Name: Maverick Cantor Nicknames: Ricky (He only let’s his best friend call him that though) Age: 16 Race: Human Gender: Male Sexuality: Gray-asexual/Demiromantic
<blockquote>Looks good so far, also his name reminds me of the nerf Maverick but it’s a cool name so it’s all good. (I have been doing a lot of stuff with nerf guns lately - look at what an adult I am. But I digress!) </blockquote>
Appearance: Height: 5'6" Weight: 130 lbs Skin tone: Ivory Body Type: Slender, Rectangle Eye color: Royal purple with a little brown ring around pupil Hair: Maverick has longish black hair that he usually puts into a low ponytail, his bangs almost covering his right eye. Clothes: A long navy blue coat that ends at his knees with a black sleeveless turtleneck underneath. In addition to that he wears long black skinny jeans with brown combat boots.
<blockquote>I just want to appreciate the fact that you gave a body type here. His clothing isn’t a bad choice though for battle the jeans would be problematic and perhaps it couldn’t hurt to incorporate some hints of purple, like a royal purple or dark violet into his clothing so it isn’t all super dark.</blockquote>
About Him: Personality: Maverick is generally aloof to most people he comes across. He’s generally reserved and quiet, but people deem him as rude, and hard to approach. He’s also seen as moody and melancholic too his peers. Even so, he doesn’t really care what people think about him. To people who know him, he’s a determined and hard-working male who’s organized, and insightful. But nobody knows him more than his closest friend who can see his compassionate heart and his good-nature, even when he doesn’t show it. He shows the side of himself that’s gentle and generous. The side of him that’s passionate, open, and loyal.Â
Likes: Sweets, Floret Charms (A sugary delicacy shaped like a flower native to his world), Stuffed animals, Magic, Hanging out with his friends, Reading, Poetry, Flowers, Doing arts and crafts, Baking, Sitting on the sidelines, Animals, Romantic gestures, and his master.
Dislikes: Being the center of attention, Bitter and Spicy things, Socializing, Messing up, Forceful people, Places with lots of people, and being touched by anyone other than his family and his best friend Xavier.
Fears: Being a Failure, Rejection, and Strangers Dreams: To always be able to protect Hunter and his Home World
<blockquote>This is all some quality stuff here. All I want to point out is the personality, I’ve seen this kind of personality a lot. It’s not bad but can easily make the character fall into the background since it’s seen a lot. I do like how you’ve included fears and dreams though - lets us know what Maverick is aiming for.</blockquote>
Relationships: Mother: Gloria Cantor Father: Arcelio Cantor Siblings: Altair Cantor Master: Gloria Cantor Best Friend: Xavier di Angelo Friends: Matthias and Trisha. Love interest: Xavier (Though he’d never admit to it)
<blockquote>Having some development is always nice, but it would be great if there was a statement detailing the specific relationship with the character.</blockquote> Enemies: None
Affiliations:
Alignment: Light/Neutral Organization: None Home World: Efflorescent Meadow (My own creation) World Description: Efflorescent Meadow is a beautiful kingdom full of flowers and magic. It’s believed that the flowers give the people their magical abilities and power, so residents always take their time to take care of the plants.
<blockquote>I love this world, it’s really cool to see all these created worlds. The flower theme is beautiful as well and the name suits the KH verse.</blockquote>Â
Battle Statistics: Weapon: A magical staff named Camellia’s Blessing. Learned Magic: Cure, Cura, Curaga, Fire, Blizzard, Bilzara, Aero, Thunder, and Slow.Â
<blockquote>This is well balanced, he would be very useful in battle but he’s not like a tank.</blockquote> Â
Biography:
Maverick was born sometime after the events of the Xehanort Saga in the world known as Efflorescent Meadow. He was born into a family of a Keyblade Master and a powerful Mage. His older brother, Altair, inherited his father’s keyblade. while he grew up learning magic from his mother.Â
Even though he didn’t get a keyblade, he was still highly interested in it. He often watched his father’s students, fascinated at a mere glimpse of the weapon.Â
Growing up, he never grew resentful of his brother, if anything he was more happy for him. But being the only one learning magic from his mother, he grew isolated from other kids. He became quiet and introverted compared to most children who were very open.Â
Though one day, he bumped into one of his father’s students. His name was, Xavier. After countless days of trying to become his friend, Maverick slowly began to open up to him. After that, their relationship grew and they became closer as the years went on. During their breaks, they would often hang out and stroll around their peaceful town.Â
Around the age of 13 Maverick found out about the legend of paopu fruit. A fruit that is said to intertwine the destinies of the people who share it. He desperately wanted to share one with Xavier, but due to it being from another world, he decided to make charms made from the flower petals from home. After finishing, he gave one to Xavier and kept his ever since
A few days after giving the charm to Xavier, he gave him Floret Charms. In his world its said to be given to a person you hold dear due to it being made of the essence of the flowers from his world. which made them even closer than before.
At the age of 14 Maverick was introduced to Matthias and Trisha by Xavier. They too slowly became friends with the male. He wasn’t as open to them as he was to Xavier, but he did like the two younger pupil of his father.Â
Currently, Maverick is still training hard under his mother and strives to become just as powerful as her someday so he can always protect Xavier and his world from evil forces.Â
<blockquote>This is short-ish but has information - I dig it. Anyway I feel that the Keyblader thing isn’t too far fetched here? Though I think it would make more sense if the timeline was inline with the Kingdom Hearts X (Chi) one - since the abundance of keybladers and all. It can work as is since it’s not quite keybladers everywhere yet. Overall there are a few things that have room for improvement - most of them are minor cosmetic things, such as his outfit and relationships. I actually like Maverick here and I’m pretty interested to see what you do with him in the future.</blockquote>










