"It's unsafe for you to remove the steel suit, yes? But, through the use of sophisticated holographic refraction processes and advanced tactile warping algorithms I can make it seem as though you're wearing your everyday attire." - Steel, S1 E2
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I have. So many questions. Possibly more than I started with.
Does Max ever actually remove the helmet or does it just look like he does? Actually no nvm we see him eat thingsâ
Are the tactile warping algorithms just meant to change the texture of Maxâs âclothesâ for other people or does it affect the way they feel to him? If someone touches what looks like bare skin does Max feel a difference in tactile input? Is it actually bare skin??
If itâs not in camo mode does Max have the same sense of touch as if it is? Or is it different? I keep staring at the blue palms of his suitâs gloves and wondering if thatâs highlighted for aesthetic purposes or functional ones.
(I also have logistics questions that kinda donât matter if I just choose to ignore them. Which I will be doing because I donât think it really matters how showering works with this. I have more important questions.)
Like, can Steel dye Maxâs hair??? Iâd need to look into how temporary hair dye works (and regular dyes, for that matter) but theyâre working with light refraction here so I donât think pigments would come into play at all. Failing that, wig??
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God the mental image of Distress!Max and his Steel arguing in a one-person gas station bathroom about what hairstyle he should have.
Steel wants to go with something sooo edgy because theyâre rebels, Max! Nobody understands them or their mission! Itâs them against the world! They gotta go black and red stripes!! Spiky! No wait, bangs so long theyâ
Max, who is on his second gas station coffee this hour, grips the sink and says that if Steel makes him look as ridiculous as he did last week heâs going to cause a blackout so massive that NTek will be able to look in this general direction and know theyâre here.
Steel just kinda floats there for a second. Then pitches, âplatinum with black tips?â
ââŚthat would look cool.â
They finally get to leave the bathroom. And Steel shoplifts some snacks on their way out.
these are my "serious" ones based on how it seems to work in the show
the suit (and therefore camo's influence) stops at max's neck (perhaps bc since steel stopped himself from suppressing max). as a result, steel can't control anything related to max's mind/face
this incomplete link is why steel can speak in max's mind but max can't return the favor.
steel can 'listen' through the suit while in range
the helmet is something either of them can toggle in base mode (and ig stealth mode too), and is just a preprogrammed command to reconfigure some of the hexes into the helmet. (like you pointed out, the helmet is being properly summoned/dismissed)
while max doesn't feel the weight of the suit, how much tactile feedback he receives depends on the mode/section. ie, in camo mode, its basically what you'd expect based on what you're seeing (skin is skin, clothes feel like clothes to max, and affect his sense of touch accordingly). in base mode, the vents (especially those on the hands) feel like touching something normally, the black lining is slightly dulled, and the silver armor is very dulled. other modes are probably similar with a similar pattern but different calibrations.
and now, my more "self indulgent" hcs (aka hcs that i use in my writing that have no evidence from the show)
steel has to include the m (for makino) somewhere on the camo mode fit. it's part of his programming. though he can choose how he incorporates it, including distorting or obscuring it.
pockets in camo mode don't work correctly. because of how much the suit is shifting around as part of the camouflage process, the physical 'pockets' often end up desynchronized from the holographic pockets.
related: max carries a bag with him everywhere so 1) steel doesn't have to stay on his chest, 2) max doesn't put his wallet in his back pocket only for the pocket to have vanished when he goes to pay for something
related again: steel can make pockets in any mode, but generally chooses not to because whatever's in them has a high chance of getting yeeted if they change modes (also cuz it interferes w the suit's integrity as armor)
max's skin in camo mode reflects what his skin would look like with the suit off, including bruises. technically this is something steel can change, but he chooses not to because he's worried doing so would cause max undue distress.
max can and will reflexively attempt to summon the helmet if he's flustered or distressed enough. if he's in camo mode, he'll hear a brief 'failure' buzz
as steel gets better at controlling the steel suit (ie developing the mode lock so a bad hit doesn't drop them back to base mode), one of the things he learns to do is "phantom contact". for example: a tap on the shoulder to get max's attention, or a gentle tugging at his arm to guide him somewhere, or a hug that steel is too small to physically give
*smacks my hand on the reblog button* ABSORB AND EXPANDâ (/silly)
I need you to know I read these and felt most of them just kinda slot into my head like CDs onto one of those CDs towers. Like yeah, mhm, yes. These make hella sense.
You have cooked!!! You are so cool!!!
I love the backpack so much, genuinely. Iâm a big fan of Having Space To Put My Things and I wouldâve stapled that to Max as a hc if it wasnât already so prevalent.
Iâm good with denying him good pockets, though. They could even get away with just making them overtly look like the fashion pockets that are evil and fake. Nobodyâs gonna notice or care so they probably wonât, but they could!
I did consider the Distress duo putting pockets on Turbo Stealth so that Steel can have an easier time with the shoplifting. Then I realized Steel can just kinda disguise them camo-style with a motorcycle helmet on or something and steal more boldly if they need a lot more food. Or rob a bank about it.
(Thereâs a reason they freak the fuck out when Turbo Stealthâs usefulness gets compromised by Berto. Itâs how they were getting most of their supplies, one way or another.)
Edit: I start to ramble imma hit a read more.
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Unrelated, but I thought about a Turbo mode they develop after the fucking portal fails to bring the Alphalink through. Turbo Warp.
Through sheer fucking desperation to bring that thing back they cobble together an unstable mode on the spot thatâs based off of incomplete scans Steel has of Ven-Ghan shit being used around them and data gathered from the machine that was foiled at THI.
It flat out doesnât work, obviously, but they manage to escape and try to refine it. After a couple minor explosions and a few all-nighters too many, they make something that lets them open portals of the Portal variety. They go from point A to point B with no inbetween and no delays.
Punching one open is a Turbo energy sink and if theyâre not closed theyâll collapse in on themselves after like a minute, but they work!
Thereâs a distance limit where things start to get too unstable and trying to open a portal where they canât see it is possible but very⌠unwise. Portal size depends on energy input, so they unfortunately still canât bring the Alphalink through.
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Anyways back to clothes.
The hc about Max trying to put the helmet on when heâs flustered or worse is giving major âSecUnit wishing for armorâ vibes. I enjoy this one immensely and Distressed lad is now keeping a physical, actual face mask in his backpack to cope about it.
*picks up the hc about the blue, white, black parts* Incredible work. Yeet him against a wall.
PHANTOM CONTACT!!! PHANTOM CONTACT RULES!!! I need Steel to get hugged and then hug back like that and get hugged harder. The shoulder tapping is banned at school though. (The kids there have enough to talk about without Max McGrath turning to look at nothing now too.) In a fight itâs great though.
The dysmorphia Distress!Max would feel and the uncanny valley that would fuck up the effects anyway are the two main reasons why Steel doesnât just disguise Max entirely as someone else. The most they can manage is a makeover and, like, lifts in his shoes to fuck with his height.
I wonder if Max and Steel ever fuck around to see how complex of an outfit Steel can render. Like those videos of people putting on twenty shirts at once.
How many layers is too many to keep from collapsing and merging with each other? Are there any textures Steel canât do? Max wearing a big ass dress for like two minutes just to see what the shape of it does to the armor. They do full platemail at least twice.
Thereâs a lot of opportunities for shenanigans here. Let them have fun about it. Please consider:
Can Steel affect the temperature of the outfit? Make clothes warmer in the winter and cooler in the summer?
Iâm imagining Max laying in bed being miserable about his back being bruised to hell from getting tossed around by Extroyer in a fight. Steel asking for a little more energy if Max can scrape it together and then making the back of his jacket warm like a heating pack.
Please consider this. It has possessed me. All Iâm thinking about now is these two nursing each otherâs hurts after getting sent home from a battle.
Steel piling every pillow in the house onto Maxâs bed so he can be propped up and keep his weight off his recently relocated shoulder for a while. Making his clothes just a little softer to the touch.
Max sending every bit of Turbo energy heâs got the second heâs got it to Steel so he can run more efficient self-repairs. Putting on comfort media in the background so Steel has something to listen to while grilling through his error reports to see whatâs actually relevant and what was just pain.
Then I realized Steel can just kinda disguise them camo-style with a motorcycle helmet on or something and steal more boldly if they need a lot more food. Or rob a bank about it.
Mannnn, would hate to be Max if he got confronted during a bolder robbery.
Turbo Warp.
Honestly this mode sounds really cool! Can others follow them through or is it just them? If it's just them, it sounds perfect for quick escapes
Portal size depends on energy input, so they unfortunately still canât bring the Alphalink through.
Oh no, I know what Distressed!Max and Steel would do if they found Jim's spaceship
PHANTOM CONTACT!!! PHANTOM CONTACT RULES!!!
YES YOU GET IT!!! NOT ONLY IS IT GREAT IN A FIGHT IT IS ALSO FANTASTIC FOR COMFORT!!!
I wonder if Max and Steel ever fuck around to see how complex of an outfit Steel can render. Like those videos of people putting on twenty shirts at once.
oh they totally did. or at least steel did to max's chagrin.
Can Steel affect the temperature of the outfit? Make clothes warmer in the winter and cooler in the summer?
CONSIDER IT CONSIDERED!! I've mostly left it at "the suit is thermoregulated" BUT YOURE RIGHT HE SHOULD BE ABLE TO MAKE PARTS OF IT COOLER AND WARMER
Please consider this. It has possessed me. All Iâm thinking about now is these two nursing each otherâs hurts after getting sent home from a battle.
you cannot comprehend the amount of horrors i have put these guys through. it is a passion of mine. (i'm just shy about sharing them--which i'm working on!)
i love your proposals for specifically steel pain! i'm noticing on reflection that i rarely do solo physical pain for steel. in general i'm biased towards emotional/mental anguish over physical pain (ie yea i'll mention the physical pain of jim and max having a turbo detonation when jim puts his hand on max's shoulder, but i'm way more interested in the emotional devastation of max going to give his dad a hug only for jim to pull back bc he's not adequately discharged). if i do do physical hurt/comfort, the hurt's prolly coming from a fight, in which case both max and steel are prollu getting hurt.
but this is a failing on my part. i must tear this ultralink apart. put him in a ven-ghan capsule and shake it around 'til something interesting falls out.
(btw i like making steel a bit clingy after a proper near-death experience. like staying on max's chest during school and managing processes that he usually does automatically. self-soothing by leaning into your instincts or w/e)
EDIT BC I FORGOT STH!!
The hc about Max trying to put the helmet on when heâs flustered or worse is giving major âSecUnit wishing for armorâ vibes
i did have that thought as i was typing up these hcs. funnily enough though, i came up w that before reading tmbd. iirr i thiiink i was inspired by this quote from tony weinstock on when to have the helmet on/off in promo materials:
"It's become a guiding principle that when Steel is attached to the suit, he's in superhero mode with the helmet on, but when Steel is floating separately next to him, the helmet is off and he's not in facing danger."
also this one fanart of syd and max in speed mode where he's blushing like crazy
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"It's unsafe for you to remove the steel suit, yes? But, through the use of sophisticated holographic refraction processes and advanced tactile warping algorithms I can make it seem as though you're wearing your everyday attire." - Steel, S1 E2
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I have. So many questions. Possibly more than I started with.
Does Max ever actually remove the helmet or does it just look like he does? Actually no nvm we see him eat thingsâ
Are the tactile warping algorithms just meant to change the texture of Maxâs âclothesâ for other people or does it affect the way they feel to him? If someone touches what looks like bare skin does Max feel a difference in tactile input? Is it actually bare skin??
If itâs not in camo mode does Max have the same sense of touch as if it is? Or is it different? I keep staring at the blue palms of his suitâs gloves and wondering if thatâs highlighted for aesthetic purposes or functional ones.
(I also have logistics questions that kinda donât matter if I just choose to ignore them. Which I will be doing because I donât think it really matters how showering works with this. I have more important questions.)
Like, can Steel dye Maxâs hair??? Iâd need to look into how temporary hair dye works (and regular dyes, for that matter) but theyâre working with light refraction here so I donât think pigments would come into play at all. Failing that, wig??
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God the mental image of Distress!Max and his Steel arguing in a one-person gas station bathroom about what hairstyle he should have.
Steel wants to go with something sooo edgy because theyâre rebels, Max! Nobody understands them or their mission! Itâs them against the world! They gotta go black and red stripes!! Spiky! No wait, bangs so long theyâ
Max, who is on his second gas station coffee this hour, grips the sink and says that if Steel makes him look as ridiculous as he did last week heâs going to cause a blackout so massive that NTek will be able to look in this general direction and know theyâre here.
Steel just kinda floats there for a second. Then pitches, âplatinum with black tips?â
ââŚthat would look cool.â
They finally get to leave the bathroom. And Steel shoplifts some snacks on their way out.
these are my "serious" ones based on how it seems to work in the show
the suit (and therefore camo's influence) stops at max's neck (perhaps bc since steel stopped himself from suppressing max). as a result, steel can't control anything related to max's mind/face
this incomplete link is why steel can speak in max's mind but max can't return the favor.
steel can 'listen' through the suit while in range
the helmet is something either of them can toggle in base mode (and ig stealth mode too), and is just a preprogrammed command to reconfigure some of the hexes into the helmet. (like you pointed out, the helmet is being properly summoned/dismissed)
while max doesn't feel the weight of the suit, how much tactile feedback he receives depends on the mode/section. ie, in camo mode, its basically what you'd expect based on what you're seeing (skin is skin, clothes feel like clothes to max, and affect his sense of touch accordingly). in base mode, the vents (especially those on the hands) feel like touching something normally, the black lining is slightly dulled, and the silver armor is very dulled. other modes are probably similar with a similar pattern but different calibrations.
and now, my more "self indulgent" hcs (aka hcs that i use in my writing that have no evidence from the show)
steel has to include the m (for makino) somewhere on the camo mode fit. it's part of his programming. though he can choose how he incorporates it, including distorting or obscuring it.
pockets in camo mode don't work correctly. because of how much the suit is shifting around as part of the camouflage process, the physical 'pockets' often end up desynchronized from the holographic pockets.
related: max carries a bag with him everywhere so 1) steel doesn't have to stay on his chest, 2) max doesn't put his wallet in his back pocket only for the pocket to have vanished when he goes to pay for something
related again: steel can make pockets in any mode, but generally chooses not to because whatever's in them has a high chance of getting yeeted if they change modes (also cuz it interferes w the suit's integrity as armor)
max's skin in camo mode reflects what his skin would look like with the suit off, including bruises. technically this is something steel can change, but he chooses not to because he's worried doing so would cause max undue distress.
max can and will reflexively attempt to summon the helmet if he's flustered or distressed enough. if he's in camo mode, he'll hear a brief 'failure' buzz
as steel gets better at controlling the steel suit (ie developing the mode lock so a bad hit doesn't drop them back to base mode), one of the things he learns to do is "phantom contact". for example: a tap on the shoulder to get max's attention, or a gentle tugging at his arm to guide him somewhere, or a hug that steel is too small to physically give
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@max-n-steel-should-go-apeshit, here's my full thoughts about my "The TS-12 Incident was a Sanctioned Experiment" hc:
The short version is as it sounds: rather than the TS-12 Incident occurring because Dredd chose that experiment to betray N-Tek, the point of that experiment was to test if Dredd's TURBO siphon (TS) could collect and store enough TURBO energy to power the Turbostar (also abbreviatable as TS). During this experiment, a previously unknown fault in the Turbostar causes a feedback loop, aka The Accident.
Notable information in favor of this hc is that:
N-Tek in episode 1 has TURBO siphons. Just like Dredd. This is the only TURBO tech they have in common aside from the turbostar. (N-Tek and Naught independently develop TURBO-shielding later)
The room with the TURBO siphons? It's the same room Dredd was standing in during The Incident.
Additionally, we see the storage in that room in specific fail in a catastrophic way when exposed to large amounts of TURBO energy: when Max went critical in episode 1. Do I think that Max was about to cause another Incident? No, there's a couple comments in late S2 that makes me attribute the Turbostar specifically to why The Accident played out the way it did. I think Max prolly would've just blown himself up again and ripped the room asunder.
Dredd is in sight of Molly and Forge during the experiment. He swings open the panel right behind Jim's head, and its entirely in view of where Forge and Molly are observing from.
The extended version below the Read More is the ramblings of a madwoman, aka an analysis of Dredd's character that I use as further evidence. It contains cited spoilers for events that occur in late season 2 and the season 3 movies.
This headcanon started because I was trying to answer the question "Why did this incident occur?" or more specifically "Why did Dredd choose the TS-12 experiment specifically to test the siphon?"
We know that, prior to The Accident, Dredd was close with Jim and Forge (Notably, both Come Together Part 2 and Maximum Morphos imply that he liked Jim a lot more than Forge. This is also somewhat implied by Elements of Surprise Part 2). He wasn't an absent founder that just provided funding or something, he got to go on Jim's ship. He was actively part of Morphos's development. Forge genuinely mourns his death in Episode 1. Dredd was in the "in group" at N-Tek.
We know for a fact that Dredd knew that Jim was an alien (Dawn of Morphos), he knew about Steel (Come Together Part 3), he knew what the Turbostar was and who it would be used on (Dredd Ascendant, though you could point at most of his S2 appearances for this). It's a reasonable extrapolation that he knew Jim generated TURBO energy. Maybe not the exact biological process (assuming Jim or Steel even knew that themselves), but he was besties with Jim, a man who walks into a room and turns on the lights with his TURBO energy instead of the light switch.
(I emphasize him knowing about the generation because in his retelling of the accident to Max he describes TURBO energy as "the most powerful source anyone had ever discovered", which is accurate but mirroring Forge's lie to Max that Jim "had discovered one of the rarest, most powerful types of energy in the universe". From a writing perspective this is intentional to reinforce the misdirect to the audience/Max, but as a consequence it does kinda gives the impression that Dredd somehow doesn't know where TURBO energy comes from. Which is silly given the series as a whole.)
And now that we have the skeleton of knowledge, time for the muscle.
Simply put: Dredd is man who has backup plans, especially when it comes to the Ultralinks. He plays lip service to helping the Ultralinks out, but will choose to fuck them over whenever he can get away with it (The Truth Hurts, Dredd Ascendant). He's repeatedly shown to be inventing/gathering new weaponry (ie the TURBO nuke in Extroyer Unleashed, or the Turbostar and Max across S2). He wants the invasion to fail, would in fact like use the Turbostar against them himself (The Great Turbo Star Caper). And when he thinks that the Earth is lost, he reveals that one of his backup plans is to get off the planet.
Interesting detail from that last paragraph: Dredd has complete faith in the Turbostar. (Also further evidence for him being closer with/thinking more highly of Jim, Dredd has complete faith in the Turbostar (Jim's invention) despite The Accident and no faith in the Daedalus Platform (Forge/N-Tek's invention))
And so I ask: why the FUCK would Dredd pick specifically the TS-12 experiment to betray N-Tek? Why would he risk damaging the Turbostar like that? He's friends with Jim, he has to have had other opportunities to trick him or trap him or whatever and use the siphon.
Which brings us to my headcanon:
Dredd saw the obvious flaw in only Jim being able to wield the Turbostar: it makes Jim the weak link. This weapon's amazing up until Jim gets hurt, or captured, or, Stars forbid, killed, at which point it becomes useless.
Unless.
What if they could siphon and store Jim's TURBO energy? Then Jim doesn't have to be there to fire it--anyone could. Additionally, if they have these stores of TURBO energy, they could study it easier, maybe make some money. Maybe invent new types of weapons/devices.
And so Jim and Dredd invent the TURBO Siphons. (I know Dredd says it was his baby, but Jim was the Chief of Technology/the guy what with the energy to be siphoned, so he was prolly involved at some level). And we all know what happened when it came time to use it in a full-scale test:
"The siphon worked, but the storage? Mhrm⌠disastrous. The resulting TURBO energy explosion permanently embedded my siphoning device into my body. Horrible, really."
Thatâs an incredible meal. Itâs like five courses. Iâm sitting down but I need to sit down. I have thoughts that are mostly disintegrating like cotton candy. Some are still intact though.
I raise you Jim not being involved in making the siphon being part of the problem, potentially. Like, please consider Miles Dredd walking up with the solution to a problem heâs about to point out already in his hands. Easier to get people to agree to let you try it that way.
No, yeah though. Dreddâs total faith that the Turbo Star was gonna work kinda confused me until they hyped it up enough that I knew it was gonna work, at least. Dredd just trusting Jimâs work that fucking much does patch the hole for me, though.
Because, when you think about it, Max and Steel are both also kinda Jimâs workâ (/j)
(Side note: God, the Jaâem Mkârah mythos from start to finish will never not be cool to me. Defier of Makino, Befriender of an Ultralink, Last of His Planet, Warrior, Father, Inventor, Friend. The man whoâs everything and yet exists for like maybe two hours total in screentime.)
I raise you Jim not being involved in making the siphon being part of the problem, potentially. Like, please consider Miles Dredd walking up with the solution to a problem heâs about to point out already in his hands. Easier to get people to agree to let you try it that way.
Trueeee. Honestly I could go any which way on the details of how they make the siphon! I just like the idea of them working on it together because it lets Jim haunt Miles some more. Just imagine: the last thing you worked on with your bestie is now a part of you, forever. You've literally been scarred and irreparably changed by their death.
That said, if Dredd made it himself... oof. Your bestie trusted you, trusted your work, so much that it killed them. Goddamn.
(Also I can totally see him dramatically walking up and explaining the problem, and then all coyly revealing the invention.)
Dredd just trusting Jimâs work that fucking much does patch the hole for me, though.
I'm just using this as more of an excuse to gush about their friendship. Obviously in the present day there's a lot of tension between them, but Jim still respects him enough to call Dredd "Miles"! (And he's the only character to do so!) He doesn't reject Dredd's assertion that they were "old and dear friends"! It's brief, but the tension between them momentarily eases while Dredd is explaining his plan and Jim is thoughtfully responding/finishing Dredd's sentences. And Dredd's excited during this exchange, but not in his usual smug or cocky way.
YOUR HONOR THEY WERE BESTIES
The man whoâs everything and yet exists for like maybe two hours total in screentime
Jim was so robbed by Mattel forcing S3 to be just three movies instead of a proper season. He is such an interesting change to the status quo and I need a Jim-Forge-Miles episode on my desk stat. Make their asses work together! Make them snidely talk about all their petty drama! We deserve it!
Even aside from those three, there's still:
Jim and Molly: are they having a lot of date nights? Does he encourage the morning chores that Molly put onto Max in S2? Do their parenting styles clash?
Jim and Berto: Does Berto feel like his job's at risk of getting stolen? Do they work well together or does the age gap make their interactions awkward?
Jim and Kat/Jefferson: What even was their dynamic?
Jim and Steel: How long does it take for Jim to stop treating Steel like he's the same Ultralink from 16 years ago? Jefferson plants the insidious seed that Jim and Steel might team up together, but do they even want to? (TBC I don't mean on a permanent basis. Just like. Would they ever link up unless they had to (ie to save Max)?)
Jim and Max: Putting aside everything Jim could teach Max and Steel about Takion/TURBO energy: Is Jim around the house more? If so, how weird is it for Max to have a parental figure actually present? How does Jim feel about the fact that Max seemed amused when he told him to get on the examination table, almost as though Max and Steel usually checked out after being injured?
No youâre so fucking right though!! Foaming at the mouth I need to go over every fucking mention of him with a fine tooth comb. I wanna do him right but we barely even get him to begin with!!
Iâm still thinking about Dredd putting an arm around Jimâs shoulder and Jim shooting him point blank.
*picks up Steel and yeets him at Jim* ASK HIM THE MOST ASANINE QUESTIONS ABOUT YOURSELF AND MARVEL WHEN MOST OF THEM GET AN ANSWER BECAUSE PAST YOU ALSO OVERSHARED HELLA!!!!
Can we please see Jim being a father?? Please??? Let them go stargazing! Have Max sit his dad down for a movie marathon in an attempt to catch him up with pop culture. Are there even photos of Maxâs milestones to show to Jim?
Is Jim Chief Science Officer now or is he just on indefinite leave while he catches up on⌠everything? Does Berto hound this man for his expertise in working with Turbo energy? Is Berto intimidated by this living legend returning? Youâre so fucking right actually I think this one gives me the most to spin about. Berto the character that you are. Jim the good coworker we know you to be.
I donât have thoughts about anybody else tho. Rip
I wanna do him right but we barely even get him to begin with!!
So real!! For a man that's haunting the narrative, he's kinda absent.
Iâm still thinking about Dredd putting an arm around Jimâs shoulder and Jim shooting him point blank.
Oh yea I think about that moment a lot. Yea he says literally "That Max Steel sure is something", but between the delivery, the way he slings his arm around Jim's shoulder, the fact that he specifically says it to Jim, I've always read him as imply "That son of yours sure is something." And thats...
...gah I spin them in my head once again.
ASK HIM THE MOST ASININE QUESTIONS ABOUT YOURSELF
YES!!! STEEL GET YOUR ANSWERS!!! FIND OUR YOUR HISTORY!!
(dont worry im sure max wont dwell at all about how little he was able to help steel with that compared to his dad. im sure he's not comparing himself to his dad. thanks jefferson)
Can we please see Jim being a father?? Please???
PLEAAAASEEEE! itd be healing for everyone involved im sure
Is Jim Chief Science Officer now or is he just on indefinite leave while he catches up on⌠everything?
It says a lot about the strength of Maxâs convictions and moral backbone in canon that my first and only plan for how to follow through on making him a supervillain without throwing away his entire character about it is beaming him with visions of his fatherâs plight way too fucking early for him to do anything about it.
Like???
I just have to go for the big guns immediately. I see no other way that wouldnât involve some mind control or manipulation or blackmail or other extenuating circumstances that remove him from the blame. And I canât have that for this. I gotta play it straight.
So I take a Max. I give him scattered visions of his fatherâs past in his dreams as his bond with Steel grows stronger. Something about their link, the way it⌠resonates? Unimportant. Somehow this bond between them is letting him access his fatherâs memories when he and Steel fall asleep linked. Though it is tanking the actual quality of Maxâs sleep. Which does matter. Later.
The other thing that matters is getting Max attached to the fact he gets to see and connect with his father this way. He sees things not just from when his father knew Steel but before. He sees NTek, yes, but also Takion.
Which⌠raises some questions. A lot of them. But finally learning how to not explode after eight hours is nice.
At some point Max gets tired of nobody believing his visions (read: people in his life are trying to gaslight him into not asking these questions anymore) except Steel, who became convinced when they found out Max can beam his own memories of the dreams at him with Turbo energy. (Or whatever the fuck Jim did to Steel that one time.)
I need this to be in peak Steel Wants Answers times. Maybe even before Extroyer. Because Max being uncertain of his humanity at the same time as Steel learning the Elementors are also Ultralinks has some incredible potential. Shake them both without either being in a position to truly reassure the other about who they are.
Then we can start to trickle in dreams that are⌠different.
Dreams of pain. Dreams of being hollowed out.
Max would think of these as nightmares about whatâs gonna happen to him when Dredd catches him. Except. He knows how this works now. He has these nightmares only on nights when he and Steel agree to see more of his fatherâs memories.
Did someone do this to his father? How?? When??
Itâs difficult to see the room his fatherâs in because of how weird the lighting situation is. And, you know, the pain is a bit distracting. But eventually thereâs a lucky break. They get Steel to recognize the ship or maybe the ominous figure who comes to taunt Jaâem Mkârah from time to time.
This is Makinoâs doing. Makino is a world-eater, a powerhouse thatâs hellbent on consuming all that he comes across. He has at last triumphed over the one warrior to defy him more than once, and now heâll use this power against the planet he holds so dearâŚ
(Max: Does he mean Takion?
Makino: Earth.
Max: What???? No. No!
NO!!)
There is a planet-eater coming to earth and Max is not thinking rationally about what to do about it because heâs getting maybe two good nights of sleep a week. Steel, who has only recently learned he left Makinoâs army to save Jimâs life, is absolutely down to enable whatever bullshit plans Max comes up with on how to save the guy. Steel owes his father everything!
Cue some bullshit that makes the hunt for the Turbo Star look so tame.
These two donât care about collateral or witnesses or permission. They want results. They want one result. And they donât care what they have to do to get it.
Theyâll run away, steal, collaborate with criminals. They donât care what the public thinks. They donât care what NTek thinks. This isnât about them. They had their chance to help!! Now stop getting in the way!!
They probably learn of Jimâs spaceship at some point and move in there to have an easier time avoiding NTek, though they decide to save the Turbo Chamber for when they have to kick Makinoâs ass with the Turbo Star. Which is honestly their most solid plan.
They might even risk teaming with Dredd to have him build it. They can always double cross him later before he gets the chance to do it to them first! Because theyâre not going to risk letting the man who claimed to have betrayed their father once go anywhere near him after heâs been saved, so heâs gotta go.
Yeah yeah yeah yeah!!! It has to be a spiral. Itâs gotta start somewhere sweet and end in a downright rabid desperation. A yearning so deep itâs going to implode into a black hole. Theyâve sunk so much of their hope into this. It has to work. It has to.
What was it all for if they fail? They canât stop. They have to see this through! They will! They will!
The entire premise can really just be boiled down to this:
Max Steel is going to bring James McGrath home alive. Whatever it takes.
I gotta lay out what about this fucking invasionâs lead up is actually vital and what isnât, because all these moves and counter moves and contingencies are great for plot but not for what weâre doing here. Occamâs Turbo Pulse!!
Because while they tell each other theyâll stop at nothing to get Jim back, itâs entirely possible the majority of the harm thatâs happening is just property damage, with some exceptions.
If theyâre doing smash and grabs for the parts they need then at worst theyâre knocking some NTek heads or scaring civilians guards into standing down. Theyâre probably also beating up villains that wonât uphold their ends of deals. Thatâs definitely happening.
The thing about their goal thatâs shakiest to me is that they need Makino to bring Jim to them because they donât have a ship (until after theyâve their big plans.) So they have to grapple with the risk that if they fail to save Jim, the earth is doomed. Itâs a heavy thing and it probably drives them to the brink of abandoning the mission or turning on each other a couple times before they solve it.
Of course, the solution to that is the Turbo Star. And with it their resolve and their bond gets dangerously strong.
Their father believed it would work. Dredd thinks itâll work. If they can make another one or- or find its pieces, if Dredd is really telling the truth this time, then they can just use that to take down Makino!
The rest of his fleet might be a problem afterwards, but maybe theyâll bail when their leaderâs defeated? Or NTek will let them help clean up the mess theyâll have made before arresting them. Theyâll cross that bridge when they get there.
In any case, they still need Makino to come here. Preferably in a hurry so he gets here sometime this decade.
Which means a lot more betrayal.
Goodbye global defense network. Hello massive fucking portal over THI! Wait, no, ughhhh NTek killed the portal! Whatâs plan B? Let Steel do the talking to some Ultralinks and play at a âchange of heart?â
âŚwait.
It occurs to me their biggest threat in this AU isnât NTek, itâs Ven-Ghan.
Max is gonna be out here negotiating with Toxzon and jail breaking Elementors and even giving Dredd his Turbo energy just to save Steel from this guy who refuses to see the big picture.
You wanna bring in rogue Ultralinks? Thereâs millions of them on the way, pal! Can you wait like three months?? We got a dad to free!
Thereâs potential in a lot of their early quid-pro-quos with bad guys being Steelâs ideas and Max getting dragged along. That phase of their villainy ends with Max convincing Steel those team-ups are a waste of time after too many of them go south. How is helping Toxzon gas a building going to help them save his dad?? Why is Extroyerâs feud against Dredd their problem??
And then Max turning around and promising these same people anything if they help him get Steel back. Does Extroyer want a rare bird of prey dna sample? Toxzon needs help getting Fishy back from NTek? Show him where the batteries are, Dredd, and just keep that ship from leaving their atmosphere!!
Max is still putting saving a life before his mission. And thatâs absolutely still being exploited.
They can get a lot done if you cut out NTek stuff and heroics, but Villain Team Up IOUs can also get costly.
They canât even call Ven-Ghan the bad guy because they know what theyâre doing looks so bad. But they have no intention of stopping, sooooâ
(Steel, angrily shooting some netting scraps eleven times: I might just have to kill this guy, Max!!
Max, whoâs at the end of his rope trying to get this manâs life spared: âŚwe could- maybe- Gah! We could try and get Toxzon to make him help us fight Makino?
Steel, imagining it gleefully after spending all night in an orb: Iâm listeniiiiing!!)
The gap in their morality is gonna get Max to bend on ten thousand things besides murder. If itâs anything short of murder, Steel can probably get Max on board. Heâs getting better at that by the day. (And Max is just kind of getting worse night by night, tbf.)
also man in this au forge is going to be convinced steel is just evil. like he was already kinda on that train in s1, but at least in s1 steel was relatively under N-Tek control. in this au he actually double crossed them. i don't wanna think about the kinds of anti-max steel tech they have berto working on now that steel's definitely gone rogue. heck they might even be trying to invent a way to break the ultralink in order to "save max"
@max-n-steel-should-go-apeshit, here's my full thoughts about my "The TS-12 Incident was a Sanctioned Experiment" hc:
The short version is as it sounds: rather than the TS-12 Incident occurring because Dredd chose that experiment to betray N-Tek, the point of that experiment was to test if Dredd's TURBO siphon (TS) could collect and store enough TURBO energy to power the Turbostar (also abbreviatable as TS). During this experiment, a previously unknown fault in the Turbostar causes a feedback loop, aka The Accident.
Notable information in favor of this hc is that:
N-Tek in episode 1 has TURBO siphons. Just like Dredd. This is the only TURBO tech they have in common aside from the turbostar. (N-Tek and Naught independently develop TURBO-shielding later)
The room with the TURBO siphons? It's the same room Dredd was standing in during The Incident.
Additionally, we see the storage in that room in specific fail in a catastrophic way when exposed to large amounts of TURBO energy: when Max went critical in episode 1. Do I think that Max was about to cause another Incident? No, there's a couple comments in late S2 that makes me attribute the Turbostar specifically to why The Accident played out the way it did. I think Max prolly would've just blown himself up again and ripped the room asunder.
Dredd is in sight of Molly and Forge during the experiment. He swings open the panel right behind Jim's head, and its entirely in view of where Forge and Molly are observing from.
The extended version below the Read More is the ramblings of a madwoman, aka an analysis of Dredd's character that I use as further evidence. It contains cited spoilers for events that occur in late season 2 and the season 3 movies.
This headcanon started because I was trying to answer the question "Why did this incident occur?" or more specifically "Why did Dredd choose the TS-12 experiment specifically to test the siphon?"
We know that, prior to The Accident, Dredd was close with Jim and Forge (Notably, both Come Together Part 2 and Maximum Morphos imply that he liked Jim a lot more than Forge. This is also somewhat implied by Elements of Surprise Part 2). He wasn't an absent founder that just provided funding or something, he got to go on Jim's ship. He was actively part of Morphos's development. Forge genuinely mourns his death in Episode 1. Dredd was in the "in group" at N-Tek.
We know for a fact that Dredd knew that Jim was an alien (Dawn of Morphos), he knew about Steel (Come Together Part 3), he knew what the Turbostar was and who it would be used on (Dredd Ascendant, though you could point at most of his S2 appearances for this). It's a reasonable extrapolation that he knew Jim generated TURBO energy. Maybe not the exact biological process (assuming Jim or Steel even knew that themselves), but he was besties with Jim, a man who walks into a room and turns on the lights with his TURBO energy instead of the light switch.
(I emphasize him knowing about the generation because in his retelling of the accident to Max he describes TURBO energy as "the most powerful source anyone had ever discovered", which is accurate but mirroring Forge's lie to Max that Jim "had discovered one of the rarest, most powerful types of energy in the universe". From a writing perspective this is intentional to reinforce the misdirect to the audience/Max, but as a consequence it does kinda gives the impression that Dredd somehow doesn't know where TURBO energy comes from. Which is silly given the series as a whole.)
And now that we have the skeleton of knowledge, time for the muscle.
Simply put: Dredd is man who has backup plans, especially when it comes to the Ultralinks. He plays lip service to helping the Ultralinks out, but will choose to fuck them over whenever he can get away with it (The Truth Hurts, Dredd Ascendant). He's repeatedly shown to be inventing/gathering new weaponry (ie the TURBO nuke in Extroyer Unleashed, or the Turbostar and Max across S2). He wants the invasion to fail, would in fact like use the Turbostar against them himself (The Great Turbo Star Caper). And when he thinks that the Earth is lost, he reveals that one of his backup plans is to get off the planet.
Interesting detail from that last paragraph: Dredd has complete faith in the Turbostar. (Also further evidence for him being closer with/thinking more highly of Jim, Dredd has complete faith in the Turbostar (Jim's invention) despite The Accident and no faith in the Daedalus Platform (Forge/N-Tek's invention))
And so I ask: why the FUCK would Dredd pick specifically the TS-12 experiment to betray N-Tek? Why would he risk damaging the Turbostar like that? He's friends with Jim, he has to have had other opportunities to trick him or trap him or whatever and use the siphon.
Which brings us to my headcanon:
Dredd saw the obvious flaw in only Jim being able to wield the Turbostar: it makes Jim the weak link. This weapon's amazing up until Jim gets hurt, or captured, or, Stars forbid, killed, at which point it becomes useless.
Unless.
What if they could siphon and store Jim's TURBO energy? Then Jim doesn't have to be there to fire it--anyone could. Additionally, if they have these stores of TURBO energy, they could study it easier, maybe make some money. Maybe invent new types of weapons/devices.
And so Jim and Dredd invent the TURBO Siphons. (I know Dredd says it was his baby, but Jim was the Chief of Technology/the guy what with the energy to be siphoned, so he was prolly involved at some level). And we all know what happened when it came time to use it in a full-scale test:
"The siphon worked, but the storage? Mhrm⌠disastrous. The resulting TURBO energy explosion permanently embedded my siphoning device into my body. Horrible, really."
Thatâs an incredible meal. Itâs like five courses. Iâm sitting down but I need to sit down. I have thoughts that are mostly disintegrating like cotton candy. Some are still intact though.
I raise you Jim not being involved in making the siphon being part of the problem, potentially. Like, please consider Miles Dredd walking up with the solution to a problem heâs about to point out already in his hands. Easier to get people to agree to let you try it that way.
No, yeah though. Dreddâs total faith that the Turbo Star was gonna work kinda confused me until they hyped it up enough that I knew it was gonna work, at least. Dredd just trusting Jimâs work that fucking much does patch the hole for me, though.
Because, when you think about it, Max and Steel are both also kinda Jimâs workâ (/j)
(Side note: God, the Jaâem Mkârah mythos from start to finish will never not be cool to me. Defier of Makino, Befriender of an Ultralink, Last of His Planet, Warrior, Father, Inventor, Friend. The man whoâs everything and yet exists for like maybe two hours total in screentime.)
I raise you Jim not being involved in making the siphon being part of the problem, potentially. Like, please consider Miles Dredd walking up with the solution to a problem heâs about to point out already in his hands. Easier to get people to agree to let you try it that way.
Trueeee. Honestly I could go any which way on the details of how they make the siphon! I just like the idea of them working on it together because it lets Jim haunt Miles some more. Just imagine: the last thing you worked on with your bestie is now a part of you, forever. You've literally been scarred and irreparably changed by their death.
That said, if Dredd made it himself... oof. Your bestie trusted you, trusted your work, so much that it killed them. Goddamn.
(Also I can totally see him dramatically walking up and explaining the problem, and then all coyly revealing the invention.)
Dredd just trusting Jimâs work that fucking much does patch the hole for me, though.
I'm just using this as more of an excuse to gush about their friendship. Obviously in the present day there's a lot of tension between them, but Jim still respects him enough to call Dredd "Miles"! (And he's the only character to do so!) He doesn't reject Dredd's assertion that they were "old and dear friends"! It's brief, but the tension between them momentarily eases while Dredd is explaining his plan and Jim is thoughtfully responding/finishing Dredd's sentences. And Dredd's excited during this exchange, but not in his usual smug or cocky way.
YOUR HONOR THEY WERE BESTIES
The man whoâs everything and yet exists for like maybe two hours total in screentime
Jim was so robbed by Mattel forcing S3 to be just three movies instead of a proper season. He is such an interesting change to the status quo and I need a Jim-Forge-Miles episode on my desk stat. Make their asses work together! Make them snidely talk about all their petty drama! We deserve it!
Even aside from those three, there's still:
Jim and Molly: are they having a lot of date nights? Does he encourage the morning chores that Molly put onto Max in S2? Do their parenting styles clash?
Jim and Berto: Does Berto feel like his job's at risk of getting stolen? Do they work well together or does the age gap make their interactions awkward?
Jim and Kat/Jefferson: What even was their dynamic?
Jim and Steel: How long does it take for Jim to stop treating Steel like he's the same Ultralink from 16 years ago? Jefferson plants the insidious seed that Jim and Steel might team up together, but do they even want to? (TBC I don't mean on a permanent basis. Just like. Would they ever link up unless they had to (ie to save Max)?)
Jim and Max: Putting aside everything Jim could teach Max and Steel about Takion/TURBO energy: Is Jim around the house more? If so, how weird is it for Max to have a parental figure actually present? How does Jim feel about the fact that Max seemed amused when he told him to get on the examination table, almost as though Max and Steel usually checked out after being injured?
It says a lot about the strength of Maxâs convictions and moral backbone in canon that my first and only plan for how to follow through on making him a supervillain without throwing away his entire character about it is beaming him with visions of his fatherâs plight way too fucking early for him to do anything about it.
Like???
I just have to go for the big guns immediately. I see no other way that wouldnât involve some mind control or manipulation or blackmail or other extenuating circumstances that remove him from the blame. And I canât have that for this. I gotta play it straight.
So I take a Max. I give him scattered visions of his fatherâs past in his dreams as his bond with Steel grows stronger. Something about their link, the way it⌠resonates? Unimportant. Somehow this bond between them is letting him access his fatherâs memories when he and Steel fall asleep linked. Though it is tanking the actual quality of Maxâs sleep. Which does matter. Later.
The other thing that matters is getting Max attached to the fact he gets to see and connect with his father this way. He sees things not just from when his father knew Steel but before. He sees NTek, yes, but also Takion.
Which⌠raises some questions. A lot of them. But finally learning how to not explode after eight hours is nice.
At some point Max gets tired of nobody believing his visions (read: people in his life are trying to gaslight him into not asking these questions anymore) except Steel, who became convinced when they found out Max can beam his own memories of the dreams at him with Turbo energy. (Or whatever the fuck Jim did to Steel that one time.)
I need this to be in peak Steel Wants Answers times. Maybe even before Extroyer. Because Max being uncertain of his humanity at the same time as Steel learning the Elementors are also Ultralinks has some incredible potential. Shake them both without either being in a position to truly reassure the other about who they are.
Then we can start to trickle in dreams that are⌠different.
Dreams of pain. Dreams of being hollowed out.
Max would think of these as nightmares about whatâs gonna happen to him when Dredd catches him. Except. He knows how this works now. He has these nightmares only on nights when he and Steel agree to see more of his fatherâs memories.
Did someone do this to his father? How?? When??
Itâs difficult to see the room his fatherâs in because of how weird the lighting situation is. And, you know, the pain is a bit distracting. But eventually thereâs a lucky break. They get Steel to recognize the ship or maybe the ominous figure who comes to taunt Jaâem Mkârah from time to time.
This is Makinoâs doing. Makino is a world-eater, a powerhouse thatâs hellbent on consuming all that he comes across. He has at last triumphed over the one warrior to defy him more than once, and now heâll use this power against the planet he holds so dearâŚ
(Max: Does he mean Takion?
Makino: Earth.
Max: What???? No. No!
NO!!)
There is a planet-eater coming to earth and Max is not thinking rationally about what to do about it because heâs getting maybe two good nights of sleep a week. Steel, who has only recently learned he left Makinoâs army to save Jimâs life, is absolutely down to enable whatever bullshit plans Max comes up with on how to save the guy. Steel owes his father everything!
Cue some bullshit that makes the hunt for the Turbo Star look so tame.
These two donât care about collateral or witnesses or permission. They want results. They want one result. And they donât care what they have to do to get it.
Theyâll run away, steal, collaborate with criminals. They donât care what the public thinks. They donât care what NTek thinks. This isnât about them. They had their chance to help!! Now stop getting in the way!!
They probably learn of Jimâs spaceship at some point and move in there to have an easier time avoiding NTek, though they decide to save the Turbo Chamber for when they have to kick Makinoâs ass with the Turbo Star. Which is honestly their most solid plan.
They might even risk teaming with Dredd to have him build it. They can always double cross him later before he gets the chance to do it to them first! Because theyâre not going to risk letting the man who claimed to have betrayed their father once go anywhere near him after heâs been saved, so heâs gotta go.
Yeah yeah yeah yeah!!! It has to be a spiral. Itâs gotta start somewhere sweet and end in a downright rabid desperation. A yearning so deep itâs going to implode into a black hole. Theyâve sunk so much of their hope into this. It has to work. It has to.
What was it all for if they fail? They canât stop. They have to see this through! They will! They will!
The entire premise can really just be boiled down to this:
Max Steel is going to bring James McGrath home alive. Whatever it takes.
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The thought broke through it's mind, burning light bleeding through it's sensitive senses, a distant wailing sending a deep and primal fear through it's translucent body. It trembled slightly, causing the stagnant waters of its prison to ripple. The violating wails from the space outside were soon drowned out by a different soundânot as glaring or dangerous in it's intensity, but rhythmic in a way that felt oddly-âŚsoothing.
The figures outside, the 'white coats' as it knew them, were scurrying about. Perhaps there truly was a predator nearby to fear? It was hard to see them, the bright, burning glow beyond it's cage being far too much for it, ebbing and flowing in it's severityâyet, eventually, it knew the white coats were all gone. Their words were harsh before it could sense them no longer.
"I don't care who he is! Someone just deal with him already!"
"He's mocking us! Playing that stupid 'music' over the speakers! Someone get that blasted intruder!"
It felt exposed. It was left alone, in it's cage. It needed help. Needed to touch⌠It reached out a translucent 'hand'âŚ
Thenâthere was a new sound. A new voice.
"Man, you guys have really gotta up your security, those sentry bots were built like five sols ago~!"
It wasn't like the usual 'loud voice' that spoke throughout the space, without any heart or rhythm. It was-âŚdifferent. New. Suddenly, a loud thud sounded from within it's chamber, the water within shifting and slowly pulling downwards. Was it time for 'tests'? That's what this usually meant. It couldn't remain like this. It needed legs. Clumsy, heavy legs, curled up beneath it as the weightlessness of its home was slowly drained away and his clear prison door was opened to the dry air.
Everything was louder now, but this-⌠'music'? It didn't dislike it. It definitely preferred it over the wailing. The burning lights cooled, replaced by a more familiar, more welcome color. Where had it seen it beforeâŚ? Now, it was exposed to the outside, the black box around its prison, where the white coats looked at it and spoke among themselvesâand in the back of that space, a knocking rang out. Once, twice, three times and a panel broke loose. Legs dangled down from the top of the space, a dark figure gripping onto the edge of the break it had made before dropping down and rolling forward across the floor.
That one-âŚnot a white coat? The strange, dark abnormality looked over at the imprisoned being. This thing-âŚit has purple scales? No-âŚnot scales. Purple! That's it-..the color. It's face is purple. It made the purple?
"Huh-? What the f-âŚ? Well, I did not expect this-" The dark and purple thing cocked its head. That voice. It was on the Loud Voice before. "That must have been what the 'containment protocol' was- Well, good thing I deactivated it." He approached, crossing the spaceâweaving between the tables of the white coatsâclimbing up the base of its clear prison and finally leaning in past the open door, reaching out with his hand. The white coats never got this close⌠This was different. This was new.
"C'mon! Let's get moving, not much time!" It looked up at the New. The Purple. Curious eyes practically glowed up at him, the imprisoned slowly tilting it's head. It reached out with its 'hand'. Its hand. It fit rather comfortably in his.
"Can you stand?" That fun voice came from behind the purple face. It nodded slowly.
hi im gonna take a couple mins to be a hater abt the flight mode redesign between season 1 and 2.
(little context in case you didn't notice/its been a while since you last saw the show, three modes got redesigned between seasons: flight, scuba, and speed. scuba and speed stayed relatively close, but flight's redesign was massive)
hereâs what it looked like in s1:
i like to call this the âdragonflyâ design bc, well, the wings are designed like a dragonflyâs!
four thin, broad, and short wings, with the forewings being smaller than the hindwings. additionally, when at rest the wings often stay spread open but angled down (like a dragonflyâs) rather than folded back along the body (like a damselflyâs). (note the âoftenââhe does sometimes fold them straight back)
for comparison, hereâs the season 2 design:
i call this the âjetâ design bc it reminds me of the tailfins on a jet plane (though im open to suggestions)
this version has three equally-sized wings, that are each shaped kinda like a finger. i think he can rotate them somewhat based on how they sit in-flight vs at-rest.
it also has a really ugly glass visor that goes above maxâs helmet⌠for some reason (i think this gets removed in the s3 helmet change).
and now that weâre all aware of the different designs its time to become a hater!
the jet design is so bulky. the dragonfly design had some bulk to itânotably around the neck and with the engine-vent-thing in the center of the backâbut the jet design takes both of those elements and amps them up.
like look at this!
the wings stick back so much even when just standing there! what are you gonna do if something falls on you--
--wh-where'd the third wing go? is he laying on it? also those wings don't look like they're supposed to bend that way.
which brings me to my second point: the redesign looks less comfortable.
look. i dont think flight mode is good for lounging about period. unless we're talking about mid-air lounging. but at least in the s1 design bro could rest his back against something. ie:
like. does max want to be resting his back against these surfaces? no, obviously not, but imagine how much more uncomfortable that would be if his wings weren't thin and couldnt lay flat. that would be awful.
third, and most importantly: i am biased. dragonflies are not often used as inspiration for winged creatures. its way more common to see butterflies, flies, or moths used for "winged insect" inspo, bats or birds for "generic flying creature" and helicopters or planes for "flying mechas".
which is shame because dragonflies are really cool
dragonflies are endurance fliers that are fast and maneuverable. and they can have gorgeous wings like a butterfly. if they were a dnd character, they'd have all their stats maxed except for constitution.
also! they can move all four wings independently! (which btw the s1 can do)
anyway, woe, a 10 minute PBS video about dragonflies upon you:
(also side note since we're this far into this and i'm holding you captive: i think its really cool that all the blue parts on the suit are places that max can vent turbo energy from. i think its mainly in flight mode that we actually see the "auxiliary vents" used, ie:)
for a bit of a "two cakes" thing: @max-n-steel-should-go-apeshit's dr. carina salazar reminded me of my own doc oc, dr. jenna owens:
she was jim's doctor before he left. molly's as well up until molly left n-tek. and now that max is working at n-tek, she's been assigned as his doc. she's somewhat mixed on this because, yes, she's the only doc with any understanding of takonian physiology, but she is not a pediatrician forge! she's been working exclusively with adults her whole career, you can't just throw a child her way, especially one as abnormal as max.
still, if she doesn't do it, nobody will.
(more ramblings below the read more)
Her very first meeting with Max, he's dead in a crater where a warehouse once stood. Or, he should be dead, he's not breathing, but there's enough TURBO energy in the air that she can touch it, so honestly who knows what's medically going on here. By some miracle, her and her team are able to extract Max and more importantly resuscitate him.
(She wishes she could just say he was unconscious, but she knew the moment she grabbed him. His eyes were still open.
...He's breathing now. That's good enough)
Their next meeting, he's conscious, albeit barely. She's to do a couple of final checks before Forge comes and... before Forge comes. She doesn't agree with what he intends to do with Max, but they fought about it for an hour already and couldn't come up with anything better. She tries to be kind as she asks Max how he's feeling, what he remembers. He deserves a little bit of kindness before entering Hell. She can't comfort him, though, can't risk getting attached, not if she wants to help.
(Is it more ethical to subject a child to constant, moderate pain or frequent, intense pain? How could his own uncle weigh those options so quickly?)
Relevant snippet as she's leaving Max to Forge:
âThe report will be on your desk in an hour,â she promised. As she passed by the commander to leave, she lowered her voice and told him, âJim would be furious about this."
He paused millimeters away from grabbing her upper arm. He glowered at her and stated with conviction, âJim would understand.â He pulled back with a jerk, then stepped forward, erasing her from his field of view. She stared daggers into his skull until the door shut.
On her subsequent meetings with Max she's much friendlier. Her biggest issue with the two is getting Max and Steel to actually come to her when Max gets injured or sick. She's their doctor, not their keeper, she can't help what she doesn't know about.
(It doesn't help that N-Tek rarely sends them to medical after a battle)
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But yea! In general I tend to pull her out for "Max"-related medical stuff, while Berto handles things related to Steel/the Steel suit. Ie:
Max is having back pain after the Elementors nearly ripped a wing off? That's an Owens issue
Jim's back but badly malnourished? Owens.
Forge assuming Max is fine since he didn't turn into a Goopanoid like Molly? Owens for the examination, but the med staff in general would want to give him a lecture that he will not internalize
Steel fried his own logic circuits? Berto.
Steel got hit with Ultralink malware? Berto.
A part of the Steel Suit seizes up after a nasty run in with a xenoshok? Berto, though his guess is as good as Steel's. They could try running a current through it?
I find it fucking hilarious that Dr. Salazar and Dr. Owenâs are ships passing in the night, career-wise.
Dr. Owens, after sixteen years without treating a Takonian for anything: *is Maxâs only medical option and so aware of that and doing her damn best*
Dr. Salazar, after sixteen years of treating everything she could for Max: *is not allowed back in the fucking building anymore because she is liable to kill Forge Ferrus for the child soldier shit*
I raise a toast to Owens and hope she has âaccess to Jimâs spaceshipâ rights. She deserves âaccess to Jimâs spaceshipâ rights more than most of the people who had it, highkey.
she had access to jim's spaceship. unfortunately jim and steel being dead kinda restricted that access to uh. nobody.
she gets it back tho once jim's back!
but yes i adore how similar and yet how different salazar and owens are. they should meet and bitch about forge together. i'm sure they'd have a lot to talk about. a lot of n-tek and max drama to share.
More Nebula AU had been pulled from the oven. This oneâs a particularly thicker slice.
We got more characters!! And Max gets to hold a little guy :DDD Itâs not Steel yet bc I have to think really hard on how thatâs gonna go.
o7 new oc, this is the most weâre gonna see of you unless I go back on my plans. Youâll get to haunt the narrative with your absence though.
[CW: Claustrophobia (brief; Max was willing to go in but it still sucks)]
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âWell, well, well. It looks like troubleâs blown in from the East!â
His mom embraces the man at the door. âNice to see you too, Jefferson.â
Max makes his way down the stairs. He leans against the railing, smiling. âAre you here to yap or to lend a hand?â
âIâm coming, Iâm coming.â Then Jefferson gets a good look at him. âDamn, whenâd you get so big, Sparky? Feels like only yesterday you came up to my hip!â
Max carefully scoots by his mom in the doorway and walks past Jefferson back toward their rental truck. âIâm looking to beat out Uncle Ferrus before I can drink.â
âHa, dream on, kid!â
Whatâs left to unload? Some household appliances itâd be better to leave to someone else, boxes of dishware he can probably take, andâŚ
Max grabs his dadâs telescope carefully, wrapping it tighter in the thick comforter they packed its case in. Probably wonât get much use out of it in the city, what with all the light pollution, but he remembers there being a pretty clear view of the stars by where the base is. Maybe mom will have time to drive them out to do some stargazing after they get settled in.
He wants to know if he can see the binary stars Takion used to orbit from here. Itâs a little late in the year to be making an attempt, but itâs worth a shot.
With Jeffersonâs help, theyâre able to get the rest of the boxes into their new apartment and stacked in their respective rooms within the hour. They follow his car to the storage facility in town where his mom turns over the keys to the rental, then they go grab an early dinner.
âSo, whatâs new?â His mom asks. She pulls the toothpick from her sandwich. âAnything pressing we should know about before we walk in there?â
âFor starters, weâve had a few personnel shuffled around in preparation for your move.â Jefferson takes a big bite of his burger. âMm. We got most of the Nebula team already on base, though a few are still in transit.â
âMan. Feels like itâs been forever since the whole band got together.â Max tears a strip off one of his chicken tenders. It looks fine, but his appetiteâs been shot since they started the move. He opts to just get a box for it and grabs his milkshake instead. âWasnât Dr. Salazar retiring, though? Whoâs she passing the mic to?â
Jefferson seems genuinely surprised. âYou havenât heard? Itâs Berto, man.â
Max coughs so hard he jams the straw from his milkshake into the roof of his mouth. He ducks his head to wipe his mouth with another cough. âWhat?! How come no one told me?!â
Oh crud. He hasnât had a chance to shower since the hotel. Heâs probably such a mess right now. Did he get any stains on this shirt?
Well, Berto probably wonât care. Heâs seen Max covered in soot from tons of fried electronics. Not to mention all the bedheads from having to stay at bases overnight for observation a fair few times. But still!
His mom, traitor that she is, pats him on the back with a smile. âIsnât this a good thing, Max? Youâve always been awfully fond of Bertoâs work.â
And awfully fond of him, she doesnât say. Because teasing him too much in a public space like this would be asking for a suspiciously localized blackout. As it stands, the fluorescent light directly above them flickers loudly.
Max starts counting in his head as he catches his breath and loses track almost immediately. The light goes back to normal, though.
Still, Jeffersonâs right here and he did see that. âSâthere something I should know? I wasnât told your status. You need me to call in a jump-jet?â
âNo, itâs fine.â Max puts his elbows on the table and picks at his chicken tenders some more to avoid eye contact. âSo, Bertoâs here. Cool, cool. Who are the holdups?â
âYouâd have to ask your Uncle Ferrus to be sure. Iâm not fully in the loop with all that Project Nebula stuff.â Jefferson looks at him like heâs waiting for an answer still but, ultimately, leaves it be. He munches on a few of his fries. âNo signs of any trouble yet, but weâre keeping our eyes peeled.â
Right. Because Max canât exactly wear his Turbo dampeners while the extractionâs happening. Itâd just fry them to bits. Usually they do it in special rooms with enough built-in shielding to mask the spike in energy levels, but itâs not foolproof. Itâs hard to be when the amount Max needs to offload only ever gets higher.
Their tech peopleâs race to develop better dampeners is outpaced only by their need to make better storage. As it stands their current best bet is some fancy turbine setup that turns Turbo energy into normal electrical energy, which is a lot easier to repurpose on the downlow than barrels of Turbo energy.
Max isnât too worried about that end of things. All of itâs above his pay grade of exactly zero dollars.
âSpeaking of, did you guys get any new toys out of the last batch?â Max canât help but ask.
Jefferson laughs. âOh, did we? Iâll have to fill you in on the drive over. The kind of firepower weâre packing isnât exactly diner-safe talk.â
âItâd probably be best to get a move on anyway.â His mom flags down a waitress. âCan we get a to-go box and the check, please? I think weâre done here.â
âGreat⌠more driving.â Max drops his head into his hands. He feels his mom set a hand on his shoulder.
Jefferson has the decency to say, âYou guys wait here. Iâll get the car.â
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Apparently Max looked miserable enough that Jefferson called HQ when he went to bring the car around and asked if Max was clear to doze on the way to base. Miracle of miracles, they said yes.
âWeâve got ground support thatâs going to rendezvous with us just outside the city limits. If you can hang in there for another fifteen, youâll be able to catch some Zâs in one of the tanks.â Jefferson explains. Then comes the catch: âWe will have to box you up, though. Just to be on the safe side.â
Max tries not to groan as he takes the backseat. His mom gives him a sympathetic look in the rear view mirror but she doesnât argue against it. He knows why.
His regular dampeners have come a long way from what they used to be. Theyâre all clunky and uncomfortable, sure, but theyâre designed for everyday use. Theyâre light, relatively small, and if he tries he can sometimes forget theyâre there.
Getting his Turbo energy suppressed by that torture cube? Sucks. It sucks massively! Itâs barely big enough to let him curl up on his side and completely opaque. Thereâs at least decent ventilation so he doesnât die in there, but its main purpose is to keep him and his whole existence under a literal lock and key.
Max can feel that every time he climbs in.
Unfortunately, itâs still one of the only reliable ways they have to transport him without risking his Turbo energy frying their high tech ride. Max is still holding out hope that theyâll come up with a better method some day. One that wonât leave him stiff in a dozen different places by the time they get to HQ.
Sadly, that day is not today.
When they pull up to the many tanks that have been waiting for them, Max doesnât even bother complaining. He pulls his jacket off to toss it on the floor of the cube as an attempt at cushioning. Leave it to the containment techs to think about efficiency and nothing else. Is comfort even a word in their databases?
His mom tries to reassure him before they seal him in. âJust a little longer, Max. Weâll be there before you know it!â
âAre we sure I canât just be tranqâd for this?â Max asks flatly. He already feels like a zoo animal. Why not go the whole nine yards?
His momâs pinched expression doesnât make him feel any better. But he doesnât take it back. Heâs so tired.
âIâll see you soon, sweetie.â
Then itâs dark.
Itâs hard to know how long it takes, but it feels like seconds before Max feels all but a whisper of breath be crushed from his lungs. Every inhale is a challenge. Every exhale gets squeezed out of him. Over and over and over. His chest burns cold.
Heâs hyperaware of what his body is doing, but his mind feels like itâs dropped a few too many inputs. He might as well be made of static.
Max does his best to doze the rest of the way despite all of that. Itâs not anything new. If Max really couldnât handle a tight space he wouldnât be allowed to go anywhere nowadays. Gone are the days where his output was small enough to stifle with a thick layer of lead alone.
He slides around a little in the box after a while of nothing. Max blinks, trying to make sense of the movement. Did he drift off? He canât tell.
Then his prison cracks open along its seams and lets light in. His body takes huge gulps of air but his brain lags behind a little.
White and green. Dimmed overhead lights and a blurry figure overhead. Thereâs someone kneeling beside him. Bold, considering how his bodyâs leaking Turbo energy like nobodyâs business right now. Heavy footsteps retreat. The lone figure stays.
ââyou with me? Maxwell?â Every blink brings that face more into focus. âIâd appreciate a sign of life if you could manage one.â
âGhh?â
âClose enough.â
Something soft and weighted gets set on his chest. Max brings up a hand and squishes it. He looks down (or is that up) at it. Feels the red wool beneath his fingers. He blinks at it slowly, still a little lost until its low familiar noises click in his head. All at once heâs present enough to remember what this is.
âIâm getting a little old for Coco, donât you think?â Max asks even as he keeps squishing the little alien gator plushieâs soft snout. Itâs splayed out starfish style on his chest and buzzing away like a phone on silent.
Coco has six legs, three button eyes, and a split in the end of her- its tail. Itâs modeled after one of the creatures in the hand-drawn kids books his dad made for him once upon a time. A humanâs take on a Takonian kidâs toy.
Max has loved this thing half to death over the years.
âIf youâd rather I take her with me, that can be arranged.â Dr. Salazar stands up. Moves towards the far side of the room. There are cabinets filled with a little of everything theyâve ever needed to treat him. They donât keep any medical machinery in here, so it feels kind of empty. âThough I canât imagine her time would be better spent gathering dust on a shelf.â
Max crosses his arms over his chest and lets the warmth and weight of the plush ground him a little. Heâs too tired to be embarrassed about how it must look. âProbably not.â
Dr. Salazar hums, patient. âTake all the time you need, then. Theyâre still setting up the chamber for you.â
That wakes him up from his stupor a little more. Max moves to sit up, though he struggles to manage that without anything to support himself with.
They opened his cube in the infirmary. Or, at least, the shielded offshoot room in the infirmary thatâs meant for him. Heâs pretty sure it didnât exist before they had need of it because itâs not on any floorplans. Rooms for Project Nebula rarely are, Max has found.
Dr. Salazar pulls a blanket off the lone raised bed against the wall and draws it over his shoulders. Her knees pop when she kneels to do so. âAre you ready for our little pre-procedure questionnaire yet?â
âIâm confused.â Max gets up, shakily, and goes to sit on the bed. âI thought you said you were going to retire?â
âI did indeed. I actually came in today to talk to someone about my pension plan. Getting to talk to you again is just a bonus.â She explains. âPlus, I figured another night of care is the least I could give you since Iâm already here. Clocking out has never meant Iâve stopped wanting to take care of you.â
âYeahâŚâ Theyâd already said their goodbyes in Wyoming a couple weeks before this move. Even still, it hurts to see her here again knowing it wonât last. He wants to be selfish. He shouldnât be selfish.
Max hugs Coco tighter rather than risk doing something stupid like hugging Dr. Salazar while heâs this tired. This wired. Her pacemaker couldâ
Cocoâs weighted beans shift with the extra pressure. Max takes a deep breath.
His shoulders relax enough for the blanket to slip some when he sighs. âIâm⌠Iâm glad you came. Itâs going to be weird not seeing you around anymore.â
âLikewise. Though Iâll be sure to keep in touch. You have my number, my new P.O. Box, and my email for when you want to chat. Iâll get back to you as soon as I can.â She smiles sadly and sits on the edge of the bed with him. âTaking a step back from the action gives me a lot more time to work on my methods. Iâll still advise your care team every now and then. And send you a couple care packages too.â
She boops Coco on her snout. âUnless, of course, you really are too old for these things.â
âPerish the thought.â Max smiles. âI canât be the reason youâve got idle hands. How will your grandkids ever survive?â
Dr. Salazar reaches out to ruffle his hair. Max is honestly surprised she doesnât get shocked. He didnât even notice when his output went flat and the plush in his arms went still. Looks like Cocoâs still got it.
âNow that youâve stabilized, we can run through the pre-offload checklist. Iâve been told you already ate?â She moves from her spot on the bed to pull a pen and paper clipboard off its place on the wall. In rooms like these itâs strictly old-school only for safety.
Max doesnât want to bring up his loss of appetite. Heâs got a feeling he knows what thatâs about, anyway. âYup. Jefferson got me sorted on the way here.â
âNot ideal but probably for the best. What about sleep?â Here, she does pay closer attention. Lapses in his control while heâs asleep have been a real problem on and off over the years.
âI managed five hours in a hotel last night. We got in late and left at dawn for an early start.â Max sets Coco down on the bed beside him. He doesnât really need the assist right now. He does still fidget with the split end of her tail, though. The wool there is worn from years of absentminded petting. âWe didnât want to push our luck too much.â
âIâll check and see if the Vaultâs available yet. If it isnât, you can rest here after your procedure. Thereâs no need to waste time you could spend recovering.â Dr. Salazar offers. She looks up from the clipboard, smiling thinly. âIf the commander has an issue with it he can stand outside the door with a blaster himself. I wonât have you fainting in some hallway when thereâs a perfectly good bed waiting for you already.â
Max gives a relieved smile. âThanks, Doc! Youâre a lifesaver.â
Sheâs technically not supposed to allow that because this room âisnât defensible enoughâ or some nonsense. Like itâs not deep enough into the heart of the base that Max would struggle to find his way back to the hangar on a good day. Dr. Salazarâs all about bending regulations when theyâre bad for his health, though. And she usually gets away with it because his health is her job.
Or, well, was. Heâs known for weeks she was leaving and he still hasnât quite come to terms with what thatâs going to mean. Sheâs been in his life for longer than heâs known how to talk. Heâd usually see more of her than his own mother during particularly bad times growing up.
Fevers that wouldnât break for hours soothed by patient hands. Murmured comfort lulling him to sleep after backlash from failed extractions left him weak and bedridden. Nights where his mom would be so late to pick him up from a base that Dr. Salazar would tuck him into an infirmary bed and stay up to wait for her in his stead. Whole afternoons spent trying to refine his control that ended with him crying in her arms because he couldnât do it. Hair swept away from his forehead to make room for a kiss and a promise that itâs alright, youâll get there some day. Weâll all be here to help until you do, okay?
Coco starts to rumble quietly again. Max grips her torso in his fist tightly without even glancing at her.
Dr. Salazar notices. Of course she does. But before she can ask him whatâs wrongâ
The door to the room opens abruptly. âThere you are! I forgot the intercom doesnât reach this far back. Iâve been trying to call you two for ages now.â
âUncle Ferrus!â Maxâs smile only wobbles a little. Heâs never gotten good at pivoting like that, but he tries anyway. âItâs good to see you!â
Max is a little excited to see his uncle again. Itâs been how many years since theyâve talked face-to-face? At least four. Itâs not often that he and his mom come back to the main base and Uncle Ferrus rarely leaves on cross-country missions himself these days.
âSame here, kid.â His uncle doesnât come forward for a hug, which is probably wise. He instead turns to nod at Dr. Salazar. âDoctor.â
âCommander.â Dr. Salazar greets politely in turn. She kind of pointedly does not salute him. Though, to be fair, Max didnât either and she doesnât even work here anymore.
âIâm here to pick up Max for the extraction. Theyâre ready for ya.â He explains.
Maxâs stomach drops. âAlready? Thatâs a quick turnaround. It usually takes like an hour to prime, doesnât it?â
âNot this new model. Didnât your mother tell you? Berto and the other tech guys overhauled the whole thing. It runs smoother and faster. We can get it started in fifteen minutes.â Uncle Ferrus says. He sounds proud of them. Max probably should be too because thatâs genuinely impressive engineering, but a new chamber when heâs already feeling like crap doesnât get him as cheered up as his uncle probably hoped it would.
Better tech means more points of failure. Newer tech means it hasnât been through its paces yet. Both have had a history of failing him.
Dr. Salazar, whoâs been at this for a long time and knows that, asks the question for him. âHas the overhauled chamber been stress-tested yet?â
Uncle Ferrus waves a hand. âIâve been assured itâs passed every safety check and the shielding can maskââ
âThat wasnât my question, Commander.â Dr. Salazar interrupts smoothly. âIâll clarify. Has the overhauled chamber proven it can withstand Maxâs previously recorded upper limit for a period of at least twenty minutes? Or have the techs gotten ahead of themselves with their optimizing, again?â
âEasy, Doc, the guys have been looking that thing over for days now. Theyâve assured me that itâs all up to snuff.â Uncle Ferrus says confidently. âIâd love to smooth your feathers by having them run more tests, but Iâm afraid we donât have that kind of time right now.â
They really donât, is the worst part. Cocoâs weighted beans are damn near rattling with the force of her- its vibrations. Max tries to squish it into the mattress to muffle the noise but the movement draws his uncleâs eye anyway. Whatever heated back and forth he and the doctor were having when he stopped paying attention gets cut short.
Crud.
âHe still has that thing?â Uncle Ferrus asks when he notices the plush, not unkindly but certainly not with much tact. âI thought you grew out of it, Max.â
Before Max can feel too embarrassed about that, Dr. Salazar is taking a casual step in front of him and drawing all the attention to herself. Heâs seen the way she straightens up and squares her shoulders like that a thousand times. He relaxes without really thinking about it.
Max sits back and pulls Coco against his side for the wait. Neither he nor his uncle are about to be able to get a word in, he knows from experience. Uncle Ferrus clearly knows too, because he kind of slumps against the doorframe in preemptive defeat.
âYou know very well, Commander, that the Crocheted Optimised-Control Object is a useful medical device for emotional support that aids in maintaining Maxâs short-term energy-stability.â Dr. Salazar doesnât even have to glance at his chart as she lays this all out again. Max faintly remembers a similar conversation taking place back when he was eleven. Itâd been louder then because she hadnât known he was in the room.
She keeps going. âThe Turbo energy sensor within it that we pieced together from Jimâs notes can detect rapid and anomalous spikes of Turbo energy production. It also emits deep, soothing tones and vibrations that have been proven to mitigate Maxâs Turbo energy emissions when heâs non-critical, as well as lower his heart rate back to acceptable levels.â
Translation: the alien gator plush purrs. It purrs big time. Itâs purring right now and Max rubs his thumb over its button eyes. One of them is getting loose from how often he does so.
âYou should know this, Commander, because you have read my many reports and the notes therein that state that Maxâs overall improvements to his control have not diminished this toolâs effectiveness. And that, before such a stressful and uncomfortable procedure, it is perfectly acceptable to use whatever means are necessary to return to his baselines.â Dr. Salazarâs tone turns downright icy as she stares Uncle Ferrus down. âBaselines he needs a stability aidâs help to return to because someone authorized the use of that cramped Transport Cube without consulting his doctor.â
Ah, there it is! Max knew this wasnât just about the Coco comment when it ran over the ten second mark. Uncle Ferrus might be screwed.
Because, if thereâs anyone on earth who hates that stupid fucking box more than Max? Itâs Dr. Salazar.
Sheâs proven with graphs and stuff that his energy production is more difficult to regulate if heâs upset and that box is very upsetting. Putting him in it too close to an extraction is just asking for an incident report. Max wonders if maybe Uncle Ferrus thought sheâd left already when he gave the okay to use it.
For his sake, Max hopes Dr. Salazar never learns the truth of that one way or the other. Heâs in enough hot water as is.
âI can explain.â Uncle Ferrus looks vaguely intimidated as he raises his hands in what feels like genuine surrender.
Itâs stuff like this that reminds Max that Dr. Salazar used to be his dadâs doctor before he died and thatâs why sheâs his doctor now. He can only imagine the words she mustâve had with his uncle over the years, having seen him land two McGraths in the infirmary too many times to count.
Max shivers. Heâs lucky she adores him.
âYou can and you will.â Dr. Salazar says curtly. She taps her penâs tip on the edge of her clipboard away from the actual documents on it. âAfter my patient and I have finished this checklist, which is standard procedure for a reason. You may wait in one of the infirmary chairs or out in the hall. Iâll send Max on his way when weâre done here.â
âIââ
âThank you for your cooperation, Commander.â Dr. Salazar turns her back on him. Her smile when she looks at Max is warm and sure. âHave you experienced any dizziness or difficulty with your balance in the last twenty-four hours?â
âUhâŚâ Max looks over her shoulder to see Uncle Ferrus standing there gobsmacked. Like heâs somehow forgotten what Dr. Salazar was like in person after so long only getting this kind of treatment over emails and phone calls.
His uncle makes a gesture like heâs telling Max to come with him anyway. There is a moment where Max considers it.
Instead, Max makes eye contact with Dr. Salazar. âHeâs still there.â
Uncle Ferrus hurriedly slams the door shut before she manages to turn around and catch him.
Thereâs a moment of silence. Then the sound of heavy boots actually walking away. Then another moment of silence for good measure.
Itâs only then that Max asks her, âArenât there only like five more questions on that sheet?â
When Dr. Salazar looks at him again, itâs with the smile that he knows means heâs in for a treat.
âOf course. But, given this is going to be my last pre-check with you before my retirement, I would be doing the team that follows me a disservice by not being as thorough as possible.â She double-clicks her pen. âWould it be alright with you if I add in say, roughly, thirty minutesâ worth of follow-up questions?â
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Damn. It sure would suck for Nebula!Max if I gave him a responsible OC adult who advocated for him growing up and then remove them from the equation so that regular-canon levels of neglect and distrust from the adults in his life hit him that much worse. Wouldnât that suck? Wouldnât that be awful?
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So anyways, Dr. Carina Salazar is NTekâs lead Xenobiologist and has been the head of Project Nebula since its creation in â96. Sheâs got a background in the medical field and keeps up to date on anything and everything she thinks could be relevant to Maxâs health. Sheâs also one of the only people involved in Project Nebula whoâs become fluent enough in Takonian to read the handfuls of material that Jim brought with him from his shipâs medbay right before he passed. Like, the week of.
(The ship they canât find for the life of them. So, really, these scarce Takonian medical records and anything they find out themselves is all they have to work from to help Max.)
And sheâs retiring.
Dr. Salazar is stepping back from not just Project Nebula but from NTek as a whole because the recent death of her son means thereâs no one else to care for her grandkids. And her heart condition, but that alone wasnât enough to push her out the door despite it having become more difficult to manage for years now.
While her role has never been one likely to see combat outside of an absolute worst-case scenario, itâs got long and unpredictable hours. She basically lives on base. And Dr. Salazar has always been adamant that itâs important for young children to have their caretakers be around more often than theyâre not. Itâs why she stuck it out for so long with Project Nebula, actually. Itâs why she poured to much of herself into it.
But Max isnât the only kid that needs her now. She really wishes she didnât have to choose.
She really wishes his blood relatives would step the fuck upâ
Iâve also decided to have Dr. Salazar be Jimâs old doctor because that gives her both the expertise and the seniority to be able to tell Forge off and have him listen about it.
Who would win: this scary secret agent whoâs built like a brick wall or the caring old lady with like twenty years of blackmail?
for a bit of a "two cakes" thing: @max-n-steel-should-go-apeshit's dr. carina salazar reminded me of my own doc oc, dr. jenna owens:
she was jim's doctor before he left. molly's as well up until molly left n-tek. and now that max is working at n-tek, she's been assigned as his doc. she's somewhat mixed on this because, yes, she's the only doc with any understanding of takonian physiology, but she is not a pediatrician forge! she's been working exclusively with adults her whole career, you can't just throw a child her way, especially one as abnormal as max.
still, if she doesn't do it, nobody will.
(more ramblings below the read more)
Her very first meeting with Max, he's dead in a crater where a warehouse once stood. Or, he should be dead, he's not breathing, but there's enough TURBO energy in the air that she can touch it, so honestly who knows what's medically going on here. By some miracle, her and her team are able to extract Max and more importantly resuscitate him.
(She wishes she could just say he was unconscious, but she knew the moment she grabbed him. His eyes were still open.
...He's breathing now. That's good enough)
Their next meeting, he's conscious, albeit barely. She's to do a couple of final checks before Forge comes and... before Forge comes. She doesn't agree with what he intends to do with Max, but they fought about it for an hour already and couldn't come up with anything better. She tries to be kind as she asks Max how he's feeling, what he remembers. He deserves a little bit of kindness before entering Hell. She can't comfort him, though, can't risk getting attached, not if she wants to help.
(Is it more ethical to subject a child to constant, moderate pain or frequent, intense pain? How could his own uncle weigh those options so quickly?)
Relevant snippet as she's leaving Max to Forge:
âThe report will be on your desk in an hour,â she promised. As she passed by the commander to leave, she lowered her voice and told him, âJim would be furious about this."
He paused millimeters away from grabbing her upper arm. He glowered at her and stated with conviction, âJim would understand.â He pulled back with a jerk, then stepped forward, erasing her from his field of view. She stared daggers into his skull until the door shut.
On her subsequent meetings with Max she's much friendlier. Her biggest issue with the two is getting Max and Steel to actually come to her when Max gets injured or sick. She's their doctor, not their keeper, she can't help what she doesn't know about.
(It doesn't help that N-Tek rarely sends them to medical after a battle)
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But yea! In general I tend to pull her out for "Max"-related medical stuff, while Berto handles things related to Steel/the Steel suit. Ie:
Max is having back pain after the Elementors nearly ripped a wing off? That's an Owens issue
Jim's back but badly malnourished? Owens.
Forge assuming Max is fine since he didn't turn into a Goopanoid like Molly? Owens for the examination, but the med staff in general would want to give him a lecture that he will not internalize
Steel fried his own logic circuits? Berto.
Steel got hit with Ultralink malware? Berto.
A part of the Steel Suit seizes up after a nasty run in with a xenoshok? Berto, though his guess is as good as Steel's. They could try running a current through it?