#avery grambs

long story short this is a rant

if you do not want spoilers, please do not read the entire post

ᯓ‎ don't tease me and keep me around like it's easy ᯓ‎

❝if emily taught me anything, it’s that everything is a game.

even this. especially this.❞

★ when you know deep down that it's never gonna ever be us ★

My unpopular opinions (some of them are not very unpopular in Tumblr):

1- javery is very unhealthy on Jamesons side. Jameson emotionally relay on avery and as it was written on books he doesnt even know how to breath without her, not ts was not romantic its extremely unhealthy for a person also its a book not a wattpad fic books are supposed to show healthy love and emotions not this obsession, my friend struggled with the same type of guy like Jameson and he really reminded me of her ex so I will make a full post about this one later

2- jamesons love to avery is like Toby's love to Hannah, they are both unhinged and unhealed without their love which i dont call love i call "obsession", bcs being violent and harsh toward everyone and lacking responsibility is not called romance its how an obsessive person act when they are left, a healthy relationship shouldn't be like this

3-Eve was one of the best written characters in book with so much complexity, you dont have o like her but you have to understand her bcs once you do you can see such a complex character she is

4-this book was supposed to be about lyra, gigi, Rohan savannah and grayson and new characters arc why we had so much Hawthornes/javery scenes honestly I enjoyed scenes with miles end, throps family and devil mercy way more

5-i will always mourn the potential lyra kane character had, she was described physically strong and she had so much intelligence why did jlb made her so Dependent and a love interest i hardly know her character and also I didn't even recognize lyra in tgb why she was written so differently?

6- justice for lyrason romance bcs they were so peak in the last two books but in this one it felt like jlb was done with them bcs they had their arc, they could have been written as peak as they were in last books but instead jlb decided that it was javery's book not them, remind you it was supposed to be their series

8-grayson was done very dirty in this book

9-again why was the ending hawthorne and avery centered? Why was the whole book avery centered? Why we saw avery having more important roles in plot and cult instead of lyra? Oh yes jlb just confused us with her family tree and sajd yes its done, thats lyra's arc cos no wtf😭 we barely saw gigi, savannah and Rohan ending we barely had lyra and grayson ending

Id go further to say that jlb needed for avery to fit in with the family for the plot, it wouldnt be fun to read a book about a girl who didnt care about the puzzles or couldnt solve them.

Even at a lower education level avery is on a mentally equal plane to the brothers and that isnt to say ‘well typically lower class people are stupider’ but i think it is certainly unusual for an individual to be as well educated as billionaires as well as for her family (her mum) to cultivate what would be typically seen as ‘higher class hobbies’ like eg chess. This once again implies averys character was not made to explore classism, she seems to just be lower class without any of the real socialised impacts most lower class people would experience. She is shocked by wealth, she feels kind of out of place but these are the surface level ‘symptoms’ of being from a lower class jlb never dives deeper than that.

And jlb doesnt bring up topics that would expose class difference, she doesnt bring up lifestyle, education, culture, nothing at all really, avery adapts insanely fast she was just copy and pasted from one class to another which is obviously unrealistic.