How to Use an Ellipsis Properly in Fiction
Ever wonder why some ellipses seem to have three dots and others have four? Some have spaces between each dot and some donât? Why sometimes you capitalize after an ellipsis and other times you lowercase?
To be honest, I donât think most of us were taught properly how to use an ellipsis. I know I wasnât. I see a lot of writers who donât understand all the rules of ellipses either.
Some of you may be wondering what an âellipsisâ is. Itâs a fancy name for the three dots or âperiodsâ you see in writing ( ⌠). The word âellipsisâ is Greek for âomission,â which is what it does. It shows that something has been omitted or left out.
Now with research papers, this might be obvious. Maybe you are quoting a source and donât want to quote every single word of it, so you use an ellipsis to show that you left some stuff out. Like this:
âYou know youâre in love when you canât fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.â - Dr. Suess
âYou know youâre in love when ⌠reality is finally better than your dreams.â - Dr. Suess
In fiction, we usually arenât quoting sources. But the ellipsis works in similar ways, it conveys that something is omitted. This might be something directly omitted. Mamma Mia uses this method well:
July seventeenth, what a night. Sam rowed me over to the little island. We danced on the beach, and we kissed on the beach, and âŚ
The ellipsis is used to imply they got intimate, but that part is âomitted.â
Other times things are omitted because they are incompleteâmaybe an incomplete line of dialogue such as when a character trails off.
âI started to go to the school, but âŚâ she trailed off.
Or an incomplete thought.
Would she actually want ⌠? she wondered.Â
Or maybe something is âomittedâ for the sake of something else, like a character trying to censor or tone down his word choice.
âSarah is really very ⌠fanciful, isnât she?â David said.Â
In pauses like this, the ellipsis may convey thinking. Itâs completely fine to use them that way.
In rare occasions, an ellipsis might be used to indirectly convey the passing of time.
She ate ⌠she drank ⌠and she went shopping.
And you may occasionally see them used other ways stylistically, but these are the main situations.
In a sense, though, in all these examples, something is omitted, whether itâs directly, or indirectly, like an incomplete or changing thought, or actions in between.
When used smartly, ellipses can be powerful in fiction because they convey more than what is on the page, and that is vital to good storytelling.
Too often, however, newer writers just throw them in because they like the feel and sound of them or the long pause, or even in some cases ⌠because they are lazy. Make sure if you use them, they have a point.
Now letâs get to the technicalities. Years ago, I used to be confused that sometimes ellipses seemed to be three dots and other times four, and I didnât know when to use which. Ellipses are three dots. However, if it comes after a complete sentence, you still use a period.
I was so hungry⌠. chicken, cereal, tofu, pastaâall of it sounded good.
 If it follows an incomplete sentence, you donât use a period.
âYou know youâre in love when ⌠reality is finally better than your dreams.â - Dr. Suess
If the words after the ellipsis are the start of a new sentence, you capitalize them.
 "They treated me like ⌠Want to go to dinner?â she asked suddenly.
When it comes to spacing before and after an ellipsis, handle it how you would a regular word.
Sarah was really very[space]âŚ[space]fanciful.Â
"I started to go to the school, but[space] âŚ[no space]â she trailed off.
One exception to this is if there is a question mark following.
Would she actually want[space]âŚ[space]? she wondered.
According to The Chicago Manual of Style, ellipses should have a space between each dot.
Would she actually want[space].[space].[space].[space]? she wondered.
 However, in APA style, there are no dots.
Would she actually want ⌠? she wondered.
Fiction typically follows The Chicago Manual of Style, but you may still see the ellipsis with no spaces, especially since word processors sometimes reformat ellipses automatically. So while technically they should have spaces between each dot, you probably arenât going to get reprimanded if you donât. Even The Chicago Manual of Style notes that some places will be fine with the no-space ellipsis. I use spaces because thatâs how I was corrected by a mentor once.
One more thing: Ellipses do not signify an interruption.
âShut up!â Mike interrupted.
 Use em dashes for that.
âShut up!â Mike interrupted.
Dashes are another subject.
But hopefully now you know how to handle ellipses!
