Toki_Drawz

The jewellery and feathers are extremely unnecessary and native people don't wear feathers casually; they're ceremonial! (Rick writing her wearing it 24/7 post TLH is a whole thing on its own)

You can give her beaded earrings, but I'd tone it down bc it looks like you added them to show she's native. Remember Piper is canonically anti fashion and doesn't really like jewellery so she wouldn't wear much if she did.

Again I'm not trying to be mean, and I really hope I don't come across as such! A lot of people are unaware of these things and end up making poor choices in their designs. I don't think it was your intention to draw her as such, so I wanted to inform you bc there's a huge problem with this in the fandom!

Hi, oh my gosh no this isn’t mean at all! Thank you so much for writing this out genuinely, I don’t want to offend anyone ever with my art so I greatly appreciate feedback like this! I think the redness does have to do with my rendering and colour picking partially, I added some pictures down below to kinda show examples! (generally my drawings all end up very saturated because I add a cool red overlay, over the skin layer as part of it) I didn’t at all mean to make her overly red, but especially for Piper that should’ve been something to lookout for!

Also about the feathers, I did see many artists drawing her with it because of that particular mention in the book so that makes a lot of sense! I’ll remove them and maybe add another cute hair accessory instead (not sure what yet maybe some clips)

And I’ll definitely overwork the design again for the feathers and the skin render, As for the earrings I did reference a cool pair I found but maybe something smaller would be cool too?

Anyways holy yap, I’m really sorry I didn’t mean to be offensive in any way and I’ll definitely work it over! Tysm again for letting me know about this! :-)