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“What do you mean?” he asked. “But there’s a full stop as part of the question mark!”

She nodded gravely. “I know!” she said. “A lot of people find this confusing. But the speech tag belongs to the line of dialogue, it’s still part of the sentence, so it’s wrong to capitalise it.”

We’ve discussed the comma and the dash brothers—finally, the time has come for the less sexy relative: the semicolon. But how do we use it?

1. To link two related independent sentences

He didn’t believe in fate; she made him reconsider.

The forest was silent; even the wind held its breath.

Slap a semicolon between two complete sentences that are closely related but not joined by a coordinating conjunction (like and, but, or so). This creates a subtle pause—somewhere between a comma and a period—and it shows the relationship between the two sentences.

2. To separate items in a complex list

She packed her bags with care: a red silk dress, delicate and expensive; an old photograph, creased and faded; and a knife, sharp as her resolve.

As you can see, semicolons help with clarity. If the items in your list already contain commas, use semicolons to avoid confusion.

3.  To balance contrast or comparison

He spoke in riddles; she answered in truths.

The sun warmed their backs; the storm waited ahead.

While lethal injuries often take center stage, non-lethal injuries can create lasting effects on characters, shaping their journeys in unique ways. If you need a simple way to make your characters feel pain during a scene, here are some ideas: 

Sprained Ankle

A common injury that can severely limit mobility, forcing characters to adapt their plans and experience frustration as they navigate their environment.

Rib Contusion

A painful bruise on the ribs can make breathing difficult and create tension, especially during action scenes, where every breath becomes a reminder of vulnerability.

Concussion

This brain injury can lead to confusion, dizziness, and mood swings, affecting a character’s judgment and creating a sense of unpredictability in their actions.

Fractured Finger

A broken finger can complicate tasks that require fine motor skills, causing frustration and emphasizing a character’s dependence on their hands.

Road Rash

The raw, painful skin resulting from a fall can symbolize struggle and endurance, highlighting a character's resilience in the face of physical hardship.

Shoulder Dislocation

This injury can be excruciating and often leads to an inability to use one arm, forcing characters to confront their limitations while adding urgency to their situation.

Deep Laceration

A cut that requires stitches can evoke visceral imagery and tension, especially if the character has to navigate their surroundings while in pain.

Burns

Whether from fire, chemicals, or hot surfaces, burns can cause intense suffering and lingering trauma, serving as a physical reminder of a character’s past mistakes or battles.

Pulled Muscle

This can create ongoing pain and restrict movement, providing an opportunity for characters to experience frustration or the need to lean on others for support.

Tendonitis

Inflammation of a tendon can cause chronic pain and limit a character's ability to perform tasks they usually take for granted, highlighting their struggle to adapt and overcome.

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Concussions are head traumas that result in the brain "bouncing" off the inside of the skull. In mild cases, it might just make someone dazed and they'll need a break from thinking for a couple days. However, head trauma that results in unconsciousness or more severe symptoms (vomiting, profound confusion, amnesia, etc) generally means a serious concussion, which can cause brain bleeds and death if not properly cared for. Additionally, repeated minor concussions can also cause severe effects, as is often experienced by people who play full-contact sports (rugby, football, boxing, etc).

Burns and their effects differ depending on the degree of the burn. Generally, first degree is surface-level, resulting in maybe just a blister; second degree affects the surface and inner levels of skin (dermis); third degree is burning all the way to the subcutaneous fat; and finally fourth degree is burning to muscle or bone. Anything deeper than a first degree burn can become infected very easily, because they're massive openings in the skin where the body's defense system has been cooked to death. This includes burns meant to cauterize wounds - that used to be a common way of cauterization, until army surgeons realized that soldiers were more likely to die of infection if they'd been heat-cauterized compared to cauterizing with unheated ingredients.

Finally, lacerations and other similar cuts to the skin can be deadly for obvious reasons - infection. Especially in cases of deep lacerations, where there's a risk that the skin heals but the deeper wound doesn't, creating a pocket for anaerobic bacteria (such as tetanus or gangrene) to thrive. This kind of improper healing is far more likely if the wound is being treated without medical knowledge. Additionally, if you cut in the wrong place, it can also result in massive blood loss, even if it's not very deep. And these locations aren't intuitive either! I would recommend looking up a diagram of the circulatory system to see where major veins and arteries are located.

heyyyyyy i love talking about writing on tumblr but my dash is always dead. i'm gonna hurl this post out into the void and hope it comes back with some cool blogs i have stuff in common with. so hit rb if you:

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post progress on your writing

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orrrrr if you're a fan of Xfiles, BTVS, Sherlock Holmes, Twin Peaks, or similar :)

I have not posted an update on my writing in a little bit. So, here we go! I had work this morning and so, I took a little bit of time to write a little. When I’m at work, I’m in my own head, only thinking of writing or playing animal crossing….and more writing.

I hope your projects are going well. I intend to push my document to 100k words perhaps. We shall see.

Happy Writing!

The best part isn't even that is has probably 5x as many synonyms as the next most thorough thesaurus, but it also includes words that aren't strictly synonyms but are closely related (and let's be real, as a writer, sometimes this is even more helpful).

Like, if you look up "wizard" you'll get the usual: magic user, sorcerer, witch, magician, warlock etc, and you'll get some less common variations a traditional thesaurus might not include like: wiz, wizardess, magus etc

But you'll also get related words that aren't true synonyms like: sybil, clairvoyant, seer, necromancer etc. which is very helpful when worldbuilding.

It's also really good for common euphemisms, slang. Looking up fairy will probably give you: gentry of the hills, folk of the air, fair ones etc. The entry for dog will probably have doggo, doggy, and pepper.