to find new ways to talk about it.

Below is the Protomartyr song in question, which features not only trumpets blasting, but also the haunting and possibly apocryphal story of Elvis "looking for meaning in a cloud mass / sees the face of Joseph Stalin / and is disheartened."

JD Vance in Greenland recently: "Our message to Denmark is very simple," Vance said. "You have not done a good job by the people of Greenland. You have under-invested in the people of Greenland and you have under-invested in the security of this incredible, beautiful landmass."

I'm currently reading the first book of Foote's three-volume, ~3000 word The Civil War: A Narrative, and it's so rich with detail as to make nearly every other book of history I've read seem like an outline.

It's both a blessing and a curse to be less extremely online than I once was.* On the one hand, social media can be corrosive; on the other hand, social media can help one stay on top of the news. I only heard about Saskia's death a few weeks ago, when I logged into Instagram for the first time in ages (somehow I'd missed the Times obit). I was, to put it mildly, super bummed.

Saskia was the first writing teacher I really looked up to—I took a workshop with her when she was at Kenyon between 2000–2001—and though we fell out of regular touch, I eagerly read her books as soon they were published.

In addition to being a talented poet and editor, Saskia was, more importantly when I was 20/21 years old, cool: she invited our workshop to her apartment in Mt. Vernon one night, and I drank a Grolsch; she grew up with Guy Picciotto of Fugazi (my favorite band!!!) & so knew the band well & we drove from Gambier to Carnegie Mellon to see them play one Saturday morning (something I've written about previously); when she taught at Kenyon she tended to wear lots of black, effortlessly; and when I was applying to grad school, she told me to stay in NYC and not decamp for Minnesota, advice I ignored. Maybe I shouldn't have?

The older I get, the more of my heroes I say goodbye to. The good news, amen, I suppose, is that their work remains, and with it some small part of them. Here's her poem "Zwijgen," from Corridor:

I slept before a wall of books and they calmed everything in the room, even their contents, even me, woken by the cold and thrill, and still they said, like the Dutch verb for falling silent that English has no accommodation for in the attics and rafters of its intimacies.

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*Thanks to Musk & Zuckerberg—erstwhile combatants—for driving me from their respective websites.

Title taken from Saskia's poem of the same name, which opens her collection Divide These.

Header image of Fugazi, mainly Ian MacKaye here, playing "Waiting Room" during the CMU show. Here's the full (short) video from which the header screencap is taken:

And here's the video:

What Yong is saying isn't new, but it is nice and succinct. And one could easily replace the phrase "science journalism" with any sort of nonfiction writing/storytelling/creative discipline; the point is the placement of the writer between the material being turned into a story and the audience for that story. It's the writer's—the interlocutor's—job to ensure that the story being told is both true to the material and to the audience. They serve both masters, so to speak.

Which brings me (as does so much these days!) to artificial intelligence. If indeed "90% of online content" will be AI-generated by 2025, then the role writers/interlocutors play will be even more important—they will ensure trust.

Sure sure, that 90% number feels both picked out of thin air and likely to cover all sorts of clearly-just-marketing-or-spam "content," but the point remains that AI will likely make human writers and human curators all the more important. As Patrick Nathan put it in his book Image Control, in "the rushing flow of commodities, a dialectical approach to the art we make and the relationships we forge is the rock in the river, the stick in the spokes."

Meanwhile, to underscore my point, The Atlantic recently reported that an enormous database of pirated books has been used to train several large language models. "Upwards of 170,000 books, the majority published in the past 20 years" are included in a dataset called "Books3," which includes "nonfiction by Michael Pollan, Rebecca Solnit, and Jon Krakauer" and "thrillers by James Patterson and Stephen King and other fiction by George Saunders, Zadie Smith, and Junot Díaz."

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To which no less than Margaret Atwood responded thusly:

A former teacher of mine once said there was only one important question to be asked of a work of art: “Is it alive, or is it dead?” Judging from the results I’ve seen so far, AI can produce “art” of a kind. It sort of looks like art; it sort of sounds like art. But it’s made by a Stepford Author. And it’s dead.

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Header image, Brueghel the Elder's "The Alchemist," 1558, ink on paper, via Wikimedia Commons.

Yes, the title is a reference to the Walter Benjamin essay.

*Speaking of truisms:

Because it's broadly popular, filled with wacky stories (see Ellis, Dock), and is our most data-driven sport, baseball is an excellent data storytelling teaching tool.

One of the first exercises I did with my class was very simple—we examined two players' lifetime stats, namely Rickey Henderson's and Von Hayes's, and looked for stories therein. There was no number crunching or anything, just numbers. Like so:

Rickey Henderson

Von Hayes

Granted, I'm a baseball nerd, so the idea of looking at rows of stats and seeing which (if any) stories jump out sounds like fun to me. To wit: Henderson is the all-time leader in both stolen bases and times caught stealing, which tells you much about his appetite for risk.

And Von Hayes, who mainly played for the Phillies and whom I met when I was kid (hence his inclusion) had a much shorter, less illustrious career shortened by injury. That leads one to wonder about how he dealt with disappointment, what his career might have looked like otherwise, etc. etc.

Number-induced navel gazing aside, being able to see stories in numbers, or at least the beginnings of stories, is a useful skill to cultivate in such a data-driven time. After all, life is weather, life is data (to butcher James Salter). And, huh, what on earth was Rickey up to in 1989??

Maybe Robert Angell's brief, masterful "Rickey," from The New Yorker, can tell us:

"Everything about him made you wince and gasp at the same time. How does a major-league ballplayer, for instance, end up playing for nine different teams, while also rejoining his first team, the Oakland Athletics, four times?"

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The title of this post is borrowed from a Rickey Henderson quote which may be apocryphal but I choose to believe that it isn't. He supposedly muttered this to himself in Seattle, just after striking out. The man did refer to himself in the third person frequently.

Header image of Rickey stealing second via Wikimedia Commons.

Rickey Henderson and Von Hayes stats via Baseball Reference.

PS: Here's Rickey hitting a home run in his first at-bat as a Mariner. He was 41 at the time. Just spectacular.

Briefly, cluster munitions are "any of a number of weapons systems which ... deliver clusters of smaller explosive submunitions onto a target," according to the Convention on Cluster Munitions. They have a "propensity to leave behind large numbers of unexploded remnants which exact an even greater indiscriminate toll amongst civilians."

The weapons we're sending to Ukraine contain 88 "bomblets" in each round, and each "bomblet has a lethal range of about 10 square meters, so a single canister can cover an area up to 30,000 square meters (about 7.5 acres), depending upon the height it releases the bomblets."

This is obviously bound to cause harm after the war is over. How much harm is the question—tracking mine and cluster-munition injuries is difficult, and the data are poor.

The Global Burden of Disease doesn't include separate causes for mine or munition-related injuries/deaths (they're lumped under "conflict and terrorism"), and the ICD-10 doesn't even include a code relating specifically to cluster munitions; Y36.81, "explosion of mine placed during war operations but exploding after cessation of hostilities," comes closest.

Nonetheless, even if the data are poorly classified and/or underreported, land mines, cluster munitions, and other "explosive remnants of war" (ERW) clearly constitute an ongoing threat.

Stats: during the Vietnam War, the US military dropped more than 250 million cluster munitions, of which 9 to 27 million unexploded submunitions remain. And according to the Landmine & Cluster Munition Monitor, "since global tracking began in 1999 the Monitor has recorded more than 122,000" casualties due to land mines and/or ERW.

Here, from the same organization, is a map showing current (2018) cluster munition "contamination" around the world. Red and dark red = bad.

To put the harm cluster munitions cause in more human terms, here's a picture of farmers from Vietnam who were injured by leftover bomblets.

Of course, not everyone agrees that the US shouldn't send Ukraine cluster munitions.

Turkiye began sending Ukraine cluster munitions earlier this year, and Russia has been using them against Ukraine for some time, as the Washington Post's Max Boot points out:

Boot's use of the term moral equivalence—even if he's denying that there is one in this case—brings to mind Noam Chomsky's characteristically forceful take on the phrase:

"Moral equivalence is a term of propaganda that was invented to try to prevent us from looking at what the acts for which we are responsible ... I reject that reasoning."

Perhaps a simpler way to look at this whole clusterfuck is: two wrongs don't make a right. Take it away, Barrett Strong.

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Header image via Wikimedia Commons.

Cluster bomb victims' hands also via Wikimedia Commons.

Etymology bonus: the term "clusterfuck," in the sense of "bungled or confused undertaking" or "fuckup," arose as military slang during the Vietnam War.

Endings have always struck me as the most important part of a piece of writing, after (maybe?) the title & lede. It's the ending that sticks with the reader and leads to rereading & reexamining. And of course endings, outside of writing, can color how you think of an entire experience.

A famous example from poetry is the final line of James Wright's "Lying in a Hammock in William Duffy's Farm in Pine Island, Minnesota," in which the ending turns the entire bucolic-before-the-last-line poem on its head. Here are the last seven lines (from a thirteen-line poem):

To my right, In a field of sunlight between two pines, The droppings of last year's horses Blaze up into golden stones. I lean back, as the evening darkens and comes on. A chicken hawk floats over, looking for home. I have wasted my life.

Oof.

Then there are the sorts of endings that the generally intense post-punk band Protomartyr excels at, the ending that everything builds toward. This sort of songwriting—writing for the end—may be the most defining characteristic of their new album Formal Growth in the Desert, the band's sixth full-length.*

A good example of this is "Polacrilex Kid," a song named after one of the ingredients in nicotine gum that includes the lyrics "keep the hate in your mouth / buy it drinks / keep it fed." The last two minutes of the song, in which Protomartyr's singer Joe Casey shifts from shouting to almost crooning the lines "can you / hate yourself / and still deserve love?" are particularly devastating.

Likewise, the last minute of "We Know the Rats" is the reason I keep coming back to that song. I actually don't love the first ~2 minutes of the WKtR; my main criticism of the Formal Growth in the Desert overall is that a number of the songs seem to stutter at the start before settling into themselves.

Nonetheless, boy oh boy does "We Know the Rats" ever settle into itself: "so collect those tears / and wash your face / the house is empty / but the work remains."

Finally, there's Kevin Prufer's new collection of poetry, The Fears**, which is forthcoming from Copper Canyon. I've yet to finish reading the book, but so far Prufer's endings are masterful. They're also exactly the sort of endings I was praising above, the kind that lead to reexamination.

Here, to close, are the final few lines of "A Body of Work," which seems an apropos way to end a post about endings.

For instance, I am alive, right here, in the middle of my poem, having had, perhaps, too much to drink. One comes, eventually, to the certainty that one’s body of work is nothing like another man’s progeny, being made of language, which can only veer toward emptiness as years become empty space. For instance, hello? I am calling out to you, folded here between the pages of generations. You don’t know me, but once I was particulate and alive. Now what am I?

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*Protomartyr rips; they may be my very favorite band of all time.

**I'll absolutely be writing about The Fears at length elsewhere, soon. Stay tuned.

Top photo of Protomartyr via the UT Connewitz Photo Crew's flickr.

As unpleasant as the Northwest's air was, and though it produced many a sensational headline, it remained a regional issue for much of the U.S., something the West and largely/only the West really experienced. And as such, it was easily ignored.

Then last week's northeastern airborne toxic event (to borrow DeLillo's term) took place. Now—or at least for a while!—we're all thinking about air pollution!

Better late than never. Per the State of Global Air map below, much of the world has been living with unacceptably high levels of PM2.5 in the air for years now (note that these are 2019 data, the most recent year for which data are available).

In the same year, "particulate matter" was the second-highest risk factor for health burden globally, higher than smoking. Of course, 2019 was four years ago; one can only wonder how things have progressed since.

For more, read Mike Brauer's Think Global Health piece today on wildfire smoke. "This new normal will worsen before it improves, so the challenge is to adapt to the reality of fire smoke and minimize its health impacts." Sigh!

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*I was also preoccupied with the astounding prevalence & growth of so-called high-income health issues (i.e., non-communicable diseases). In 2016, for example, the leading global cause of disease burden was cardiovascular diseases.

**in 2017. 2018 was also rough.

Top image of Tom Petty, playing "himself" in The Postman, via Vanity Fair. Here's the unforgettable scene where he meets Costner's character:

Air quality screenshot, which wasn't even the peak AQI number (!!!) for NYC, from AirNow. Grim PM2.5 map from State of Global Air 2020. Also, apropos:

Though I haven't finished formulating my thoughts about the book, so far its themes are similar to those present in Graham's work since 2008's Sea Change, i.e., worries about climate change, technology, and the anthropocene writ large. Here are the opening lines of "Translation Rain" from To 2040:

I am writing this in code because I cannot speak or say / the thing. The thing which should be, or I so wish / could be / plumbed fathomed disinterred from this silence, this ever thickening / silence through which, once, the long thin stalks & stems, first

(Quoting Jorie Graham is difficult since so many of her lines are enjambed, and because right-aligned lines bedevil online text editors.)

So with both my backlog & Graham's hesitation about technology in mind, I wondered: what might ChatGPT have to say about her work? Nothing about To 2040, of course—because of how it was trained, the tool has "limited knowledge of world and events after 2021" according to OpenAI. Nonetheless, asking ChatGPT about Jorie Graham's work, of all technophonbic-leaning writers, strikes me as particularly...poetic. I don't know whether she'd be amused or offended. Both?

Here's ChatGPT's first go, in response to "write 100 words about Jorie Graham's poetry":

Jorie Graham's poetry is a captivating exploration of language, consciousness, and the intricate threads that weave through our lives. Her verses shimmer with a remarkable blend of intellectual rigor and emotional resonance, challenging readers to engage with complex themes and ideas. Graham's language is lush and evocative, creating vivid images that dance across the page. Her poems often grapple with existential questions, probing the boundaries of identity and the nature of time. Through her profound insights and lyrical craftsmanship, Graham invites us into a world where language becomes a conduit for profound introspection, offering a glimpse into the mysterious depths of human experience.

Not too bad, but the prose is overly purple for my taste, and my dude really could have gone easier on the adjectives. What then, I wondered, would ChatGPT have to say about Graham's work in fewer words? Here's "write 50 words about Jorie Graham's poetry":

Jorie Graham's poetry is a lyrical exploration of the human experience, blending intricate imagery with philosophical depth. Her words unravel the complexities of existence, delving into themes of time, memory, and our connection to the natural world. Through her evocative language, Graham invites readers to contemplate the profound mysteries of life.

Better, but still a bit flowery and overly broad. We're getting there.

Last but not least, "write 25 words about technology in Jorie Graham's poetry":

Jorie Graham's poetry embraces technology's paradoxical nature, exploring its power to connect and isolate, to illuminate and obfuscate, revealing its complex impact on human existence.

Well done, ChatGPT—this is the best yet, if only because you've managed to describe AI's impact, at least in the early going: "to illuminate and obfuscate." Which also sounds like poetry's impact? Indeed, brevity is the soul of wit.

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Header image via Dall-E 2, generated by entering the prompt "painting of a robot typing after henri matisse," which was inspired by Matisse's "The Violinist at the Window" and Graham's "The Violinist at the Window, 1918" from Sea Change. The stunning opening lines of which read:

What do I mean by that? Well, the art that I think of as inspirational is the sort of art that makes one want to go out and make art of one’s own (or at least write reviews on one’s blog). How exactly one defines art-that-is-excellent-and-inspirational vs. art-that-is-simply-excellent is harder to define, and may in fact be entirely subjective, but I’ll just say that the art that inspires me tends toward the difficult and/or the meditative, which MfFG definitely is. It’s difficult and meditative.

MfFG is a collection of short, two minute-ish songs that’s clearly descended from minimalist compositions like Steve Reich’s Music for 18 Musicians (note the titles), albeit with a harder, electrified-guitar edge, as if Glenn Branca had snuck into a Reich ensemble.

That makes sense, because much of Orcutt’s work—going back to his time in the noise group Harry Pussy*** (yes, that was their name), a band New Noise Magazine described as “truly intimidating and strange”—has been atonal and aggressive, not the sort of music you’d put on for company. Which makes Music for Four Guitars that much more compelling, since it’s downright melodic and soothing compared to Orcutt’s earlier output. Sure, a touch of the caterwauling and feedback that marks Orcutt’s work is there, though not as stridently as before.

And this progression is part of what I find inspiring about the record. That and the transporting music, of course. Given the degree to which I’ve been grappling with and/or thinking about writer’s block, I’d say I’m on the hunt for inspiration. Have I been experiencing “a stress reaction that paralyzes the ability to put thoughts into words” as Canadian Family Medicine defines writer’s block? Uh, maybe? Regardless, work like Orcutt’s MfFG is eminently welcome. Experiencing the art of other artists can be just as pleasurable as creating art oneself.

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*All records?

**Orcutt, who is quite prolific, already has another record coming out. Jump On It releases 4/28 and is “a collection of canonical, mature acoustic guitar soli to contrast against the fractured downtown conceits of previous acoustic releases.”

***Here’s footage of Harry Pussy playing in 1997. Proceed at your own risk.

Additional notes:

Header image of Orcutt via the Del-Uks Flickr photostream.

Title of this blog post is taken from the song of the same name from MfFG.

Here’s a live performance of the entirety of Music for Four Guitars! It rules!

The two words do indeed go together nicely, as a sort of non-aural onomatopoeia, insofar as panic can lead to neglect of the thing that caused panic in the first place, thus leading to additional panic, then more neglect, ad infinitum.

Which is a Freudian way of viewing a psychological—or in the case of the TGH article, a social-psychological—response to shocks and stress; per Freud, repression is pushing “pathogenic experiences ... out of consciousness.”

But there’s another, possibly more sympathetic, way of viewing the panic-neglect duality: that we have simply too much to pay attention to. As an MIT paper points out, working memory has

a severely limited capacity: we can only hold a few thoughts in our consciousness at once. In other words, the surface area of our mental sketchpad is quite small. This limitation is obvious whenever we try to multitask, such as when we attempt to talk on the phone while writing an email, and it is why using our mobile phones while driving increases accident risk, even if we are using a hands-free set.

What’s more, maybe the “neglect” in P&N can perhaps be an overly judgmental way of describing what’s happened, given the negative connotations of the word. The etymology of “neglect” supports this, as it comes from the Latin neglegere, “not to pick up.” Nothing inherently negative about not picking something up, right?

So perhaps instead of referring to the (calm?) post-panic period when one, or one’s society, is relieved to no longer be panicking about the thing one was panicking about as “neglect,” we should call it...forgetting. Or per Freud, something like “repression.” Suppression? Omission? Deliberate inattention in favor of things that require immediate attention?

The thing, as Joe Dieleman and Angela Micah and I noted in Think Global Health, is that repression/neglect/etc. can have disastrous consequences indeed when the thing being shall we say ignored is as big as *getting ready for another pandemic.* The moral of the story then, I suppose, is that one should pick one’s battles when it comes to not thinking about the thing one was panicking about. So maybe neglect the weeds in your garden, but not the exotic coronaviruses lurking in wet markets.

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P.S. If you’ve read this far, you deserve some plague-Python. I feel happy!

I mean, I definitely can, because I went and bought Clark’s book after watching much of the series. But I’m not a typical TV viewer (to wit: my wife and I watch a lot of Gardener’s World, which is a balm for the busy brain.)

For sure, Clark’s overview of art and history—as impressively erudite as it is—is flawed in the extreme. In addition to taking a myopic Western-only view of history, Clark’s views are generally old fashioned. For example, “Clark is outrageously committed to the “great man” approach to history and to the concept of genius,” writes Morgan Meis in his essay about the series for The New Yorker.

But to focus only on its warts does a disservice to Civilisation, because the series (and book, which improves on the series in ways) are just a delight. It’s a pleasure to experience Clark’s deep knowledge of art history—he was a museum director by twenty-seven—and his, ah, arrogance lends the proceedings a certain panache. Clark makes lots of proclamations. And his language throughout is direct in the manner of the best proclamations. For one, he describes Giovanni Santi, Raphael’s father, as “a silly old creature...the sort of obliging mediocrity who is always welcome in courts.” And here’s his description of Rome:

...a city of weight, a city that is like a huge compost-heap of human hopes and ambitions, despoiled of its ornament, almost indecipherable, a wilderness of imperial splendour, with only one ancient emperor, Marcus Aurelius, above ground in the sunshine through the centuries.

That’s the stuff. Clark’s writing is so bold that the book frequently astonishes. And what a run-on of imagery! We could all learn a bit from Kenneth Clark’s writing. Again: millions of people watched this. Millions!

In closing, here’s the opening of the first episode of Civilisation. Shows just don’t begin they way they used to (with 1.5 minutes of severe organ music and zero talking).

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Header image, of a picture of Clark and a painting based on it by Charles Sims, via Wikimedia Commons.

Now here’s some bonus R.E.M.

Here’s some of their exchange:

Charles: If we want to produce the next generation of great writers, we must use our education system to protect what is surely our greatest national export, the English language. Which, like any language, is so much more than a collection of words. It is a means of building bridges between people of different backgrounds, cultures, and generations.

What do you think?

Camilla: I think it's brilliant. I think you could go further. Our language is like an endangered species that needs to be protected. It's a scandal the way we're letting it be slaughtered.

(as far as I can tell, this is the real speech this exchange is based on)

Though the tone of Charles’s (actual) speech is extremely patrician—which is to be expected, given the speech’s source—he makes some points with which I agree, or least points that resonate with things I’ve been thinking about lately. Specifically when he says “[i]f we do not communicate effectively with one another, then we create confusion and lose our way.”*

This is hardly groundbreaking stuff, but lately I’ve been thinking about overuse of language, specifically how overuse of terms and phrases renders them essentially meaningless. More than meaningless, really; the more you say a word, the more it can become little more than a sound. Kevin kevin kevin kevin kevin kevin.

This is something to especially watch in corporate or institutional writing, where hard word limits + complicated ideas can combine to make buzzwords, jargon, and shorthand attractive. Which is all well and good until the buzzwords begin to mean less & less through overuse.

Which can be through no fault of one’s own. For example, perhaps what you’re writing about really is unprecedented, but others might also have ideas about what is unprecedented and so are using the word unprecedented ad nauseam until it seems we’re all writing in shorthand and lo! you’ve basically written a longer version of the lol nothing matters gif.

(Below: an icon, not a snack box)

I’m clearly not the only person thinking about this; Atlassian, on its official blog, published a story titled “6 examples of corporate jargon you should stop using now,” while The Spectator recently published a piece on the overuse of “iconic,” which includes this lovely example, emphasis mine:

When Virgin was still running the Euston to Liverpool line, a friend heard the onboard hospitality manager on the tannoy apologising to everyone in first-class that ‘due to supply issues beyond our control, we have run out of Virgin’s iconic complimentary snack box’.

To close, here’s another speech, from the Scottish play:

Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow, Creeps in this petty pace from day to day, To the last syllable of recorded time; And all our yesterdays have lighted fools The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle! Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player, That struts and frets his hour upon the stage, And then is heard no more. It is a tale Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, Signifying nothing.

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*Charles also said that “ours is the age of miraculous writing machines but not of miraculous writing,” which brings to mind the recent ChatGPT excitement.

Header image of then-Prince Charles and President Nixon—who no doubt shared a dislike of having their conversations taped—via Wikimedia Commons.