#storyhelp

kill the characters that are making it a problem

boom, no problem

and

to top it off

it can be used for character development

Hello people, I am making a story. A story that will be all about a flower and a girl who is presumably 15-16 years old. I will need critique to help me make the story though. The plot of the story is that there is a flower, named Stemsie, who is the youngest out of all his other flower siblings. He is also quite different from the rest which he is odd, a little bit gullible, energetic, and sometimes annoying. Other flowers around him tell him not to leave the current place he's living in to the outside world. The rumours that were told is that there were nasty creatures (humans) out there that cause the destruction of nature. However, Stemsie was curious of that and so he leaves his place without anyone noticing to explore the outside world. He makes it into a nearby town that he stops by. Astonished by the buildings, he ends up in someone's backyard, a girls backyard. The girl, named Emily, meets Stemsie. At first sight, Stemsie feared Emily because of what he heard about the nasty creatures (humans). But after hanging out with them for a while, he wanted to go back home. However, he has forgotten the way how he had got here. With the help of Emily, she tries to get Stemsie back home.

so I’m writing a story on wattpad, and it’s a spin on Draco and he finds the elder wand blah blah, but I’m wondering if anybody would be able to help, as I’m planning on it to be good and sometimes I can be dumb enough to make really ridiculous mistakes. So, if anyone would like to help, message me here or on my wattpad which is linxmanuelxmiranda, and hopefully something amazing can happen.