Underused Ways to Foreshadow a Character Is the Villain
Everyone writes the obvious red flags.
But let's talk about those sneaky quiet ones!
Here are some quick tips to foreshadow a villain character (without saying "they were the villain"):
• They’re the only one who never asks how something happened, only who’s responsible
• They agree with whoever they're talking to (inconsistent loyalty)
• They omit key details that later turn out to be important
• They remember details no one ever told them
• When the protagonist shares something personal, they respond thoughtfully (but with curiosity rather than empathy)
• They’re calm while everyone else is panicking
• They offer the perfect solution a little too quickly
• They watch people argue like it’s entertainment
• They always seem to know more than they should
• They comfort someone… while steering the conversation exactly where they want it
• They “forget” to mention information that would change a decision (selective honesty)
• They keep showing up right after something goes wrong
• They apologize beautifully. Almost rehearsed.
• Their eyes flick to doors, windows, or escape routes during tense conversations
• They ask questions that feel normal until you realize what information they’re collecting
• In emotional moments, they’re studying people’s reactions instead of participating
• They never openly disagree with the protagonist… but they never fully support them either
• They ask very specific questions about the protagonist’s weaknesses, plans, or resources
• They show unusual interest in security systems or secrets
• The protagonist occasionally gets the sense they’re being studied
• Sometimes their expression goes blank when they think no one is looking
• They look at the hero like they’re studying a puzzle piece
• They’re the only one who never seems surprised
• They smile during the wrong parts of the story
The best villain foreshadowing isn't screaming "I'M EVIL!!! MUAHAHAHA".
A good, subtle, foreshadowed villain? They whisper, "Something about me isn't right." But the reader won't know why until it's far too late.
Now go! Write your amazing villains.
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