#feedback needed

The artist would like feedback please :)

In my comic I tried to have them speak at least a bit medieval sounding. I don't know how well this actually worked or if it's something I want to bother with in future comics in their realm. So I am asking those who have read it what they think.

so i'm currently working on a piece for my au which i will be making a cohesive(ish) lore dump post for, but i am stuck

as you can see, after i got to leo, i kind of gave up, since i wasn't really feeling how i drew everyone :/

the expressions are fine, but the poses and linework took a hit

i'd say the main issue is with my new style, since it isn't exactly fit for drawing the boys. i already have the designs thought out, but i'm not entirely set on them, either.

so! i come to you with a request!

if anyone is willing, i would really appreciate feedback in the reblogs, comments, or you can even DM me to give your thoughts. i will give any story notes if needed!

here are the older pieces involving the au 🢃🢃🢃

once again, any feedback and criticism is very much appreciated, and i will do my damnedest to properly credit the people that will decide to share their thoughts!

Ive finally grown the confidence to actually put myself out there and honestly I have no Idea what to do..

I kind of wanted to start sharing my art 🖼️ Am I a little scared to do that? uh yeah.. Im probably the most insecure and anxious person Ive ever met LOL. But maybe sharing some stuff and getting feedback will help me out.

I’ll show you what some of my work looks like right now too

I think getting my stuff out there will definitely give me the motivation to work hard on my art because I feel like I dont try when all I do is keep it for myself⛹️

I think I kind of need help on getting started. What do people like to see, what tags should I use for certain things, what will get people to see my stuff yatta yatta yatta things like that

uhm so hopefully I can get help from this yay..

Please dont shoot me down

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Sly Cooper (W.I.P.)

Posting this here to get some much needed feedback, More specifically...

Does this appeal to you as a Sly Cooper fan?

Do you think this would work for someone who isn't a fan of the franchise?

Is the plot and story keeping you engaged?

Are there any scenes or dialogue you think need tweaking or changed?

Are there any plot holes you think I should address?

Am I writing the characters well? Do they feel like the actual characters instead of just feeling more like the writer (as in me)?

Any typos or grammar mistakes?

Any way to improve my screenwriting "skills?"