tlc!
1. I would fix the issue of Asian borders being entirely dissolved and run by one guy….like….erasing all their cultures
2. The entire crew should’ve been on the rampion for bonding time at least once
3. More winter/jacinter
4. Specifically stating that Cinder is half-Asian in the books Tbh like give us the rep or don’t you can’t just claim to have put it in while letting people erase it
5. The rebellion wasn’t paced as well as I thought it was going to be it takes place over like. A week. The series is a month long. Within the entire month you see the biggest threat to humanity overthrown by 8 plucky kids which is GREAT but u would think it’s gonna take more time














