Dark Skin, Paleness, and Undead Skin
Anonymous asked: Hereâs an odd one for you. Youâve written some fantastically useful posts on describing skin color. See, some of my characters are undead. And, since my only experiences with death and seeing dead bodies has been with white people, I donât know how to accurately describe my PoC characters. (And Iâm hesitant to google it, understandably I think.) Do you have advice on how different skin tones change after death?
Honestly, I think you need to do your own research on this. Itâs a matter of searching for âwhat happens to body after deathâ and âhow skin changes after death.â Just avoid image searches if you donât want to see dead bodies (as we donât really either). Depending on stages of death and other factors, thereâs the discoloring that occurs, from green to purpling to blackening, and skin becoming grayed and ashen etc. The appearances will just look differently on darker skin obviously.
My only experience is seeing dead relatives at funerals. And from what I recall their skin looked like it had a sheen of gray and dullness over their original deep brown skin tone, even under the makeup. Though depending on how light they were, sometimes they did look a few tones lighter/washed out, so yeah⌠*shudders*
Read up on this subject, search for effects of death on dark skin and avoid images if you donât wanna see that, perhaps even try to get an interview or chat with someone who works with dead bodies and has first hand experience viewing them, such as a pathologist or mortician.
Dark Skin âPalingâ with Sickness
Anonymous said: so i have a scene in a story iâm working on where a black character is injured. i automatically start to write how he looks pale and sick - but with dark skin color, wouldnât that be different? how would an ill pallor look and be described on someone with dark skin?
"Dark skin" is not very descriptive and means different things to different people so keep that in mind. His brown skin may look more ashen if heâs very ill or lost a lot of blood, but itâd probably be slight (and it depends on individual) plus wouldnât be a complete change in color but more like effects on the skin tone that would create a duller, lusterless look. Not always the case though as a pallor change isnât always visible even if they are very sick.
You donât have to rely heavily on skin effects to denote someone is ill, though.
Is he suddenly quieter or speaks with strain in his voice?
Are his eyes closed or tight with pain? Glazed over?
Is he breathless, or breathing less and weaker?
Does his chest heave up and down? Is it uncomfortably still for long moments?
How is he able to move; does he fall or wobble on his feet? Lying on the ground in weakness?
Do his cheeks puff out as if he may vomit? Hands shaky, skin too warm or too cold? Sweating? Shaking?
Aim to illustrate his state without automatically jumping onto showing paleness to denote that. Itâs the easy way to show sickness and emotion without doing much work.
Dark Skin âPalingâ from Fear
Anonymous asked: I know youâve discussed POCs and blushing before, but what about turning pale, like when the blood drains from someoneâs face if they see something horrifying? For example, my MC has light brown skin. Would there be visible signs of the blood draining from her face, and if so, how much? Thank you so much for your help.
I have a similar answer as the one above. Skin effects arenât the only way you can show a change in emotion or state of body and itâs become lazy to rely on skin changing to this in storytelling (e.g. embarrassed = character blushes. Character scared = go pale).
Yes, there may be visible showings of their light brown skin drained of blood and looking paler. No, it will not be a total change of color that makes them go from say light brown to beige.
What are other ways to physically show shock or fear?
Try any of these, courtesy of the Emotion Thesaurus:
A small yelp, gasp, squeal, or scream
A heavy feeling in the stomach
A stiffening posture, rigid muscles
A sudden coldness (dread) that hits at the core
Reaching up a hand to lightly clasp the throat
Splaying the fingers out in a fan against the breastbone
Pulling books or another object tight against chest
Eyes that water, shine, or form tears
A sudden onset of anger or frustration (swearing, screaming, acting violent)
A shaky voiceâsoft, halting, disbelieving
Asking simple questions for clarification: who, when, why?
A feeling of disorientation, dizziness, euphoria
A shaky or slow smile that builds as the surprise sinks in
Grabbing someone close by for comfort
Giving a quick bark of laughter
I recommend this book for several more ideas as this only scratches the surfaces of the emotional descriptors it offers not only for "Shock/surprise" but for showing several other emotions.
Gray-Skinned PoC Vampires
Anonymous asked: I have some POC vampires in my story, too. The thing I do is that white vampires have chalk-white skin, and darker skinned vampires have sort of a gray skin, in whatever tone they had when they were alive. Do you think that thatâs okay?
In theory, this doesnât sound too bad to me and seems like a way to signify PoC and skin color. Then I consider how white/pale skin is prided as beauty and associated with such, as well as innocence. Gray skin doesnât get that association. While paler than normal skin can definitely be a sign of illness, typically fair skin isnât going to get accusations of sickness.
On the other hand, grayed skin can by a symptom of many illnesses (from anemia to cancer) and isnât typically an ideal coloring for anyone. Itâs also associated with aged, gloominess, etc. Again, not the same case for whiteness.
So to do this, youâd have to be careful with how youâre detailing their skin. Iâm not sure how youâre depicting white skin to be overall, but just your ask gives me a clue. You describe the white skin in a concise manner (chalk-white) while you describe the dark skin in an offhand way (sort of a gray skin).
I would suggest you describe the gray skin in a more concise manner as you do the pale skin. It doesnât necessarily have to be âAppealingâ though if the white skin is described in certain terms Iâd like to see the gray skin described in a similar manner.
Modifiers in combination with gray might work just fine âDark gray, deep gray, light gray, etc.â
If youâd like creative descriptions, here are some comparisons. Bear with me; iâve never had to describe gray skin before!
Also note: People of Color come in all shades, tones, and undertones. There are PoC with pale/white skin, whether theyâre white-passing or not.
On another note, you can physically denote race and ethnicity through facial features as well.
On a third note! Are these vampires blending in with human society and/or pretending to not be vampires at times? Because while I can see the white-skinned vampires being able to get by undetected, thatâd be hard for a gray-skinned vampire. This has its own social implications, and thatâs up to you.
~Mod Colette