We Are Fresh Out of Parades, I'm Afraid...
So basically I've been working 12- to 14-hour days five days a week and 6- to 10-hour days on the weekends, and I am trying not to die of it. Â I have limp hair and dead eyes.
So progress has been a bit stalled on Parade's End, but I am about to start the second half of A Man Could Stand Up.  The good news is, we have yet to discuss No More Parades.  So let's get that going, shall we?  I'm not sure how far along people are, so let's just assume that there are going to be SPOILERS GALORE in this discussion.
My thesis is that No More Parades is the Empire Strikes Back of this tetralogy.  We open the book in the middle of battle.  Our hero is separated from home, friends, and love.  By the end of this novel, the curtain closes on a moment of despair that left me uneasy and haunted for days.
Part One of this novel doesn't give us any prelude to chaos. Â As per Ford's style, we are in the middle of a scene. Â We have no idea what the hell is going on, where we are, or whom we're looking at. Â At the beginning of Some Do Not, this was absolutely maddening, but I'm more comfortable with this structure, confident that sooner or later, all will be explained. Â Tietjens seems to be on the outskirts of WWI, in France...it's dangerous enough that the Germans are lobbing some shells in the area, but safe enough that Tietjen's wife can come waltzing in and RUIN EVERYTHING LIKE SHE ALWAYS DOES. Â There is a sense that Tietjens is protected here, is liked and respected and needed here, is much better off here than anywhere else in France, even though a man can suddenly die right in front of him at any moment.
Tietjens the soldier is a man trying to do 5,000 things at once, some of it banal, some of it having political and personal consequences, some of it artistic diversion, some of it just trying to run away from his personal problems...I think if you are getting men outfitted to meet their deaths, and knowing that delays lead to more death, and seeing death *right in front of you*, you have to occupy yourself with the little things, or you will absolutely lose it. Â So his thoughts are dominated by the obligations of work, helping soldiers with finances and their wills, composing a sonnet, reflecting on Valentine and on Sylvia, approving a shady-sounding leave and worrying that the man will be a deserter...a million things are running through his mind, like someone who can't shut off the "to-do list" in his or her head at bedtime, and you're just about ready to SCREAM at Tietjens to recognize two things, which he can't be bothered to acknowledge: 1) that McKechnie is Macmaster's nephew (not that that seems to amount to much at the moment, other than vaguely alluding to Macmaster being a horrible person, but GOD, it's so obvious!) and 2) Sylvia has arrived for some epic shit-stirring.
That gets us to the end of Part II, and maybe that's a good place to open this up to other people's thoughts. Â Of course, the REALLY exciting stuff is soon to come.
Some other random observations:
--So far, this isn't what I expected from a WWI scene. Â I only think of trenches and machine guns and gas masks (and we'll get to those later). Right now, Tietjens has landed in a world of busywork and stretched resources and random death (with a punchline! Â "Ere's another bloomin' casualty."). Â He's one cog in an enormous wheel of a machine that is falling apart.
--Is it just me, or does Tietjens seem to be in his element in this section? Â Sure, he's traumatized by O Nine Morgan, and he's preoccupied with his love triangle, but he also seems to relish handling all of these small details, and he truly cares about the men with whom he's been entrusted, and they seem to respect him in return. Â It's a world where he can function better than high society where his standoffish attitude and promiscuous wife are a perfect storm of ruin. Â However, his civilian world is about to intrude upon his military life...