#llmm

I’ve been so busy lately, I’ve not done much writing! A lot of plot bunnies, but not much writing! Still trying to work my way through Tevinter Nights too! I did sit down and get a few more lines of my Trespasser Scene Rewrite done today though, so I do have something to share at last!

Since most of you know the Trespasser Scene pretty well, I’ll share the last original line I wrote, framed by two canon lines for context.

“I cannot do that to you, Vhenan.”

She had prepared herself for the words, but they still hurt and Kita flinched visibly, Solas’ hand finally lifting towards her, resting against her cheek as his thumb brushed away a tear that fell from her crystalline eyes, spreading it across the skin that had once been marred by pale blue Vallaslin, wiped clean by the magic of the elf before her, and her restraint and control shattered again at the soft touch he had intended as comfort, and apology.

“But you would do it to yourself? I cannot bear to think of you alone!”

I’m late, but I’m currently busy with stuff that I can’t show you (yet)...

Two in a week, I’m on a roll! Let’s see if I can keep it up ^_^

“The history of the elves…”  Kita muttered, her own bitterness over her people’s dark history a pale echo of his own, of someone who had lived through that darkness, and come out the other side, “but that’s the past,” she asked, voice firming and chin lifting as she all but challenged him to continue speaking, “what of now? What about the future?” 

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So I’m late ROFL but here it is. <3 Thanks for the tags everyone!

A tear escaped him, and Solas’ eyes clenched tighter as he let his body bow in grief and loneliness, hands dropping to press against the damp earth in a feeble attempt ground himself.

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Last line I wrote is halfway through my rewrite of the Trespasser scene ...

This is a direct follow on from my Six Sentence Sunday, so for context, I’ll post the previous paragraph here too...

“There’s too many signs, Carver… it’s going to be tonight, and I want you to promise me that we’re going to see each other when the sun comes up,” Malia whispered the moment the tent flap dropped, and her brothers blue eyes were settled back on her face.

”It’s a battle, Lia... I can’t...”

”Just promise me, Carver,” Malia growled, a frown beginning to mar her features before a horn rang out across the camp and officers outside Carver’s tent calling for their men to gather proved her instincts right.

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Gonna turn this into a regular thing, like the WIP Wednesday, and the Six Sentence Sunday... because I can :p Thank you for the tag, @elveny​!

This isn’t quite the VERY last line I wrote, but it’s the last one I wrote that will make sense without context.

She almost held her breath as she stared at the foci, and had to force herself not to smile when the creation gave a single soft tug against her magic, before falling silent once again.