Whole-heartedly BEGGING writers to unlearn everything schools taught you about how long a paragraph is. If theres a new subject, INCLUDING ACTIONS, theres a new paragraph. A paragraph can be a single word too btw stop making things unreadable
Ok So Iâm getting more notes than I thought quicker than I expected! So Iâm gonna elaborate bc I want to.Â
I get it, when youâre someone who writes a lot and talks a lot, itâs hard to keep things readable, but itâs not as much about cutting out the fat(that can be a problem) so much as a formatting issue.Â
You are also actively NERFING yourself by not formatting it correctly, it can make impactful scenes feel so, so much better. Compare this,Â
To THIS.Â
Easier to read, and hits harder.Â
No more over-saturated paragraphs. Space things out.
@s1ld3n4f1lâ WAIT WAIT WAIT SO TRUE LITERALLY LITERALLYÂ

























