It says a lot about the strength of Maxâs convictions and moral backbone in canon that my first and only plan for how to follow through on making him a supervillain without throwing away his entire character about it is beaming him with visions of his fatherâs plight way too fucking early for him to do anything about it.
Like???
I just have to go for the big guns immediately. I see no other way that wouldnât involve some mind control or manipulation or blackmail or other extenuating circumstances that remove him from the blame. And I canât have that for this. I gotta play it straight.
So I take a Max. I give him scattered visions of his fatherâs past in his dreams as his bond with Steel grows stronger. Something about their link, the way it⌠resonates? Unimportant. Somehow this bond between them is letting him access his fatherâs memories when he and Steel fall asleep linked. Though it is tanking the actual quality of Maxâs sleep. Which does matter. Later.
The other thing that matters is getting Max attached to the fact he gets to see and connect with his father this way. He sees things not just from when his father knew Steel but before. He sees NTek, yes, but also Takion.
Which⌠raises some questions. A lot of them. But finally learning how to not explode after eight hours is nice.
At some point Max gets tired of nobody believing his visions (read: people in his life are trying to gaslight him into not asking these questions anymore) except Steel, who became convinced when they found out Max can beam his own memories of the dreams at him with Turbo energy. (Or whatever the fuck Jim did to Steel that one time.)
I need this to be in peak Steel Wants Answers times. Maybe even before Extroyer. Because Max being uncertain of his humanity at the same time as Steel learning the Elementors are also Ultralinks has some incredible potential. Shake them both without either being in a position to truly reassure the other about who they are.
Then we can start to trickle in dreams that are⌠different.
Dreams of pain. Dreams of being hollowed out.
Max would think of these as nightmares about whatâs gonna happen to him when Dredd catches him. Except. He knows how this works now. He has these nightmares only on nights when he and Steel agree to see more of his fatherâs memories.
Did someone do this to his father? How?? When??
Itâs difficult to see the room his fatherâs in because of how weird the lighting situation is. And, you know, the pain is a bit distracting. But eventually thereâs a lucky break. They get Steel to recognize the ship or maybe the ominous figure who comes to taunt Jaâem Mkârah from time to time.
This is Makinoâs doing. Makino is a world-eater, a powerhouse thatâs hellbent on consuming all that he comes across. He has at last triumphed over the one warrior to defy him more than once, and now heâll use this power against the planet he holds so dearâŚ
(Max: Does he mean Takion?
Makino: Earth.
Max: What???? No. No!
NO!!)
There is a planet-eater coming to earth and Max is not thinking rationally about what to do about it because heâs getting maybe two good nights of sleep a week. Steel, who has only recently learned he left Makinoâs army to save Jimâs life, is absolutely down to enable whatever bullshit plans Max comes up with on how to save the guy. Steel owes his father everything!
Cue some bullshit that makes the hunt for the Turbo Star look so tame.
These two donât care about collateral or witnesses or permission. They want results. They want one result. And they donât care what they have to do to get it.
Theyâll run away, steal, collaborate with criminals. They donât care what the public thinks. They donât care what NTek thinks. This isnât about them. They had their chance to help!! Now stop getting in the way!!
They probably learn of Jimâs spaceship at some point and move in there to have an easier time avoiding NTek, though they decide to save the Turbo Chamber for when they have to kick Makinoâs ass with the Turbo Star. Which is honestly their most solid plan.
They might even risk teaming with Dredd to have him build it. They can always double cross him later before he gets the chance to do it to them first! Because theyâre not going to risk letting the man who claimed to have betrayed their father once go anywhere near him after heâs been saved, so heâs gotta go.
Yeah yeah yeah yeah!!! It has to be a spiral. Itâs gotta start somewhere sweet and end in a downright rabid desperation. A yearning so deep itâs going to implode into a black hole. Theyâve sunk so much of their hope into this. It has to work. It has to.
What was it all for if they fail? They canât stop. They have to see this through! They will! They will!
The entire premise can really just be boiled down to this:
Max Steel is going to bring James McGrath home alive. Whatever it takes.
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The thought broke through it's mind, burning light bleeding through it's sensitive senses, a distant wailing sending a deep and primal fear through it's translucent body. It trembled slightly, causing the stagnant waters of its prison to ripple. The violating wails from the space outside were soon drowned out by a different soundânot as glaring or dangerous in it's intensity, but rhythmic in a way that felt oddly-âŚsoothing.
The figures outside, the 'white coats' as it knew them, were scurrying about. Perhaps there truly was a predator nearby to fear? It was hard to see them, the bright, burning glow beyond it's cage being far too much for it, ebbing and flowing in it's severityâyet, eventually, it knew the white coats were all gone. Their words were harsh before it could sense them no longer.
"I don't care who he is! Someone just deal with him already!"
"He's mocking us! Playing that stupid 'music' over the speakers! Someone get that blasted intruder!"
It felt exposed. It was left alone, in it's cage. It needed help. Needed to touch⌠It reached out a translucent 'hand'âŚ
Thenâthere was a new sound. A new voice.
"Man, you guys have really gotta up your security, those sentry bots were built like five sols ago~!"
It wasn't like the usual 'loud voice' that spoke throughout the space, without any heart or rhythm. It was-âŚdifferent. New. Suddenly, a loud thud sounded from within it's chamber, the water within shifting and slowly pulling downwards. Was it time for 'tests'? That's what this usually meant. It couldn't remain like this. It needed legs. Clumsy, heavy legs, curled up beneath it as the weightlessness of its home was slowly drained away and his clear prison door was opened to the dry air.
Everything was louder now, but this-⌠'music'? It didn't dislike it. It definitely preferred it over the wailing. The burning lights cooled, replaced by a more familiar, more welcome color. Where had it seen it beforeâŚ? Now, it was exposed to the outside, the black box around its prison, where the white coats looked at it and spoke among themselvesâand in the back of that space, a knocking rang out. Once, twice, three times and a panel broke loose. Legs dangled down from the top of the space, a dark figure gripping onto the edge of the break it had made before dropping down and rolling forward across the floor.
That one-âŚnot a white coat? The strange, dark abnormality looked over at the imprisoned being. This thing-âŚit has purple scales? No-âŚnot scales. Purple! That's it-..the color. It's face is purple. It made the purple?
"Huh-? What the f-âŚ? Well, I did not expect this-" The dark and purple thing cocked its head. That voice. It was on the Loud Voice before. "That must have been what the 'containment protocol' was- Well, good thing I deactivated it." He approached, crossing the spaceâweaving between the tables of the white coatsâclimbing up the base of its clear prison and finally leaning in past the open door, reaching out with his hand. The white coats never got this close⌠This was different. This was new.
"C'mon! Let's get moving, not much time!" It looked up at the New. The Purple. Curious eyes practically glowed up at him, the imprisoned slowly tilting it's head. It reached out with its 'hand'. Its hand. It fit rather comfortably in his.
"Can you stand?" That fun voice came from behind the purple face. It nodded slowly.
hi im gonna take a couple mins to be a hater abt the flight mode redesign between season 1 and 2.
(little context in case you didn't notice/its been a while since you last saw the show, three modes got redesigned between seasons: flight, scuba, and speed. scuba and speed stayed relatively close, but flight's redesign was massive)
hereâs what it looked like in s1:
i like to call this the âdragonflyâ design bc, well, the wings are designed like a dragonflyâs!
four thin, broad, and short wings, with the forewings being smaller than the hindwings. additionally, when at rest the wings often stay spread open but angled down (like a dragonflyâs) rather than folded back along the body (like a damselflyâs). (note the âoftenââhe does sometimes fold them straight back)
for comparison, hereâs the season 2 design:
i call this the âjetâ design bc it reminds me of the tailfins on a jet plane (though im open to suggestions)
this version has three equally-sized wings, that are each shaped kinda like a finger. i think he can rotate them somewhat based on how they sit in-flight vs at-rest.
it also has a really ugly glass visor that goes above maxâs helmet⌠for some reason (i think this gets removed in the s3 helmet change).
and now that weâre all aware of the different designs its time to become a hater!
the jet design is so bulky. the dragonfly design had some bulk to itânotably around the neck and with the engine-vent-thing in the center of the backâbut the jet design takes both of those elements and amps them up.
like look at this!
the wings stick back so much even when just standing there! what are you gonna do if something falls on you--
--wh-where'd the third wing go? is he laying on it? also those wings don't look like they're supposed to bend that way.
which brings me to my second point: the redesign looks less comfortable.
look. i dont think flight mode is good for lounging about period. unless we're talking about mid-air lounging. but at least in the s1 design bro could rest his back against something. ie:
like. does max want to be resting his back against these surfaces? no, obviously not, but imagine how much more uncomfortable that would be if his wings weren't thin and couldnt lay flat. that would be awful.
third, and most importantly: i am biased. dragonflies are not often used as inspiration for winged creatures. its way more common to see butterflies, flies, or moths used for "winged insect" inspo, bats or birds for "generic flying creature" and helicopters or planes for "flying mechas".
which is shame because dragonflies are really cool
dragonflies are endurance fliers that are fast and maneuverable. and they can have gorgeous wings like a butterfly. if they were a dnd character, they'd have all their stats maxed except for constitution.
also! they can move all four wings independently! (which btw the s1 can do)
anyway, woe, a 10 minute PBS video about dragonflies upon you:
(also side note since we're this far into this and i'm holding you captive: i think its really cool that all the blue parts on the suit are places that max can vent turbo energy from. i think its mainly in flight mode that we actually see the "auxiliary vents" used, ie:)
for a bit of a "two cakes" thing: @max-n-steel-should-go-apeshit's dr. carina salazar reminded me of my own doc oc, dr. jenna owens:
she was jim's doctor before he left. molly's as well up until molly left n-tek. and now that max is working at n-tek, she's been assigned as his doc. she's somewhat mixed on this because, yes, she's the only doc with any understanding of takonian physiology, but she is not a pediatrician forge! she's been working exclusively with adults her whole career, you can't just throw a child her way, especially one as abnormal as max.
still, if she doesn't do it, nobody will.
(more ramblings below the read more)
Her very first meeting with Max, he's dead in a crater where a warehouse once stood. Or, he should be dead, he's not breathing, but there's enough TURBO energy in the air that she can touch it, so honestly who knows what's medically going on here. By some miracle, her and her team are able to extract Max and more importantly resuscitate him.
(She wishes she could just say he was unconscious, but she knew the moment she grabbed him. His eyes were still open.
...He's breathing now. That's good enough)
Their next meeting, he's conscious, albeit barely. She's to do a couple of final checks before Forge comes and... before Forge comes. She doesn't agree with what he intends to do with Max, but they fought about it for an hour already and couldn't come up with anything better. She tries to be kind as she asks Max how he's feeling, what he remembers. He deserves a little bit of kindness before entering Hell. She can't comfort him, though, can't risk getting attached, not if she wants to help.
(Is it more ethical to subject a child to constant, moderate pain or frequent, intense pain? How could his own uncle weigh those options so quickly?)
Relevant snippet as she's leaving Max to Forge:
âThe report will be on your desk in an hour,â she promised. As she passed by the commander to leave, she lowered her voice and told him, âJim would be furious about this."
He paused millimeters away from grabbing her upper arm. He glowered at her and stated with conviction, âJim would understand.â He pulled back with a jerk, then stepped forward, erasing her from his field of view. She stared daggers into his skull until the door shut.
On her subsequent meetings with Max she's much friendlier. Her biggest issue with the two is getting Max and Steel to actually come to her when Max gets injured or sick. She's their doctor, not their keeper, she can't help what she doesn't know about.
(It doesn't help that N-Tek rarely sends them to medical after a battle)
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But yea! In general I tend to pull her out for "Max"-related medical stuff, while Berto handles things related to Steel/the Steel suit. Ie:
Max is having back pain after the Elementors nearly ripped a wing off? That's an Owens issue
Jim's back but badly malnourished? Owens.
Forge assuming Max is fine since he didn't turn into a Goopanoid like Molly? Owens for the examination, but the med staff in general would want to give him a lecture that he will not internalize
Steel fried his own logic circuits? Berto.
Steel got hit with Ultralink malware? Berto.
A part of the Steel Suit seizes up after a nasty run in with a xenoshok? Berto, though his guess is as good as Steel's. They could try running a current through it?
I find it fucking hilarious that Dr. Salazar and Dr. Owenâs are ships passing in the night, career-wise.
Dr. Owens, after sixteen years without treating a Takonian for anything: *is Maxâs only medical option and so aware of that and doing her damn best*
Dr. Salazar, after sixteen years of treating everything she could for Max: *is not allowed back in the fucking building anymore because she is liable to kill Forge Ferrus for the child soldier shit*
I raise a toast to Owens and hope she has âaccess to Jimâs spaceshipâ rights. She deserves âaccess to Jimâs spaceshipâ rights more than most of the people who had it, highkey.
she had access to jim's spaceship. unfortunately jim and steel being dead kinda restricted that access to uh. nobody.
she gets it back tho once jim's back!
but yes i adore how similar and yet how different salazar and owens are. they should meet and bitch about forge together. i'm sure they'd have a lot to talk about. a lot of n-tek and max drama to share.
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More Nebula AU had been pulled from the oven. This oneâs a particularly thicker slice.
We got more characters!! And Max gets to hold a little guy :DDD Itâs not Steel yet bc I have to think really hard on how thatâs gonna go.
o7 new oc, this is the most weâre gonna see of you unless I go back on my plans. Youâll get to haunt the narrative with your absence though.
[CW: Claustrophobia (brief; Max was willing to go in but it still sucks)]
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âWell, well, well. It looks like troubleâs blown in from the East!â
His mom embraces the man at the door. âNice to see you too, Jefferson.â
Max makes his way down the stairs. He leans against the railing, smiling. âAre you here to yap or to lend a hand?â
âIâm coming, Iâm coming.â Then Jefferson gets a good look at him. âDamn, whenâd you get so big, Sparky? Feels like only yesterday you came up to my hip!â
Max carefully scoots by his mom in the doorway and walks past Jefferson back toward their rental truck. âIâm looking to beat out Uncle Ferrus before I can drink.â
âHa, dream on, kid!â
Whatâs left to unload? Some household appliances itâd be better to leave to someone else, boxes of dishware he can probably take, andâŚ
Max grabs his dadâs telescope carefully, wrapping it tighter in the thick comforter they packed its case in. Probably wonât get much use out of it in the city, what with all the light pollution, but he remembers there being a pretty clear view of the stars by where the base is. Maybe mom will have time to drive them out to do some stargazing after they get settled in.
He wants to know if he can see the binary stars Takion used to orbit from here. Itâs a little late in the year to be making an attempt, but itâs worth a shot.
With Jeffersonâs help, theyâre able to get the rest of the boxes into their new apartment and stacked in their respective rooms within the hour. They follow his car to the storage facility in town where his mom turns over the keys to the rental, then they go grab an early dinner.
âSo, whatâs new?â His mom asks. She pulls the toothpick from her sandwich. âAnything pressing we should know about before we walk in there?â
âFor starters, weâve had a few personnel shuffled around in preparation for your move.â Jefferson takes a big bite of his burger. âMm. We got most of the Nebula team already on base, though a few are still in transit.â
âMan. Feels like itâs been forever since the whole band got together.â Max tears a strip off one of his chicken tenders. It looks fine, but his appetiteâs been shot since they started the move. He opts to just get a box for it and grabs his milkshake instead. âWasnât Dr. Salazar retiring, though? Whoâs she passing the mic to?â
Jefferson seems genuinely surprised. âYou havenât heard? Itâs Berto, man.â
Max coughs so hard he jams the straw from his milkshake into the roof of his mouth. He ducks his head to wipe his mouth with another cough. âWhat?! How come no one told me?!â
Oh crud. He hasnât had a chance to shower since the hotel. Heâs probably such a mess right now. Did he get any stains on this shirt?
Well, Berto probably wonât care. Heâs seen Max covered in soot from tons of fried electronics. Not to mention all the bedheads from having to stay at bases overnight for observation a fair few times. But still!
His mom, traitor that she is, pats him on the back with a smile. âIsnât this a good thing, Max? Youâve always been awfully fond of Bertoâs work.â
And awfully fond of him, she doesnât say. Because teasing him too much in a public space like this would be asking for a suspiciously localized blackout. As it stands, the fluorescent light directly above them flickers loudly.
Max starts counting in his head as he catches his breath and loses track almost immediately. The light goes back to normal, though.
Still, Jeffersonâs right here and he did see that. âSâthere something I should know? I wasnât told your status. You need me to call in a jump-jet?â
âNo, itâs fine.â Max puts his elbows on the table and picks at his chicken tenders some more to avoid eye contact. âSo, Bertoâs here. Cool, cool. Who are the holdups?â
âYouâd have to ask your Uncle Ferrus to be sure. Iâm not fully in the loop with all that Project Nebula stuff.â Jefferson looks at him like heâs waiting for an answer still but, ultimately, leaves it be. He munches on a few of his fries. âNo signs of any trouble yet, but weâre keeping our eyes peeled.â
Right. Because Max canât exactly wear his Turbo dampeners while the extractionâs happening. Itâd just fry them to bits. Usually they do it in special rooms with enough built-in shielding to mask the spike in energy levels, but itâs not foolproof. Itâs hard to be when the amount Max needs to offload only ever gets higher.
Their tech peopleâs race to develop better dampeners is outpaced only by their need to make better storage. As it stands their current best bet is some fancy turbine setup that turns Turbo energy into normal electrical energy, which is a lot easier to repurpose on the downlow than barrels of Turbo energy.
Max isnât too worried about that end of things. All of itâs above his pay grade of exactly zero dollars.
âSpeaking of, did you guys get any new toys out of the last batch?â Max canât help but ask.
Jefferson laughs. âOh, did we? Iâll have to fill you in on the drive over. The kind of firepower weâre packing isnât exactly diner-safe talk.â
âItâd probably be best to get a move on anyway.â His mom flags down a waitress. âCan we get a to-go box and the check, please? I think weâre done here.â
âGreat⌠more driving.â Max drops his head into his hands. He feels his mom set a hand on his shoulder.
Jefferson has the decency to say, âYou guys wait here. Iâll get the car.â
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Apparently Max looked miserable enough that Jefferson called HQ when he went to bring the car around and asked if Max was clear to doze on the way to base. Miracle of miracles, they said yes.
âWeâve got ground support thatâs going to rendezvous with us just outside the city limits. If you can hang in there for another fifteen, youâll be able to catch some Zâs in one of the tanks.â Jefferson explains. Then comes the catch: âWe will have to box you up, though. Just to be on the safe side.â
Max tries not to groan as he takes the backseat. His mom gives him a sympathetic look in the rear view mirror but she doesnât argue against it. He knows why.
His regular dampeners have come a long way from what they used to be. Theyâre all clunky and uncomfortable, sure, but theyâre designed for everyday use. Theyâre light, relatively small, and if he tries he can sometimes forget theyâre there.
Getting his Turbo energy suppressed by that torture cube? Sucks. It sucks massively! Itâs barely big enough to let him curl up on his side and completely opaque. Thereâs at least decent ventilation so he doesnât die in there, but its main purpose is to keep him and his whole existence under a literal lock and key.
Max can feel that every time he climbs in.
Unfortunately, itâs still one of the only reliable ways they have to transport him without risking his Turbo energy frying their high tech ride. Max is still holding out hope that theyâll come up with a better method some day. One that wonât leave him stiff in a dozen different places by the time they get to HQ.
Sadly, that day is not today.
When they pull up to the many tanks that have been waiting for them, Max doesnât even bother complaining. He pulls his jacket off to toss it on the floor of the cube as an attempt at cushioning. Leave it to the containment techs to think about efficiency and nothing else. Is comfort even a word in their databases?
His mom tries to reassure him before they seal him in. âJust a little longer, Max. Weâll be there before you know it!â
âAre we sure I canât just be tranqâd for this?â Max asks flatly. He already feels like a zoo animal. Why not go the whole nine yards?
His momâs pinched expression doesnât make him feel any better. But he doesnât take it back. Heâs so tired.
âIâll see you soon, sweetie.â
Then itâs dark.
Itâs hard to know how long it takes, but it feels like seconds before Max feels all but a whisper of breath be crushed from his lungs. Every inhale is a challenge. Every exhale gets squeezed out of him. Over and over and over. His chest burns cold.
Heâs hyperaware of what his body is doing, but his mind feels like itâs dropped a few too many inputs. He might as well be made of static.
Max does his best to doze the rest of the way despite all of that. Itâs not anything new. If Max really couldnât handle a tight space he wouldnât be allowed to go anywhere nowadays. Gone are the days where his output was small enough to stifle with a thick layer of lead alone.
He slides around a little in the box after a while of nothing. Max blinks, trying to make sense of the movement. Did he drift off? He canât tell.
Then his prison cracks open along its seams and lets light in. His body takes huge gulps of air but his brain lags behind a little.
White and green. Dimmed overhead lights and a blurry figure overhead. Thereâs someone kneeling beside him. Bold, considering how his bodyâs leaking Turbo energy like nobodyâs business right now. Heavy footsteps retreat. The lone figure stays.
ââyou with me? Maxwell?â Every blink brings that face more into focus. âIâd appreciate a sign of life if you could manage one.â
âGhh?â
âClose enough.â
Something soft and weighted gets set on his chest. Max brings up a hand and squishes it. He looks down (or is that up) at it. Feels the red wool beneath his fingers. He blinks at it slowly, still a little lost until its low familiar noises click in his head. All at once heâs present enough to remember what this is.
âIâm getting a little old for Coco, donât you think?â Max asks even as he keeps squishing the little alien gator plushieâs soft snout. Itâs splayed out starfish style on his chest and buzzing away like a phone on silent.
Coco has six legs, three button eyes, and a split in the end of her- its tail. Itâs modeled after one of the creatures in the hand-drawn kids books his dad made for him once upon a time. A humanâs take on a Takonian kidâs toy.
Max has loved this thing half to death over the years.
âIf youâd rather I take her with me, that can be arranged.â Dr. Salazar stands up. Moves towards the far side of the room. There are cabinets filled with a little of everything theyâve ever needed to treat him. They donât keep any medical machinery in here, so it feels kind of empty. âThough I canât imagine her time would be better spent gathering dust on a shelf.â
Max crosses his arms over his chest and lets the warmth and weight of the plush ground him a little. Heâs too tired to be embarrassed about how it must look. âProbably not.â
Dr. Salazar hums, patient. âTake all the time you need, then. Theyâre still setting up the chamber for you.â
That wakes him up from his stupor a little more. Max moves to sit up, though he struggles to manage that without anything to support himself with.
They opened his cube in the infirmary. Or, at least, the shielded offshoot room in the infirmary thatâs meant for him. Heâs pretty sure it didnât exist before they had need of it because itâs not on any floorplans. Rooms for Project Nebula rarely are, Max has found.
Dr. Salazar pulls a blanket off the lone raised bed against the wall and draws it over his shoulders. Her knees pop when she kneels to do so. âAre you ready for our little pre-procedure questionnaire yet?â
âIâm confused.â Max gets up, shakily, and goes to sit on the bed. âI thought you said you were going to retire?â
âI did indeed. I actually came in today to talk to someone about my pension plan. Getting to talk to you again is just a bonus.â She explains. âPlus, I figured another night of care is the least I could give you since Iâm already here. Clocking out has never meant Iâve stopped wanting to take care of you.â
âYeahâŚâ Theyâd already said their goodbyes in Wyoming a couple weeks before this move. Even still, it hurts to see her here again knowing it wonât last. He wants to be selfish. He shouldnât be selfish.
Max hugs Coco tighter rather than risk doing something stupid like hugging Dr. Salazar while heâs this tired. This wired. Her pacemaker couldâ
Cocoâs weighted beans shift with the extra pressure. Max takes a deep breath.
His shoulders relax enough for the blanket to slip some when he sighs. âIâm⌠Iâm glad you came. Itâs going to be weird not seeing you around anymore.â
âLikewise. Though Iâll be sure to keep in touch. You have my number, my new P.O. Box, and my email for when you want to chat. Iâll get back to you as soon as I can.â She smiles sadly and sits on the edge of the bed with him. âTaking a step back from the action gives me a lot more time to work on my methods. Iâll still advise your care team every now and then. And send you a couple care packages too.â
She boops Coco on her snout. âUnless, of course, you really are too old for these things.â
âPerish the thought.â Max smiles. âI canât be the reason youâve got idle hands. How will your grandkids ever survive?â
Dr. Salazar reaches out to ruffle his hair. Max is honestly surprised she doesnât get shocked. He didnât even notice when his output went flat and the plush in his arms went still. Looks like Cocoâs still got it.
âNow that youâve stabilized, we can run through the pre-offload checklist. Iâve been told you already ate?â She moves from her spot on the bed to pull a pen and paper clipboard off its place on the wall. In rooms like these itâs strictly old-school only for safety.
Max doesnât want to bring up his loss of appetite. Heâs got a feeling he knows what thatâs about, anyway. âYup. Jefferson got me sorted on the way here.â
âNot ideal but probably for the best. What about sleep?â Here, she does pay closer attention. Lapses in his control while heâs asleep have been a real problem on and off over the years.
âI managed five hours in a hotel last night. We got in late and left at dawn for an early start.â Max sets Coco down on the bed beside him. He doesnât really need the assist right now. He does still fidget with the split end of her tail, though. The wool there is worn from years of absentminded petting. âWe didnât want to push our luck too much.â
âIâll check and see if the Vaultâs available yet. If it isnât, you can rest here after your procedure. Thereâs no need to waste time you could spend recovering.â Dr. Salazar offers. She looks up from the clipboard, smiling thinly. âIf the commander has an issue with it he can stand outside the door with a blaster himself. I wonât have you fainting in some hallway when thereâs a perfectly good bed waiting for you already.â
Max gives a relieved smile. âThanks, Doc! Youâre a lifesaver.â
Sheâs technically not supposed to allow that because this room âisnât defensible enoughâ or some nonsense. Like itâs not deep enough into the heart of the base that Max would struggle to find his way back to the hangar on a good day. Dr. Salazarâs all about bending regulations when theyâre bad for his health, though. And she usually gets away with it because his health is her job.
Or, well, was. Heâs known for weeks she was leaving and he still hasnât quite come to terms with what thatâs going to mean. Sheâs been in his life for longer than heâs known how to talk. Heâd usually see more of her than his own mother during particularly bad times growing up.
Fevers that wouldnât break for hours soothed by patient hands. Murmured comfort lulling him to sleep after backlash from failed extractions left him weak and bedridden. Nights where his mom would be so late to pick him up from a base that Dr. Salazar would tuck him into an infirmary bed and stay up to wait for her in his stead. Whole afternoons spent trying to refine his control that ended with him crying in her arms because he couldnât do it. Hair swept away from his forehead to make room for a kiss and a promise that itâs alright, youâll get there some day. Weâll all be here to help until you do, okay?
Coco starts to rumble quietly again. Max grips her torso in his fist tightly without even glancing at her.
Dr. Salazar notices. Of course she does. But before she can ask him whatâs wrongâ
The door to the room opens abruptly. âThere you are! I forgot the intercom doesnât reach this far back. Iâve been trying to call you two for ages now.â
âUncle Ferrus!â Maxâs smile only wobbles a little. Heâs never gotten good at pivoting like that, but he tries anyway. âItâs good to see you!â
Max is a little excited to see his uncle again. Itâs been how many years since theyâve talked face-to-face? At least four. Itâs not often that he and his mom come back to the main base and Uncle Ferrus rarely leaves on cross-country missions himself these days.
âSame here, kid.â His uncle doesnât come forward for a hug, which is probably wise. He instead turns to nod at Dr. Salazar. âDoctor.â
âCommander.â Dr. Salazar greets politely in turn. She kind of pointedly does not salute him. Though, to be fair, Max didnât either and she doesnât even work here anymore.
âIâm here to pick up Max for the extraction. Theyâre ready for ya.â He explains.
Maxâs stomach drops. âAlready? Thatâs a quick turnaround. It usually takes like an hour to prime, doesnât it?â
âNot this new model. Didnât your mother tell you? Berto and the other tech guys overhauled the whole thing. It runs smoother and faster. We can get it started in fifteen minutes.â Uncle Ferrus says. He sounds proud of them. Max probably should be too because thatâs genuinely impressive engineering, but a new chamber when heâs already feeling like crap doesnât get him as cheered up as his uncle probably hoped it would.
Better tech means more points of failure. Newer tech means it hasnât been through its paces yet. Both have had a history of failing him.
Dr. Salazar, whoâs been at this for a long time and knows that, asks the question for him. âHas the overhauled chamber been stress-tested yet?â
Uncle Ferrus waves a hand. âIâve been assured itâs passed every safety check and the shielding can maskââ
âThat wasnât my question, Commander.â Dr. Salazar interrupts smoothly. âIâll clarify. Has the overhauled chamber proven it can withstand Maxâs previously recorded upper limit for a period of at least twenty minutes? Or have the techs gotten ahead of themselves with their optimizing, again?â
âEasy, Doc, the guys have been looking that thing over for days now. Theyâve assured me that itâs all up to snuff.â Uncle Ferrus says confidently. âIâd love to smooth your feathers by having them run more tests, but Iâm afraid we donât have that kind of time right now.â
They really donât, is the worst part. Cocoâs weighted beans are damn near rattling with the force of her- its vibrations. Max tries to squish it into the mattress to muffle the noise but the movement draws his uncleâs eye anyway. Whatever heated back and forth he and the doctor were having when he stopped paying attention gets cut short.
Crud.
âHe still has that thing?â Uncle Ferrus asks when he notices the plush, not unkindly but certainly not with much tact. âI thought you grew out of it, Max.â
Before Max can feel too embarrassed about that, Dr. Salazar is taking a casual step in front of him and drawing all the attention to herself. Heâs seen the way she straightens up and squares her shoulders like that a thousand times. He relaxes without really thinking about it.
Max sits back and pulls Coco against his side for the wait. Neither he nor his uncle are about to be able to get a word in, he knows from experience. Uncle Ferrus clearly knows too, because he kind of slumps against the doorframe in preemptive defeat.
âYou know very well, Commander, that the Crocheted Optimised-Control Object is a useful medical device for emotional support that aids in maintaining Maxâs short-term energy-stability.â Dr. Salazar doesnât even have to glance at his chart as she lays this all out again. Max faintly remembers a similar conversation taking place back when he was eleven. Itâd been louder then because she hadnât known he was in the room.
She keeps going. âThe Turbo energy sensor within it that we pieced together from Jimâs notes can detect rapid and anomalous spikes of Turbo energy production. It also emits deep, soothing tones and vibrations that have been proven to mitigate Maxâs Turbo energy emissions when heâs non-critical, as well as lower his heart rate back to acceptable levels.â
Translation: the alien gator plush purrs. It purrs big time. Itâs purring right now and Max rubs his thumb over its button eyes. One of them is getting loose from how often he does so.
âYou should know this, Commander, because you have read my many reports and the notes therein that state that Maxâs overall improvements to his control have not diminished this toolâs effectiveness. And that, before such a stressful and uncomfortable procedure, it is perfectly acceptable to use whatever means are necessary to return to his baselines.â Dr. Salazarâs tone turns downright icy as she stares Uncle Ferrus down. âBaselines he needs a stability aidâs help to return to because someone authorized the use of that cramped Transport Cube without consulting his doctor.â
Ah, there it is! Max knew this wasnât just about the Coco comment when it ran over the ten second mark. Uncle Ferrus might be screwed.
Because, if thereâs anyone on earth who hates that stupid fucking box more than Max? Itâs Dr. Salazar.
Sheâs proven with graphs and stuff that his energy production is more difficult to regulate if heâs upset and that box is very upsetting. Putting him in it too close to an extraction is just asking for an incident report. Max wonders if maybe Uncle Ferrus thought sheâd left already when he gave the okay to use it.
For his sake, Max hopes Dr. Salazar never learns the truth of that one way or the other. Heâs in enough hot water as is.
âI can explain.â Uncle Ferrus looks vaguely intimidated as he raises his hands in what feels like genuine surrender.
Itâs stuff like this that reminds Max that Dr. Salazar used to be his dadâs doctor before he died and thatâs why sheâs his doctor now. He can only imagine the words she mustâve had with his uncle over the years, having seen him land two McGraths in the infirmary too many times to count.
Max shivers. Heâs lucky she adores him.
âYou can and you will.â Dr. Salazar says curtly. She taps her penâs tip on the edge of her clipboard away from the actual documents on it. âAfter my patient and I have finished this checklist, which is standard procedure for a reason. You may wait in one of the infirmary chairs or out in the hall. Iâll send Max on his way when weâre done here.â
âIââ
âThank you for your cooperation, Commander.â Dr. Salazar turns her back on him. Her smile when she looks at Max is warm and sure. âHave you experienced any dizziness or difficulty with your balance in the last twenty-four hours?â
âUhâŚâ Max looks over her shoulder to see Uncle Ferrus standing there gobsmacked. Like heâs somehow forgotten what Dr. Salazar was like in person after so long only getting this kind of treatment over emails and phone calls.
His uncle makes a gesture like heâs telling Max to come with him anyway. There is a moment where Max considers it.
Instead, Max makes eye contact with Dr. Salazar. âHeâs still there.â
Uncle Ferrus hurriedly slams the door shut before she manages to turn around and catch him.
Thereâs a moment of silence. Then the sound of heavy boots actually walking away. Then another moment of silence for good measure.
Itâs only then that Max asks her, âArenât there only like five more questions on that sheet?â
When Dr. Salazar looks at him again, itâs with the smile that he knows means heâs in for a treat.
âOf course. But, given this is going to be my last pre-check with you before my retirement, I would be doing the team that follows me a disservice by not being as thorough as possible.â She double-clicks her pen. âWould it be alright with you if I add in say, roughly, thirty minutesâ worth of follow-up questions?â
Damn. It sure would suck for Nebula!Max if I gave him a responsible OC adult who advocated for him growing up and then remove them from the equation so that regular-canon levels of neglect and distrust from the adults in his life hit him that much worse. Wouldnât that suck? Wouldnât that be awful?
âŚ
So anyways, Dr. Carina Salazar is NTekâs lead Xenobiologist and has been the head of Project Nebula since its creation in â96. Sheâs got a background in the medical field and keeps up to date on anything and everything she thinks could be relevant to Maxâs health. Sheâs also one of the only people involved in Project Nebula whoâs become fluent enough in Takonian to read the handfuls of material that Jim brought with him from his shipâs medbay right before he passed. Like, the week of.
(The ship they canât find for the life of them. So, really, these scarce Takonian medical records and anything they find out themselves is all they have to work from to help Max.)
And sheâs retiring.
Dr. Salazar is stepping back from not just Project Nebula but from NTek as a whole because the recent death of her son means thereâs no one else to care for her grandkids. And her heart condition, but that alone wasnât enough to push her out the door despite it having become more difficult to manage for years now.
While her role has never been one likely to see combat outside of an absolute worst-case scenario, itâs got long and unpredictable hours. She basically lives on base. And Dr. Salazar has always been adamant that itâs important for young children to have their caretakers be around more often than theyâre not. Itâs why she stuck it out for so long with Project Nebula, actually. Itâs why she poured to much of herself into it.
But Max isnât the only kid that needs her now. She really wishes she didnât have to choose.
She really wishes his blood relatives would step the fuck upâ
Iâve also decided to have Dr. Salazar be Jimâs old doctor because that gives her both the expertise and the seniority to be able to tell Forge off and have him listen about it.
Who would win: this scary secret agent whoâs built like a brick wall or the caring old lady with like twenty years of blackmail?
for a bit of a "two cakes" thing: @max-n-steel-should-go-apeshit's dr. carina salazar reminded me of my own doc oc, dr. jenna owens:
she was jim's doctor before he left. molly's as well up until molly left n-tek. and now that max is working at n-tek, she's been assigned as his doc. she's somewhat mixed on this because, yes, she's the only doc with any understanding of takonian physiology, but she is not a pediatrician forge! she's been working exclusively with adults her whole career, you can't just throw a child her way, especially one as abnormal as max.
still, if she doesn't do it, nobody will.
(more ramblings below the read more)
Her very first meeting with Max, he's dead in a crater where a warehouse once stood. Or, he should be dead, he's not breathing, but there's enough TURBO energy in the air that she can touch it, so honestly who knows what's medically going on here. By some miracle, her and her team are able to extract Max and more importantly resuscitate him.
(She wishes she could just say he was unconscious, but she knew the moment she grabbed him. His eyes were still open.
...He's breathing now. That's good enough)
Their next meeting, he's conscious, albeit barely. She's to do a couple of final checks before Forge comes and... before Forge comes. She doesn't agree with what he intends to do with Max, but they fought about it for an hour already and couldn't come up with anything better. She tries to be kind as she asks Max how he's feeling, what he remembers. He deserves a little bit of kindness before entering Hell. She can't comfort him, though, can't risk getting attached, not if she wants to help.
(Is it more ethical to subject a child to constant, moderate pain or frequent, intense pain? How could his own uncle weigh those options so quickly?)
Relevant snippet as she's leaving Max to Forge:
âThe report will be on your desk in an hour,â she promised. As she passed by the commander to leave, she lowered her voice and told him, âJim would be furious about this."
He paused millimeters away from grabbing her upper arm. He glowered at her and stated with conviction, âJim would understand.â He pulled back with a jerk, then stepped forward, erasing her from his field of view. She stared daggers into his skull until the door shut.
On her subsequent meetings with Max she's much friendlier. Her biggest issue with the two is getting Max and Steel to actually come to her when Max gets injured or sick. She's their doctor, not their keeper, she can't help what she doesn't know about.
(It doesn't help that N-Tek rarely sends them to medical after a battle)
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But yea! In general I tend to pull her out for "Max"-related medical stuff, while Berto handles things related to Steel/the Steel suit. Ie:
Max is having back pain after the Elementors nearly ripped a wing off? That's an Owens issue
Jim's back but badly malnourished? Owens.
Forge assuming Max is fine since he didn't turn into a Goopanoid like Molly? Owens for the examination, but the med staff in general would want to give him a lecture that he will not internalize
Steel fried his own logic circuits? Berto.
Steel got hit with Ultralink malware? Berto.
A part of the Steel Suit seizes up after a nasty run in with a xenoshok? Berto, though his guess is as good as Steel's. They could try running a current through it?
Damn. It sure would suck for Nebula!Max if I gave him a responsible OC adult who advocated for him growing up and then remove them from the equation so that regular-canon levels of neglect and distrust from the adults in his life hit him that much worse. Wouldnât that suck? Wouldnât that be awful?
âŚ
So anyways, Dr. Carina Salazar is NTekâs lead Xenobiologist and has been the head of Project Nebula since its creation in â96. Sheâs got a background in the medical field and keeps up to date on anything and everything she thinks could be relevant to Maxâs health. Sheâs also one of the only people involved in Project Nebula whoâs become fluent enough in Takonian to read the handfuls of material that Jim brought with him from his shipâs medbay right before he passed. Like, the week of.
(The ship they canât find for the life of them. So, really, these scarce Takonian medical records and anything they find out themselves is all they have to work from to help Max.)
And sheâs retiring.
Dr. Salazar is stepping back from not just Project Nebula but from NTek as a whole because the recent death of her son means thereâs no one else to care for her grandkids. And her heart condition, but that alone wasnât enough to push her out the door despite it having become more difficult to manage for years now.
While her role has never been one likely to see combat outside of an absolute worst-case scenario, itâs got long and unpredictable hours. She basically lives on base. And Dr. Salazar has always been adamant that itâs important for young children to have their caretakers be around more often than theyâre not. Itâs why she stuck it out for so long with Project Nebula, actually. Itâs why she poured to much of herself into it.
But Max isnât the only kid that needs her now. She really wishes she didnât have to choose.
She really wishes his blood relatives would step the fuck upâ
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âI Canât Help But Wonderâ from Epic the Musical IS SUCH A MAX, JIM, AND STEEL SONG!!!!!
The long-awaited and often dreamed of reunion of a father and a son!! The distance between them carved by their time apart and the hardships they havenât shared!!! The sorrows!! The joys!! Wanting to see his fucking wife!!! âGo, tell your mother Iâm home! Iâll be there in a moment!!â
And Steel as Athena but Jim is urging him in their faded, fleeting shared mindspace-bond to move on. To explore his new bond with Max. To make the world a better place in his stead, for his time is long over.
first hc: "godfather dredd". it's in my heart of hearts that i know that dredd is officially max's godfather. (source: i made it up). obviously steel was the first choice, but he refused because he was too busy being jealous that max and molly were taking up so much of jim's attention.
second hc: "dredd isn't an idiot". so. dredd has seen max mcgrath. he knows that max looks just like a young jim mcgrath. the guy who could generate turbo energy. the guy who married molly ferrus.
hey, uh, what's that max steel guy's gimmick? generating turbo energy? hmmm. and what does he often call forge ferrus? "uncle ferrus"? hmmm. hmmmmm.
dredd isn't an idiot. extroyer, toxzon, or the elementors all either don't have enough information or don't have any interest in finding max steel's secret identity, but dredd does. and importantly, these are clues that he experienced himself, not via any lackeys or proxies.
so yea, its solidly my hc that dredd, regardless of what he chooses to do with the information, has worked out max's secret identity by season two at the latest
related to those hcs (but put in an rb so i can be organized and not embarrased), i have a silly au: "uncle miles au" (i don't have clever names for my aus sorry)
(read more bc it is loooooong)
in this au, dredd puts those pieces together relatively soon after "secret identity crisis". for a while, he's not sure how to use that information--if he attacks max mcgrath in broad daylight, then n-tek will get involved and put max steel on a shorter leash. but then the events of "extroyer unleashed" happen and... interesting... max and steel are sneaking around behind forge's back...
there's the in.
dredd doffs his armor, puts on a suit, and approaches maxwell mcgrath as max's godfather, miles dredd. (okay technically dredd uses sydney as a go-between to arrange their first meeting but shhh). he's finally heard that max and molly moved back to copper canyon and he'd love to reconnect. and max is like 'i don't have a godfather' except. when he asks molly about it she's weirdly dodgy. almost like he won't like the answer.
so max reasons that yea okay dredd is definitely not lying about the 'godfather' thing. was he not sufficiently fooled by seeing max steel and max mcgrath side by side? does he suspect that max is max steel? or is this just a ploy to get at his mom or uncle? obviously, max just has to meet with him, pretend to be normal and not max steel, and figure out the scheme! this can only go well!
the meeting goes extremely awkwardly but otherwise normally. miles gives no indication that he knows max's secret, but he also doesn't give max any clues as to why he's reaching out. at the end of it though, dredd successfully coerces a regular meeting schedule out of max (more accurately, he convinces max to meet with him again, and repeats that pattern until the schedule's regular).
so now in the background of the show you have dredd and max meeting up and doing like. normal uncle-nephew shit while pretending that they don't both know the other person's secret identity.
until steel convinces max that they're in way over their heads and they need to break off whatever this weird arrangement is before it bites them.
it doesn't go well. the moment they try, dredd hits 'em with "i know your secret, maxwell." and follows that up by threatening that they can either keep the current arrangement and dredd can keep treating max steel and maxwell mcgrath as separate individuals, or they can break the arrangement and dredd will find plenty of creative ways to apply what he's learned.
...aka more shenanigans! đ and sources of anxiety! đ
...and emotional whiplash because miles... is actually there. and listening when max talks about his interests. and noticing when max hasn't eaten all day.
but at the same time, dredd is the same as ever. just as obsessed, just as crazed to capture max steel, just as hungry.