Bare fangs

If you're a new writer and you're asking yourself "is this too personal, is this too much, will people think this is weird" that feeling is the exact location of your actual voice. The stuff that makes you want to close the laptop is the stuff nobody else could write. The safe version is always worse. Always. I have never once read something and thought "this would have been better if it was a little less honest." go further. It's always go further.

“but if i communicate it perfectly then they will understand me” WRONG 10,000 years of suffering

woman moment

the way i burst out laughing when palps was like “skywalker’s apprentice could lead us to other jedi” and vader—one track mind—immediately went “SUCH AS KENOBI”