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Slowly, one sip at a time, the liquid substance that they say is so bad for you, begins to disappear.

The more it disappears, the more I feel my body go ever so slightly numb, but just a smidge.

My awareness is present, and why I consume the substance is more or less to loosen up a bit.

“Have one, relax,” they say.

The drops go down into my body, tasting of wheat and barley.

Their resounding words echo in my mind.

I alone know what I feel, and quite simply, I drink.

This drink is not consumed of pressure from any known masses;

Consumption is of my own free will.

Perhaps, maybe there are some moments I like the way it feels when it touches my chest;

A warm, tingling sensation.

“Key stone, ahh, here we are.”

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“Every shadow hides a story.”

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Hace un tiempo descubrí el concepto de “jardín virtual”: un espacio digital en el que compartir ideas y conocimientos. Inmediatamente quise crear uno para mí. Pero me di cuenta de que mi interior jamás podría ser un jardín: está demasiado oscuro, enmarañado en ramas secas y hojas muertas, y un sinfín de extrañas criaturas habitan en él. Por eso, necesariamente, lo que yo debía tener era un bosque. Nada de flores creciendo ordenadamente bajo el sol, luciendo sus colores con orden y complacencia. Aquí encontrarás magia, hechizos, leyendas olvidadas y cuentos inventados que se han forjado entre los árboles retorcidos que conforman un bosque en el que solo yo puedo perderme.

Pero ya estoy cansada de vagar por él en soledad, así que he abierto una pequeña ventana para que puedas echar un ojo y, si te apetece, acompañarme a través de su inmensidad.

imagine a narrative:

man is cheating on his wife. he has a female mistress, or (whatever the male version of that word is, i find it hard to believe that it could be master) and he's starting to become more careless about who sees them together.

until it's his wife that sees them.

the wife, as we know her, has always been docile. never confrontational, never abrasive, always quiet, but not in a stereotypical religious "i absolutely must serve my darling husband" kind of way. thats who she's always been. anyway, she finds out. and she doesn't react.

the man assumes that in a couple of days he'll come home to an empty house and a letter on the bed declaring a separation. and hes does, kind of. he finds a letter, thats for definite. but its the wrong kind of letter.

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Okay. That is the contemporary view. That is the norm. I have nothing against Jesus but to me it can go both ways.

We all know that not all individuals think or perceive alike, that’s a given.

Even twins will grow to become different regardless of their developmental learnings.

And so to me rituals and symbolisms could also transform particularly an uncontemporary someone, that to see is to believe someone who prefers to see and feel any form of God and start his personal search and relationship from there much like seeing God in sunrise and feeling Him in the wind and waters of a beach rather reading, sitting down and listening to a fellow mortal’s sharing or teaching in a man-made congregation, inside a man-built establishment.

The video states that the gospel says there is only one way, which I think is conclusive, constrictive and may just produce division with certain individuals like say, artists with their God-given exceptionally vast minds who prefer limitless point of views and that is why such approach might not work for them hence not all will be transformed by such.

I think God is not particular about one or two ways, rituals and whatever have you as long as He sees the pureness and honesty of a person’s heart and intentions in seeking and knowing regardless via a service, a verse, a symbolism or a statue in pursuit of a personal relationship with his Creator.

Let a person be with what way or faith he or she is at peace. Afterall, no mind of any man to me can ever fully fathom, speak and more so teach of God no matter how one drains his brain out studying of Him. He is beyond human structure and comprehension. Needless to say, that’s why He is God and we are men.

Ultimately only He knows. Only God can judge and only He can approve or disapprove a perception, a belief or faith, a path or a way or who is on the right direction and which one is astray.”

First off, Christians know for decades that Christ is coming back, be that of whatever context. The point is not one man; pastor or not can tell when. This is a timeless topic but too much repetition of this may not do good to some, as different people will always absorb and perceive differently.

The second coming is all great but as with anything good or evil, too much or too often a topic may be more negative than beneficial. Notice that everything that was made by The Creator has balance.White against Black. Light and Dark. Good and Evil, so on and forth.I had that feeling of the rapture nearing way back in the 80’s. My mother had the same feeling; she’s been dead for years but never witnessed albeit she would still be a part of it.

Again, not one believer can truly tell when; no man minister nor priest.

The human mind cannot comprehend nor compute that which is for the Divine.

‘Show me a worm that can comprehend man and I’ll show you a man who can comprehend God.’

All the repetition that the second coming is near in fact may inflict trepidation and zealotry; psychiatrists will testity to this but this is not to say that Christians should not believe that Christ is coming back.

There is no need for the constant repetition though, not to say also that the rapture should be taken for granted nor is it of no importance but realistically in these times we all have other things to focus on as well.

As long as we are all still in this planet we need to remember the significance of balance, as God Himself manifested balance in everything.

There is nothing new here the statements were all said by pastors as early as when pastors came about; not that I do not believe in The Second Coming.

The use of earthquake as ‘God is shaking us’ , or the phrase ‘that person must die’ are called figure of speech or metaphors.

Sometimes statements like these inflict fear rather enlightenment because different people will always perceive differently.

Case in point; I know someone of decades past who desperately wanted to see his son before the rapture he intentionally impregnated his girlfriend at that time.

Also, God is Love and love should not cause fear nor fragmentation.

The bottomline is that not a single man in the planet can tell exactly when the ‘end’ will happen.

That which is mortal can contemplate on but could never fully comprehend that which is Divine.

“Show me a worm that can comprehend man and I will show you a man that can comprehend God.”

Lastly, when one says ‘believer,’ it does not necessarily follow that the individual is of the Born-Again Christian denomination.”