Hello Y'all!!! Hope you're doing well 😝
I don't usually make these kinds of posts but since I started working and I have no time to draw, I would like to update Joziah's lore. Since he was created when I was 11 yo (I'm an adult now he's one of my oldest ocs) and his story was rewritten last year for a Film competition, His story is purely too "clean", written precisely with the criteria of a competition that requires the writing of screenplays dealing with social issues among young people.
I'm not satisfied with his lore anymore it is literally too clean and not really interesting anymore. I'm tryna make up a psychological thriller story, but I'm never satisfied with what I come up to. Since a lot of wonderful oc writers and artists are on this platform, I wanna gently ask you if some of you can suggest me tropes that can fit my boy Joz, since he's my comfort oc I would like to write a lore to him.
I'll leave a few infos about him:
Some mood boards, I also would like the atmosphere to capture the essence of a muse song, idk if it makes sense. Have you ever listened to one of their songs and then you suddenly feel a weird cinematographic atmosphere all around you? Cus I did and I love they messy, dark, hysterical vibe.
Some basic characteristics of Joz:
Name: Joziah Evenstein (Joz)
•Parents status: Both alive (Noah and Sarah Evenstein)
• Nationality: He was born in Jerusalem
• Year of birth: 15/07/2003
• Where he's living: New York City
• He works for a radio station
• He was undertaking rabbinical studies but turned to activism (original story)
• Hobbies: Studying, talking with friends/cousins, listening to music, playing the violin
• Being a very sensitive person, he is influenced by external things, especially negative ones, and feels down in the dumps.
He feels very strong Areivut all the time.
• he knows how to take care of those in need, he knows how to listen and empathize with others, he knows how to play the violin and sing (in his native language)
• He is annoyed by cruelty towards others, prejudice, indifference towards the planet, ignorance, thirst for power.
• He likes cultured people, those who know how to observe, those who respect.
• He has no children, but will have two in the future (maybe)
• He never had a past relationship
• His most precious possessions are religious items such as sacred books, induments, menorahs...
• His darkest secret is probably that he is losing interest in the Orthodox way of life.
• His greatest fear is being judged, misunderstood, losing what he loves and who he loves, of having to join the army, of being labeled negatively .
• He is very shy and insecure, but when he feels comfortable he is sociable.
• Intelligence lvl: VERY HIGH
• Best friend: Ben Hirchman
• No powers, regular homo sapiens.
• The story must include a lot of deer lol
I'm on my knees, I beg you to help me coming up with some ideas, you're literally all so talented and creative and I really can't be satisfied with what I've got in mind, so I'm asking you to suggest me tropes you would like to see more, something that can fit my bb.
