I've been following Split for a while now and this is the first time i've come across your IF. It is short atm yes but it already has me hooked in. One thing important to me in IFs is how to MC is written. I feel like most IFs dont really care about connecting the MC to the readers and the narrative and you have done it well. I love that the responses MC can give are actual genuine ones different kinds of people would have instead of it being something predetermined.
Also Cam's gonna get his ass beat if he gets near Karla. Atleast after MC buffs up a bit lmao.
Yeah, it's really small right now, a side project that was my escape from dark themes to... more dark themes (I definitely have a type 🤨).
I'm really glad MC works for you so far... MC is always the most important character for me, and Vertex is not an exception, even when they are less determined personality-wise here than in Split. I love writing MCs and giving them the best (usually the worst) time of their lives. If the game's premise can work without MC... I'm doing something wrong.
Oh, and the dynamic in that house would be interesting, because Cam will definitely try staying close to Karla. Especially depending on the kind of MC you play. Some of them might start showing… disturbing tendencies.