"Nah! This is just to get my rocks off. Nothing else."

"um, what does that have to do with me being a girl?"

might be fun.

There’s the hazy-eyed drugged-out empty thing, who lives in a foggy world in its own mind. Comfortable and sleepy. Docile and sedated. Kept calm by its own fuzzy mind and memories. It doesn’t know it deserves better. It doesn’t know it’s been dehumanized or even was once a human. On some level it knows it’s being kept, but the idea of resisting is so distant and uncomfortable that it’s just easier to stay in the cage, no matter how secure it actually is. This pet barely feels the pain, jolting it only momentarily from its haze.

Then there’s the clear-eyed, pissed-off but entirely broken pet. It knows exactly what’s been done to it. It knows it’s been degraded and dehumanized. It knows what it once was, knows it doesn’t deserve that treatment, and would bark and bite if it still believed it would help. It’s docile because it’s given up, but that doesn’t mean it accepts it. It does what it needs to do to survive. Maybe it fears me, but it will protect me anyway. The life it had is gone, the option to get away is gone, and it will at least fight to keep what it has, no matter how much it hates it, hates me for what I’ve done to it.

In the ego ntr scenario?

ummh *flips a coin* greed. ive been switching them around when i pair them with ego, so it could go either way for me. I should rotate them more. Perhaps they like each other more than they like ego. doing this to torment him?

could be a bad read but, critic seems open minded enough to try bottoming? he doesn't know there's other options? like...

yeah frotting works. ill be honest, i think i was just imagining kissing + writhing

HEHEHE SWORDFIGHTING?! that's a term for it? you shouldn't have said that anon, because im now thinking of "swordfighting in her mouth" from heathers. and well.

first you gotta do the build up and then the actual fucking and the fucking is pretty easy but you never know how long the fucking should last, and eventually you're like "okay I'm tired of this" so the characters cum, but you're not done yet because you can't just end it at "he fucking nutted everywhere" you gotta keep going, and the characters have to chat a little or cry or think about how horrible they are or something and then you kinda don't know when to end that either so now you're 2k words in and you might have put too much self hatred and not enough sucking dick. so you wrap it up, and think well it's done now.