You can just call me Yoko (@yolkochan), this is an unserious sideblog of mine, my actual art blog is @yokijuu where you can find my serious art stuff.
This is where I draw and post random stuff, yap a lot and interact with many fandoms/communities purely for the fun of it (mainly blue lock currently) The blog is mainly related to self-ship. I may write and post fanfics sometimes but I’m an artist mainly, I’m a very inexperienced writer.
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I have a feeling that can be only described as a craving for the mere interaction between two mutually-interested companions on art. If that other companion (and realizes that it is them who I am speaking about) is reading this please talk to me. 🥲
This is a large post critiquing (also perspective tips) this artwork submitted by one of my friends, I’m not a professional art teacher but I’m willing to share my knowledge with the internet :)
I will assume that you know the basics of perspective and will be moving on more advanced stuff. If you’d like me to critique your artwork, just send me a dm or an ask.
Some basic tips to start off with.
Use a small pen size so you can be more accurate with perspective.
Use the line tool if you are allowed to, don’t freehand this.
Always draw the horizon line first before you begin a perspective drawing and draw “outside” of the actual canvas since vanishing points are usually far outside of it if you want to do a close up of a building/room. You can enlarge your drawing area in later stages after you’re done sketching.
Try to draw within this safe area (rhombus) between the vanishing points (an acute angle, about 60-70 degrees). I recommend this because if you draw outside this area there will be extreme warping to the objects that you’re drawing.
When I was trying to draw out the box of your room, I noticed that the edges of the room were outside of the vanishing points, causing this extreme type of warping — making it impossible to connect the edges of the room into a complete box.
I think this may have happened due to you drawing the inner faces of the box first (which is risky) instead of the outer faces.
Drawing the outer faces first is the easiest way to draw a box in 2pp.
The first thing I noticed is how different the perspective of the floor is compared to the room so I tried finding the horizon line + vanishing points of the room (even though the perspective of the room itself is extremely warped in the first place lol). The floor will always be at the same vanishing point(s) as the room it’s in.
Tips on drawing objects inside rooms:
Objects on the floor/floating can be at different vanishing points compared to the room but they still have to be on the same horizon line. I see you attempted to do this with the bench here.
Objects attached to walls (posters, clocks, shelfs) must have their vanishing points the same as the room otherwise it will not look like it’s attached to the wall. (This also applies to hinging doors and physically hanging items attached to the ceiling like chandeliers)
One of the things I changed was the pillar since it seemed like it wasn’t touching the ceiling properly even before I adjusted the walls edges to fit the perspective.
Even though the edited pillar now technically fits the perspective in the edit, the front side of the pillar being parallel to the viewer’s eyes can be off-putting since pillars aren’t normally constructed like that (they’re mainly always cuboids or cylinders) — so I also made another alternative edit.
Ellipses in perspective is particularly too complex to explain in one post but the main thing about it is that it will ALWAYS stay a perfect ellipse no matter the orientation (assuming there’s no extreme warping or curvilinear perspective) — it will never turn into an oval like this.
Practicing and drawing cylinders will help you break off this habit. I reconstructed this bucket in particular to fit in with the perspective better.
This video by @drawsh and infographic explains it way better than me.
Here is also another video by @stanprokopenko that explains how to draw a cylinder easily.
Final edit
End note
Obviously I can’t change everything in this drawing but I hope I made the perspective less inconsistent for you.
To get better at perspective (or well anything really), you just need to practice it more, drawing more backgrounds and objects and such — you’ll improve very quickly. I saw that you put in a lot of detail into this drawing and I was really impressed!
But since this was a perspective assignment, you may have gotten not so great grades due to the inaccuracy. When it comes to perspective, you have to be strict with yourself and try not to “guess” stuff. I recommend drawing less detailed backgrounds as practice more often. I hope this explanation and critique helps you on your art journey :) (and also better grades lol)
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you listen to vocaloids! beside inabakumori, which are you favourite producers/songs??
oh shiii I loveeeee vocaloids, my favorite producer of all time is Kikuo. (ESPECIALLY HIS ALBUMS WITH HANATAN, which isn’t vocaloid but yk)
Other producers I really like are wowaka, giga/reol, pinocchioP and Maretu. I like many songs from many different producers though, these are just the ones that consistently make stuff I like.
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