#send tea

1: The premise is technically plausible, but insane.

2: The naming of concepts/plot elements is even weirder.

3: The ending comes completley out of left field and is hands-down batshit.

4: There’s a bad guy somewhere with the intitals R.F. He doesn’t fit into this story’s world at all. But he is here, he’s smiling too much, and he’s making everything way worse. 

5: Dicks. So many dicks. There are penises every 20 pages or so. 

6: Women’s bodies are doing things that women’s bodies do not actually ever do, but this is painted as totally normal and absolutely what every woman’s body does regularly. The weird female body stuff actually distracts you from the story. 

7: Why is there a cowboy here? There should not be a cowboy here...

8: Someone is fat. They’re painted as obscenely, grotesquely obese. They might actually only be a few pounds overweight, but it is apparently disgusting. They’re also probably a horrible person.

9: Weasels. If you’ve read enough of King’s books, you know where I’m going here.

I’ve just had a review pop up on a reallyyyyyyy old ppg fanfic. It was first published on ff.net (the only place it’s available to read as it’s a pretty old fic now) in 2012 and I finished it in 2014 - I probably started writing it like 10 years ago though. I’ve not read through said fic in a LONG time but I know the storyline had it’s faults, as did it’s predecessor (anyone familiar with my older stuff probably knows the two fics I’m talking about). I do also feel my characterisation of some characters were off and not how I’d write them now at all. 

This reviewer is not happy with the way I wrote the fic AT ALL, like they’re pretty fucking pissed. Also didn’t feel like an attack on a character, more of how I chose to write this character at the time - so an attack on my writing, really. If I was to re-read now I know I’d probably cringe at some aspects and want to change xyz.. But I wrote it a long time ago now and things change; you grow, you experience things in real life that gives you way more depth and perception of stuff - you mature, you get a little more ‘worldly wise’, right? Well, we like to hope we do, lol.