the words of a wraith

Chapters: 1 (8.8k) Rating: E

Summary:

Life was supposed to be good. Max has Chloe back in her life again, but can’t shake the feeling that someone is still missing. Arcadia Bay is back, but is it really the same place anymore? And as their time on the road comes to end, Max and Chloe end up in Pittsburgh and are faced with the same dilemma that split them up the first time: can they settle down?

Life was never going to simple. Max has a vision of a future murder with an unknown victim. The Overlight continues to bind Chloe and Safi together. The world at large has begun to suspect that Arcadia Bay might not have always been there. The consequences of all of Max’s good intentions are finally coming to collect to the debt.

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Link to the pdf of the tool kit

Captions cover the spot on the screen you put the information I need

The dialogue is captioned but not the song you have playing that the dialogue is responding to

You only captioned the person on the screen, not the person off screen who is also talking

No captioning of critical sound effects (alarms, bells, dogs barking, etc)

Speakers are not labelled at moments where it is not clear on the screen who is talking.

Captions cover the spot on the screen that you put the information I need!

Other d/Deaf people welcome to add.

Protagonist now remembers key facts about important people. He no longer develops convenient amnesia between cutscenes.

Protagonist now has a cooldown on certain adverbs. Adverbs have been buffed by 30% to compensate.

Developer note: Adverbs are important to writing but they are sometimes overused. This change keeps adverbs relevant while encouraging the use of adjectives and verbs.

The horse now has a name.

Solved a glitch where supernumerary limbs would sometimes emerge during complex physical interactions.

Should no longer display “[insertnamehere]” during conversations and narration. All of such occurrances have been replaced with the appropriate tags.

Conversation continuity has been improved. Characters will no longer inappropriately respond with lines from previous iterations of the narrative.

All references to “Event A” have been purged to reflect changes in narrative structure.

Paragraphs which contained two or more instances of the same adjective have had their adjectives updated to accurately reflect a player’s vocabulary inventory.

Minor time traveling issues have been resolved, all characters should now exist in the same tense.

Punctuation has been improved. Commas have been reduced by half.

Characters sighing has been reduced by 30%.

Characters looking at things or people during conversations has been reduced by 40%. To make up for this, characters thinking about the conversation has been boosted and descriptive narrative has been added.

Alt text added

A she-wolf who reigned the Amaranthine sea.

"I got my angel now"

short form writers look at people writing 100k+ fics as though this is some sort of talent given as part of a fae bargain, that the commitment required shows some sort of ungodly mental fortitude.

HAPPY PRIDE MONTH FROM MY GIRLS 🥹❤️‍🩹