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Five cold runes, one scilent bell ; echo

Folly of Scene ; iterator

-Benevolence in Essence

(Assuming you were intending to spell “Essence” and not one of various slang words.) There’s nothing technically wrong with this name (follows the rules, has a nice double “ence” sound, etc) I just don’t like it. 8.5/10

-Five Cold Runes, One Silent Bell

(Assuming you were not intended to use the obsolete spelling of silent.) This is a valid name. Very chilly. Reminds me of what I imagine Saint’s Shaded Citadel would be like if Pebbs didn’t collapse onto it. Sounds nice. 10/10

-Folly of Scene

Recurrent riptide of endless change ; echo

Reverance of essance ; iterator

-the Oathtaker

Firstly, Oathtaker is extremely intriguing (as opposed to the expected Oathmaker). Secondly, there is so much possibility for character and abilities that this name hints at. Amazing. 10/10 and an excellent example of combining words à la Spearmaster.

-Recurrent Riptide of Endless Change

*incorrect buzzer sound* unfortunately change is probably too abstract to be allowed. Also, although “of” is a preposition, “Endless Change” describes “Recurrent Riptide” a little too directly (though it’s still better than Death by a/One Thousand Paper Cuts in that regard). Sorry :( 1/10 on account of being invalid, although i still like it.

-Reverence of Essence

• The joke ; slugcat

• Useless piece of tin ; iterator

Some jokey ones this time

-Death by One/a Thousand Paper Cuts

i hate that this is technically valid. (death is the first subject, cuts is the second) 0/10 /silly uhh anyways wait is death theoretically observable. is death too abstract. umm i think that slides by. However!! As you are describing the method of something, this is technically describing one thing! Also it just. Doesn’t sound like an echo. 2/10

-the Joke

:(… this is valid :( however it is very mean. be nice to slugcar. also in terms of like. practical use it kinda sucks. 4.5/10

-useless piece of tin

All of these are compiled of random thoughts out of a brainstorm, with not much deep thinking behind each. This was just for fun.

The Fool [Scug]

Twelve Thrones upon Calamity [Echo]

The Harbinger [Scug]

Mighty Hurricane over a Thousand Lands [Echo]

Grand Revelation [Iterator]

Pulse through Starless Skies [Iterator]

Riving of A Thosand Regrets [Echo]

Have fun typing out a buncha stuff for all of this! Or don't do it at all, I dont know man.

yes, feed the beast

-The Fool

what did the poor sluggat do,,, be nice to scugger :[

8/10 i just dont like it

-Twelve Thrones upon Calamity

Two quantifiable parts separated by a preposition. Not sure what’s happening but it sure is something. Dropping the word “Calamity” without a word like “a” or something, just all by itself, doesn’t sound great but it’s not too bad. Calamities are theoretically observable, right? That might be my old BotW fixation talking idk. 8/10

-The Harbinger

*sees on the horizon* Yes hello 911, I would like to report a potential disaster. Anyways very great name but also very sad. What are they the harbinger of. What’s following them?? Or what are they following?? Absol vibes. 10/10

-Mighty Hurricane over a Thousand Lands

okay so that’s pretty scary- anyways “mighty” is probably not the best word here. don’t ask me why or what is I don’t know either. 9/10 not much to say

-Grand Revelation

First thing I thought of is Silksong’s Citadel of Song. Probably the Grand Reeds. Anyways this feels like an iterator with lots of expectations over their head. Would be pretty sad if they were set up for failure. Anyways it sounds pretty nice and has some decent nickname potential as a bonus (Revy/Revie). 10/10

-Pulse through Starless Skies

okay now here’s where things get a little tricky. You see, “pulse” can be either a verb or a noun. One of my own OCs is also like this (Glimmers Through the Void). If it’s a noun? That’s an echo name, oops. You’ve got two subjects. If it’s a verb it’s fine though. For the sake of rating, I’ll assume it’s the latter. It sounds pretty nice. “Starless Skies” flows very nicely and has lovely alliteration, but “through” could probably be a different word; it cuts the flow a little. Four-word iterators are pretty hard to name, and this doesn’t sound too bad though! I could see this being an iterator with crazy long distance communication tech or something. Also, “through” should probably be capitalized since this isn’t an echo. 9/10

-Riving of a Thousand Regrets

-slugcat: the Friend

It’s a common name, but it works pretty well. Says a lot about the character. Something to keep in mind with relationship-type names is “the Friend of whom?” but it’s not too big of a deal. It also doesn’t sound super clunky which is good. 8.5/10

-iterator: Wanders Across Fallow Fields

It has one clear subject (Fields) and doesn’t technically break any rules. However, it sounds choppy when spoken. The name itself doesn’t have any issues with stacking adjectives or anything, it’s just cadence. Could definitely be worse. 6/10

-echo/benefactor: Twenty Prayers under a Sea of Stars