Gussie's Place

Omg hii! I'm so happy we could finally meet up ^^ Especially excited to visit that taco place i haven't ate at in years since my gut-.. uh. Anyway, I'm sure we'll have a great time today! I'm super hungry, don't pay any attention to my belly, I'm just a bit gassy after this morning snacking ^^'

This isn't like other kinks. Most of us don't get to put the toys away and go about our daily life. We carry the results with us. It affects our appearance, our mobility, our finances, the way people treat us, and if you're not 100% down with any part of it, even for a moment, it's okay to take a break and re-evaluate. And don't let anyone - fellow feedees, feeders, FA's, or random anons - try to push on you their ideals as though they know what's best for the entire community or tell you how you should live your life as though a blanket statement could even hope to define us as a whole. 'Cause at the end of the day, this is just a kink. Unless you CHOOSE to make it your lifestyle, it is perfectly okay to separate this kink from your every day life and prioritize the things that matter to you, and you don't owe a single person a reason why.

In exchange for some of its power the deity is provided a safe and protected nest. Occasionally it will lay eggs that contain gifts or curses, which the host cleric will eventually birth without much warning.

The deity chose their host on its own, but as the cleric’s travels have gone on they’re incredibly proud to have been chosen to be so big and heavy with their patron. It helps that the serpent deity has a lot of control over their follower’s body, including pleasure and pain, their muscles and fat and hormones, and even their genitalia.

The cleric is unable to marry, as their body belongs to their patron, but sexually a third is often welcome.

Those Sicilian genes.. I can’t help it 😛

Should I keep making 3D stuff?

So you have information you want to plant into your story, and you would like to do that through dialogue. Naturally, you'd want to make the dialogue look natural, so that it doesn't scream -> This Piece Of Information <- Will Be Relevant To The Plot Later!!! I never saw any writing advice about this subject, so I thought I’d write up a post about it.

Say, for example, you want to plant the information that Barney is afraid of fridges. Fridges? Jup. That's weird. Jup. Which makes it all the more difficult to bring up in a scene. And what makes it even more difficult, you decided you want this dialogue to take place before the Thing With The Fridge Happens later on, so you're in a pickle. How do you bring up a fear of fridges, when there are no fridges around?

First, I'm going to show you how shoehorning the information in a dialogue would look like.

Don't do this:

Annie and Barney are in a scene that has nothing to do with fridges.

Annie: "By the way," she asked casually, "have I ever asked you what your worst fear is? Since we’re on this quest together, we should know these things about each other."

Barney: "Fridges. They scare the bejeebers out of me."

Annie: "Fridges?" She laughed incredulously. "How come?"

Barney: "Well, one time my brother locked me into a fridge, and I've been afraid ever since."

Annie: “That makes sense, Barney. I’m sorry you had to go through that.”

Try to avoid using things like “by the way” or “suddenly” in this part of the dialogue, because that’s a shoehorn red flag.

Instead, you want the conversation to flow from something inconspicuous to the information you want to plant and then into at least one other topic.

Do this:

Annie and Barney are in a scene that has nothing to do with fridges, for example they are thrown into a snake pit during their quest.

Barney deals with venomous snakes without a second thought.

Annie, in the corner, trying to get a hold of herself: "I can't believe you're not afraid of those snakes."

Barney: "You just got to know how to handle them."

Annie, in awe: "You're fearless."

Barney, laughs: "Trust me, I'm not. You should see me around fridges."

Annie: "Fridges...?"

Barney: "My brother locked me into one when we were little. I almost suffocated. Never trusted them ever since. Nor my brother, obviously."

The conversation continues about his relationship with his brother, making it seem like that's the important bit. You sneaked the information about Barney's fear for fridges into the dialogue about snakes and his brother.

Let’s break that down, shall we?

This conversation has three topics: snakes, fridges, and Barney’s brother. The snakes and Barney’s brother don’t really matter. They could just as well be completely different topics. (I'll show you later.) Their only function is to ease into the conversation about Barney’s fridge fear and ease out of it without drawing the reader’s attention to its importance.

Topic 1: Something present in this scene that has a thing in common with topic 2

Discussing the snakes feels organic and natural, because they are kind of hard to ignore in this scene. Make the first topic something related to what the characters see, feel, experience in that particular scene… Write a piece of dialogue about topic one.

Topic 2: The information you want to plant

Then transition into the topic switch. How? The topic of fridges and the topic of snakes have one thing in common: fear. Specifically, Annie is afraid of snakes and Barney isn’t, but he is afraid of fridges. Bringing this interesting bit into the conversation changes the topic again, because how can you not go into a sentence like this?

Topic 3: Anything related to topic 2 you can latch onto

The topic is changed yet again after the information you planned to plant. Just let this part of the dialogue run its course. It doesn’t matter much what you do with it, as long as you don’t stop the dialogue right after the moment you delivered the line you needed to deliver. The trick is to make the conversation flow to and from your chosen topic.

Let’s look at another example, something more realistic. You still want to convey the fact that Barney is afraid of fridges, but this time, Annie and Barney are not on a quest, they are in a romance novel.

Barney and Annie are looking out over the ocean. She brought a bottle of wine, a light breeze cools their skin, in the distance, a cargo boat slowly glides along the horizon. It seems like a perfect moment.

Barney raises his glass and compliments Annie: “You pick great wine.” (topic 1)

Annie: “Thanks. I did a wine course last year in my local community center, a series in which we learned all about the different kinds of wine and what to pair it with.”

Barney: “Sounds like fun. You should teach me sometime. Did you get to taste everything?”

Annie: “Yeah, of course. That was the main reason I joined. What about you? Which wine do you prefer?”

Barney: “Oh, I’m not a connaisseur. I like anything but white wines.” (change of topic)

Annie: “Why not?”

Barney, embarrassed: “Red wines are usually kept at room temperature, and white wines go in the fridge.”

Annie, after a second: “I can’t see the problem there.”

Barney, embarrassed: “Ah. Well. I don’t like fridges. Like, not at all. My brother once locked me into one, and – well, let’s say it was a hugely traumatic experience.” (boom, there it is: topic 2)

Annie, confused: “But – How do you keep your food fresh?” (change of topic) (doesn't necessarily have to happen so soon after The Line)

Barney, still embarrassed: “I go to the supermarket every other day.” (topic 3)

The conversation continues about going to the supermarket every other day and foods that Barney can't eat because they spoil too fast outside of the fridge. Annie is surprised to hear how many things can be kept at room temperature for a day or two. (topic 3,5)

That's it, folks :)

I hope this was helpful. Don’t hesitate to ask me any questions, and happy writing! This post was inspired by a question from @therska.

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Getting so soft for him 💖

I can’t wait to look like this!🥵🥵💕💕to have such an enormous, heavy pregnant belly, squirming with life!!❤️❤️❤️filled to the brim with big, healthy babies! I want to be bred and have my stomach swell so fucking big, so firm & swollen💗💗

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Uh oh. Someone's gassy.~ Come here, baby. Let mommy help you. That's right. My, my, you're so heavy. How much do you weigh now? Really now? That big? You're my precious little hog.

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There, there. Let it all out. I can feel those gurgles building up. Did you sneak one of my protein shakes again? You know how those mess with your poor belly. I might have to punish you for stealing.

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That's it. God, you reek. Sounds like someone might have to use the restroom soon. Do you have to go to the bathroom? Hm? Can your belly not handle that shakes that you stole?

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What if I just hold you right here on my lap? Force you to mess yourself right here, right now. Would you get embarrassed? What if I pressed into your stomach. Just. Like. THIS

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*Crackle*