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I fondly recall something like “if you do not write, you should not complain” and “do not judge the story before it ends”. Well, he wrote it waaaay more poetic, because he knows the words. 

You see, we are at the end of story. No matter how well written the last episode will be- the plot will suck. There is no other option, because there are too many unfinished sideplots left, unbaked characters, and (personal opinion here)- the idea of Eldarya and Earth consuming each other and changing into new world is not satisfying. Sure, it can be technically written well, with FINALLY no repetitions, or unnecessary scenes, but the story won’t be good. 

But we are at the end whether we wanted or not, so is it my time to say it with Beemoov’s blessing? Can I say it now? 

It sucked. 

The romance was awful- Lance and Erika “discussing” Valkyon’s death (and I use quotation because it wasn’t a proper discussion, it was Lance discouraging Erika from repeating his mistake. Good one, but on his route there was a dire need of real discussion about HIS deed and HIS feeling). Sex scenes instead of building intimacy and trust. Boys acting the same- the only difference between those love scenes are Lance’s obsession with choking Erika on illus and Nevra’s biting us. 

Erika was even worse than Candy. Here, I said it. At least Candy has some feelings for her parents. 

What about that djin? What about Tenjin? Kitsunes, who were loyal to their king (and why shouldn’t they, it’s not like he treated them badly)? What about faeries who are hostile to humans, how do you think they will react to Earth? What was Ophelia’s role? I still want to know Leiftan’s past! What about Erika’s mother- is our MC ok with her being somewhere… around… not remembering her child? What about Memoria? Why Valkyon is so forgotten in ANE, he was a core member of the battle and rebirth of Eldarya- rebirth, that was obviously not needed if things go shite now.