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‎Rose🌹ˊˎ- 24. ENTJ. phycology and petrochemical student. will read anything books, manga, comic books, webtoon, poetry, dictionary encyclopedia...literally anything. baker. origamist. cat lover. snoopy girl. FREE PALESTINE

Dare I say this might be the laziest writing I've seen in a while.

The writing equivalent of ''copy, paste and hope for the best''

I don't know for sure but considering she left her family as soon as she turned 18, I'd say she's probably done (she better be). Biologically he's her dad but emotionally? She's never really been his priority so......

M*ch**l

J*m*s*n

Xander 👑

Gr*ys*n

N*sh

Matthew

R*h*n

At this point JLB is treating the grandest game less like a proper spin off and more like an extended the inheritance games epilogue and that's a structural issue that can't really be ignored.

The truth is that a spin off is supposed to shift the narrative weight onto a new cast and allow them to carry the story on their own terms, but when the focus keeps drifting back to original protagonists like Jameson and Avery, it creates a clear imbalance in storytelling priorities, instead of the new characters fully taking over, they end up sharing space with characters whose stories have already been explored and whose arcs have largely reached their conclusions.

From a critical standpoint, that weakens the identity of the series. A spin off should feel like a progression, not a continuation disguised under a different label. If OG characters continue receiving POVs and significant emotional focus, the narrative stops functioning as a true fresh start and begins to feel more like bonus material for the original trilogy.

The issue isn't that the original characters appear, it's how much narrative authority they still hold. Page time is not neutral, it's an allocation of importance. So when completed characters continue to dominate attention, it signals that the story is relying on familiarity rather than fully committing to building something new.

And that's where the criticism becomes valid: it can start to feel as though the spin off doesn't trust its own new characters enough to let them lead without support from established fan favorites. Instead of pushing the universe forward, it keeps orbiting around what has already worked.

So in other words, it doesn't fully read as a new chapter in the universe it reads as though the original story hasn't quite finished speaking yet.

The harsh truth is that stories should move forward. A spin off exists to expand a universe through new perspectives, not to keep circling back to characters whose journeys have already been completed. When an author continues giving protagonist level attention to an old lead, it can sometimes suggest a lack of confidence in the newer cast.

What stands out to me is the imbalance, if Lyra, Gigi and Rohan were marketed as the center of the series, then they should be receiving THE majority of the narrative investment, a POV is one of the strongest signals of importance in a story. Giving one to Jameson inevitably shifts attention away from characters who are still trying to establish themselves.

From a criticism standpoint, it also risks making the spin off feel dependent on the original trilogy, a strong spin off should be able to stand on its own merits. If readers constantly need to return to the original protagonists for emotional investment, then the new characters isn't being allowed to fully take ownership of the story.

The critical question isn't "is Jameson interesting?" Of course he is, he was the lead of an entire trilogy. The question is whether revisiting his perspective adds something essential or whether it's simply easier than fully committing to the characters this series was originally supposed to be about.

And I know some of you will say "but Grayson is also an OG character and a main character from the original trilogy'', the difference is that Grayson was OPENLY promoted as one of the main characters of the spin off from THE BEGINNING. Whether I enjoyed his POV or not is irrelevant, his narrative importance was established before the books were released. It wasn't a surprise because the marketing and the story itself positioned him as a major player.

Jameson, on the other hand, wasn't presented that way, that's why his POV feels different. The issue isn't that an original character got a POV, the issue is that a character whose arc was already completed is seemingly being elevated into a larger narrative role in a series that was advertised as focusing on other characters. Those are two very different situations.