Quarma ✨

An ending/sequel to my other Noa x Mae comic~

This was heavily inspired by that OTHER yet same Tarzan scene, you know the one. I love her t-rex arms pose kfjdsfjfkjh. Noa craddle. OTP strong.

they think the “Roman salute” is something unrelated to nazis or fascists but the “Roman Salute” IS the fascist salute. It's not a different concept, it's the same thing!! It's not "good" because it doesn't have the word "nazi" in it, It's the same shit.

And to people saying "He is throwing out his heart to the crowd" tell me if YOU would do it at a 45 degree angle with your thumb tucked in and your fingers closed together. Personally, a throwing motion in my imagination has your palm completely open and your fingers spaced out

Regardless, This is what propaganda is, They do bad thing and then they say "no it good actually" and the population goes "Ok then it's all good" it's not all good, They're making you think it is. It sucks

I will not say anything except for

Happy FMA day!

And then I read a book. A published, hardcover, NYT bestsellers list book and...

Did you get that?

Someone looked at this sentence (likely more than one someone, tbh) and was like, 'Yeah. We'll print that.'

So the moral of the story, my fellow heathen smut writers, is that we're fine.

I will never again worry about saying 'soft' or 'wet' too many times again, because, by god, I didn't say 'pee.'

But for reals, next time I stress out over my own writing when I'm doing a smutty scene, I'm thinking of this post.

That being said, the rest of the book isn't that bad. Definitely written by a man and clearly a man encouraged/informed/edited by other men. But the story itself isn't terrible.

Honestly, that's why this particular passage is so obscenely awful. It comes out of nowhere (one might even say "explodes") and does absolutely nothing to further the story. Like. It's so comically bad, why on earth did it need to stay?

One more thing of note, before I sound like a Mr. Peanut apologist, there are at least three different male characters who, throughout the course of the book, refer to their dicks as Mr. Penis.